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How to improve the level of composition?
Read more, speak more, write more and practice more! ! !

Read a lot!

Note that you haven't finished reading, but you should ponder it carefully when you are free to see how the author wrote it and how it went!

After a period of time, I believe you will gain something!

A key to improving the level of composition is to pay attention to daily accumulation.

Accumulation is not just reading articles. In daily life, there are also many things worth learning and accumulating. For example, I visited my grandmother who lived in the country during the holiday. After school started, I wrote an article about my holiday, so I wrote what I saw and heard in rural life, the embarrassment of cooking for my grandmother in a cauldron for the first time, the embarrassment of choking on my face by soot for the first time, the embarrassment of sitting on a big butt pier with water for the first time, and some real feelings.

To write a good composition, accumulation alone is useless (accumulation alone is not enough). We should also learn how to use this accumulated knowledge properly, and we should not use it casually. A classmate thought that the host was decent and generous when watching the Weather Forecast. He accumulated, when writing an article about the weather, he applied (plagiarized) his accumulated knowledge about "weather forecast". A composition that accumulates knowledge in this way and is not used correctly is not a good article.

"Improving the writing level" is not shouted as a slogan, nor is it standing in front of the stage telling everyone to be innovative and how to be literary.

In addition to accumulation and application, you can look for materials from all aspects, and don't feel that there is nothing to write. An article said that the daughter and the father had a conflict, but the father rode a bike to pick up the children as before. Two people are riding on the road, and the daughter and father are not side by side. At this time, a car rushed across the street, and the father naturally blocked his daughter, fearing that she was in danger. Such a subtle action was vividly described by my daughter. Students will say, what's the matter? This happens all the time. But how many students will write? Like this classmate, his writing is ordinary, but he is innovative.

Is reading the most effective way to improve your composition? The most important thing is to cultivate interest.

First of all, the sentence is fluent. Keep more diaries, not necessarily every day. Pay attention, write what you want! Not a word. To write a composition, we must first cultivate expression methods.

② Accumulate vocabulary. Read the books you like and don't read the books you don't like. Don't read famous books you don't like, it will be counterproductive.

(3) create conditions for yourself. Travel more, or take part in some activities to create writing conditions for yourself. I'm not in the mood to write until I've finished writing. I'm afraid there are one or two lines.

④ Expression. Communication is crucial. Chatting online, in the virtual world. You can express yourself freely (but don't indulge in time! )

Paper writing ability training

1. Full-proposition composition

(1) Title: Thinking from a Little Event ...

Tip: When writing this article, you should choose one thing that you feel most deeply, describe it roughly, and then express your own views and opinions. When selecting materials, try to choose small things with certain practical significance, which are related to something in real life, and dig out new ideas from them and demonstrate them according to the facts.

(2) Title: The landscape is affectionate and heartless.

-Talking about ecological balance

Tip: the title of this article has pointed out the central meaning and prompted the idea of the article. Therefore, it can be conceived from the two aspects of "sentimentality" and "ruthlessness" of the landscape.

To write this article, we must first describe the selfless dedication of green mountains and green waters, forests and grasslands and even the whole nature to mankind, and mankind has benefited from nature endlessly. Then write reality. The scenery has lovers but is heartless. People scramble to gain strength from nature, chop down trees and destroy the ecological balance. Therefore, nature is very rude, giving human beings the punishment they deserve, and acting very "heartless". This part is the focus of the article. Therefore, when writing, you should put facts and highlight the center of the article-mountains and rivers are affectionate, people should also be affectionate and care for nature, otherwise it will be endless.

(3) Title: My favorite quote (motto):

Tip: "Famous sayings (maxims)" play a very important role in the growth of teenagers, which can often enrich a pure heart and lead him to the light.

To write an article about famous sayings (aphorisms), just write down a few reasons you like. But it can also be written in a unique way. For example, while explaining why you like it best, quote the deeds, places, speeches or poems of celebrities. Arrange the hierarchy, focus on the topic at the beginning, give consideration to the end and the beginning, and highlight the center of the article.

(4) Title: The education given to me by a literary image in Lu Xun's works.

Requirements: Choose a highly educated person from Lu Xun's works and write an argumentative essay based on his own reality.

Tip: There are many works by Mr. Lu Xun in junior middle school Chinese textbooks, and the characters in the works are vivid, which left a deep impression on us. To write this article, we must first determine the characters in Lu Xun's works, which can be positive or negative, such as Afa, Double Happiness, Runtu and Kong Yiji. And choose the one with the deepest impression and the greatest education. In terms of layout and structure, it is best to combine narrative and discussion. However, we should pay special attention to the fact that no matter whether the chosen image is positive or negative, it should be implemented in "education for me"

(5) Title: Some people think that opening books is beneficial, while others think that opening books may not be beneficial. Please write an argumentative essay on the topic of "opening books is beneficial" and write your own opinions in combination with the actual situation.

Tip: "Open book is beneficial" is an idiom. "Volume" refers to books; "Open book", open book, refers to reading. Read well. This explanation seems to be conclusive in the minds of ordinary people. In fact, this is worth thinking about, and the "small discussion" in the title has already made such a hint. In other words, we can't say "open books are beneficial" in general, but we should look at what books to read, why to read them and how to read them. Reading good books is beneficial, while reading bad books or even toxic books is not beneficial but harmful. On the other hand, even if you read a good book, there are still problems of motivation and methods, and whether it is beneficial or not cannot be generalized.

When writing this topic, you can also affirm the above conclusion, and then ask: the problem is not one side of the book, the key lies in whether the reader has the ability to understand, distinguish and criticize. If so, all books can be read, or benefit from the front or the back.

(6) topic: respect for the elderly and love for the young.

Tip: It is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation to respect the old and love the young. There are many touching stories at all times and in all countries. "The old have a sense of security, the strong have a sense of use, and the young have a sense of security", "I am old, I am old, I am young, and I am young" are the ideals of the working people. In today's real life, some people have a weak concept of "respecting the elderly", and some people have an excellent heart of "loving the young", but they love but don't teach. This topic has a wide connotation, which can refer to both inside and outside the family and the whole society. When writing this article, you can focus on "respecting the old" or "loving the young". There is no need to use pen and ink evenly. We can give positive examples, demonstrate from the opposite side and make positive and negative comparisons. But we should have a clear point of view, a clear level, and closely connect with real life.

(7) Title: Be conscious

Requirements: write an argumentative essay in connection with some phenomena in life.

Tip: In real life, "consciousness" is very important to everyone, especially teenagers. Life tests our consciousness everywhere; It's snowing. Have you consciously cleaned the snow on the road? You haven't finished your homework. There are good TV programs+you don't care if you see bad people doing bad things. Whether to consciously pay for tickets through unmanned ticketing cars, etc.

When writing this article, we can grasp one or several facts and talk about the problem of consciousness.

2. Semi-propositional composition

Enlightenment from the topic (1): "

Worried about the cost of RMB. A manufacturer came to the door and promised to drink the factory's mouth as long as she said a word on TV. Taking liquid can make you think quickly, and you can get an advertising fee of 1 10,000 yuan, but Tang Li refused. She said: "My family is poor and I have never drunk that kind of brain-strengthening oral liquid. If I talk nonsense about greed, how can I behave in society in the future? "

It is suggested that to write a good review, the first thing is to find a "feeling point". "Feeling points" are often diverse. You can express your feelings about the main idea of the material, you can also express your feelings from a certain side, and you can even talk about your feelings about a sentence. If we grasp the main idea of the above materials, we can establish the consciousness of "pursuing profits at the expense of the present" and "seeking truth from facts". On the other hand, we can establish the consciousness of "resisting the temptation of money", "being honest" and "not making false advertisements", and we can also grasp the consciousness of "not lying for money".

The life of "feeling after reading" lies in connecting with reality. After the establishment of "emotion point", we should give full play to the role of association in the process of argumentation, and explain the emotion point through the association of people and things at all times and in all countries, and connect with our own reality. Reasonably use examples, comparative arguments or positive and negative arguments to demonstrate your feelings.

(2) Topic: Write an argumentative essay according to the following materials, from a self-selected angle and in connection with reality.

A foreigner wants to make a suit. He gave it to a tailor in China. A few days later, a new suit was made. Westerners can tell at a glance that the tailor in China imitated it perfectly. But when I turned to the back, I suddenly found myself digging a piece and filling another piece. Westerners are surprised and ask, "Why did you do this?" The tailor said, "I did exactly the same as you!" " Westerners suddenly realized that there was a patch at the back of the old suit.

Tip: To write this article, you must first read the main idea of the material. The key to this material is to copy the patch, so as to clarify his point of view and put forward the central argument. Tailors have superb skills and vivid imitation, but they just imitate without knowing how to take the essence and discard the dross, which is counterproductive. On the basis of analyzing materials, connecting with the reality of reform and opening up, this paper demonstrates with examples or positive and negative arguments, and finally draws the conclusion that we can't copy mechanically to exemplify people.

(3) Title, according to the following materials, make your own title and write a comment.

199 1 Chen Xinmin, Chief Pediatric Physician of Fuzhou General Hospital of Nanjing Military Region, went abroad to attend the 3rd International Conference on Pediatric Cardiology. His paper won the prize. More than 1000 experts and professors from 54 countries were waiting for his academic report at the meeting. Chen Xinmin found that among the national flags hanging in the meeting hall, there was not a five-continent red flag. He immediately made a serious proposal to the organizer: "Before I enter the venue to make a report, please hang up the five-star red flag first!" Immediately after the apology, the Secretariat of the Congress raised the national flag of China, and Chen Xinmin took a passionate group photo under the five-star red flag before entering the venue.

Tip: to extract ideas from materials, we should first pay special attention to analyzing the main plot and content of the materials, and then select one point to discuss. This material enlightens us that the national flag is a symbol of the country and the national flag is sacred and inviolable. We should always safeguard the dignity of the motherland and let the national flag fly in our hearts forever. Therefore, the impression given by this article should be: we should always safeguard the dignity of the Chinese nation everywhere.

After putting forward the viewpoint, we can cite Ji Hongchang, Xu Beihong, Zhu Ziqing and other examples to demonstrate the viewpoint, and then use the fact that Chen Xinmin and today's intellectuals study abroad, do not forget the motherland, and safeguard national dignity to illustrate the viewpoint.

(4) Topic: Read the following materials, choose an angle, save your own topic and write an argumentative paper.

After class recommendation and certain tests, a middle school selected 20 students as "three good students" in the city and district: finish the topic first, and then write an article about one thing and one discussion.

Tip: one thing and one discussion, narration is the foundation, discussion is the key, and if you want to discuss it in depth, you must choose the right thing. In the blank of the topic, there are all kinds of "things" that can be filled in, such as the success of an exam, the failure of an experiment, an award, and even anything in life. Of course, choose the things that are most familiar, meaningful and easy to discuss. The choice can be positive or negative. When writing this article, the narrative should be concise and general, and the discussion should be in depth. We should not only talk about superficial things, but also explore its deep meaning, that is, social significance.

(2) Title: Confidence+= Success

Enlightenment from ...

Requirements: finish the topic first, and then write an argumentative essay.

Tip: The contents of the front and back titles of this article are limited, and some contents need to be supplemented. In the blank of the topic equation, you can add what you think is necessary for "success", such as perseverance, wisdom, courage, diligence and so on. You can fill in the events you describe on the horizontal line of the subtitle. However, it should be noted that the elements to be filled in should be internally related to the events to be filled in.

When writing this article, we should first supplement the complete topic according to the characteristics of the article topic, and then write it according to the method of argumentative writing.

(3) title; Ideologically (or: from the beginning)

Requirements: finish the topic first, and then write articles such as comments and short comments.

Tip: There are many things to add to the title, which can be an idiom, a famous saying, a proverb, a story, a poem, a song and so on. It can also be a thing or a phenomenon, such as "wasting food", "schoolbags for primary school students are getting heavier and heavier", "spitting and throwing cigarette butts everywhere" and "not daring to take care of bad people". In writing, we should first make clear the "meaning point" and "comment point" on the basis of the title, then choose appropriate methods to discuss it according to the needs, make clear the universal and practical significance of the title, and finally emphasize the "meaning point" and "comment point" to take care of the beginning.

The key to a good idea of this article lies in selecting "feeling points" and "comment points", which are all produced in the supplementary content. Therefore, we should grasp the spiritual essence of the topic and see its practical significance. However, it must be noted that the so-called "feeling point" and "comment point" can only be a point and cannot be expanded. Only in this way can we concentrate, speak deeply and make the article convincing.

(4) Title: My favorite

Requirements: finish the topic first, and then write an argumentative essay.

Hint: This article is a semi-propositional composition, and there is a wide range of contents to be supplemented in the topic. Everyone has his favorite people and things, such as literature, reading, sports, music, travel, teachers, brothers and sisters, etc. To write this article, you should first fill in the object you like, and then explain the reasons why you like it in an orderly way. However, it should be noted that the reasons must be sufficient, otherwise it will not be enough to explain the problem. Also pay attention to the word "most" in the title, indicating that it is not love in the ordinary sense. Only in this way can we discuss deeply and highlight the main idea of the article.

3. Material composition

(1) Title: Read the following materials and write a comment with a self-made title.

Tang Li was the top female student in the 1996 college entrance examination and was admitted to Peking University. Her family is poor and worried about thousands of dollars for college. A manufacturer came to the door and promised to drink the factory's mouth as long as she said a word on TV. Taking liquid can make you think quickly, and you can get an advertising fee of 1 10,000 yuan, but Tang Li refused. She said: "My family is poor and I have never drunk that kind of brain-strengthening oral liquid. If I talk nonsense about greed, how can I behave in society in the future? "

It is suggested that to write a good review, the first thing is to find a "feeling point". "Feeling points" are often diverse. You can express your feelings about the main idea of the material, you can also express your feelings from a certain side, and you can even talk about your feelings about a sentence. If we grasp the main idea of the above materials, we can establish the consciousness of "pursuing profits at the expense of the present" and "seeking truth from facts". On the other hand, we can establish the consciousness of "resisting the temptation of money", "being honest" and "not making false advertisements", and we can also grasp the consciousness of "not lying for money".

The life of "feeling after reading" lies in connecting with reality. After the establishment of "emotion point", we should give full play to the role of association in the process of argumentation, and explain the emotion point through the association of people and things at all times and in all countries, and connect with our own reality. Reasonably use examples, comparative arguments or positive and negative arguments to demonstrate your feelings.

(2) Topic: Write an argumentative essay according to the following materials, from a self-selected angle and in connection with reality.

A foreigner wants to make a suit. He gave it to a tailor in China. A few days later, a new suit was made. Westerners can tell at a glance that the tailor in China imitated it perfectly. But when I turned to the back, I suddenly found myself digging a piece and filling another piece. Westerners are surprised and ask, "Why did you do this?" The tailor said, "I made it exactly in your style." Westerners suddenly realized that there was a patch on the back of the old suit.

Tip: To write this article, you must first read the main idea of the material. The key to this material is to copy the patch, so as to clarify his point of view and put forward the central argument. Tailors have superb skills and vivid imitation, but they just imitate without knowing how to take the essence and discard the dross, which is counterproductive. On the basis of analyzing materials, connecting with the reality of reform and opening up, this paper demonstrates with examples or positive and negative arguments, and finally draws the conclusion that we can't copy mechanically to exemplify people.

(3) Title, according to the following materials, make your own title and write a comment.

199 1 Chen Xinmin, Chief Pediatric Physician of Fuzhou General Hospital of Nanjing Military Region, went abroad to attend the 3rd International Conference on Pediatric Cardiology. His paper won the prize. More than 1000 experts and professors from 54 countries were waiting for his academic report at the meeting. Chen Xinmin found that among the national flags hanging in the meeting hall, there was not a five-continent red flag. He immediately made a serious proposal to the organizer: "Before I enter the venue to make a report, please hang up the five-star red flag first!" Immediately after the apology, the Secretariat of the Congress raised the national flag of China, and Chen Xinmin took a passionate group photo under the five-star red flag before entering the venue.

Tip: to extract ideas from materials, we should first pay special attention to analyzing the main plot and content of the materials, and then select one point to discuss. This material enlightens us that the national flag is a symbol of the country and the national flag is sacred and inviolable. We should always safeguard the dignity of the motherland and let the national flag fly in our hearts forever. Therefore, the impression given by this article should be: we should always safeguard the dignity of the Chinese nation everywhere.

After putting forward the viewpoint, we can cite Ji Hongchang, Xu Beihong, Zhu Ziqing and other examples to demonstrate the viewpoint, and then use the fact that Chen Xinmin and today's intellectuals study abroad, do not forget the motherland, and safeguard national dignity to illustrate the viewpoint.

(4) Topic: Read the following materials, choose an angle, save your own topic and write an argumentative paper.

After class recommendation and certain tests, a middle school selected 20 students as "three good students" candidates in the city and district. These candidates have good academic performance, good physical and mental quality, excellent ideological and moral evaluation, and are among the best in written tests such as code of conduct and current affairs and politics.

One day, the school gave them another special test.

At the entrance of several art examination rooms, brooms were littered on the ground, and rags were littered on the ground. Many candidates turned a blind eye and crossed themselves, and some candidates put them where they should be. In the examination room, there are blades and uncut pencils in front of the candidates, as well as drawing paper and draft paper. Everyone began to sharpen pencils. Some people cut pencil scraps on draft paper, while others cut them casually on the floor or on the table. ...

Tip: To write this article, we must first understand the problems reflected in the materials, choose a suitable angle and refine our views. From the perspective of students, "having both ability and political integrity" is the standard of cross-century talents; If you want to achieve great things, you must start with small things. From the perspective of schools and teachers, school education should put moral education in the first place and pay attention to students' moral cultivation. Then use the method of putting facts and reasoning to demonstrate and explain your own views. It is more appropriate to use the structure of opening point and ending point at the beginning of this paper.

(5) Topic: Read the following materials, draw up your own topic and write an argumentative paper according to the tips in the materials.

Books or medicine, good reading can cure fools.

Reading a good book is talking to many noble people.

Reading makes people avoid evil, and reading makes people do good; Reading makes people wise and noble.

Books are the ladder of human progress.

These are some famous sayings about reading, and I believe you have similar feelings. Please choose a good book (or magazine, newspaper or article) that you have read and talk about your experience and lessons.

Prompt; To write this article, we must first understand the intention of the four famous sayings provided in the materials: these four famous sayings have the same theme, that is, reading is beneficial. This not only limits the content of the composition, but also implies the center of the composition: only the ideological and educational nature of the work can be written, and the feelings and lessons can be discussed in combination with oneself, but not its artistry. When writing a composition, you can choose one or two famous sentences, not all, because the "requirement" States that the four obvious words are only "hints" and not necessary materials. The "hint" in the material limits the feeling that this article should be written as a combination of "reading" and "feeling". When writing this article, we should pay attention to it, and the feeling written must be consistent with the famous aphorism and the same direction. If you ignore these, then write this article as an introduction or talk about the role of reading; Or cover everything and talk about ideas and art together; Or a lot of words talk about the content of the book, which feels like a simple sentence. These are all phenomena that you can't understand the material, digress and digress.

(6) Read the following materials, grasp the essence, draw up a topic and write an argumentative essay.

Ball king Bailey scored 100. Asked which one he was most satisfied with, he replied, "Next."

Prompt; The key to writing this article well is to understand the materials and grasp the essence of the problem. Although this material is short, it is not easy to read and master it accurately. After reading this material, many conclusions may be drawn. If we come to the conclusion that "nearsighted people have no future" and "if we want to get good grades, we must start now", it is somewhat beside the point; It is specious to draw the conclusion that "you can't live on your laurels" and "the past can only belong to history and the future belongs to yourself". The conclusion that "you can't be satisfied with what you have achieved" and "only those who pursue higher goals can make a difference" is in line with the topic. The former is shallow in artistic conception and only talks about things, while the latter "only those who pursue higher goals can make a difference", grasping the essence of the problem and thinking deeply. After accurate conception, it can be conceived in words. Choose the appropriate argumentation method to demonstrate your point of view; The language should be concise and clear, and use as few related words, adjectives and adverbs as possible to be clear and thorough.

1. Be sure to read more, no matter what you read! Novels, masterpieces, short stories, essays, etc. According to my personal experience, every time I read a novel, I will have something to write immediately, and of course the quality is good. But it is best to read the books you like, and there will be conflicts if you don't like them. However, the effect of reading can't be shown immediately. In the long run, it will affect you more or less for a while. Some people have accumulated a lot of money. The more you read. You will form your own thinking mode and method, and then you will use your own views and methods to find problems and consider them. Over time, your writing materials will be more and more, and the article will naturally go without saying.

When you meet something, just think about it in your mind. Even if you don't write, you should write a short composition in your mind. When you are inspired, you should write it down immediately.

When speaking and writing a composition, the language should be as concise as possible, and it is best to be concise, but for now, you should train more how to make the language concise.