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The design and simulation of fault diagnosis system based on neural network and genetic algorithm mainly studies fault diagnosis technology, neural network principle, genetic algorithm and the combination of genetic algorithm and neural network to realize fault diagnosis, which has application value in the field of information and communication.
The opening report written by Xing Jian is rich in content, standardized in format and meets the requirements.
In the literature review, the student carefully consulted a large number of relevant materials about the generation, development and classification of multi-user detection technology, the principle of neural network, the realization of genetic algorithm and other design tasks, and discussed its rationality.
The proposed implementation scheme has profound understanding, can solve the practical problems of this study and is feasible.
The workload and difficulty of the design topic are moderate.
Generally speaking, this classmate's graduation project opening report has been completed well, and I agree with this classmate to open the topic.
Comments on the opening report II. Students are well prepared for the experiment: they can collect more detailed Chinese and foreign reference materials, design and prepare experiments, fully prepare experimental materials, and reasonably arrange experimental plans. They have already started the preparatory work for writing papers.
I hope to continue to collect data, improve the experimental scheme, and carry out experimental research and thesis writing as soon as possible.
Agree to the topic!
The evaluation opinion of the opening report 3 has targeted opinions, pointing out the advantages and disadvantages, as well as the matters needing attention in writing the paper. Tutor's comments on literature review and opening report
By consulting the literature related to this research direction, I basically understand the knowledge theory involved in this topic, and the number of references meets the requirements.
The opening report explains the significance, purpose and main contents of the study in detail. The theoretical knowledge, methods and means used and the expected results meet the requirements and are recognized. Comments of the review team
Teaching this topic well is of great theoretical and practical significance. Fully prepared in the early stage; The research content is more substantial; The research method is reasonable; The research focus is clear and meets the requirements of the opening scheme. After review and voting, the review team unanimously agreed to open the topic of the paper and agreed to enter the next research work. This student's thesis has good topic selection and high theoretical and practical value.
The opening report explains in detail the significance, purpose and content of the research, and the theoretical basis, methods and means of the research and the expected results meet the requirements. The preliminary preparation of the study is relatively sufficient. By consulting the relevant literature of this study, I basically understand the theoretical knowledge involved in the topic selection, and make a comprehensive and detailed combing according to the research direction of the article. The research content is also substantial, the research method is reasonable, and the focus and difficulty of the research are clear. However, the opening report also has the following shortcomings:
When defining the core concept, there is a lack of definition of the important concept of "postmodern education theory".
As for the research content, it is planned to adopt the research method of "one divides into two" on the influencing factors of China's post-modern educational theory, which is a simple linear analysis with limitations. It is suggested that in the process of writing papers in the future:
After evaluation and voting, the members of the evaluation team unanimously agreed to pass the project report and agree that students should continue to write papers.
Comments on the opening report 4 This topic conforms to the research development trend at home and abroad and accurately grasps the existing research level.
It is a breakthrough to adopt 3G technology as the wireless access technology of intelligent low-voltage distribution terminal. The research purpose is clear, the research method is feasible, and the topic is agreed.
Comments on the opening report. The student and the teacher fully discussed the topic, which met the requirements of the graduation thesis of ideological and political education major and referred to many documents, and had certain practical value. This topic is the continuation of students' professional knowledge, which conforms to the direction of students' professional development and is conducive to improving students' basic knowledge and skills and improving their research ability. The research method and scheme are basically reasonable and the difficulty is appropriate. Students can finish the thesis design within the specified time.
Agree to the topic.
Comments on the opening report 6 1. Failing: students fail to complete the main workload according to the graduation project (thesis assignment); The design principle and scheme selection of the paper lack sufficient basis, and there are big mistakes; The concept of the paper is unclear, the argument is obviously wrong, the arts and sciences are confused, the chart is not standardized, and the conclusion is principled. The thesis does not meet the requirements of undergraduate graduation design (the thesis does not agree to organize defense. And the suggested score is: fail.
2. The student can't state the main contents of the paper within the specified time, and he is disorganized, confused in thinking and wrong in answering questions. After full discussion by the defense team, according to the quality of the students' papers and their performance in defense, it is decided to evaluate the papers as failing.
3. This paper mainly studies the security of station computer interlocking software in railway signal field. The topic of this paper has certain frontier, clear theoretical significance and strong practical value. The investigation is comprehensive, the workload is full, the analysis is thorough, the design is reasonable and the information is informative. The paper has reasonable structure, standardized writing, clear organization, prominent focus and fluent writing, and comprehensively applies the knowledge learned to solve problems.
4. Monascus pigment is one of the traditional edible pigments in China, and there are many characteristics to be studied and developed. In this paper, excellent strains with high pigment yield and low citrinin yield were obtained by shake flask liquid fermentation screening and ultraviolet mutation. The solid-liquid fermentation conditions of safe monascus pigment were optimized by response surface experiment, and the scale-up experiment was carried out. The paper has novel ideas, forward-looking and good application prospects.
5. The topic of this graduation thesis takes into account the academic frontier and diversity of the subject, which provides a pioneering idea for the production of safe monascus pigment. The experimental workload of the paper is large, the analysis and detection methods are complete, and the analysis of scientific research results is correct. The format of the paper is standardized, the logic is strict, the data chart is clear and reliable, the conclusion level is clear, the specific experimental scheme design idea is clear, the workload is heavy, and the system is strong, reaching the level of excellent master's degree thesis in Hubei Province. It shows that the author has a solid theoretical foundation and the ability to engage in scientific research independently.
6. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
7. The topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic has academic research (reference value (practical guiding significance).
8. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, can comprehensively use the knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively use knowledge. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is relatively complete, the hierarchical structure is scientific, the main points are prominent, and the logical relationship is clear, but it lacks personal opinions. The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme.
9. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Rich references and strong timeliness; No plagiarism was found.
10. The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic has academic research (reference value (practical guiding significance).
1 1. Taking safe monascus pigment as the research object, the response surface method was used to further optimize the culture conditions of monascus pigment in liquid fermentation, and the effect of vitamin H on monascus pigment in liquid fermentation was investigated through single factor experiments, and the optimal addition amount of vitamin H was obtained, which provided experimental basis for the development and utilization of monascus pigment.
12. The technological conditions of three-stage ventilation control were obtained by using the conditions obtained by shake flask culture and L fermentor. Under these conditions, the color value was U/ml and citrinin was Mg/L. Compared with before optimization, the pigment changed little, while citrinin decreased by%. The result is ideal.
13. The topic of this paper is novel and has a good application prospect. The experimental test results are reasonable, the data chart is clear and reliable, and the experimental workload is large. The center of the paper is prominent, the writing format is standardized, the arguments are sufficient, the structure is rigorous, the level is clear, and the expression ability is strong. Rich materials, reliable data, scientific and effective processing and finishing methods. It shows that the student has solid basic knowledge and systematic professional knowledge, and has deep scientific research ability. The thesis has reached the level of excellent master's degree thesis in Hubei Province.
14. The student's ability to consult documents is average, and he can collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, he can basically use the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of the examination system, and his ability to comprehensively use knowledge is average. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are focused on certain logic, but there is a lack of personal opinions. The topics are basically the same, and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument.
15. The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
16. The topic of the paper conforms to the professional training goal, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training goal, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general.
17. Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor. The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion. The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.
18. The language expression is poor and the format meets the specification requirements; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
19. During the three-month graduation project, students can successfully complete the whole graduation project and thesis writing under the strict requirements of teachers. The program can run correctly, the interface is arranged reasonably and the paper meets the requirements.
20. In the whole graduation design process, I have a correct attitude, study hard and arrange my time reasonably. I can get to the lab on time, and there is no reason to leave early or be late. Can basically complete the corresponding tasks at each stage, but also take the initiative to work overtime, so that time is tight before it is loose. Of course, there are also some shortcomings and areas that need improvement.
The evaluation opinion of the opening report is 7 1. During the internship, the student is extremely serious, active, careful and practical, and can accept guidance with an open mind; At the same time, I am good at thinking, can draw inferences from others, have strong foreign language communication skills and communication skills, and can complete the tasks assigned by the leaders with good quality and quantity; It also shows strong professionalism and team spirit, with a deep professional foundation and a good level of professional knowledge. It is a rare talent.
2. His research, study and work in the postgraduate stage are excellent, and I believe these experiences and accumulation will become valuable wealth on his life path. I hope he will continue to maintain and carry forward the rigorous style of study, work hard and strive for greater achievements in his future work and study.
The graduate student has successfully passed CET-4 and achieved excellent results in GRE. Have high English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills, and perform well in foreign academic exchanges of the Institute of Development and Educational Psychology.
4. During the internship, the student is studious, practical and willing to work, and can humbly ask the experienced predecessors for advice when he meets something he doesn't understand in his work. Be able to listen to other people's work suggestions with an open mind. Be able to flexibly apply what you have learned in school to specific work, and complete the work assigned by the leaders with good quality and quantity. At the same time, the student can strictly abide by the rules and regulations of the center, live in harmony with colleagues, and show good teamwork spirit and professionalism.
5. In the study of specialized courses, according to the requirements of research direction, she carefully studied the relevant core courses and laid a solid foundation for scientific research; During her study, she also studied many other courses, broadened her horizons and got a deeper understanding of the structure of the whole research field. In English learning, I have strong English listening, speaking, reading and writing skills.
6. During the internship, the student is extremely serious, active, careful and practical, and can accept guidance with an open mind; At the same time, I am good at thinking, can draw inferences from others, have strong foreign language communication skills and communication skills, and can complete the tasks assigned by the leaders with good quality and quantity; It also shows strong professionalism and team spirit, with a deep professional foundation and a good level of professional knowledge. It is a rare talent.
7. Pay attention to the combination of psychological counseling theory and psychological counseling practice, undertake the counseling work of the school students' psychological counseling center, and have rich experience in psychological clinical work.
8. His research, study and work in the postgraduate stage are excellent, and he has won many honorary certificates. I believe that these experiences and accumulation will become valuable wealth on his life path. I hope he will continue to maintain and carry forward the rigorous style of study, work hard and strive for greater achievements in his future work and study.
9. The topic of this article is reasonable. Regional economy is the focus of economic research, and agricultural economic growth is also the focus of discussion at present. In recent years, many experts at home and abroad have made many mature discussions on this issue, and some experts and scholars in XX area have made in-depth research on the economic problems in XX area, but no special discussion on the comprehensive study of XX agricultural regional economy and its growth has been found. How to understand the present situation and future trend of regional economic differences in XX agriculture and promote the healthy and sustained growth of agricultural economy is an urgent problem to be solved in economic reality, and it is also the significance of this paper.
10. The topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has practical guiding significance.
1 1. The student's ability to consult documents and materials is average, and he can collect relevant information of papers. In the process of writing, he can basically comprehensively apply basic knowledge, comprehensively analyze problems, and his ability to comprehensively apply knowledge is average.
12. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are logical to some extent, but there is a lack of personal opinions.
13. The topics are basically the same and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument.
14. The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the specification requirements; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
15. The research in this paper provides a new basis for XXXX to have strong practical value in controlling accounting information distortion. The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results. The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.
Comments on the opening report. The concept of this subject is clear, the technical route is feasible, the research content is substantial and the research method is effective. Students themselves have a comprehensive understanding of the current situation at home and abroad in related fields, and the work they are doing now provides various conveniences for completing the topic. I believe I can finish the topic and write a graduation thesis that meets the requirements of master's degree thesis.
Agree to the topic.
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The evaluation opinion of the opening report is 9 1. Cui Liang's bachelor's degree thesis "Fragment Editing and the Creation of the" Nonsense Style "of Stephen Chow Films" studies the popular editing art means in recent years-fragment editing, and emphatically analyzes the application of fragment editing in Stephen Chow films. Creative means and works of art meet each other, the theme is distinct, the theoretical context is clear, and it also has strong use value. This paper has a clear structure and distinct levels, analyzes the film/cultural background of clip editing in detail, studies the historical inheritance, and effectively analyzes the ways and means of clip editing by combining the representative films at home and abroad. In addition, in the past, domestic researches on Hongkong/Stephen Chow films mostly focused on the cultural/individual level, but this paper studies a creative level of Stephen Chow films from a specific technical/artistic perspective, and convincingly summarizes and induces the formation of its unique artistic form with a rational attitude, which is of positive significance to the study of such films. This paper is rigorous in writing, clear in arguments, rich in examples and diverse in argumentation methods. In the process of writing, Cui Liang consulted a large number of text/film materials, processed and revised them many times, and constantly improved the level of his thesis. Because the author is a graduate majoring in editing, he also pays attention to the artistic/technical characteristics of film editing in his thesis writing to avoid empty theoretical preaching. Instead, it combines specific editing art, takes examples as arguments, takes shot list, shot screenshot and three-dimensional analysis as the demonstration process, has the characteristics of editing professional graduation thesis, and pays attention to the promotion of each chapter theory. This is an excellent paper.
2. Zhang's bachelor's thesis "On Rhythm in Stage Performing Arts" studies an advanced core element in performing arts: rhythm. This is a very difficult subject, and it is also of great research value. The characteristics of the paper, on the one hand, sort out the related performance theories related to rhythm, on the other hand, illustrate its topic with a large number of concrete practical examples. The theme of the full text is prominent, the level is clear, down-to-earth and unpretentious. It can be seen that the author has invested a lot of energy in the writing process, has a correct learning attitude, and has made remarkable achievements in the paper. Of course, the problem of rhythm is an endless scientific research problem for all performing arts. Rhythm involves all aspects of directing art, performance style and even drama itself ... As an undergraduate, Zhang is brave in exploration, diligent in thinking and overcoming difficulties, and it is not easy to achieve such results in his thesis. I hope that he can closely combine the issues discussed in the paper with various practices in the future, broaden the depth and breadth of his thinking in time, constantly improve his performance art level and theoretical level, and personally realize his artistic life rhythm.
3. Yu Lijin's bachelor's degree thesis "The Position and Research Significance of Comedy Elements in the Development of Korean Films" studied the comedy elements in Korean films. This is an interesting and meaningful topic. Facing the famous Korean films in recent years, most domestic studies focus on film directors and film types, and few articles pay attention to the specific creative elements in Korean films. Yu Lijin's paper firmly grasps the theme of comedy elements, not only studies comedy films, but also tries to analyze the application of comedy elements in different types of films, and has a diachronic discussion, with its emphasis and systematicness worthy of praise. Based on the nationality of Korea and the nationality embodied in Korean films, this paper studies the works and audiences, and puts the film problem into the historical and national environment for speculation, which is both theoretical and practical. The most valuable part of the paper, first, the analysis of the use skills of comedy elements in different types of films, even involving "cruel political films" and "sad historical films", reveals the secret of the success of Korean films in using various favorable creative factors in business; First of all, the analysis of Korean films has gradually entered the thinking of China's film creation, and some effective suggestions are put forward for the creative skills of China's films at present. The paper has clear levels, calm atmosphere, detailed information and rich examples. Yu Lijin's writing attitude is serious. He consulted his tutor many times and revised his thesis. He was the first student in his class to finish his thesis. His academic attitude is worthy of recognition. This is an excellent paper.
4. Wang Ying's bachelor's degree thesis "The Analysis of Movie Editing of Revolutionary Model Opera" studied the editing skills of revolutionary model opera movies in China ""period, which is a unique topic. For a long time, the research in this field is basically blank, so this topic is valuable. Model opera movies, which originated from revolutionary model operas on the stage, are works of art created by a large number of artists and tested by the audience. After filming, it not only kept the original appearance of the model operas, but also made some artistic innovations. Due to the special historical events at that time, on the one hand, it restricted artistic creation, on the other hand, it was possible to concentrate the best domestic film artists to shoot revolutionary model operas, which formed its artistic characteristics. The biggest feature of the revolutionary model drama film is to realize the high combination of drama art and film art, and create a brand-new hypothesis. That is, it is not a film creation based on the original model opera, nor is it a simple stage art film. In the creation of revolutionary model operas, various experiences of China films in this respect were summarized and popularized, and a new style was formed. The editing skills of such films are especially the parts that are easily overlooked. In fact, in the revolutionary model operas, editing techniques are used quite smoothly and richly. Wang Ying's paper studies the different splicing skills of model operas such as movies, literary dramas and martial arts dramas, and then deeply analyzes the splicing skills of singing, dialogue, atmosphere, action layout and martial arts, which is quite rewarding. The main body of this paper is clear, the layout is reasonable, the explanation is simple and the details are appropriate. The author's professional level and writing attitude are worthy of recognition. It is a pity that there is still a lack of understanding of some issues due to the specific era in which the author's principles are located. But as a young student, it is commendable to dare to challenge such a difficult topic and play a role in filling the gap. This is an excellent paper.
5. Li Xiaofeng's bachelor's degree thesis "Indispensable Figures and Roles-On Marlon Brando's Performing Arts" made a comprehensive analysis and research on Marlon Brando's performing arts creation. The graduation thesis of performance major is mostly a study of a certain performance element or a summary of one's own creation. This thesis belongs to the category of master's research, which is undoubtedly a new challenge for undergraduate graduates. Based on the brushwork of historical theory, Marlon Brando's life and creation, and his performance skills of personality and methodology, this paper outlines Marlon Brando's performance world. This paper studies the historical inheritance of American Methodist performance theory, and holds that Brando's performance style is the combination of Methodism and the actor's own personality. It is precisely because of the combination of the two that Brando's unique personal charm and expressive force have been formed, leaving a series of unforgettable images for the world movies. It is precisely because of his strong personality that he left many regrets in his personal creation and personal life. The paper has a clear point of view and distinct levels, uses a lot of materials, and combs and weaves them. The author's analysis of the similarities and differences between Brando's three periods is also insightful and convincing. If the thesis is insufficient, it is that the discourse state of historical theory is slightly stronger, and the analysis and reconstruction of scientific performance theory is still insufficient. The research on Marlon Brando basically stays at the level of this paper. If we can explain more about its role in contemporary film performance creation, the level of the thesis will be by going up one flight of stairs. This is an excellent paper. It is of positive significance to expand the topic selection scope of performance professional papers.
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