The ancients once said, "The mountain is not high. If there is a fairy, it is famous in the world; The water is not deep, and the dragon is the spirit. It means that the mountain doesn't have to be very high. If there is a fairy, it is famous in the world; The water doesn't have to be deep. If there are dragons in the water, the impact will be great. If this meaning is used to describe composition, then conception is like "fairy" and "dragon". With it, narrative and description can show their functions, and they will all be "spiritual".
For an article, the central idea is as important as the soul. Some students write articles without a center or the center is not clear, indicating that there is no soul. For example, a short article entitled Festival Street reads as follows:
Today is Sunday. I get up early. After breakfast, I followed my brother to the streets.
The sun is shining on the road, water drops are shining on the leaves, birds are chirping and flying to the fields in search of food. I always stop to see where the birds land.
It's almost the street. There are many people and many cars. "Look out!" My brother shouted to me. An uncle on a bicycle passed me by. It is too dangerous! Fortunately, I didn't hit it. There are more and more bicycles, including "Phoenix", "Forever" and "Flying Flowers", which are made in Shaoxing.
Cross a wide concrete bridge and you will find the street. There are many shops on both sides of the street, selling clothes, food, electrical appliances, stationery, books ... everything.
We wandered around the farmers' market. There are many stalls here, including vegetables, fruits, pigs, sheep, chickens and geese. A group of people were buying fish and quarreled in the process of bargaining. One said, "You are short of weight, cheat customers and watch me weigh you down!" " The fish seller was fierce, too, and roared, "What are you, making it up for you or something?" See if you dare to fold the scale! "It's rude to quarrel like this. Finally, I didn't listen.
On the way back, I saw a duck farm I asked the old man who raised ducks, "Your old man has so many chickens, right?" He smiled: "You are wrong. It can almost double. " This duck farm is very unsanitary. It's either a dump or a dung bucket, and it stinks in the sun.
It was really interesting to go shopping for the last time. I have seen so many things that I can't finish writing them.
Like this composition, can you tell us clearly what the author wants to tell us and what purpose to achieve? He writes about water drops when he sees water drops, birds when he sees birds, cars when he meets cars, quarrels when he hears quarrels, and stinks when he smells bad ... What is the problem to explain and what is the truth to tell others?
There are many reasons for the poor intention or unclear center of the composition. First, there are countless minds before writing. Writing a composition should not only have materials, but also analyze and synthesize the materials, and extract the purpose (that is, intention) of writing this article from the materials. This is what the ancients said. If you just write it in materials and don't know what ideas these materials contain, it won't be very profound and have little influence on people. However, some feelings will linger in my heart and will not be forgotten. If I can write a composition with the deepest feelings, I can write a sincere and good composition.
2. The importance of a good beginning in article writing is called
Fengtou pork tripe leopard tail
It requires articles: at the beginning, it is as beautiful and wonderful as a phoenix head; The main body is like a pig's stomach, with rich content; The ending is as powerful as a leopard's tail.
Fengtou
As the name implies, it is as beautiful and wonderful as the head of a phoenix. How to attract readers after reading an article?
It is very important to focus on the beginning. If the beginning is well written, readers will involuntarily have the impulse to read on, such as the first sentence and the second sentence of Preface to Wang Tengting. "Zhang Yu's old county, Hongdu's new house, the stars are divided into two wings (zhěn), and the ground is connected to Lu Heng." The parallel flow of three rivers and five lakes leads to the crossing of Europe (not U).
From the previous disdain, Duke Yan immediately arranged for the author to continue composing music. From this, we can see that the beauty and art of an article must have a wonderful beginning, otherwise others will not have the patience to continue reading, even if it is written well later.
pork tripe
The pig's belly is full and round; With a wonderful beginning, the main body of the article cannot be flashy. The theme is the center of the article, and it should be as full, rich and full as a pig's stomach. Remember, there can be no delay or flashy. Example: "Sunset and lonely Qi Fei, autumn waters and sky are the same color."
The sunset flies with the lonely wild ducks, and the river in autumn is the same color as the vast sky! The author sticks to the center and expresses his sincere admiration for the scenery where the Wang Teng Pavilion is located! Words of praise are beyond words!
Leopard tail
Leopard tail, leopard tail is very powerful, metaphorically speaking, the end of the article should be expressive. I believe that all Chinese teachers in primary and secondary schools will talk about one thing when teaching composition: that is, "the end"; This is a very important point. If a good article has a wonderful beginning, rich content and a clear ending, it is equivalent to a person with a smart brain and a strong body. What else does he need?
Yes, it is the "soul". Even if a person has a smart brain and a strong body, if he has no "soul", it is only a body and a skin at most! Let's look at the end of the preface to Wang Teng-ting: "If you give it a million words, all four rhymes will be achieved. Please sprinkle Pan Jiang, and each of us will pour clouds. "
3. How to write a paper at the beginning of a composition How to write skills at the beginning of a composition As the saying goes, "Everything is difficult at the beginning."
He also said, "A good beginning is half the battle." The same is true of composition, especially narrative.
At the beginning, it is very important to create an atmosphere, set the tone for the article and give the reader the first impression. If the beginning of a composition is just right, it can often catch the reader at once and increase the highlights of the article.
Therefore, whether you can write the beginning of a composition flexibly, uniquely and accurately is often related to the success or failure of an article. There are many ways to start a narrative, and the common ones are as follows: First, a narrative with the writer as the main topic can directly explain the characters or point out the topic through the description of the portraits, language and actions of the characters; Narrative narrative can point out the time, place and related background of the event at the beginning and enter the theme.
At the window of the sunset, a beautiful girl stood there, staring at the beautiful scenery of early spring outside. She sighed and looked down at the pink roses in the blue and white porcelain vase.
She closed her eyes and recalled the past. (Pink Rose) 2. On that day, a red notice was posted in front of the flower shop: Book flowers for Mother's Day.
Oh! Mother's Day is coming. It's time for me to prepare a holiday present for my mother. ("Mother's Day Gift") Second, write about the scenery and render the atmosphere. At the beginning of the article, starting with writing the scenery, it shows the environment of the characters' activities or explains the background of the story, and renders the atmosphere to set off the characters and unfold the story.
For example, 1, the morning sun came out and the lake dressed it up; The new moon has come up, with the stars as companions; Spring blossoms, green leaves set it off; Birds sing, crickets play the piano for them ... Everything in the world tells us the story of love. (Forever Love) 2. As the sun sets, the dim glow renders half the sky. I am lonely on the balcony.
On the old poplar outside the window, the unknown big bird is still tirelessly feeding its baby. Its mung bean-like eyes looked gently and lovingly at the bird that wanted to fly out of the nest.
This photo, like this, reminds me of my mother ... ("Facing Mother's Eyes") Third, I always dominate the whole article and prompt the main points. This kind of opening briefly summarizes the main content of the article, and you can know the main points of the article at a glance, such as: 1, the opening of Zheng Zhenduo's cat, "I have several cats at home, and the ending is always gone or dead." This sentence is a summary, indicating that the main content of the full text is about the process of raising three cats at home.
2. "I have a habit, and my mother says it's a good habit." ("I have a good habit") This opening comes straight to the point and dominates the whole article. The main part of the article focuses on a good habit of mine.
3. "Looking back at the traces of the years, I found that there are always some things that can't be erased by the wind and rain of life." ("Knocking on the Door Ring of Memory") This beginning prompts the main points of the article with concise language, so that people can know at a glance that the composition is about some unforgettable things in life.
Fourth, lyrical discussion, determine the tone, use a few appropriate comments at the beginning, make a lyrical essay, or infect readers, or point out the main idea, which will affect the whole body. 1 With the crackling firecrackers at the end of the year, stepping on the melting snow in Yuan Ye, you come slowly, and your eyes are full of affection.
You make my yellow face blush with the warmth of love; You sang with love, which awakened my confused faith. I, no longer depressed, no longer dull, no longer hesitant, no longer waiting, no longer watching, no longer praying, I will cheer up, find, find you, and find the colorful dreams you have woven for me! ("Love Send Spring Breeze") 2. Birthday is a line, one is me and the other is my grandmother; Birthday is a circle, surrounded by grandma's smile and my memory; Birthday is a river, and the swift current carries my thoughts of my grandmother.
(Birthday Speech) 5. Setting questions to lead to the following beginning can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's interest and thinking, and play a fascinating role. Did you jump off the cliff in order to get rid of that cold and hunger? Did you throw yourself off this cliff to avoid the shame of being captured? (The tree on the cliff) 2. Friend, have you heard how crocodiles cry? Have you heard the story of orangutans eating people? Do you know how aliens came to earth? ..... Oh, you shook your head.
Don't worry, it's all like this-what "Anecdotes in the World" told me also made me feel the pleasure of reading after class. (The Fun of Reading After Class) 6. Quoting poems, starting with the punch lines and famous sayings of poems, can not only stimulate readers' interest, but also improve the taste of articles.
At the same time, it can also reveal the main content of the article and highlight people and events. For example: 1, "I came to this world to see the sunshine."
I haven't forgotten this sentence of balmont for almost a day since I first read it. The poet, like a person who has never been hurt, sincerely, happily and quietly praises the earth, sunshine and the noisy world.
("I came to this world to see the sunshine") 2. "Mom, you are a lotus leaf, and I am red-violet. The raindrops in my heart are coming. Who is the shadow of my sky except you? " Every time I see Ms. Bing Xin eulogizing her mother's words, I can't help but think of my little loving mother, who bears the burden of family life alone.
(Boundless Motherly Love) VII. Contrast and contrast, the beginning of the clouds can make the content to be expressed more prominent and eye-catching in contrast with other things, thus giving people a very clear and profound impression. The sun is shining outside the window, and a few birds are chirping happily in the tree, but I can't get up anyway, because my parents are separated and divorced, which is a great blow to me.
I will try my best to reconcile my parents, because I want to have a perfect home. I want to have a perfect home. When you see rows of vibrant green trees standing proudly on the flat land, you may be tempted to admire the extraordinary creativity of nature.
Green trees are beautiful, and dead trees also have their loveliness, although youth is gone and life is decadent. In fact, the beginning of a composition is often not a single form, sometimes it is a combination of several forms, such as: "Wonderful separation of two gases, Lingshan opens nine flowers" is a poet in the Tang Dynasty.
4. How to write hello at the beginning of the paper? The beginning of the paper can be written from the following points:
1, famous sayings lead the way+arguments follow. Famous sayings or aphorisms of celebrities all contain philosophies that have been tested by practice and are very convincing.
2, said Wen Jie Zi+argument appears. For example, at the beginning of this paper: "Kissing means caring for your relatives and friends. Understanding means being familiar with the truth of things. What should you do when kissing conflicts with understanding? I think we should let "
Understand "be a judge. At the beginning of the paragraph, solve the problem first, that is, explain the meanings of "kissing" and "understanding" in this article respectively, and then put forward the central argument. Clear thinking and clear views.
3, story paving+lead to ideas. Many people like reading stories. Starting with a story can arouse the reader's desire to continue reading.
4, exquisite analogy+exquisite point. When using this method, we should pay attention to: first, carefully design a "class body" that is the same or similar to "ontology" in some aspects; Secondly, we should pay attention to the proper connection between the two.
For the beginning of the paper, we must have a rigorous and serious attitude. If you have other difficulties, you can consult the paper network, who has no worries. I believe there will be no small gain!
5. How to make the beginning of a well-written argumentative essay and the beginning of a wonderful article move readers' hearts at once?
The ancients said that the beginning of an article should be like a "phoenix head". This sentence vividly shows that the beginning of the article should be short and concise.
What standards should a good article have at the beginning? 1. Simple and smooth. Conciseness is the guarantee of the opening of an argumentative paper, especially when retelling materials, it can only be briefly summarized and must not be elaborated.
2. The theme is clear and impressive. At the beginning of an argumentative essay, you must let the reader know immediately what you want to say, that is, you must show your argument to the reader.
That's what the so-called opening remarks mean. 3. Use certain expression techniques to make the opening rich in literary talent.
When writing an argumentative essay, we can use rhetorical devices such as metaphor, quotation, rhetorical questions and parallelism to make it glow with dazzling brilliance. What are the methods to write an argumentative essay "Fengtou"? 1. Quote a famous saying.
It is to quote a famous saying directly at the beginning of the argumentative paper as the central argument of the full text. For example, at the beginning of "Talking about Diligence", China said, "Nothing is difficult with diligence".
Han Yu, a great writer in the Tang Dynasty, also said that "industry is good at diligence". All this means that profound academic attainments come from hard work and study.
Cut to the chase. That is, at the beginning of the article, either the argument is displayed or the argument is deduced.
For example, Tan's central argument put forward at the beginning-"We China people have backbone" is both concise and prominent. For another example, in "Transforming Our Learning", * * begins: "I advocate transforming the learning methods and learning systems of our whole party for the following reasons."
This opening not only raises questions, but also shows the central argument, which is very direct. 3. Story import.
It is to tell a story at the beginning of the article, and then lead to discussion by the story, taking the story told at the beginning as the basis of the full text discussion. The advantage of this method is that it can not only make the article well founded, but also make the article well founded and targeted, thus enhancing the persuasiveness of the article.
For example, Mr. Lu Xun first told the story of "paper money for silver dollars"-originally, silver dollars and paper money could be used generally, but the change of the situation made paper money almost a piece of waste paper, so people changed paper money into silver dollars one after another, and they were very happy after unequal exchange, which led to the discussion that "China people are easy to be slaves". This makes the argument not only natural but also convincing.
4. Ask opening questions. That is, at the beginning of the article, put forward your own questions for the questions to be discussed, and then put forward your own views when answering the questions.
For example, * * * "Where does man's correct thinking come from" begins: Where does man's correct thinking come from? Did it fall from the sky? No, is it inherent in people's minds? Not exactly.
The correct thinking of human beings can only come from social practice. Another example is the beginning of "ignorance is more terrible than wealth": some people say that ignorance is more terrible than poverty.
Isn't it terrible to be rich and stupid? Numerous facts have proved that ignorance is more terrible than wealth. It is really natural for an argumentative essay to start with a question, which can not only attract readers' attention and inspire them to think, but also naturally reveal the central point of the full text in self-questioning and self-answering.
5. Explain the concept. It is to clearly explain the meaning of the concepts related to the argument at the beginning of the article, thus pointing out the central argument of the article.
For example, at the beginning of "Self-improvement, Self-conceit and Inferiority", it is said that self-improvement means striving for progress. If a person wants to make a difference, he should have such qualities: neither inferiority nor conceit, but self-improvement.
The advantage of this kind of beginning is that we can dig the deep meaning of the argument through the interpretation of the concept, make clear the direction of discussion, and give people a clear impression. 6. Compare the beginning.
It is to make things clear by comparison at the beginning of the article. For example, the beginning of thanking indifference: if tolerance is a beautiful chic, then indifference is a happy torture.
Because indifference gives us the motivation to live. We should be grateful for indifference.
The clever use of contrast at the beginning of the article can not only show the author's emotional tendency, but also naturally lead to the center of the article, and can highlight the center through sharp contrast, giving people a refreshing feeling. 7. Metaphor begins.
It is to write a story, a fable or a joke at the beginning of the article, and then use its metaphor to draw the central argument. For example, whistle first describes that I paid a great price to get it when I was a child, and now I regret it. Then I compare whistle to power, reputation, property, pleasure and enjoyment far beyond my living standard, which leads to my own point of view: many people suffer because of misjudgment of the value of things.
Starting with metaphor and reasoning in images can make the article lively and enhance its expressive force and appeal. 8. If you want to advance, you will retreat.
When the argument of an argumentative paper is contrary to the traditional view, you can put forward the traditional view at the beginning of the article and then put forward your own views. For example, if you write "those who are near ink are not necessarily black", you can first put forward the traditional view that "those who are near Zhu Zhechi are black" and then put forward your own view that "those who are near ink are not necessarily black".
This opening way can often make readers realize the originality and novelty of the author's point of view, thus making the article different. 9. Set a goal.
When writing a rebuttal paper, it is best to show the fallacy of the other party at the beginning of the article, and take this as the target for in-depth rebuttal. For example, in the article "Individuals and Collectives", the author first puts forward that "some people have put forward such a philosophy of life, which is called' everyone for himself, that is, everyone for everyone'", and then analyzes this wrong outlook on life in detail and criticizes it.
In a word, there are many ways to start an argumentative essay, and each way has its advantages. As long as students practice and think more, they will certainly find a suitable way to start their composition. I have been calling for a long time. Please give me some advice. I'm in financial crisis.
6. How to grade the answers at the beginning of an argumentative essay?
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Writing format, process and writing skills of graduation thesis
Broadly speaking, all works that discuss the contents of science and technology are called scientific works, such as original works (papers), briefings, comprehensive reports, progress reports, literature reviews, reviews, monographs, compilations, textbooks, popular science books and so on. However, only the original work and its introduction are original, major and primary, involving inventions and other intellectual property rights. Others are of course important, but they are all processed, developed and written for specific application purposes and objects. The following is only about the writing of the paper. When discussing thesis writing, I'm not going to talk about various rules and regulations about manuscript writing. This paper mainly talks about the problems and experiences that are easy to appear in paper writing, which is the standardization of paper writing ethics and writing content.
Thesis writing requirements
The following are described in turn according to the structural order of the paper.
(1) Thesis-Topic A scientific paper has a topic and cannot be "untitled". The topic of the thesis is generally about 20 words. The size of the topic should be consistent with the content, with no subtitle, 1 report and secondary report as far as possible. Thesis topics are all in a direct narrative tone, without exclamation marks and question marks, and scientific and technological paper topics cannot be written as advertisements or news reports.
(2) Papers-scientific papers signed should be signed with real names and real work units. Mainly reflects the responsibility and achievement attribution, which is convenient for future generations to follow up. Strictly speaking, the author of the paper refers to the person who is responsible for the whole process of the paper, such as topic selection, argumentation, literature review, scheme design, compilation method, experimental operation, data arrangement, induction and summary, writing, etc., and should be the person who can answer the relevant questions of the paper. Nowadays, people who take part in the work are often listed, so they should be arranged according to the contribution. The signature of the paper should be recognized by myself. According to the actual situation, academic tutors can be listed as paper authors or general thanks. Administrative leaders generally do not sign their names.
(3) Paper-Introduction is a fascinating statement of the paper, which is very important and should be written well. A good paper introduction can often let readers know the development of your work and its position in this research direction. The basis, foundation, background and research purpose of the thesis. It is necessary to review the necessary literature and state the development of the problem. Use concise words.
(4) Paper-Materials and Methods Experimental objects, equipment, animals and reagents and their specifications, experimental methods, indicators, judgment standards, experimental design, grouping and statistical methods. These can be done in accordance with the magazine's submission rules.
(5) Paper-The experimental results should be highly summarized, carefully analyzed and presented logically. We should choose the best from the rough, discard the false and retain the true, but we should not make subjective choices because it does not meet our own intentions, let alone resort to deceit. Only the data obtained in the period of unskilled technology or unstable instrument, technical failure or operational error, and data obtained when experimental conditions are not met can be discarded. Moreover, when problems are found, the reasons must be indicated on the original records, and it is not allowed to eliminate them at will due to anomalies during summary processing. When discarding this kind of data, we should discard the experimental data under the same conditions at the same time, not just those that are not what we want.
7. How to write the beginning and end of a composition?
The beginning and end of a composition are important positions for the marking teacher to read, so creating a wonderful beginning and end will make the article appear "bright spots", thus attracting the attention of marking and improving your score.
Write a wonderful beginning, love at first sight.
(a) Design inscriptions, new eyes and ears
(2) This is what the words mean, and the winding path leads to a secluded place.
(3) Pave the floor, arrange the details and get ready to go.
Second, temper a precise ending and make the finishing touch.
(A supplementary postscript, lingering.
(b) Ask thought-provoking questions
(3) Signs of pawning
(D) unexpected, an abrupt end
8. How to start a composition? First of all, we should carefully examine the questions. I chose the third sentence as the title, which depends on your grasp of the materials and your own accumulation. Of course, choosing the first two sentences is also a good way to start an article and have something to say; It can be said that it is easier said than done.
Here are some of my words:
1, Confucius said: Unjust, letting wealth and fame drift by like clouds. In ancient China, it was advocated that "a gentleman loves money, and collects money by the way", that is, teaching people to obtain money by the right way. @@@@@@@@@2
2. Sima Qian once wrote in "Preface to Historical Records and Biography of Huo Zhi": All the world is bustling for profit, and all the world is bustling for profit. In other words, everyone's activities are inseparable from one word-profit! (This starts with a famous saying)
3. I remember Sue asking the people beside her by the river, "Have you seen the boats in the river? Then I ask you what's on the boat? " People around me are puzzled and can't answer for a while. Sue said, "While pretending to be famous, we are also pretending to be profitable." It seems that the pursuit of fame and fortune is an inevitable choice for people in real life. Then I will say @ # $% $ $ (this is the beginning of the story)
Speaking of money, Mr. Lu Xun once said that some people are ashamed to talk about money now. I'm afraid it's a little artificial. Anyone who is ashamed to talk about money only needs to touch his stomach, but there is still some food in it. Marx once said that the production of material resources is the foundation of human society. With material foundation, there will be economic foundation and superstructure. & amp& amp& amp& amp& amp& amp& amp& amp& amp& amp& amp& amp； What is the way to start from here? )
Some popular proverbs or ballads can reflect people's ideological characteristics. For example, "there is a future, and money can make a plan. If you have an ideal, you have an ideal, and you can enjoy it if you have an advantage. " If you have a "bag with a prize, regardless of his ideas", these ideas are very harmful to society and children. * * * * * * * * * * * * *.
6. People should keep a little blood in comfort and keep a little calm in * * *. However, when the nation is in danger, we must dare to be the first in the world. Even if the word "profit" hangs high, we should bear the burden of humiliation like Wen Tianxiang and send envoys to the Yuan Dynasty to defend national dignity. "No one has died in life since ancient times, so we should take care of history." Just like Tan Sitong said, "Look at the sky with a smile, and stay in Kunlun Mountain with courage", I have no hesitation and die. $ $ $ $ $ $ $ (where did this start? )
In a word, there are many ways to start a composition, so don't be superstitious about things like "treasure books" and "cheaters". Strengthen classic reading, strengthen thinking about problems, and accumulate more words at ordinary times, and you can almost write beautifully, brightly and brilliantly.