Principle 1: the head and tail structure is rigorous.

Example:

1, at the end of the city, there were no bustling markets and flashing neon lights; At the end of the city, there are only weather-beaten dilapidated shanty towns; At the end of the city, there are a group of people like them.

(End) The sun rises from the horizon, illuminating the end of the city and their lives.

2. (At first) Standing on the banks of the Seine, you can feel the pulse of fashion and elegance in Paris; Being on Fifth Avenue, you can feel the gorgeous and gorgeous atmosphere of new york. Strolling through the streets of Ginza, you can appreciate the ancient and modern culture of Tokyo; Stay by the Huangpu River, and you can appreciate the unique and inclusive Shanghai spirit.

(End) I am facing the city in infinite thinking, touching its shell and eager to touch its soul. I hope that one day its inner substance will be as beautiful as its outer shell. I hope those falsehoods and frivolities will become real and solid. The hope is that "the clouds sell rain and the clouds fall, and the color area is bright." I hope we can touch the beauty of the flowers in this city again from the inside out.

Principle 2: Natural gathering

Example:

Life is actually a process. Many things, many people, are not understood until they fail, and they are mature. When failure comes, don't be sad, but see it as an opportunity for growth and exercise. Rush over, you will have a better and brighter life waiting for you, and you will have a sense of accomplishment; If you back down, you will only have more failures and more regrets in your life.

(End) When we are near the end of life, when we look back on this life, especially those difficulties and failures, we will feel that perhaps it is because of these that we have enriched our lives, overcome them and made our lives more perfect.

Principle 3: Make the finishing touch.

Example:

(at the beginning) Tragedy has existed since ancient times. However, since ancient times, who has seen such inspiring and earth-shattering unity? "Historical Records" has a cloud: the people are in harmony with the people, then the family is safe, and the monarch is in harmony with the people, then the country is prosperous. Today, this is the joint efforts of people and people, people and countries, and countries and the world. Why are you worried about family unrest and national prosperity?

(End) With Qingshan, we met again in the wind and rain. And the bond that connects people all over the world may be such an expectation: make a heart for the world, make a life for the people, continue to learn from saints, and create peace for all generations!

Principle 4: Use poetry.

Example:

The streamer easily dumped people, turning cherries into red and plantains into green. Walking on your own life, it is sometimes difficult to see if you have taken a detour. You might as well jump out and adjust the focal length to show the best life.

Principle 5: Use rhetoric skillfully.

Example:

Although our life is not like Li Bai's "Oh, let a spiritual person go to his favorite place to take risks and spin a thousand pieces of silver, they all come back!" " Ideal makes it bright, struggle makes it real, and harvest makes it have a golden poetic style.

Break the lock of fate with persistence, live poetically, plant ideals and make unremitting efforts. I believe that there will be a harvest of "geese lead my heart to worry, mountains hold a good moon"!

Nine classic methods at the beginning of composition

1, parallel to the topic, pronunciation.

Life is like wine, fragrant or strong, because honesty makes it mellow; Life is like a song, high or low, because it is trustworthy, so it becomes sweet; Life is picturesque, either bright or simple, because it is honest, it becomes beautiful. (Brewing life with honesty)

Parallelism can increase the momentum of the article and make it catchy, rhythmic and rhyming. Used for objects, which can be colored; Used for narration, it can be hearty; Used for reasoning, it can be magnificent; Used for debate, can be overwhelming; Used for lyrical and wanton expression.

2, the whole scattered staggered, cleverly get into the business.

If I can hold a handful of moonlight, I choose the softest one; If I can pick the red leaves of Xiangshan, I choose the most gorgeous one; If I could pick all the stars in the sky, I would choose the brightest one. Maybe you will say that my choice is not the best, but my choice, I believe. ("My choice, I like it")

The combination of the whole scattered sentences can make the sentence patterns flexible, add a sense of melody and rhyme, and give people a sense of beauty. At the beginning, the layout is composed of moonlight, softness, red leaves, splendor, stars and brightness, with bright colors and the beauty of sound and rhyme.

3. The quotation is elegant and heavy.

There is a saying in Zhang Chao's Dream Shadow in Qing Dynasty: "Chrysanthemum takes Yuan Ming as her confidant, Mei takes He Jing as her confidant, and Bamboo takes Zi You as her confidant." When facing the sea; Face the blue; I can't help thinking: Who is the bosom friend of the sea? (Facing the Sea)

Quote the previous sentences, follow the style of quotation, and skillfully lead to the topic.

4, the description is exquisite, the image into the topic.

I used to look at life with watery eyes, and life was as gloomy and distant as autumn water. The sun shines through the maple forest, and I look up along the beam, but I seem to see endless calluses, as white as fog and snow and as soft as grass. I saw my mother's eyes and the moment when she made a choice. ("Let eyelashes carry love and happiness")

Descriptive language is often rigid and plain, but if candidates can skillfully grasp the characteristics, pay attention to reference and be flexible and innovative, they can break the rigid description and plain narrative and make the image description elegant and poetic.

5. The epigram pops up to inspire the topic.

Life is accidental and death is inevitable. Life and death are nothing but cheers and shouts. So, what about life between life and death? ("What is Life")

The beginning of the epigram is striking. Life is accidental, death is inevitable, and life is between life and death. Concise, simple, profound and incisive.

6. The dialogue is very attractive.

Master Hongyi, a generation of eminent monks, said to his disciples before nirvana, "Look at my teeth. What do you think?" "It's all gone." "What about the tongue? Still there? " "Still there." Therefore, tough things are always stronger than hard things. ("The Tough Personality I Pursue")

A deep dialogue of Zen machine leads to a "tough" and an article point of view.

7. At the beginning of the case, be concise.

It is difficult to choose, let alone the choice of the soul. Gao Jianli chose to die for Jing Ke; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to sacrifice for the revolution; Zhu Yingtai chose to become a butterfly for her sincere love. In this choice of friendship, affection and love, they do so. (between life and death)

At the beginning of the article, the story of celebrities is briefly laid out: Gao Jianli chose death for friendship, and defended the wise saying that "a scholar dies for a confidant" with his own head, which became immortal; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to dedicate her whole life and her maternal love, in order to sacrifice the justice of the world and build a personality monument for her son and future generations. Zhu Yingtai chose become a butterfly, sublimated Liang Shanbo's love with his own soul, and set an example for the eternity of lovers.

8, symmetrical openings, neat and lively

In butterfly's eyes, flower is an angel, because it gives her the dew of life. In the eyes of the flower, the bee is a close friend, because it gives her a continuation of life. ("Learn to look at history")

At the beginning of the article, a group of symmetrical sentences are used to endow butterflies, bees and gardeners with temperament, and the form and content are perfectly unified through vivid and appropriate anthropomorphic techniques. It reflects the examinee's superb language expression ability.

9, poetry opening, highlighting the details.

"If you keep cutting, you will be confused. It is a parting from sorrow, especially a taste in my heart. "This is Li Houzhu's sentiment; Li Qingzhao's feeling is, "Don't forget yourself, people are thinner than yellow flowers." "I left gently, just as I came gently, I waved goodbye to the clouds in the western sky gently", which is Xu Zhimo's disappointment; "People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. This is an old and difficult thing. " This is Su Dongpo's generosity (Beautiful Parting)

10, lyrical discussion, extraordinary momentum

In fact, peace is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud wandering in the sky, lightly dotted with the blue sky, fresh and natural.

Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (selected from the perfect composition "In the Mood for Love" in Jilin Province)

These two paragraphs are from the heart, out of emotion, using parallelism and figurative rhetoric to express their true feelings with beautiful words, and with appropriate comments, the end of the article is extraordinary and powerful.

1 1, scene contrast, scene integration.

The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun fades away in the distance and disappears into a sunset glow. The two are integrated and there is no distance. (selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Reading in the Rain")

The characteristics of this ending are very prominent, and the role of scenery contrast is also obvious. Through the description of the scenery after the rain, the author implies that the emotional barrier between the two generations has disappeared and emotion and scenery are organically combined. Implicit and meaningful. The aftertaste is endless.

At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Selected from the full text of "Growing in the Sun" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)

This ending highlights the role of sunshine, combining sunshine with growth, implying that the road to growth is uneven but full of sunshine, expressing an optimistic mood. It not only takes care of the main idea, but also shows deep feelings.

Tips for the end of college entrance examination composition

As the saying goes, "weaving baskets is all about closing up." The end of the article is very important. Can't anticlimactic, also can't gild the lily. The ending should be well-written, meaningful and chewy, so that readers can't forget it after reading the article.

The subtle ending can make the overall structure of the article more rigorous, natural, complete and unified, make the content and theme of the article more profound and vivid, add artistic charm to the article, give people the feeling of tasting fragrant tea and chewing olives, and make people memorable. The ending is regular, but there is no definite rule. We should adopt appropriate methods according to the overall layout of the article, so as to make the end of the article leave a beautiful and profound impression.

Beautiful music should have a good ending, or lingering sound, or shocking. The end of an argumentative paper can summarize the whole text, take care of the whole article and deepen the main idea, and can make the article meaningful, thought-provoking and memorable by comprehensively using lyric means, also known as leopard tail. There are usually the following endings:

1, make the finishing point

So, when you are racking your brains for a thing or a problem, you might as well put it far away. At this time, you will suddenly find that distance is not important, intimacy is not a stumbling block, and things far away have different worlds!

No one can boast that he is perfect and represents eternal truth. But at the same time, no one is useless, so we should believe in ourselves and others. Believe in yourself when you are confident, and trust others when you are confused and disappointed. Let the two cooperate with each other and complement each other, and we will have a wonderful life.

Calligraphy, painting and music, these subtle elements, constitute a magnificent Chinese culture for 5 thousand years. This broadness cannot be covered by enumerating the subtle elements one by one. We need to make a cultural journey, taste the wonderful culture in one branch and one leaf, accept the baptism and edification of Chinese culture, and enrich, temper and sublimate our personality!

Summarize with concise or philosophical sentences, reveal the center and point out the meaning; Or close the beam and highlight the main idea. At the end of these compositions, use very concise or philosophical language to indicate the theme, highlight the center of the article, strengthen the argument and increase the integrity of the argument structure.

Step 2 sublimate

For example, the author of "Civil and Military Way, Relax and Relax" ends like this: To sum up, being busy can make us feel the fullness of life, but we should be busy relaxing, so as to ensure the quality of life, and everyone can be busy with efficiency and results, thus bringing prosperity to the country and happiness to the people. The author extends the effect of relaxation from the individual to the country and the people, enriching and deepening the meaning of the text and naturally subliming the theme. )

3. Reference type

The ending refers to the title, or the beginning, which echoes back and forth and is connected by blood. Anaphora can be divided into two types according to specific expressions.

Don't judge by likes and dislikes: don't judge by likes and dislikes, maybe you will find that Setaria will also produce beautiful flowers! Point out the topic at the end, take care of the topic, form a symmetrical beauty in structure, give a clear and profound impression, stick to the topic, point out the argument and gather strength.

Step 4 quote

Ending with famous sayings, proverbs, aphorisms, lyrics and poems, the sound is sonorous and lingering.

At the end of unreliable, "all feelings are good in essence, and what we should avoid is the abuse and misuse of them." Descartes also told us that when we know things, we should be cautious based on reason and supplemented by emotion, and strive to make the intimacy of feelings play an active role in the process of understanding things.

The quotation of Descartes' famous words at the end of the article is not only a summary of the previous article, but also a further demonstration of the argument. It is not only close to the beginning, but also gives a clear and profound impression. End with a famous saying, aphorism, proverb, etc. It not only improves the whole article, but also makes it more philosophical and intriguing.

Step 5 be parallel

This kind of ending can take care of the last article in content, but it is not a simple repetition, but has the function of deepening the main idea. It is also kind and touching in meaning, and the sentences are full of rhythm and sense of rhythm, which can make commentators clap their hands and applaud.

For example:

Busy figure also contributed to modernization;

Busy figure also makes the world cry for you;

Busy figure, also pour out the call of love to those who care about you!

The author deliberately arranged the three parallelism sentences independently, which strengthened the intention of the ending and left a deep impression on the critics.

The above three ending forms are often compatible with each other, enriching the ending forms. Obviously, in order to write a good ending, the author must have a strong sense of wholeness in the context of the full text, a strong sense of deepening the center and sublimating the theme, express full passion in the choice of words and sentences, and make the ending contain shocking power.

Step 6 ask questions

The end of the question is thought-provoking.

The end of Milu and Kongming: Why do thousands of years of cultural accumulation make us more utilitarian and short-sighted? Why do we bathe in civilization in modern society, but our hearts become narrow? Milu and Kongming, why are we treated so unfairly? Should we also re-examine how to treat forgetting and memory?

A candidate's excellent college entrance examination "Life is also an answer sheet" ends: On this big test paper of life, the questions seem simple and the answers seem colorful, but it is far from as simple as expected to hand over a satisfactory answer sheet. What would you say?

Endless Life: In a busy life, there is a lot of happiness and not much pain. When the mentality is flat, the road will naturally be flat. Although Walking with Cows has long since dropped out of the popular list, what's wrong with walking with cows in life?

The above excellent works all adopt the way of asking questions at the end of the article, which can not only arouse people's deep thinking, but also have a strong appeal and achieve a good ending effect.

7. Lyric style

The lyrical ending can express the author's feelings, show the author's views and attitudes, arouse the reader's voice and enhance the appeal of the article.

Su Wu forever ends: Brave, Su Wu forever! Great, that shocking forgetting! Strange, that earth-shattering memory! PANDA KID, a forgotten and remembered ode to the Millennium! Ah, our forever Su Wu!

It is infectious to express admiration and praise for Su Wu with "Zhuang zai", "Wei zai", "Qi zai" and "Xiong zai".

At the end of "Ordinary Achieves Greatness": The earth is silent, and the waves of pine flowers beckon to us. We should always remember that the ordinary can achieve greatness.

The end of "What should be forgotten and remembered": Let's forget what should be forgotten and remember what should be remembered! This is the sacred mission entrusted to us by the times.

8. Contrast

Contrastive ending can highlight the theme of the article in strong contrast.

At the end of the eternal tug-of-war: on the balance of life, some people choose personal honor and disgrace, while others choose the unimpeded release of personality, the prosperity and peace of the country and the loyalty and integrity of the nation. It is often the people behind these who, in the tug-of-war between life and eternity, hold up the balance of life and hold on to the eternal rope to explore the eternal answer.

9. Repeatability

The same sentence appears repeatedly, singing and sighing, which is thrilling.

The end of "Along the Way": Forgetting to come with the memory of all the way brings the experience and experience given by life; Forgetting and remembering all the way brings a wonderful harvest and pay in life; Forget all the way, remember all the way, we feel happy and happy all the way!

10, Postscript type

After the end, the form of memory tells the emotion through vivid metaphor, which has both literary elegance and implicit philosophy.

Such as "fish that eagle that man" postscript:

After all, fish can't leave the water that gives it the source of life.

After all, the eagle can't leave the sky that gives it the source of hope.

I can't escape the happy net woven by my parents, relatives and friends with love.