1. First of all, we should pay attention to addressing the teacher politely, such as "Hello, Miss Wang, this is the first draft of my thesis, please have a look", and it is best to use "you" to show respect for the tutor.

2, the content should be concise, because there are many students in the tutor, you should use short words to let the tutor understand your intentions and personal information.

Finally, remember to thank the teacher and confirm the next review plan. When writing a paper, we should send the first draft to the tutor, who will give us some guidance.

Send the first draft to the tutor. What can we say? You can refer to the model essay as follows: "Hello, Teacher Liu, I am your student XXX, and my thesis is entitled" Research on Air Pollution in Henan Province ". Please help the teacher to have a look.

I don't think it's perfect. Please give me some guidance in your busy schedule. Thank you, teacher. "In this way, the teacher not only felt your respect, but also intuitively understood your general information.

In addition, we should pay attention to the sending time, try not to choose the lunch break time, but choose the break time, because teachers usually read mobile phone messages at this time. Secondly, thank the teacher again after replying to our message. If the teacher knows when we will hand in the paper again, we must finish the paper on time.