Read the following materials and write as required. (60 points)

At the intersection of youth, there used to be a path looming, calling me. My mother stopped me: "You can't go that way." I don't believe it. "That's how I came. What else do you not believe? " "If you can go that way, why can't I?" "I don't want you to take a detour." "But I like it, and I'm not afraid." Mother looked at me affectionately for a long time, then sighed, "well, you stubborn child, that road is difficult to walk." Be careful all the way. " On the road, I found that my mother didn't lie to me. It's really a detour I fell against the wall and sometimes my head was broken, but I kept walking and finally came.

Please write an argumentative essay or narrative of at least 800 words according to the above materials and topics of your choice.

[writing instruction]

1, study materials and grasp ideas.

(1) The nature of materials and writing methods (expression, skills and figures of speech)

(2) the main content of the material. Elements: people, things, words and things.

(3) Key words and sentences of the material.

(4) Material and ideological point of view: youth detours must be taken.

2. Observe the present life around the main idea of the material and determine the topic (argument) of the article.

Generally speaking, it is positive thinking, and sometimes it is reverse thinking.

3. Carefully draw up the topic: pay attention to the materials. For example: "grow up in detours", "mature after detours", "young people are not afraid of detours", "grow up in detours is necessary", "don't let detours cover your eyes" and "the detours you have passed are a fortune" For insurance, it is best to write keywords in the title.

4. Avoid three kinds of deviation phenomena in the discussion process: (1) Shallow-just say "what is a detour" and don't talk about "why" and "how to do it", that is, just say that youth will detour, but lack of excavation and analysis of the significance value of detours. (2) Deviation-paying attention to "how to go through detours", such as attitude, courage, persistence, belief and no regrets. (3) Greatness has become a topic of "youth". Talking about youth in an empty way does not focus on the detours that must be taken!

What is a "detour of youth"? It mainly refers to going astray, going the wrong way and taking detours when you are young. Then why should youth take a detour? It can be discussed from the following angles: (1) Young and promising, with dreams, going to the world and seeing the scenery for dreams, even if you take many detours, you have no regrets, because you are young and can't afford to lose; (2) Young and frivolous, don't listen to others' advice, and have to go your own way. Although I don't work, it is also an experience and a harvest. (3) Being young and shallow, I lost my way and went astray, but I also knew myself and learned a lesson; (4) Young people need tempering and detours, and we become strong and mature.

When examining the questions, we should grasp the key words in the text and the intention of the proposer.

It's really a detour I hit the wall, stumbled and sometimes hit my head, but I kept walking and finally came over. People must take some detours when they are young, learn from them, gain experience and grow stronger. Although I didn't listen to my mother's advice, I also went through that detour. As an elder, we should know how to let go, let children dare to face the detours of life, and don't do everything ourselves.

There is a problem:

1, I don't know:

The road to life, the road to growth.

Make a good choice at the fork in the road of life

The crossroads of youth. Youth without regrets. Lost youth.

Bypass (too big)

Some are just the opposite. We shouldn't take detours. We should listen to mom's advice and be good at listening.

2. The transformation of text and meaning

The article must be changed from detours to other words, such as: bumpy.

But some students don't mention detours as soon as they come up, which is to face the ups and downs of life. The topic is, frustration makes life. Failure is the mother of success.

3. Structurally, there is no clear writing structure.

Wearing boots and hats is serious. Tell your own story or someone else's story, the first point, the last summary. The full text is three paragraphs, bloated and tiring to read.

4. Choose a case

No name, no surname, and the case is not typical.

Mystery, tell the name after the story is told.

There is no interpretation of "young" as an example.