As the saying goes, persistence is victory. I finally understand.
In the sunset, an ant was struggling to climb up on the wall inadvertently. It's already soft You must be hurt. His eyes were attracted by him. Halfway up, I suddenly rolled down. This is its sixth failure, but after a while, it climbed up the wall step by step ... Looking at this ant, I can't help but say: A little ant is so persistent and tenacious, it's really indomitable! It made me think.
I thought of you, Su Shi. In the Wutai Poetry Case, you were banished to Huangzhou to watch Red Cliff of the Three Kingdoms in Zhou Lang, and your mouth slightly rose. Zhou Yu of the Three Kingdoms was so romantic and lofty in Battle of Red Cliffs that Cao Cao was caught off guard, but in the end? -can be said to be lost wife and soldiers. Today, I am also the other side! You laugh at yourself. "Dajiangdong goes to the waves and is a romantic figure through the ages." Want to give up? However, Su Shi, a great writer and an optimist, how could he give up easily? I always remember the twists and turns you have experienced these days. I know that the word "give up" has never appeared in your dictionary, not in the past, not now and not in the future!
There are two sides of yin and yang, and layers of clouds.
Looking up at Mount Tai with you, I suddenly felt a surge of joy.
"once you climb to the top of the mountain and peek, you will see that other mountains look short under the sky ..." ambition and ambition rose in my heart. You want to climb Mount Tai, you want to overlook everything! I understand your lofty sentiments. "Du Zizhi's mind and boldness of vision are considerable. Take it as a volume and sit in the town. "In the days of walking with you, I understand your heartfelt ambition. Failing the list is not terrible, not sad. It's terrible and sad to give up on yourself. Fortunately, you didn't. Yes, gold always shines. So, you insist, you succeed!
Setbacks, persistence and achievements are not insurmountable!
2. Excuse me: How to write an argumentative essay with progressive total score. What kind of argumentative essay should I write? After watching a movie and an article, you can talk about your feelings; For progress, for ideals, for benefits.
Accustomed to carrying forward the revolutionary tradition and observing public order.
To be polite, we can talk about it in practice. We should write argumentative essays like cows, distinguish right from wrong, distinguish right from wrong, be justified and convincing.
Don't just copy newspapers, you'd better choose more specific examples and adopt the method of narrative discussion. 2. What should I pay attention to when writing an argumentative essay? First of all, we should pay attention to: command materials with correct views.
The materials used can be strictly controlled by viewpoints, which is a problem that must be handled well in writing argumentative papers. To deal with this problem, we should work hard in the following aspects; First, the argument should be correct and reasonable.
Vivid. For example, the teacher asked the students to write an argumentative essay according to the following paragraph. The main idea of this material is: one day, two people went to buy a shield.
A man stood on the left of the shield seller and said, "This shield is a golden shield." A man stood on the right side of the shield seller and said, "This shield is a silver shield."
The two men turned red in the face. Then the shield seller said, "You are both wrong.
This shield is neither gold nor silver. On one side is a gold and silver shield. "We write an argumentative essay based on this material. How can the arguments put forward be correct, reasonable and distinctive? Some students said this: this shows that everything must have the views of the masses.
Some students say this: don't jump to conclusions at will, think carefully and express your opinions after thinking it over. Obviously, the above two formulations are divorced from raw materials and irrelevant.
Some students argue that this shows that we should not look at the positive side of the problem, but at the negative side. I'm thinking: shouldn't we see the positive side of the problem and only the negative side? This statement is certainly not correct.
Some scholars put forward the argument that this shows that we should see both sides of the problem, not just one side, but also other aspects. In short, we should look at the problem comprehensively, not unilaterally. The argument put forward in this way is more correct, reasonable and distinct.
As can be seen from the above formula, students should pay attention to the following points when writing argumentative essays: from the specific situation, they have to choose the right words, and it is difficult to say what they say is right. Second, analysis and reasoning should conform to the correct principles.
When writing an argumentative essay, analysis and reasoning can't be irrelevant and subjective. You can't think that everything you say is reasonable.
There are ~ objective criteria for the correctness of analytical reasoning. We should look at this problem from a correct standpoint. Let's see if the following "analysis" is correct.
Some students "analyze" this way: we often see such people, and we are happy when we see other people's praise. In fact, there are good and bad compliments, and we can only listen to good ones.
Praise is not good. Although it is "nice", it is "not nice".
Therefore, there is no way to "listen to a nice compliment". By the way, the questions of "connecting with one's specific experience" (or "connecting with one's specific case") and "connecting with reality". "Connecting with your own concrete examples" and "Connecting with reality" should be specific and appropriate.
But they are also different: the former focuses on their own experience, and the latter can be a broader social situation. For example, the teacher told a story: Qi Xuanwang is good at archery, and he likes to be praised for his ability to draw a hard bow.
The envoys around him listened and deliberately said something flattering to please them. Obviously, he can only pull open the "three stones" (here, Dan is read, and one stone in ancient times is 120 Jin), but he deliberately said that he can pull open the "nine stones".
Some even tried to pull the bow, but in the middle they pretended to be dizzy and couldn't pull it, saying, "You Gonta people are hard, and no one can pull it except you. How can a villain like us get out? " In this way, Qi Xuanwang thought he could pull "nine stones" to death, but he didn't know that he could only pull "three stones".
With such materials, you can get in touch with the reality of social life extensively, but it is not easy to get in touch with your own "experience". However, some students insist on "contacting themselves" and say, "I like to flatter myself like Qi Xuanwang".
Some students "connect with social reality", but they are specious: "There are still many Qi Xuanwang-style figures in today's society, and one of their manifestations is to treat guests and give gifts through the back door." These "analyses" are biased and confuse the essence of things.
We should learn to analyze. The analytical method is dialectical.
Look at the problem comprehensively to prevent one-sidedness and absoluteness. Third, we should be good at talking about "small things", but don't use narration instead of discussion.
There are many "little things" in our daily life; ; For example, "giving up your seat" to other passengers on the bus, not spitting, not swearing, these seem to be "trivial things", but you should learn to "exploit loopholes" when writing a composition. Make a mountain out of a molehill
How to deal with the relationship between "narrative" and "argument" in argumentative writing, such as "carrying forward the spirit of a penny" and "calling names uncivilized" inspired by students writing such compositions. You can't just say that things are not discussed, and you can't just describe the detailed process of the case without analysis. For example, it is unnecessary to spend most of the time telling stories about Yang Le and Zhang Guanghou's study from primary school to university.
It is not good to "discuss this matter by yourself" or "discuss it with Syria". Be clear about what you want to "describe". It may be used as an "introduction" to lead to an argument, or it may be used as a factual argument to prove an argument.
The purpose of "narration" is to better "discuss". "Narration" should focus on the central idea, which should not only be summarized, but also have some specific contents.
Don't elaborate on what those people know. And those things that can be used as arguments to prove the argument should be written clearly as the key points, so as to explain and explain the truth.
Fourth, we must also serve others. Argumentative writing must convince people with reasoning.
Well-founded, not only to say "so", but also to say "why". Therefore, "convincing people with reason" should be "less but better" rather than "more and more complicated".
The facts you put forward and the truth you speak should be to the point. The more you talk, the fuller you are, and you can't "win by more."
3. The essay titled "Direction" tells that two ants want to climb over a wall and look for the first jump at the other end of the wall: follow up [teacher's suggestion]. There is such a message in the title material: unremitting efforts are important, but the direction of action is the basic prerequisite for success.
Materially, food is the direction of action, but the first ant takes conquering that wall as the direction of action, and the result can only be half the effort, not worth the candle. Based on this, we can determine the intention of the article: 1, take "direction" as the core, and clarify the meaning of the direction itself.
Many times, enthusiasm and ability alone are not enough. The most important thing is to choose the right direction of success. As long as you work hard in a very clear direction, you will definitely get out of the desert and find an oasis of hope. 2. Narrow the scope of the topic by combining materials, and clarify the significance of direction to success with the relationship between "direction and success" as the core.
The direction is vague, just like a ship in the dark loses its lighthouse, and sooner or later it will run aground on the rocks; If the direction is wrong, the harder you work, the farther away from the goal, the more ridiculous and generous you are. Only with a firm direction and clear goals can we make a difference and make a difference.
There is only one direction in the choice of life, and the direction of life is decided and grasped by yourself. After establishing the correct direction, we must always work hard in this direction, judge the situation according to the situation, guide the situation according to the situation, win without arrogance and lose with grace, and finally we will taste the sweetness of victory and sublimate our life.
[Sample essay] Where is life going? Wang Jiao has a sage saying, "A wise man is impermanent; Life is like a month, with gains and losses. " On the journey of life, I feel not only mountains and rivers, but also mountains and rivers.
Faced with the confusion and confusion at the crossroads of life, some people choose to give up on themselves, complain about others and be unhappy; Others keep in mind that "where there is a will, there is a way" and make up their minds not to stop until they reach their goals, but the results are often unsatisfactory. In contrast, I admire the third kind of people more: they will calm down, look at the environment from another angle, adjust the direction of progress, and the result will always be "another village."
The right direction is half the battle. Only by choosing the right direction can we get rid of the fog, make ourselves suddenly enlightened, get rid of depression and hesitation, and reach a new height in life. When Tao Yuanming hated the hypocrisy and darkness of officialdom, he changed the course of his life and resolutely chose the poor and secluded countryside, so later generations were lucky enough to read these fresh and comfortable poems, such as "Picking chrysanthemums under the hedge, seeing Nanshan leisurely" and "first frost, seeing lofty branches".
Imagine, if he didn't choose to "go south and return to the garden" at that time, but continued to live a mediocre life in the officialdom, then there would be just one more mediocre officer. The name "Tao Qian" will be lost in the long list of officials in the official department, and those frustrated literati in later generations will also lose a home that can give them spiritual comfort.
It is important to have a firm belief in life, but the key is to have a rudder and master the direction of progress. Ban Chao gave up his studies, chose to gallop on the battlefield, made immortal contributions to the founding of the country, and fixed his figure in the vast western regions, leaving a story of joining the army in history.
Bill? Gates gave up his studies and chose to work hard in the rapidly changing economic tide. In the end, he established the Microsoft Empire, became the richest man in the world, and made his life a legend. They chose the right direction and mastered the rudder of their own destiny, thus ferrying the ship of their lives to the other side of success.
Only by preparing the steering wheel of life can we rush out of the sand and smoke and win brilliant starlight and the morning glow all over the sky. When the ideal mast is destroyed by the wind and waves, when fate is stranded on the muddy beach, when there is nowhere to hide in the face of loneliness and frustration, there is no need to complain and be cynical. At this time, we need to calm down, overcome our shallowness and recklessness, and readjust our direction. Maybe success is waiting for you quietly in a corner.
[Secret of Success] This article has two characteristics: First, the setting of three or four sub-arguments makes the article clear and strongly demonstrates the significance of direction to life: if you grasp the direction, you will grasp the value of life. Tao Yuanming resigned and Ban Chao joined the army, Bill? Gates' three examples of abandoning school to do business are typical, brief and convincing.
Second, the use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and parallelism makes the reasoning of the article avoid boring and vivid, while rational thinking makes the article full of warning power. The second jump: reverse tangent [teacher's suggestion] Everything has two sides, and "direction" also has negative factors.
Career direction is often obtained by learning the experience of others. Following the established direction can really make us take fewer detours, but the direction often means the limitation of thinking. Breakthrough in direction means new exploration and new harvest, but more efforts are needed in the middle.
This is one of the reverse ideas. Secondly, in the process of our efforts towards the goal, there are often some unexpected gains that surprise us.
As far as this material is concerned, the first little ant did delay a lot of time, but it also got exercise in the process of climbing up. When it is immersed in the "top", that carefree feeling is not something that a small piece of food can give.
Thirdly, besides the direction factor, there are many indispensable conditions for others to succeed. Success in life can not be achieved by imitation, but only by learning the direction of hard work and not following the trend.
Do people have to go higher? Chen Weixin's phrase "Man struggles upwards and water flows downwards" is often used by people to encourage themselves and strive for self-improvement. There is no doubt that "water flows downwards" is an objective natural law. The positive attitude towards life of "man struggles upwards" is also commendable.
However, if you want to work hard, can you only go high? The answer should be no, everyone's level and ability are different, and the direction that suits others' efforts may not necessarily suit them.
If everyone goes higher regardless of their actual conditions, there is no doubt that there are only a few people who can cross the wooden bridge with thousands of troops. If you try your best to squeeze and fight when your own conditions are not enough, you may only feel helpless even if you cross the bridge to a higher place.
Li Bai, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, is a poet who takes poetry as his poem.
4. Urgent for three compositions-high school students ~ not too abstruse 1. Please write one with the title of "trace", and suddenly it fell down. This is the record of his sixth failure. However, after a while, he climbed up the wall step by step. The first man looked at the ant and couldn't help saying, "A little ant. We have encountered a little setback, can we be discouraged and retreat? " The second man stared at the ant and couldn't help saying, "poor ant, he can climb up easily if he changes his position a little;" But he just doesn't look at it and think about it-alas, poor ant! No matter what we do, if we fail, we must learn to be smarter and not reckless-we are human beings, not brainy people! "The third man asked the wise man," Observing the same ant, two people have completely different views and opinions, and their consciousness is completely different. Who is right? The wise man replied, "They are both right. The questioner was puzzled. "How can they be right?" "Requirements: Please write an argumentative essay with the words of the first person, the second person, the third person and the wise man as the topic! The topic is self-made and the thinking is self-determined. Try to write at least 800 words.
An ant climbed the tree, fell and fell again. Writing an argumentative essay is a composition. Persistence is the saying, and persistence is victory. I finally realized that an ant was struggling to climb the wall in the sunset. It's already limp. It's hurt. His eyes were attracted by him. Halfway up, he suddenly fell down. This is its sixth failure, but after a while. It made me think. I thought of you, Su Shi. In the Wutai Poetry Case, you were demoted to "Red Cliff of Zhou Lang in Three Kingdoms" in Huangzhou, and your mouth slightly rose. Zhou Yu of the Three Kingdoms was so romantic and lofty in Battle of Red Cliffs that Cao Cao was caught off guard, but in the end? -can be said to be lost wife and soldiers. Now I am just like you! You laugh at yourself. "Dajiangdong has been going to Langtao, a romantic figure." Want to give up? However, Su Shi, a great writer and an optimist, how could he give up easily? I will always remember the twists and turns you have experienced these days. I know that the word "give up" has never appeared in your dictionary, and it will never happen again! There are two sides of yin and yang, and layers of clouds. Looking up at Mount Tai with you, I suddenly felt a sense of * * *, surging with joy. "once you climb to the top of the mountain and peek, you will see that other mountains look short under the sky ..." the ambition and ambition in your heart arises spontaneously. If you want to climb Mount Tai, you must overlook everything! I know all your lofty sentiments. "Du Zi's mind and spirit are impressive. Take this as a scroll and stand tall in the town. " In the days when I walked with you, I knew your heartfelt ambition. Falling out of the list is not terrible, not sad. Despair is terrible and sad. Fortunately, you didn't. Gold always shines. So, if you persist, you will succeed! Setbacks, persistence and achievements are not insurmountable.