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Let the heart return

At first glance, I don't know how you feel about the painting "Heart-Missing Times": on the lost and found desk, which has never been visited by anyone, people's lost hearts-love, kindness, conscience, sympathy and responsibility are displayed ... From this, you can imagine that there must be countless people with "hearts and minds" marching casually in the city. Faced with such a scene, I can only close my eyes and shake my head: we have fallen. ...

The angel's wings were broken and fell to the ground, becoming Satan's wand and our sorrow.

Think about what happened around us: fake milk powder, fake drinks, fake ham, all kinds of corruption ... aren't the protagonists of these events missing a "heart"? Especially the recent Xiaoyueyue incident-the little girl Yue Yue was run over by two cars and died unfortunately, while the passers-by around her 18 stood by and turned a blind eye. Where are their hearts? I can't imagine how they felt when they saw the bloody scene, but I am sure that some of us have fallen.

In fact, this is not only the sorrow of anyone, but also the sorrow of our society. A good-hearted man was falsely accused of helping a fallen grandmother. There is such a precedent. Who else is willing to help those who need help? We might as well ask ourselves, how many of us are sensitive to those shocking things? Why should people make their conscience numb or even missing? When we were young, who didn't have a pure and sensitive heart? However, society has gradually taken away people's innocence and even people's conscience with its ruthlessness, making people gradually become "mature". This seems to be a fate that we can't get rid of, and it is the sorrow of this society.

But even so, we can still see such a picture: college students build bridges to save drowning children, thus sacrificing their lives; In the rainstorm, girls hold umbrellas for beggars regardless of getting wet ... What is this for? After thinking, I finally understand: rainy days are not without the sun, but in the higher sky! Kindness, love and conscience will not fall from everyone's chest! Aren't those college students who hold up another life at the cost of their lives praised and remembered by people in the end? Even if "meanness is the passport of the despicable, nobility is the epitaph of the noble", the epitaph will last longer than the passport, right? Man is a thinking reed. Without thinking, what is left? Similarly, what can a person become without a heart? If people who lack heart really want to live a "human" life, they have to embark on the road of finding heart.

Finally, I stopped sighing. I believe that the angel will eventually heal her wings, Satan's wand will eventually fail, human kindness will not stay in the lost and found forever, and those temporarily lost hearts will eventually return to people's fiery chests!

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By contrast, the article criticizes various ugly social phenomena, eulogizes those who insist on benevolence and righteousness, and tells us: "Rainy days are not without the sun, but in a higher sky!" The human society will eventually clear up after the rain, and those lost hearts will eventually return to people's fiery chests. While criticizing ugliness and praising beauty, the article uses a series of questions to make people think deeply, let people see the essence through phenomena, and make the article have certain depth and strength.

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Birds returning from wandering

When you first saw the painting "The Age of Missing Heart", what did you think of? Did the red hearts displayed on the shelves of the lost and found office cause you to think about the ugly phenomenon in society? Do you feel sorry for those "heartless" people? I thought of people wandering outside the lost and found office.

A flower and a world, a leaf and a bodhi. Under the colorful lights, people wander in the wind and rain like returning birds from the nest.

With the leap of history and the changes of the times, human beings have created endless material civilization with their own hands. We don't deny the comfort and convenience that these changes have brought to human beings, but under the temptation of doting on technology and interests, human beings have gradually lost their nature of pursuing authenticity. Kindness and innocence in the eyes of newborn babies have gradually degenerated into meanness and ugliness in the eyes of adults.

Maybe some people were once angry, but gradually turned to submission, got used to it, and even gradually integrated themselves into that ordinary "big family". Once beautiful nature was discarded like dross, and fame and fortune became the simplest way for people to behave. How many cynics scream: Have we lost the good nature of human beings in this way?

Don't! I won't! Just like the girl who helped the beggar to hold an umbrella in the rainstorm, just like the three college students who saved the girl from drowning, just like "Ah Fu" in the Yushu earthquake, just like the scavenger who found Xiaoyueyue in a pool of blood ... The good nature of human beings is like a bird wandering in the wind and rain, but I believe she will come back eventually.

Some people may say that these acts of kindness are too insignificant to awaken the conscience of the whole society compared with the general climate of the whole society. No! All wet! As geometry says-countless points will continue into slender lines; Countless lines will expand into a broad plane. Perhaps these examples are not great, but when they converge into a line and expand into a surface, they will have the power to break through the dark clouds. A single spark can start a prairie fire.

I think it is precisely because we have just entered a new era and a new world that we have not even adapted to our brand-new life and the speed of our development. The ancients said: "granaries actually know etiquette, and you will know honor and disgrace when you are full and warm." Once entering a mature society, people will gradually calm their impetuous hearts and find their lost nature. As I saw in an article.

Man is a swift, wandering in the window of nature, still fresh as jade, still fragrant with tea, still covered with flowers and rain, returning?

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Through a series of examples and logical arguments, this paper proves to us that people will never lose their original intention. They are just returning birds wandering outside the nest and have all kinds of abnormal behaviors in a social transition period that they are not used to (in fact, this is also a problem discussed by many experts and scholars). The author takes geometric theorem, Guan Zhong's famous words and Swift's behavior as the basis of his argument, which makes people feel refreshing and convincing. ?

The premise of material (cartoon) composition writing is to understand the material. It should be said that this cartoon is not too difficult to read. The main purpose of this cartoon is to satirize the social phenomenon that some people in today's society generally lack love, compassion, kindness, responsibility and conscience. In fact, "lack of heart" for a while is not terrible. The terrible thing is "lack of heart", and no one "claims". In other words, these "hearts" are insignificant to some people. This is the most noteworthy place in our society. Without calling for the return of these "hearts", our society will become a desert of love, a wasteland of kindness and a vacuum of conscience sooner or later, and we will even degenerate into a biped in the social jungle and eventually lose humanity.

When writing this article, don't be intimidated by so many "lost hearts". We don't have to cover everything at all. You can follow the principle of "opening small and digging deep", grasp one point and make a profound analysis. Firstly, the typical phenomenon of "heart deficiency" in society is put forward, then the reasons of "heart deficiency" are analyzed, and finally the method of "heart" regression is found. Although it is easy for us to find criticized objects, publicly displayed objects and exposed specimens from around us, it is forbidden to write this article as an answer recommended, praised and trampled by the questioner. What is your evaluation of this answer? Put the comments away. _ 1 uevpeq { zoom: 1； Background color: # fff border: 0; margin-bottom: 10px； Fill: 30px 0 20px 42px Location: Relative. _ 1 uevpeq . EC- 184 1 { padding:20px 0 }。 _ 1 uevpeq . 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