26. Read the following text and write as required. (70 marks) 2065438+2007 Pudong District Senior Three Dual-mode Composition

In today's world, "wealth" has become synonymous with success. Some people say, "it is not what we already have that determines whether we are rich or not, but what we don't have yet;" The key lies in your vision and attitude. "Please write an article and talk about your ideas.

Requirements: (1) self-made topics; (2) Not less than 800 words; (3) don't write poetry.

Excellent composition

Depends on what I have at home.

Many years ago, the phrase "regarding my family as scarce" shocked the dust of history and made people excited. Later, the beautiful talk of burning coupons spread like wildfire, which seemed to tell a self-evident truth, that is, what we don't have determines the wealth of individual life.

The word "rich" is often abused and misinterpreted in the modern context and becomes a tool to show off. People stubbornly limit the definition of wealth to money, fame and fortune, but they don't know the warning of classical reason. What is wealth? As the name implies, richness refers to richness and enrichment. What you get, of course, brings material abundance, but after quiet precipitation, your mind will eventually be empty and lonely. The tinkling and noisy singing of Jinsheng Huang seems to confirm Shakespeare's words, full of sound and enthusiasm, but there is nothing in it, and what he gets is the past tense after all. Excessive obsession and addiction leave us with nothing. What really makes the soul rich is my family. What does it inspire us to lack? What should we pursue?

What different people think is completely different. It reflects your life form like a mirror to some extent. Looking up, people with lofty ideals pounded the railing, thinking that the country would not recover and the Central Plains would not accept it; The sentimental girl looks forward to the spring sorrow, thinking that the beauty has not returned, and the affection is hard to say. Of course, there is nothing wrong with every life form, but I think that we passionate people should give our lives to higher beings, with no thought and Tao, no heart of heaven and earth, no benevolence and righteousness, the lives of the people have been made, and so on. We should not confine ourselves to the shell of material enjoyment, but should pursue the diamond-like nature and perseverance that we have not yet possessed. We want to be a group of people who have higher requirements for life in hermann hesse's works, and we are not willing to be rude and mean.

When we realize what we don't have and turn it into the will to pursue constantly, those things we don't have in turn deepen our life form. Haizi pursued innocence, truth, goodness and beauty all his life. He used poetry to find the sun hidden in society. Finally, he experienced wonderful changes, died in the sun and entered the sun. Thank you for paying attention to the official account of "Sister Shen Chinese Classroom" WeChat! Welcome to forward and share! The following is the latest college entrance examination Chinese materials of Magic Capital! Patriotic poets such as Xin Qiji and Lu You seek to serve the country, enjoy their ambitions and return to the Central Plains. Therefore, their works are also reminiscent of the sound of horseshoes, and their dream is also the Iron Horse Glacier. They turn all kinds of grievances into inner boiling flames, and finally become rich veins. On our long road, we have to go up and down, but the glory we don't have has quietly entered our hearts, glowing with beautiful luster, and our hearts are rich and full.

See what's in my home is a mirror, which reflects the depth of our life form and deepens us at the same time. Let's adjust ourselves under its mapping, study it and create ourselves. Only in this way can we be truly rich, deep-chested, high-profile, clear and profound. After that, and only after that-

A rich heart touches every second, and time becomes gold.

Comments:

This is a high-scoring composition, with 67 points.

This article has a clear center and novel ideas. The title at the beginning of the article-"It depends on the scarcity of my family" tells that what is lacking determines the richness of personal life, which breaks the general writing ideas of most candidates' spiritual wealth theory and is novel. What is the definition of money? Enrichment refers to richness and enrichment. Then it points out that different "a few things in my family" map different life forms. In this way, around a center, key points such as "vision and attitude" and "not yet owned" are clearly settled and can be discussed from multiple angles. The last part is closely related to the meaning of the question: what we don't have makes our hearts rich and full. Through the beginning of the first sentence and the summary of the last sentence, the full text echoes from beginning to end, and the center is obviously prominent.

The language of this article is full of charm. Some languages are rigorous, square and mature, such as "burning coupons is beautiful, and its meaning is like wildfire" and "the definition of wealth is limited to money and fame"; Some languages are full of dialectical philosophy, such as "what you get brings material wealth, but after quiet precipitation, your mind will eventually be empty and lonely"; Some are passionate and express their spirit alone; Some are euphemistic and reasonable. Although there is still room for deliberation sometimes, the agility and talent, the literacy and understanding are impressive.

In addition, the topic is the eyes of composition, "Seeing my family is scarce", which comes from the well-known "Warring States Policy, Feng Xuan Guest Meng Changjun". Taking this wonderful use as the topic not only leads to the full text, but also attracts the attention and interest of the marking teacher.

Teenagers are not afraid of time.

What is wealth and success? In the eyes of young people, "wealth" has long meant not only wealth, but also spiritual wealth, which is the real success. And spiritual wealth, in my opinion, is to find the right goal, persistent pursuit of dreams, not afraid of the long years.

People are seldom satisfied and always want to have more. What's wrong with that? People always have a goal that they are willing to fight for. When moving forward to what you don't have, you should set your sights high and have a correct attitude. The so-called horizon is the goal and way a person looks at things; The so-called attitude is his efforts and the process of paying for it-vision and attitude determine a person's goals and pursuit methods, from which a person can tirelessly pursue and enrich his spirit.

(3) From this, I can't help thinking of Thoreau by Walden Lake. He left everything behind, lived alone in Walden Lake, cultivated and built his own house, and gained a natural experience that he had never had in the city. Some people compare Thoreau with Tao Yuanming, but I don't think so. Tao Gong was a hermit who drifted with the tide, but Thoreau was not. Even his thoughts on spiritual goals and moral standards can be seen from the words he wrote when he lived in the lake. Lakes, forests and nature have improved his eyesight. He seems to live in seclusion, but he is still walking towards his inner hall. So this is probably the reason why Tsinghua University gave Walden as an entrance gift to every freshman-learn from Thoreau, make clear the goal, and constantly improve the horizon.

(4) After that, you need to have a persistent attitude. Qu Zi's famous saying that "the road is long, but it's Xiu Yuan, and I will go up and down" has inspired countless scholars in ancient and modern times to work hard for their own goals. Thank you for paying attention to the official account of "Sister Shen Chinese Classroom" WeChat! Welcome to forward and share! The following is the latest college entrance examination Chinese materials of Magic Capital! Mr. Xu Yuanchong, a famous translator, is 90 years old, but he still insists on translating until late at night every day. He said he was "stealing time from the night". I believe that under the lonely light at night, 90-year-old Lao Xu is still a dynamic young master, who is not afraid of the long road ahead and is exploring and advancing in the "dark and confused" no-man's land.

Does Thoreau have money? In terms of material definition, people who want to build their own houses must not; Is Lao Xu rich? Perhaps so many translators brought him less money than some popular novelists. However, they and Qian Qian, who worked tirelessly for their dreams, are both rich people, because their "not yet owned" goal is far higher than money, their vision and attitude are beyond ordinary people, and they have a far-reaching impact on society. Teenagers should not be afraid of the long years, because as long as they are willing to work hard for their dreams and pursue firmness, spiritual wealth can always be realized.

⑥ There is a passage in Lu Xun's Hot Wind: I wish all young people in China to get rid of air conditioning, just go up, do what they can, and make a sound, even in the dark, to be that firefly. Thank you for paying attention to the official account of "Sister Shen Chinese Classroom" WeChat! Welcome to forward and share! The following is the latest college entrance examination Chinese materials of Magic Capital! Maybe we no longer have the opportunity for young people to face difficulties during the May 4th Movement, but we can do things, make a sound, work hard and pursue our dreams persistently ... these things can be done anytime and anywhere. Since the younger generation will shoulder social responsibilities sooner or later, why not make themselves "rich"? Personal success will eventually become social success. A vibrant and creative society lies in everyone's firm vision and persistent attitude.

⑦ There are not many years for each other, so don't be afraid of long years.

Comments:

This article is accurate in examination, profound in conception, rigorous in structure and fluent in language. It is an excellent composition that can be imitated and learned. In the title, the phrase "Don't lose the good times when the time is running out" in Li Longji's poem "Good Times" is appropriate and full of book spirit. At the beginning of the article, I summarized the materials and put forward the view that "spiritual wealth, in my opinion, is to find the right goal, pursue the dream persistently and not be afraid of the long years". I saw that I cut to the chase and didn't vaguely cut into the focus of the general topic "wealth".

The second paragraph explains the key words "vision" and "attitude" in the material, and briefly explains their relationship with the central argument. The second paragraph and the following third and fourth paragraphs are the total score relationship. In the third paragraph, Thoreau is taken as an example to demonstrate that "clear goals and constantly improve one's horizons". At the same time, it is compared with Tao Yuanming, and it is linked with the book Walden presented by Tsinghua University, emphasizing that people should take the initiative to join the WTO and not passively retire. It paves the way for the deeper and more implicit theme below-youth should take social responsibility.

The fourth paragraph quotes Qu Zi's famous words and Xu Yuanchong's example in The Reader, and demonstrates that the spirit is rich, and besides "foresight", there should also be a "persistent" attitude. The fifth paragraph summarizes the last two paragraphs, and once again strengthens and enriches the connotation of the subject word "rich" in the materials with two powerful rhetorical questions: "They and Qian Qian, who have worked tirelessly for their dreams, are both rich because their goal of" not having yet "is far higher than money, their vision and attitude are beyond ordinary people, and they have a far-reaching impact on society." At the same time, I mentioned another pair of contradictory concepts in the material that are difficult to explain in the same article-not yet owned and already owned.

The sixth paragraph quotes Mr. Lu Xun's famous saying that wealth is a personal success and should eventually become a social success. Young people should shoulder the profound theme of social responsibility, which is magnificent and stirring. Echoing the previous article, the structure is rigorous. One last point. In addition, the student's writing ink is thick and black, his brushwork is vigorous, his stippling is clear and his structure is symmetrical. This is a rare running script, good!

Have a rich vision

Tolstoy once said, "All changes in the world are made up of light and darkness." Our vision determines whether the change we understand is bright or dark. In today's world, "wealth" has become synonymous with success. People tend to use a specific standard to measure whether what they get meets the standard of "wealth". As we all know, it is not what we get, but what we don't have, which can determine whether we are rich or not. What can achieve wealth is not the standard, but the vision.

Vision provides multiple perspectives on wealth. Some people only limit "wealth" to material things, so as to pursue the satisfaction of money, and regard the continuous acquisition of money as wealth, so as to make profits and devour themselves and fall into the quagmire of spiritual lack. This is obviously not rich. As a noble family, Zhang Ailing chose to study instead of dressing herself up with money. She is not immersed in the innate material life, but constantly pursues her literary accomplishment that she has not yet possessed. She looked at wealth from many angles, thus jumping out of the quagmire of material wealth and achieving spiritual wealth. If you are born poor, there are still many things in the world that you haven't, and at this point, you are rich. Throw away established standards and look at wealth in a variety of ways.

Vision gives us the ability to be far-sighted and achieve wealth. Some people are complacent because they have gained a lot, and feel that they are rich enough to lose their ambition in life. This is not spiritual wealth, while others are far-sighted, constantly pursuing higher ideals and achieving wealth in the pursuit. Thank you for paying attention to the official account of "Sister Shen Chinese Classroom" WeChat! Welcome to forward and share! The following is the latest college entrance examination Chinese materials of Magic Capital! Cheng Wei, CEO of Didi Taxi, was originally a senior employee of Alibaba. He could have lived on a monthly salary, but he chose to start a business and achieved his own career. He said that taxi software has not been optimistic about entering the domestic and foreign markets, and the hardships are self-evident. If he doesn't see the vision he doesn't have, his life value will be as blank as the taxi software.

The value of life lies not in its length, but in its depth. When you are in a cramped situation, take a long view, focus on what you haven't got yet, try your best to expand your situation, and don't be a frog in the well; When you reach a certain "rich" standard, take a long view and think about what you have not finished and what you want to pursue, so that you won't regret it. Thank you for paying attention to the official account of "Sister Shen Chinese Classroom" WeChat! Welcome to forward and share! The following is the latest college entrance examination Chinese materials of Magic Capital! Vision allows us to look at gains and losses objectively. "Rich" is not how much you get, but whether what you get is in line with your long-term goals.

Life is a book that can only be read once. You shouldn't turn it over in a hurry, but you should carefully taste it with your eyes, study its far-reaching value and enrich it.

Comments:

This is a relatively standardized exam composition. On the basis of a comprehensive grasp of the materials, the author clarifies the relationship between the two, and puts forward at the beginning that "what determines whether we are rich or not has not yet been owned;" What makes you rich is your vision. " Followed by the viewpoint, this paper discusses from two aspects: "vision provides multiple perspectives on wealth" and "vision enables us to have the foresight to realize wealth", accurately interprets the connotation of "wealth" and demonstrates the role of vision in realizing wealth. Then put forward the practice of "when you reach a certain level of affluence, look farther and think about what you have not finished and what you are pursuing". Reading through the whole article, the center is clear, the thinking is clear, and the key words such as "rich", "not yet owned" and "vision" are always closely followed in the process of argumentation, showing a strong sense of deduction. The choice of arguments is more accurate, the content is more substantial, and the argumentation methods are diverse and convincing. The language is fluent and natural, plain and simple, and easy to talk to. The shortcomings are that the "attitude" in the materials is not mentioned, and the argument is somewhat empty, and the argument is not profound and vigorous.