Comment is a kind of argumentative essay, which directly discusses current events and has a strong argument color, so it requires strict logic. Drawing up an outline before writing is the guarantee of clear thinking and strict logic.

General structure: "lead-point-discussion-conclusion".

Quote: News events or hot topics that people care about.

Point: To point out the central argument, we must take a clear-cut stand.

Discussion: it is required to contact with social reality and have a pragmatic style of writing. When discussing, you can add the author's emotional color, laughing and cursing, which have become articles.

Conclusion: The ending should be strong, and it is best to leave room for thinking.

Note: If you need to refute other people's views, you can first list the objects to refute, then point out his loopholes and refute them with examples, and then establish your own views and make positive comments to make your own views deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.

It is no small matter for college students to take exams in class.

Source: China Youth Network

Recently, a reporter's investigation found that there are many phenomena of taking classes instead of taking exams in Beijing universities. Some students take classes for others and earn thousands of dollars a month. Their classes are mainly public courses and elective courses. The phenomenon of substituting classes for exams has also spawned intermediaries, saying that they can find various people to substitute classes to meet the needs of different "customers". (Beijing News July 10)

Hot phenomenon, introducing topic, causing thinking.

The behavior of taking classes instead of taking exams reflected in the survey is still a minority, which exists in the form of hidden rules, but it is not difficult to find that this business has become more and more open and flooded, showing a pattern of industrial development. Not only do the supply and demand sides directly trade privately, but intermediary organizations are also born for this purpose, and targeted supply and demand matching is implemented. Taking classes instead of taking exams has also spawned a group of professionals, who have gained a lot of returns. Without effective intervention and correction, this trend will be more difficult to contain. Once taking classes instead of taking exams becomes the norm, it will not only increase the cost of governance and management, but also make it difficult for college students' academic status to meet expectations. Moreover, it will subvert the foundation of honesty, make students easily cross the bottom line of honesty to "commit crimes", and the inner sense of awe of rules will disappear.

Phenomenon analysis shows that it is dishonest to take classes instead of exams.

Mr. Lu Xun once said that the quality of great personality is an honest word. As far as people are concerned, honesty is the foundation of people. "People without faith don't know if it is possible." If a person loses his basic ethics, he loses the basic principles and resources of being a man, and is doomed to be difficult to succeed. The same is true for a society and a country. Breaking promises will bring huge losses and become a serious disaster. According to incomplete statistics, due to the problem of good faith, the annual losses to the country reach more than 600 billion yuan, and the product quality problems reach more than 200 billion yuan. A glimpse of the whole leopard, the direct and indirect losses caused by dishonesty, including potential risks, are almost incalculable. Colleges and universities are regarded as pure ivory towers, where elite talents are trained and personality is shaped. College students are the future of the country and society and have great potential.