2065438+April 2007 Fujian senior high school Chinese quality inspection composition.
Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.
Different contacts will form different "* * * same memories". Different roles have different meanings of "remembering * * *". For example:
Dad Zhang: * * Memory is the bond of family. No matter how busy I am, I will spend more time with my children and witness their growth.
Teacher Shen: * * Memory is the spiritual home. I want to be a modest, caring and self-disciplined gardener.
Mayor Wu: Memory is the root and soul of a city. We need high-rise buildings and cultural heritage.
What did the three elders' understanding of "* * * sharing memories" inspire you? What do you think of the meaning of "* * * has memory"? Please choose a role among children, students and citizens and write an article.
Topic comment
The title of the composition for quality inspection in April of 20 17 in Fujian Province is "* * * sharing memories", which is similar to the title of "heirloom", "twenty-four solar terms" in previous major exams in Fujian Province, and the title of "charming people" in the second volume of the 20 15 college entrance examination curriculum standard, with the title of Chinese excellent traditional culture or national spirit as an attempt to guide students to pay attention to tradition and national spirit.
Although there is little room for reflection and criticism on "* * * with memory" on the whole, this topic provides another broader writing space, that is, "different communication" and "different roles" in the materials, and the resulting "different memories" and "different meanings". It can be seen that this proposition increases the restrictions and guidance for candidates in terms of topics and ideas, and also provides a certain writing space.
This space is embodied in three different pairs of relationships. "* * * has a memory" is the only writing topic, and "three pairs of relationships" is an optional space. The child corresponds to Zhang's father, and * * * is a family relationship with memory; Students correspond to Mr. Shen, and the same memory is the teacher-student relationship; Citizens correspond to Mayor Wu, and the same memory is urban culture. Pick any one. Actually, you can only choose one. Because the three are cut in from different angles, since it is Mr. Shen, it can't be Mayor Wu or Dad Zhang, and it can't be "either" or "echoing others" like the previous task-driven composition. This is a major feature of this proposition.
In addition, the topic should be written from three angles: children, students and citizens. "Dad Zhang", "Teacher Shen" and "Mayor Wu" are just their counterparts. Their words are only the assistance, inspiration and inspiration of children, students and citizens, not the whole topic of "sharing memories", otherwise it will be difficult to broaden our thinking. For example, Zhang Dad said that * * * and memory are the ties of family, and no matter how busy they are, they should grow up with their children. From the child's point of view, you can certainly agree with Zhang Dad's point of view, but you can also boldly oppose it, even reflect on criticism, and open up writing space, thinking that even if you can't accompany him, it will not affect your family; Or, excessive companionship will kill family ties; Family and companionship are not necessarily related. Sometimes, although thousands of miles apart, we still love each other. On the contrary, sometimes close at hand, but strangers. The other two relationships are the same.
In short, it is an unavoidable task for every exam to be keenly aware of the limitations of the topic and strive to expand the writing space.
Excellent model essay
Memories of the same city
Author: Lin School: Fuzhou No.1 Middle School
With the acceleration of urbanization, it is no longer a myth to build high-rise buildings in a few months. However, our memory of a city's unique culture seems to fade away, forgotten by years and buried by childhood, leaving only the reality of steel forest. Day after day, neon flashes and traffic is busy, which makes people feel bored. We can only look for this city in the depths of our memory. What these citizens cherish is the same as their memory.
The same memory of the city is concrete and subtle. The old park I used to go to when I was a child, every bluestone alley I passed on my way to school, and the old buildings that witnessed the historical changes of the city ... gradually, they gathered into clear memories. Of course, society is developing, life is changing and times are progressing. Cities can't stay the same forever. It is in this change and development that a city's * * * and memory are slowly formed and accumulated and become a city's heritage. As citizens, we inherit and create memories and identify with a city in the same memory. History and present situation are intertwined, and citizens interact with the city, which makes the city have a body temperature and a personality.
The problem now is that the city is developing too fast. The park has been renovated, a large number of landscape trees have been planted, and major shopping malls have settled in. Every modern block has become the same. In my city, the old house has been "landscaped". From the city center to the suburbs, the template landscape constructed by gray, white and red can be seen everywhere; Old streets and old buildings have failed to stop the trend of renovation and reconstruction, and the colors of paints are the same, with blue bricks and tiles. These are not our common memories, but theirs.
Culture has marginal effect. People often don't want to spend their lives reading the cultural memories compiled by their predecessors, and the memories of many cities can only be passed down from generation to generation. The loss of dialect is a pain in the hearts of countless linguists, and the loss of folk culture makes the older generation cry silently. Where else can we find them? At the mention of parents, grandparents? In undeveloped remote rural areas? It seems that this is the only way. Where the wave of modernization has not swept, the unique memory of a city can be vaguely recognized. For young people, the memory of the city is fragmented, and the clues to recovery and re-growth may only be in those more traditional "marginal zones".
Saving and restoring lost culture and memory is our top priority. It is an indispensable soil layer in our spiritual world, engraving the past, conserving the present and mapping the future. Our growth is inseparable from the connotation and deep cultivation of spiritual soil, just as plants are rooted in vast soil and tall buildings rely on a solid foundation.
The memory of the city should be buried deep in the spiritual soil of every citizen, and the soul of the city should be hidden in the spiritual world of every citizen. Cultural heritage is its foundation. It grew up here with every citizen and is remembered here together.
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Compared with other materials that provide events or phenomena, the situation of this kind of composition topic is more complicated, and the task setting seems simple but contains mystery. Candidates will lose the theme if they are not careful. It can be said that the topic given by the provincial quality inspection composition question is not too new, but the way of task setting is very delicate, which requires candidates to accurately understand and implement the topic in writing.
The topic requires students to choose a role and think about the meaning of * * * with memory. The task seems clear, but there are two key issues for students to think about. One is the content of * * * with memory, and the other is the meaning of * * * with memory. The hints of these two questions are naturally implied in the words of the three elders in the material, but the hints are vague.
Dad Zhang said, "* * * and memory are the bonds of family ties." From this, we can understand that the so-called * * * same memory can refer to the * * * same memory that parents and children have because of the * * * same life, and its meaning also points to the relationship between parents and children. Mayor Wu said: "Memory is the root and soul of a city." We can't equally understand the * * * with memory here as the * * * with the memory of the mayor and citizens because of the * * * with experience. Its meaning does not point to the mayor and citizens, but to the city.
Combining the words of the three elders, the answers to the above two questions are relatively clear: first, the homonym of * * * can refer to the relationship between parents and children, and can also refer to family; Can refer to between teachers and students, can also refer to the campus; It can refer to the relationship between the mayor and the citizens, or it can refer to the history and culture of the city. Second, the meaning of remembering * * * can be for children or for families; It can be aimed at students or schools; It can be for the citizens or for the city.
As mentioned above, the task setting of this composition question seems simple, but it is not easy to grasp it accurately. Not only that, but there are also two sentences from the three elders in the material. The former sentence is the core, and the latter sentence seems to be important, but it actually causes interference. Candidates deliberately explain this last sentence, emphasizing that parents should spend more time with their children and the relationship between high-rise buildings and heritage, which is misleading and ignores the characteristics of identity.
Faced with such a problem, only students with a solid writing foundation can "improvise". It is a masterpiece to be able to fully understand the topic and explain it with substance around the central topic.
Generally speaking, there are two kinds of excellent works in the examination room: one is highly consistent with the expectations of the marking teacher for this composition; Second, the sender didn't send it, which made the marking teacher feel refreshed. So, what kind of excellent composition do we expect to see this time? As far as argumentative writing is concerned, it should be both in-depth and abstract. Need to have a concrete and vivid experience, but it is also trivial and emotional. For example, from the perspective of citizens, taking typical events that we can feel or even experience personally as arguments, collecting urban scenery, living customs and major events, and then thinking deeply about the retention and disappearance, forgetting and cherishing of urban memories is both readable and speculative. Such an article can naturally be called a masterpiece As far as narrative is concerned, there should be a tortuous and vivid story, which runs through the theme and naturally sublimates. Memory itself is private, emotional and emotional. Different people together naturally form the same memory, which embodies the characteristics of group, rationality and universality. It will be wonderful to write the understanding and feelings of family fathers and sons, campus teachers and students and urbanites through personality figures and unique events.
Fei Yu's article is closely related to the theme, and its content is simple and specific. His understanding of * * * is not vague. There are many wonderful things in it, which can reflect his literacy of reading and expression. As for its shortcomings, it mainly lies in its lack of atmosphere and narrow vision.
Soul systems share memories and are rooted in cultural background.
Author: Gong School: Fuzhou No.3 Middle School
Alone in the metropolis, high-rise buildings have sprung up and vehicles are constantly flowing. Is there a moment of loss? With the rapid modernization of the city, as a citizen, I hold the idea that a good city should have the same soul and memory and be rooted in cultural heritage.
What is "the same memory of a city"? As the name implies, "the memory of the same city" refers to the same or similar impressions and memories formed by the citizens of a city because of their intersection. When cities become more and more shocking because of the development of modernization, the cultural heritage of cities is the source of their memories.
However, some people say: "Since the reform and opening up, population migration has intensified, and the needs of economic development have eroded the cultural heritage of many places. How can I remember each other? " It is true that there is a contradiction between the needs of economic development and the creation and maintenance of cultural heritage to some extent. However, at a time when economic development and modernization have begun to take shape, as a citizen, I advocate focusing on the protection of cultural heritage that still stands. After all, the same memory of a city can only be formed by cultural details, which are indispensable to the city.
Then, why can't a city lack cultural heritage?
The reason is obvious. With the rapid development of economy and the continuous advancement of modernization, the appearance of cities and even residents is constantly changing, which can easily bring exclusion and strangeness to citizens, whether they are rooted citizens or residents. However, if the city has a strong cultural background, the cultural atmosphere it creates can subtly influence the citizens and become their memories of the city. At the same time, it can't be ignored that a city's cultural heritage affects its cultural self-confidence, cultural identity and cultural belonging. The latter three have both positive and negative effects on the cultural heritage of the city, forming an unbreakable cultural lifeline and building citizens' memories of * * * in the form of the root of the city.
On the other hand, however, at present, decision makers seldom focus on the rich cultural heritage to construct the * * * memory of the city. News such as the demolition of historic sites, the construction of office buildings, the banning of museums and the construction of entertainment venues are frequently seen in newspapers. Cao Lin, a famous critic, once said: "A government official who has not served for a long time will not do such a long-term thing as developing urban culture. They only care about their political achievements after the expiration of their term of office. " The lack of cultural heritage and the lack of memory should not only be attributed to the system, but the relevant parties need to reflect and change urgently.
In my opinion, the concept of "soul with memory, cultural heritage eradication" should remain in the hearts of every citizen, and the relevant departments should pay more attention to this aspect. In today's social background, under the premise of not deviating from economic development, it is not only a difficult problem for policy makers, but also the expectation of Chinese citizens to organically combine modernization with cultural inheritance, create a cultural atmosphere, and create and maintain "* * * with memory".
Soul systems share memories and are rooted in cultural background. I believe that in the future, under the guidance of cultural concepts, the appearance of the city will be as unforgettable as the "mother's face", and the attitude of the city will become more and more attractive. In life, people will certainly feel the four seasons, and when they see homesickness, they will certainly have the same memories that can pin their emotions, determine their ownership and inhabit their hearts.
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The biggest highlight of this exam composition is that the logical thinking of the argument is clear and there are obvious language symbols in the transition. At the beginning, I used a sentence "As a citizen, I hold the idea that a good city should have the same soul and memory, rooted in cultural heritage", which expressed my personal views and clarified my role orientation. Then, "What is the same memory of the city?" "Of course, some people say," "Then why can't a city lack cultural heritage?" The first few sentences of "the reason is obvious", "however, looking back at the present" and "in my opinion" string together the ideas of the full text, so that readers can quickly grasp the author's writing ideas when reading this article. In the process of argumentation, we always remember the role of "citizen". And cleavage has a certain depth. Finally, look to the future and point out the center.