The basic pattern of this kind of article is five parts: argument-evidence-conclusion-overlapping evidence-induction.
The first step is to put forward arguments-this is a process of directly putting forward abstract knowledge, that is, at the beginning of the opening, first put forward rational judgments and establish arguments; Similarly, you can also explain the background, reasons and other related premises a little, and simply quote to make an argument.
The second step is to enter the evidence-this is a process from abstract to concrete, that is, after the argument is clear, the argument is expounded for the first time. The arguments in this positioning should generally be older historical arguments, and sometimes they may be selected from languages, legends and anecdotes.
The third step, conclusion-this is a process from concrete to abstract, that is, on the basis of expounding the argument of the second step, make a brief analysis, point out its universal significance and make a summary. At the same time, it is also necessary to introduce the relevant situation of the current era or some realistic background related to the topic, so as to transfer it and introduce it below.
The fourth step, overlapping evidence-this is a process from abstract to concrete, that is, after summing up and transferring, the argument is expounded again, and the argument in this step should be more direct and targeted; These arguments actually form the promotion and superposition of historical arguments in the second step of positioning, thus providing more effective and solid proof for the arguments.
The fifth step, induction-this is a process from concrete to abstract, that is, on the basis of the above-mentioned double facts, comprehensive analysis is carried out to further reveal the guiding significance in the current realistic situation, or to put forward some opinions on practical problems and summarize the whole paper.
For example, the first step in the argumentative essay "Young people should be the trendsetter of the times" is to locate:
Young people should be the leaders of the times. The word "frolic in the waves" was originally another name for "drifting with the tide" when the Qiantang River was in high tide in the Song Dynasty. In Su Dongpo's ci, "A little red flag falls under the shade of a blue mountain, and Nong is a surfer in the south of the Yangtze River" is described as a trendsetter. If the meaning of a frolic is extended to social life, then he should be a brave general who can fight at the forefront of the times, a strong man with the spirit of constant struggle, and a brave man who dares to stand up and sacrifice himself. In short, it should be a gentleman who embodies the spirit of the times and the strength of personal personality.
The second step of positioning is:
In the long river of our human history, there are many young talents who can be called trend-setters. Ban Chao in the western regions, Yue Fei who resisted the nomads from the western regions, and Li Zicheng who raised the banner of righteousness are all trendsetters of the times. Tan Sitong, who died generously, Chen Tianhua, who jumped into the sea to awaken the people, and Ms. Qiu Jin, who brandished a sword to serve the country, are all the trendsetters of the times; In fact, the founding emperors like Li Shimin, Zhu Yuanzhang and Nurhachi were not pioneers of the times.
The third step of positioning is:
The reason why these people with lofty ideals and lofty ideals are worthy of the reputation of leading the trend of the times is that they can ride the wind and waves in the tide of the times, fight bravely, and write a magnificent victory song with their youthful lives, opening up a new road for future generations, at least playing a role in inspiring the deaf.
Today, we live in a completely different era from the past. The international situation is changing, and the wave of domestic reform is getting higher and higher. We need boldness of vision and courage to make greater contributions to the rejuvenation of the motherland and the take-off of China.
The fourth step of positioning is:
In recent years, there are countless such children in China. Mou, the president of Nande Group, the largest private enterprise in China, is known as "Sichuan Wonder". He started in 300 yuan in the early 1980s. After ten years' efforts and development, it has now developed into a company with a capital of over 1 100 million yuan, engaged in aircraft import business and undertaking satellite launch business. Yang He, also known as the "king of ideas", resolutely resigned from public office at 1988, and used 280 yuan's resignation money to set up a purely private technical research institute to advise and sell ideas. Because of his novel and wonderful ideas, many production and business units have made a lot of profits, and he himself has made a commission according to the regulations, becoming a millionaire and famous all over the country. They are the leaders of the times.
The fifth step is positioning:
Looking at the present, we can see that the trendsetter of the times is definitely a brave general, a strong man of the times and a man who scolds the times. Marx once said: "The character of an era is the character of youth representatives, and the spirit of an era is the spirit of youth representatives." Young people who have grown up today should use the vigor and blood of our young people to shape our character of the times and carry forward our spirit of the times. Let's all be the leaders of the times!
In this argumentative essay, the first step is to clarify the argument through simple quotations after slightly explaining the background and reasons of the argument. Obviously, this is a process of directly presenting abstract knowledge. The facts in the second step are the older historical arguments, that is, the arguments expounded for the first time. Obviously, this is a process from abstract to concrete. The third step of positioning is first to summarize the previous, and then to introduce the reality of the current era, which plays a connecting role. Obviously, this is a process from concrete to abstract. The facts in the fourth step of positioning are the second explanation of the argument, all of which are direct and targeted realistic arguments, and are the promotion and superposition of historical arguments in the second step of positioning. Obviously, this is a process from abstract to concrete. The fifth step is to make a comprehensive analysis of the previous double arguments, and summarize the whole text with Marx's warning words, further prompting the guiding significance in the real situation. Obviously, this is a process from concrete to abstract.
This five-step positioning model seems complicated, but it is not difficult to master. Once mastered, the article is often easier to write rich and full, easy to understand, and also helps to write quickly in the exam and get good grades.
Exodus: In the war, people look forward to peace, reunion after parting, elderly parents look forward to their children who often leave home, and college entrance examination candidates look forward to the notice of ideal university ... There are many things worth looking forward to in one's life.
Please write an article on the topic of "Hope". Not less than 800 words.
Looking forward to the return of the soul
Tagore said, "If you cry because you missed the sunset, you will also miss the stars." . So people moved their hands in front of them and chose hope. I look forward to starting here.
I hope it's the canvas on the lifeboat. With it, those broken hearts can sail the boat of hope to the far shore.
I hope it is a mirage in the desert. Although it can't quench the thirsty and tired feet, it tells the anxious soul: "The oasis is ahead."
But there are many crooked canvases and wrong steps in history. Thousands of years ago, Babylonian kings and pharaohs looked forward to prosperity and peace, but set sail for war. A king of Babylon wrote, "I have occupied this land. Burned down the city and took all the men and women. I ordered the army to sow the seeds of salt and thorns on this land, so that my enemies could never survive on this land "... So code of hammurabi and the Pharaoh's scepter were covered with black blood, and the Hebrews had to wander under the guidance of Moses for thousands of years. The heart of hope was lost.
A beautiful hope has been exchanged for a wandering nation without territory. God was blindfolded because he didn't want to see a ship leave the coast and sail for the rough sea.
Thousands of years later, Jews came back with heavy money bags. They burst into tears under wailing wall, and washed away the trauma of losing their homes with tears. They sincerely hope that owning a piece of land, even a little bit, can give them spiritual comfort. Then they visited the beautiful mirage, but they didn't know the real destination was behind them. Israel is getting farther and farther in the vast Arabian desert. After Solomon, the descendants of Ramses and Ju Lushi built another wall, which was not wailing wall, but made of blood and gunpowder. The heart of hope disappeared here.
A heart looking forward to the return is in exchange for the hatred of the Palestinians; Young pale hands under the ruins of Jenin; Rabin fell on the streets of Tel Aviv; Arafat at gunpoint. The whole world was silent. We waited for peace on the stone bench, looking forward to the clear spring and a reunion and peaceful moon.
Eagles expect strong wings. It pierces the blue sky with its wings, but it doesn't need to attack its own kind.
Orchids look forward to elegant stamens, which are used to delight the souls of all things, not to lead people into lost valleys.
We look forward to the return of lost sails and travelers' hearts.