Seventh grade | 1000 words or more | explanatory text

Life is like an ocean, only a strong-willed person can reach the other side. -Inscribe that morality is a hand, pushing open a window blocked in the heart; Morality is a window to see the blue sky; Morality is the sky, which breeds countless pure hearts ... To be a moral person, you should respect the old and love the young, be honest and trustworthy, and be thrifty ... Not only that, I pay more attention to my inner self-improvement spirit. The spirit of self-improvement is an excellent tradition of the Chinese nation. From Kuang Heng, who stole the column, to Sima Qian, who wrote a book with humiliation and burden; From Lu Xun, who abandoned medicine and saved the people by writing, to Zhang Haidi, who was physically disabled and determined to challenge himself ... generation after generation realized them and inspired us. Newton was a poor student in his class when he was a child. Once, he brought his beautiful windmill to school, and his classmates satirized that although he could build a windmill, he didn't understand the principle and broke his windmill.

From then on, Newton became willing to think and loved learning. Later, Newton overcame his weakness, became a strong man in learning, and finally became a world-recognized scientific giant. Newton's success depended on his inner self-improvement. Imagine that if he didn't have the spirit of self-improvement, he wouldn't have become an outstanding scientist and made great contributions to millions of future generations in Qian Qian. So, raise your torch of self-improvement and light up your confused road in the future! I once read a fable: singing in the trees, a lark, suddenly saw a man coming with a small wooden box in his hand. The man said to the lark, you can get a box of earthworms with only one feather. The lark happily plucked a feather from her body and got a box of earthworms. In this way, the lark plucks a feather from the earthworm every day. A few months later, the lark was plucked by itself, and it was impossible to change earthworms any more. Just remember to find food by yourself. Unfortunately, no matter how hard it tries, it can't fly. Liang Qichao once said: "Life is like sailing against the current. If you don't advance, you will retreat. " Do you want to be like a lark, content with the status quo and muddle along? We should be a self-reliant person, which is a compulsory course for each of us all our lives.

We should cultivate the quality of self-improvement from an early age, go forward bravely and strive for progress. Then do your best to repay the society. I can't help thinking of myself. I have encountered many problems in my study, but I have a firm belief and I have not given up. Only by keeping the spirit of self-improvement can I go further and further on the road of learning. To be self-reliant, we must first establish a firm ideal. This is a beacon of self-improvement. We must conquer ourselves again, which is the key to self-improvement. In the future, we should foster strengths and avoid weaknesses, which is a shortcut to self-improvement. Self-improvement is the foundation of success. With the spirit of self-improvement, we will have the motivation to move forward, solve problems actively, and show perseverance and tenacity in the face of setbacks. Self-improvement is not only related to your heart, but also affects people around you. This beautiful "fragrance" wafts around and infects them. Believe it, with good moral character, the future will become more brilliant. If we compare life to the ocean, I believe that self-improvement will help us ride the wind and waves and sail to the most beautiful shore.

Teacher: Miss Sun.

Comments: Generally speaking, it is really commendable that junior one students can write such reasoning compositions. Judging from the style of writing, the advantages of this paper are: clear views and strong arguments. There are both positive and negative examples, and I also have my own feelings about my study and life. The combination of narration and discussion has proved my views and opinions well. The main deficiency is that the content of morality in the first two paragraphs seriously deviates from the central theme and should be deleted. I won't comment this time