Author/Zhang Yuming

Anhui college entrance examination composition 20 12 regression material composition.

Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required.

A work ladder was placed in the corner of a company workshop. In order to prevent the ladder from falling and hurting people, the staff specially wrote a banner "Pay attention to safety" next to it. Nobody takes this matter to heart. Several years have passed, and there has not been an incident in which a ladder fell and injured people. Once, a customer came to discuss cooperation. He noticed the banner and stopped for a long time. Finally, he suggested changing it to "Please put the ladder horizontally when not in use".

It is required to choose a good angle, define the concept, clarify the style (except poetry) and draw up a good title; Don't be divorced from the content and meaning of the material; Do not copy, duplicate or disclose personal information; Standardize writing and use punctuation correctly.

In fact, the composition of college entrance examination is nothing more than the rotation of "topic composition", "material composition" and "topic composition" in the form of proposition. Material composition, giving a background material, does not limit the topic, but before writing ideas, the first thing to do is to accurately summarize a topic from the given material. It can be said that material composition is difficult and easy to say, and easy to say. The reason why there is such a contradictory expression is that you can cut into the materials provided from multiple angles and have a broader idea; But randomness is not far-fetched, and it is not easy to cut in and grasp it accurately.

The author has written hydrology for four years in a row, and made some analysis on the composition of the college entrance examination, but it goes without saying that this year's composition of the college entrance examination is beyond my expectation. However, I still think the topic is reasonable.

First, try to figure out the intention and adapt it to the time.

Every year, the composition questions in the college entrance examination will arouse people's heated discussion. I think it's really not easy to avoid collision and stagnation and write a composition topic for the college entrance examination in an unconventional way. From the surface of the material, it is related to safety. Wenzhou bullet train accident, campus safety, coal mine safety, etc. , are unbearable life. This relationship should be extensive, without time and space boundaries. More importantly, safety never leaves the mouth, but accidents happen every year. Is it accidental? Is it inevitable? It is worth thinking about.

Articles are written in the times, and songs and poems are written in things. Such college entrance examination questions can be said to be suitable for everyone's life. This needs to be reconsidered We should not only stand on the commanding heights of morality, but also look back at the origin, ourselves and humanity. We know that safety is important, but some people just talk about it.

Of course, there are food safety and drug safety ... why do things related to people's lives and lives often go wrong and are repeatedly banned? Is it irrelevant, hasty, or what? In this material, we can find the answer.

"Chinese Curriculum Standard for Senior High School" clearly requires students to "be good at observing life, have their own feelings and thoughts about nature, society and life", interpret truth with their own real experiences and express their understanding of life. The topic of this composition should be said to be "timely and to the point".

Second, clear the clouds and aim at the bull's-eye.

The key to material composition is to examine and propose questions. If you look carefully, the direction will not be wrong, and the article will not slide elsewhere. Because you go in the right direction, you won't deviate from the finish line. The prompt "Pay attention to safety" in the material is different from the revised expression "Please put the ladder horizontally when not in use", and the effect is also different.

So what's the difference? The former is a kind reminder. If someone doesn't pay attention, a safety accident may occur. But the latter fundamentally put an end to safety accidents. The former is perfunctory, and there is a kind of "I warned you that it is your responsibility not to pay attention to safety". The latter is a rigorous work, and the subtext is "pick it up when you use it, don't put it down." Lift a finger and avoid future trouble. Personal injury is avoided, and the production cost is reduced. It is really "in a word, a thousand dollars is hard to buy."

It's not enough to study only the materials, but also to explore the essence of the problem.

Through the phenomenon, we will find that we usually do things in form and appearance, do not pay attention to details, can not grasp the key, and lack rigor and seriousness.

Examining questions is to examine life, human nature and the contradiction of human nature.

The material is not condemned from the moral level, but tortured from the style. Therefore, I think the key words of the topic proposed according to this material are: paying attention to details, grasping key points, strengthening fundamentals, looking at actual results, and their opposite meanings.

People say that "a good composition is half the battle". A good question is one with lofty ideals. "the eternal articles have a high meaning." The simplest proposed topic: the enlightenment of "ladder placed horizontally"; There are details that determine success or failure, the power of details, grasping the key points can easily solve problems, bring forth the new, reject formalism, grasp the essence through phenomena, do the best, effectiveness is more important than anything else, treat both the symptoms and the root causes, look at problems from another angle, and so on.

Third, focus on octupole, and you can travel to Wan Ren.

Composition is inseparable from association and imagination. According to the material, we can analogize and imagine what is a mere formality. A sign was erected on the ground of the canteen, which read: Be careful of slipping and falling. But some students still fell down. We can't help asking, how much is it more to buy a non-slip mat than that exquisite signboard? Of course, you can also ask in depth: People-oriented is not superficial, but should be done well, practically and comprehensively. Spend money on accident prevention instead of compensation afterwards.

If we start from the details, we can cite the Wenzhou bullet train as a tragedy caused by a small signal light; Students often give up all their previous efforts because of the hasty calculation in the first step when taking the exam; Young people apply for jobs and throw towels everywhere, so they miss their favorite jobs; Quality inspectors, who released food with excessive additives because of exaggeration, and so on, can all be included in the text.

There must be essence behind the phenomenon. These are all caused by the "same" style when we do things. Because the production line is "almost", the defective products come out; Coal mine safety work is similar, and mine accidents occur frequently. The ancients said: "Everything is difficult and easy; The world's major events must be in the details. " The way to success is to do small things in detail and do the details well.

Of course, we can also start from grasping the key to the problem. To solve any problem, we must grasp the "bull's nose" and not seek fish from the edge of the wood. "The elders who seek wood must consolidate their roots; If you want to flow far, you must dig its source. " To solve the problem, we must start with the root cause, not pay attention to the root cause, but only look at the appearance, just like a ladder erected in a factory. If we don't grasp the root of the "cross ladder", we can't eliminate the potential safety hazard.

In composition practice, association and imagination are always integrated. Although this kind of material composition can imagine a story of "details determine success or failure", argumentative writing should be advocated under the framework of marking the college entrance examination. We should focus on key words, grasp the trigger point of association and imagination, and detonate the fuse of thinking.

In short, we can think deeply through the association and imagination of materials. Although it has nothing to do with morality, it has something to do with "style" The harm of doing things carelessly, not seeking perfection, floating on the surface and muddling along cannot be ignored.