Gao 0803 ban

Throughout the ages, people all over the world have been talking about the benefits of "diligence" as if it were a panacea to make up for all shortcomings. In fact, whether "diligence" is good or not depends on where and in what way. If you play hard, have fun, break the law, make a lot of noise ..., the harder you are, the worse you get. "Diligence" must have the right direction.

Be diligent. People are not born to know, who can not be confused? If you are confused and don't learn, you will be confused and never understand. If you study hard, you can have a horse like a slow walker and a boat like a poor swimmer. This kind of multiplier effect can only be achieved by diligent study. Diligence must be good at accumulation, perseverance, courage to contribute, never too old to learn. If you study hard, the difficulties within your scope will no longer embarrass you.

Be diligent. Learning without thinking is useless, thinking without learning is dangerous. It is necessary to think while studying. Diligence is the "way to die", and diligence plus diligence is more vital. People who often ride horses know how to ride, so that horses will not panic and abandon people to wolves; Sailors often find ways to subdue the ship so that it won't leak and capsize in the storm. These are as diligent as "learning" and "thinking". We must be good at observing, be brave in asking questions and often make an organized summary. Newton once said, "If I see farther than Descartes, it is because I stand on the shoulders of giants." I want to add a few words of "thinking" at the end. Newton studied "giant", but Newton was not satisfied with the height of "giant". He added the height of his own thoughts, so he saw further. If you think hard, the difficulties within the range of what you think and know will no longer embarrass you.

Try hard. Practice is the only criterion for testing truth. No matter how you learn and think, if you don't use it, it will be empty after all. Knowing the method is one thing, but following it is another. How do you know if the method is right or wrong without trying? How can we appreciate the benefits of this method? Edison tried thousands of materials to find the filament before he discovered tungsten. In his view, those thousands of failures are successes in disguise, because every failure successfully knows that there is a material that is not suitable for filament, thus getting closer and closer to the perfect filament. If you work hard, there is no difficulty within your scope.

Study hard, think hard, try hard and work together. Nothing is difficult in the world!

This paper briefly discusses from the perspective of "class" (what is it), adopts the method of "diligence" classification, and advances the three sub-arguments layer by layer, which has strong logical force. The three "argument fragments" of the text all adopt the conventional argument structure of "argument at the beginning of the paragraph+argument at the middle of the paragraph+conclusion at the end of the paragraph", with roughly the same form, neat and stable. What is commendable is that the author's argument is flexible and incisive, using metaphor argument, case argument, theoretical argument and other techniques. In theoretical argumentation, there are both "explicit quotation" and "implicit quotation", which shows the richness of knowledge and cultivation. The overall structure of the total score is also very stable.

Nothing is difficult in the world.

Gao 0803 Class Tamia Liu

In today's talented society, there are outstanding people everywhere. If you want to stand out from the crowd and get what you have been longing for, you have to work hard.

In this era of all things struggling and survival of the fittest, if you want to have your own place, you have to work hard instead of being eliminated by this beautiful and cruel world.

On this life path full of thorns, there is only one chance to avoid these thorns and ubiquitous obstacles and reduce the harm to yourself as much as possible.

Diligence is the catalyst for doing everything well. It can make people achieve their goals faster, more accurately and more perfectly.

Only through a lot of efforts can we increase our horsepower and move towards the goal.

In the absence of natural advantages, Liu Xiang can win the title of "Asian Flying Man", wearing the national flag and standing on the podium of the Olympic champion, enjoying unlimited glory and praise because of diligence. Practice again and again and sweat again and again. Perhaps, he just practiced a little more than others; Perhaps it is this spirit of being more diligent than others that made him win at the end after losing at the starting point.

Only by working hard can we learn more and absorb more.

The same class, the same textbook, the same teacher, but there are differences in academic performance. What is the reason? It is about diligence. Everyone's learning ability is the same after birth. A high IQ can only help them avoid detours in this respect, but it does not mean that they can stop learning. It is often those who study better than ordinary people and have the same intelligence who seize the classroom and spare no effort. Diligence in class makes them listen to the knowledge taught by teachers more than others, and diligence in spare time makes them less confused than others. Their diligence enabled them to win the finish line at the same starting point.

Only by working hard can we stand higher and see farther than others.

Confucius, who has become a household name in China thousands of years ago and China thousands of years later, was recognized by Xunzi as "a disciple is not inferior to a teacher" because of his learning nature and his studious nature of "visiting me three times a day", "seeing a wise man and reflecting on Si Qi" and "learning from my teacher after a threesome". His diligence reflects his thirst for knowledge. His diligence also enabled him to win at both the starting point and the finishing point.

Diligence is like giving you a push before the finish line of 1000 meters runway, which helps you reach the finish line faster.

Diligence is like giving you a pull at the highest point of pole vault, which helps you jump over obstacles more accurately.

Diligence is like the support when you finish the last set of movements on the balance beam, which helps you complete the task more perfectly.

With diligence, what is difficult in this world?

Brief Comment This article discusses from the perspective of "cause" (why), and demonstrates the reasons of "attendance" from many aspects, which is clear and thorough. The three sub-arguments are not only at the top of the paragraph, but also independently divided into paragraphs, which has produced a good "eyeball effect". At the beginning, a set of parallelism sentences makes the literary atmosphere erupt and the literary talent flies. At the end, a set of figurative parallelism sentences, both in content and form, echoed and merged with the beginning. The last paragraph uses rhetorical questions to summarize the full text and point out the significance of the problem, which is irrefutable and convincing. The disadvantage is that the argumentation part of the three "argumentation fragments" is relatively thin; The three metaphors at the end are taken from the same field and appear monotonous and repetitive.

Nothing is difficult in the world.

Xia Zizhu, Class 0803, Gao

Throughout the ages, there are many difficulties. Difficult things are like mountains, blocking the road to the peak of success. How many celebrities and bachelors in ancient and modern times shook their heads and sighed when they saw this. And the person who can climb mountains and mountains here and finally reach the peak of success has only one word-diligence.

Diligence is the most basic way for us to acquire knowledge and excellent skills. If we are not diligent, it will be difficult for us to succeed in our studies and careers. No matter how talented a person is, if he is not diligent, he will accomplish nothing; Genius is average. If you work hard, you will achieve something. Diligence is so important, but ancient scholars and people today have completely different attitudes towards diligence.

Ancient scholars were good at diligence. "Hard-working people are diligent, while wasters are fond of having fun." This is Han Yu's affirmation of hard work, which tells the truth that hard work can make you study harder and succeed. Confucius, a saint, has developed the habit of being diligent and eager to learn since he was a child. The books he has read, even the leather belt of bamboo slips, have been worn away many times. Sun Jing studies hard, from dawn to sunrise. If he is tired, he ties the rope on the beam to his braid to keep awake. Su Qin is also very diligent. If he is sleepy, he will stab himself in the thigh with an awl and let the pain force him to continue studying hard. Diligence is the bamboo slips scattered in your hands; Diligence is a broken rope on the beam; Diligence is a felt stained with blood under the cone. Without this diligence, Confucius would not have the name of a saint; Without this diligence, how could Sun Jing be knowledgeable; Without this diligence, how could Su Can hang the seals of the six countries in the State of Qin? Without this diligence, how can we deal with the difficulties in the world?

People nowadays are not diligent. Times have changed, and now we have entered the information age. The word diligence seems to be hard to stay in the minds of students nowadays. Today's students, with their talents, only pay attention to the results, not to the process of diligent study. Although I can recite business, I don't understand it. In this way, how to deal with all kinds of difficulties? Without some frost and bitterness, how can plum blossoms be fragrant? Only by working hard can we overcome difficulties and achieve success. Only after experiencing "first frost Bitterness" can we get "Plum Blossom Fragrance".

Difficult things are like mountains, and diligence is the way. I believe that in the face of countless difficulties, with diligent company, you will definitely climb the peak of success. At this time, the list of difficult things is at your feet. This is exactly what it is: nothing is difficult in the world.

This paper discusses from the perspective of "cause" (why), and reveals the causal relationship between "diligence" and "ancient people" and "modern people" The author adopts the structural model of positive and negative contrast, highlighting the importance and necessity of advocating "thrift" under the new situation. Both positive and negative "argument fragments" adopt the conventional mode of "argument at the beginning of the paragraph+argument in the paragraph+conclusion at the end of the paragraph", which is complete and steady, and the third paragraph is particularly mature, steady and literary. The metaphor of "mountain" is superimposed at the beginning and end, which realizes the echo from the beginning to the end, embodies the integrity of the structure and increases the compactness of the structure.

Nothing is difficult in the world.

Gao 0803 ban

The snow on the top of Kunlun Mountain wants to go to the vast sea. Every day, it tries to absorb heat and turn it into running water. Day after day, year after year, it flows along the Yellow River to the sea. One day, it finally merged into the sea.

What is diligence? Diligence is the most basic hidden rule for every celebrity to achieve great things. Einstein said, "Genius depends on 99% sweat and 1% inspiration." Pay every effort, there will be every harvest.

Diligence makes you rich Life is diligent, and diligence is not lacking. Kong Yiji is a scholar and can write a good hand. If he can be diligent, he can help people write letters and lead an ordinary life every day. But he was lazy all day, and eventually he died of starvation with a broken leg. Xiangzi worked hard to pull the car and finally bought a car of his own. Kong Yiji was a scholar, but he starved to death. Xiangzi realized his wish to buy a car with the help of ordinary people. It can be seen that diligent people are rich, and those who are not diligent are poor. As long as they are diligent, their hands are wealth.

Diligence is practical. Bao Jianfeng comes from sharpening, plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold, and hardworking people must be practical and steady. Da Vinci learned to draw when he was young, and the teacher asked him to draw eggs. He thought, aren't eggs round? So I drew a random circle. The teacher shook his head and said, "Look carefully before painting. If you can draw eggs well, you will become a generation of painters. " Hearing this, Leonardo carefully observed the eggs, never letting go of any detail, and practiced hard every day. After dozens of days, he was finally able to draw eggs very realistically. After this incident, he understood that he must lay a solid foundation, be practical and steady, and finally become a famous great painter after hard practice. Without hard work and hard training, there is no basis for sublimation. As long as you are diligent, you are the anchor of the sea.

Diligence is easy. How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain? How can there be Li Shizhen's Compendium of Materia Medica without hard work? How can Yuan Longping successfully develop "excellent indica rice" to solve the food problem of the whole country and even the whole world without working hard in the fields? How difficult is it to climb the mountain? Step by step, you will reach the top sooner or later. Why is it difficult to wade into the river? Wave after wave, you will reach the other side sooner or later. Difficulty is a cocoon, as long as you pull a silk at it every day, you will eventually break out of it. Drops of water wear away the stone, which is the best portrayal of diligence. Diligence is a drop of water, even if the difficulty is like a boulder, it can let it pass through. As long as you are diligent, the golden key is at your side.

How hard is it to be diligent in the world?

Comment on this article from the perspective of "fruit" (what will happen), focusing on the benefits of "diligence", and three sub-arguments strongly support the central argument. The three "argumentation fragments" of the text all adopt the conventional argumentation mode of "argumentation at the beginning of the paragraph+argumentation in the paragraph+conclusion at the end of the paragraph", which is both heavy and steady. Although the three "argumentation fragments" all adopt the method of case argumentation, the third paragraph is a negative case, the fourth paragraph is a positive case, and the fifth paragraph is a group of cases. There are small differences in similarity and big differences in neatness. Disadvantages: ① the consciousness in the first paragraph is very good, but it is outside the theme and has little to do with "diligence"; The third and fourth paragraphs are good in form, but not convincing, because the words "rich" and "real" are not prominent and the arguments are not typical.

Nothing is difficult in the world.

Xie Shili, Class 0803, Gao.

Han Yu, a great writer in the Tang Dynasty, once said, "Industry is good at diligence." In other words, profound academic attainments come from being diligent and eager to learn.

Diligence is a virtue for those who are eager to learn and make progress. By diligence, we mean that people should cherish time, study, think, explore, practice and sum up.

The result of diligence. When Wang Xianzhi was practicing calligraphy with his father, Wang Xianzhi asked his father, "Do you have any secrets of writing well?" Wang Xizhi replied, "You will know the secret when you use up the eighteen cylinders of water." Later, Wang Xianzhi studied hard and finally became a famous calligrapher. Sima Qian, the author of Historical Records, began to roam around the Yellow River and Yangtze River basins at the age of 20, and collected a large number of social historical materials, which laid the foundation for the creation of Historical Records. It can be seen that any achievement grows from the bitter roots of diligence. If you want to succeed, you must go through a long period of ups and downs. "Without some frost and bitterness, plum blossoms come naturally."

Diligence makes wisdom. There was an orator named Demosthenes in ancient Greece. Because he stuttered when he was a child, his voice was turbid, his pronunciation was inaccurate, and he was often overwhelmed by his eloquent opponents. However, he was not discouraged or discouraged. In order to overcome this weakness and defeat his eloquent opponent, he read aloud to the sea with a stone in his mouth every day, regardless of spring, summer, autumn and winter, rain, snow and frost, insisting on speaking for 50 years, and even climbing mountains and running. Finally, he finally became the most famous orator in Greece. This shows that even some people with poor talent and slow reaction can make a fool of themselves as long as they have the spirit of being diligent and eager to learn.

Diligence is the torch to light wisdom. The key to one's knowledge is diligence. Lazy people will never achieve anything in their careers and will never make themselves smart. Only diligent people can hunt for real wisdom and talent in the boundless ocean of knowledge, and can constantly explore the field of knowledge and get the reward of knowledge. Gorky said: "Genius comes from diligence." With diligence, nothing is difficult in the world!

Comment on this article from the perspective of "fruit" (what will happen). The author successfully draws lessons from junior high school texts and is mature and steady in argument, argument and argument structure. This paper can be used as a blueprint for an introduction to argumentative writing.

Nothing is difficult in the world.

Wu from Class 0803, Gao.

"Hemu was born in a milli; The nine-story platform starts from the foundation soil; A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. " "Black hair doesn't know how to study hard early, and Bai Shoufang regrets studying late." The eternal swan song explains the importance of diligence. Diligence is the only way out. If you want to solve all the difficulties in the world, you must be diligent. So, what can we do to become diligent?

First of all, we must have determination. The ancients once had an incisive exposition: "the period is on it, and the Lord can reach it;" Depend on it and make it work; It's not as good as it was. "It means that the stricter you are with yourself, the higher you can achieve and the more diligent you are. Wizard strategist Napoleon once said: "A soldier who doesn't want to be a marshal is not a good soldier. "Although this sentence is a bit too absolute, it also fully shows that people with higher ideals can be strict with themselves in all aspects, and strive to follow the example of people who are stronger than themselves, make continuous progress, and finally achieve higher goals and realize their ideals. Eagle yearns for the sky from birth, so it flies hard and trains hard, so it stands out and becomes the overlord of the sky; A chicken with wings, content to enjoy a comfortable life under the eaves, can only be a "dry duck" in the end. It can be seen that different goals will lead to different results. Ambition is the direction of diligence.

If you want to be diligent, you should also constantly put pressure on yourself, turn pressure into motivation and surpass success. There is such a couplet: "Where there is a will, there is a way. If you cross the rubicon, 102 Qin Guan will eventually return to Chu; " Hard-working people, everything comes to him who waits, go forward bravely, and 3 thousand Yue family can swallow Wu. "Don't the two stories in Lianzhong come from the victory of pressure? Without this pressure, how can there be the achievement of "102 Qin Guan will eventually Chu"? Without the shame of almost dying, how can you have the courage to swallow the humiliation and the success of "swallowing Wu"? A certain pressure can make the wanderers take firm steps, let the laggards rise up and let the winners be vigilant. Not encouraging people to succeed, but forcing people to work hard to succeed, leaving no room for unsuccessful choices. Pressure is the driving force of diligence.

Finally, we should have rich perseverance to overcome difficulties and overcome them. The ancients said: "Heaven will be a great task to the people of Sri Lanka, and they must first suffer their minds, work their bones and muscles, and starve their bodies and skins." A lofty goal can only be achieved by our down-to-earth efforts, and we can overcome difficulties by the shoulders of giants. Perseverance is the most basic "shoulder". Without perseverance, Tang Sanzang's learning from the scriptures became an anecdote; Without perseverance, Liu Xiang has no possibility of being the first; Without perseverance, Hargreaves could not have invented the Jenny machine, and human beings could not have entered the "age of steam". Without perseverance, the ideal is beautiful, and the enthusiasm for the ideal is high, which is just futile. It is not easy to get the halo shining on the heads of celebrities. Which one was not won by perseverance? Perseverance should be the spirit of diligence!

Heaven rewards diligence. Diligence is easy, laziness is difficult. If people's talents are dominated by laziness, it is useless. Therefore, if you want to be diligent, you must have determination, keep putting pressure on yourself and have perseverance. Only in this way can we escape from the predicament of life and win the crown of victory.

Comment on this article from the perspective of "law" (how to do it), focusing on how to be diligent; "Determination", "pressure" and "courage" are indeed essential elements for diligent people. The author is thorough in thinking and reasoning, generally mature, showing strong reasoning consciousness and good writing skills.