How to judge a sick sentence 1- Pay attention to what's in the sentence? what's up word
? what's up Express judgment in one sentence. When putting forward a proposition, we often switch subjects or lose objects in a long or complicated sentence. So you met the verdict? what's up Also pay due attention.
For example, the construction of the Qinghai-Tibet Railway is an important measure to accelerate the development of the western region and an important link for national unity. Is the second clause in this sentence the subject of the first clause? Building the Qinghai-Tibet Railway? , but? Building the Qinghai-Tibet Railway? It's an act. A tie? It is a noun. They don't belong to the same thing and can't form a judgment sentence. )
Second, look at the coordinate words or phrases and check whether they are mutually tolerant or mismatched or have improper word order.
For example: 1, our newspapers, magazines, televisions and all publications have a greater responsibility to set an example, put an end to the phenomenon of nonstandard use of words, and enhance the normative awareness of the use of language and characters. (in the sentence? Newspapers? what's up Publishing? Fingers? Magazine? ,? Newspapers and magazines? Belong to yourself? All publications? , mutual tolerance. )
In addition, when coordinate words are used as predicates or objects, we should pay attention to the word order or the collocation between them.
Third, look at the negative words and check whether they are upside down.
For example: 1, there are three taboos in sleeping: one is not to get angry before going to bed, the other is not to eat enough before going to bed, and the third is not to lie in the wind. (in the sentence? Avoid? There is a negative meaning, plus a negative word? No? , produced the opposite meaning. What did you see when you were doing the problem? Avoid prevention and exclusion? When waiting for a word, you should first consider whether you have the problem of hanging upside down. )
Look at both sides of the word and check whether you have maladjustment.
For example: 1, the quality of machinery is an important condition to ensure production safety. (in the sentence? Good or bad? Two sides and? Important conditions? One side is inconsistent. Identify sick sentences, after reading them? Can it be good or bad? Is it? When using this two-faced word, try to find the corresponding word at the back. If not, this sentence may be wrong. )
Fifth, look at quantifiers or quantifiers and add nouns to check whether the word order is improper or ambiguous.
For example: 1, the director told the leaders of several schools that the work in the new semester must be improved. (in the sentence? The leaders of several schools. There is ambiguity. How many/much? The object of restriction is not clear, which can be understood as restriction? School? Can it also be understood as a restriction? Leadership? Yes )
6. Look at the related words and check whether they are improperly matched or placed. Related words are generally used in pairs, so we should pay attention to collocation. In addition, pay attention to the position of related words.
For example: 1, nutritional tonic can not only strengthen the body, but also prevent and treat diseases. When the subjects of two clauses are inconsistent, the related words of the first clause should be placed after the subject. Not only that. It should be placed in. Tonic? Behind. )
7. Look at prepositions and check whether there are problems with incomplete subjects or improper usage.
Judging from the above events, it is proved that their behavior is beyond reproach. In the sentence? Where did it come from? It belongs to abuse, resulting in incomplete subject.
Pay attention to adverbs of degree in sentences.
Adverbs are generally used to modify adjectives, which can't be wrong in general, but we must carefully analyze whether the adjectives behind contain the meaning of this adverb, resulting in semantic repetition. What are these adverbs? Ten points?
? Very very? Wait a minute.
For example, in recent years, newspapers have often touted stars and praised them excessively, which has contributed to the pride of some stars. (? Yimei? What does it mean in itself? Excessive praise? , plus? Excessive? , semantic repetition. )
Pay attention to special phrases in sentences.
Some phrases are often misused, but this habitual irregular usage often appears in sick sentences, which is very paralyzing. Candidates should pay special attention when doing the questions.
For example, the purpose of American military strikes is to destroy Iraq's bases for producing weapons of mass destruction, hoping to get rid of Saddam Hussein through military strikes. (? Purpose? And then what? For what? You said it? Purpose? These terms are duplicated, and one of them must be deleted. )
Discrimination of diction and sentence making 2 1 The sentence without diction and sentence making is ()
First, in order to better improve the service quality, we must adhere to the people-oriented principle and create a harmonious waiting environment and pleasant humanized service for passengers to the maximum extent.
B, this new cold medicine has been clinically tested in hospitals in Beijing, Shanghai, Nanjing, Hangzhou, Kaifeng and other places, and 80% of them are really effective.
C. At present, medical expenses such as hospitalization and surgery are increasing. Once a child is seriously ill, it will be unbearable for ordinary families. Therefore, parents are advised to buy a critical illness insurance for their children.
D. Strong domestic demand is becoming an important market for multinational giants to make huge profits, especially for China's oil, iron ore and basic energy.
2 The sentence that is not wrong in the following sentences is ()
A. With the approaching of the Universiade, volunteers can be seen everywhere in Shenzhen, and welcoming the Universiade has become a broad stage to show the grace of volunteers.
B. This summer vacation, our city will hold 12 middle school sports meeting. The 20 male athletes and 16 female athletes who participated in this sports meeting in our school are composed of excellent athletes selected by the class.
C, from academic fraud to today's fighting, from copying papers to picking up guys today, the problem of academic misconduct has completely evolved into a social problem.
D, if you want to describe the characteristics of a language, it is the best way to compare with another language, and you can find and feel the differences between languages well through comparison.
3 The sentence that is not wrong in the following sentences is ()
A this legal vocational training base was established by the cooperation of the provincial department of justice and Nanhai university. It is the first training institution in China that effectively combines government administrative functions with efficient educational resources.
B, Zong Pu's war didn't have swords and shadows, but it was branded with deep mental scars, and it had a vivid scroll atmosphere. The cultural texture immersed in bone marrow actually makes people feel like they are in a dream of red mansions.
C. Norwegian national treasure band? Mysterious garden? Will come to Beijing to perform again, setting a record for foreign performing groups to perform in Beijing for more than 7 times, which is also the only time in their artistic history.
D, is it? Low carbon life? This concept, through the successful and failed economic construction practice in China since the reform and opening up, irrefutably proves the correctness of this concept.
4 In the following sentences, the one that is not wrong is ()
A, Thousands of Asian Games volunteers are busy. They are working together to complete the ideal of hosting a civilized Asian Games that will attract the attention of Asia and the world.
B. Yesterday morning, an old man suddenly fainted in the shopping center. After that, he was rescued in time by the medical staff of 120 emergency center and the security guard of the shopping mall, and finally he was out of danger.
C, Cao Cao's character is twofold. His cleverness and treachery are a challenge to any actor who plays him and a rare opportunity to perform.
D.AVIC engine company is mainly engaged in the development of large passenger aircraft engines, and its establishment marks another gratifying step in the development of supporting industries for large aircraft in China.
5 Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
First, the dispatched offices of the Supervision Department of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection should take strengthening supervision as their first duty, effectively strengthen supervision over leading cadres, and prevent power from being out of control, decision-making mistakes and behavioral anomie.
B, called? The first scene of Lushan Mountain? Shimenjian, also known as Shimenjian, is the west gate of Lushan Mountain. Here all year round, the spring is tinkling, the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant, the pines and cypresses are green and the clouds are lingering.
C, some experts believe that the primary task of protecting the Yuanmingyuan site is by no means reconstruction, even if it is? Part? Reconstruction is the value of the remains or ruins that she studies after excavation.
D the influenza a virus that attracts worldwide attention is not fatal, but it spreads quickly. If we don't find a way to understand its evolutionary principle, the disease will spread quickly and pose a great threat to human health.
Reference answer
1 Celsius
1. Improper juxtaposition of words should be? Provide happy and humanized service? ;
B, the preposition is wrong, after? Change to? Pass? ; Improper collocation of subject and predicate, in? 80%? After adding? Patient? ;
D, improper collocation, will? Market? Change to? Factors? ;
2 degrees celsius,
A: Improper collocation, welcome? Become? Stage, obviously wrong, remove it? Are you welcome? .
B, is it? Are athletes writing? , wrong! It should be added at the back. what's up Or delete? Composition? Some people think that this sentence is wrong or mixed?
D, is it? Portrait? With what? Features? Do not match? Hmm? Decoration? Did you find it? inappropriate/ improper
3 B，
One,) improper collocation, cheap? With what? Institution? Do not match.
C, is it? Is it a record? Improper collocation, will it? Realize? Change to? Settings? .
D, improper collocation is a preposition with a long adverbial, and the subject-predicate becomes? Has this concept been proved to be correct? Improper natural collocation. Delete? After that? Two? This? Norichi
Four dimensions,
One, with improper completion and ideal, complete the task or realize the ideal.
B, improper collocation, will it? Classic? Change to? Are you online? , or will it? Next? Remove; Ambiguous? Get there quickly? Ruling? Medical staff? Or? Medical staff and mall security? I don't know, both kinds of understanding are ok. Who comes faster, the mall security guard or the medical staff in the 120 emergency center? , or will it? School? Mention? A lot? Before.
C, is it? His talent is rough and treacherous? With what? Is it also a rare opportunity to perform? Improper collocation can be changed to? Playing this role is also a rare opportunity to perform?
5 A，
B, where are the pines and cypresses? Improper collocation of subject and predicate.
C, remains or ruins? Does not match the value. Delete? Remains? .