1 National Day is coming, and the streets, roads and sidewalks are crowded with people.
Even the day before, everyone seemed to be immersed in the joy of the next day. On National Day, stop it. There are red balloons floating in front of all kinds of big shopping malls, and some slogans celebrating National Day are written on the red cloth under the balloons. There are drum bands cheering in front of some shopping malls! Other stores have air-filled "doors" made of balloons or cartoon characters such as Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck. The taxi also hung a small red flag early to prepare for the National Day. Streets and alleys are full of joy.
Maybe it's because of the seven-day National Day holiday. Everyone takes this opportunity to go out shopping, which makes the merchants very happy, but in order to attract more.
In order to attract customers, many shops and shopping malls have taken promotional activities. For example, 80 yuan's clothes have dropped to over 60 yuan or a pair of shoes is 20% off. Some shopping malls and shops not only promote sales, but also send balloons to attract more customers, especially those such as Guoshang Building, Supply and Marketing Building and Huatai Shi Jewelry Store. Although some small shops are not as bold as those shopping malls, they are not to be outdone. They put up a sign at the door with some discounts on it.
And customers seem to be very interested in this method and can't help but go. And these shopping malls are bustling and lively.
Although I was very busy, I was exhausted by the traffic police uncle. It's hectic to clear traffic jams and direct pedestrians at the same time.
Cleaners are busier than traffic police, especially on Jiefang North Road. The cleaner finally cleaned up and was ready to sweep another place. A "troublemaker" landed in a clean place-threw a plastic bag on the road, and then vomited a disgusting sputum on it, so the cleaner had to turn around and sweep the two garbage that destroyed the environment. Time and time again, the cleaners are really busy!
I think: National Day is coming, and children and adults are very relaxed. With the improvement of economic conditions, there will generally be cars. I hope that comrades who drive or ride bicycles can take a step back and make way when they encounter traffic jams. As the saying goes, "take a step back and broaden the horizon", which can not only avoid trouble for yourself, but also make way for others, which can be described as the best of both worlds. There are also health problems. I hope everyone can be strict with themselves, don't throw garbage with them, form a good habit, throw it to me when you see others throwing garbage, and help others pick it up. Comrades who litter also think about it, not only destroying the fruits of other people's labor, but also destroying the appearance of the city. If someone leaves a stain on your white clothes, you certainly don't want to; If your New Pants has a hole, you will be angry. If I cut a scar on your face, you will be angry. Similarly, if you think about the feelings of others, what will others think?
I hope everyone can do these two things well. Next National Day, there will be no garbage on the ground and no traffic jams on the road. I wish you a happy and fulfilling seven-day National Day holiday.
Narrative composition 2 If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call a happy ending "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content, which is the main theme. 3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme.
Here are some ways to end your composition:
1, wishing method
The end expresses the author's wishes and wishes, such as the end of Zhu De's commemoration of my mother: "May my mother rest in the ground!" That's it.
2. Valuation method
At the end of the narrative, there is often a short comment or a comment at the end of the article. For example, Cang Kejia's "Mr. Wen Yiduo's example" has such an ending:
Mr Wen Yiduo is an outstanding scholar, a passionate poet and a brave revolutionary martyr.
He has a big mouth. He is of high standard.
3. Deductive method
For example, Lao She used this technique at the end of Winter in Jinan. Look: this crystal is covered with red roofs and yellow grass hills, just like the small gray shadows of flowers on the carpet. This is Jinan in winter.
4. Appropriate methods
It runs through one thing all the time, and ends with it. For example, Jiang's Red Army shoes:
"Fortunately, nothing was broken except the hole made by the bullet. I quickly took it off, knocked off the mud and hung it on my waist. " This ending takes the Red Army shoes as the end of the story.
5. Termination method
The end of the story, the end of the story to the reader, as the end of the story. For example, the ending of Luo Guangbin, Liu Debin and Yang Yijing's "Forward Newspaper" is like this:
"Revolutionary comrades defeated the enemy with matchless wit and saved the Party organization." This ending explains the ending of the story.
Step 6 speak your mind
At the end, the author writes his hopes and inner feelings directly without disguise. For example, Bi Ye's Tianshan Scenery ends like this:
"Friend, the rich scenery of Tianshan Mountain does not stop there. Tianshan stretches for thousands of miles, and there are wonders everywhere, regardless of mountains, deep valleys, grasslands, forests, streams and lakes. You can't finish what you want me to say. If one day you are passionate about visiting Tianshan Mountain, don't forget to let me know before you leave. Maybe I can be a bad guide for you. However, being a tour guide is just a beautiful excuse for me. In fact, I really want to find an opportunity to revisit Tianshan. " This ending expresses the author's hope.
7. Film sticking method
The ending sets off the surrounding atmosphere and gives people a stronger and deeper impression. For example, Yang Mo's "Strong Warrior" ends like this:
At first, the voice was Lm Hong's, then several people's, and then dozens or hundreds of people's. This trumpet sound is getting louder and louder, more heroic and more passionate, as if the whole universe is full of this high-pitched voice.
8, speculation method
Finally, I tried to explain the people and things written in the article, but there was no conclusive basis, or just to create suspense, so I used the method of guessing. For example, at the end of Kong Yiji:
"I haven't seen it yet-Kong Yiji is really dead." "About" in the sentence means speculation.
9. Contrast method
Finally, compare several aspects of people or things to make them more prominent. For example, at the end of Mark Twain's campaign for governor:
"Your loyal friend, Mark Twain, used to be a decent man, but now he is a perjury, a thief, a corpse thief, a drunkard and a fraud expert."
10, landscape painting method
End with a description of the scenery. For example, Du Pengcheng's Night Walk in Lingguan Gorge: The wind is stronger. The snow is getting heavier and heavier.
1 1, space-time method
Finally point out the time or place. Such as "Haicheng": the real Haicheng is not anywhere else, but the Miaodao Islands.
12, missed method
The ending expressed deep nostalgia, leaving people with endless thoughts. For example, Ji Fang's Between the Waves expresses this feeling at the end:
For more than ten years, the scene of seeing off at Yan 'an Airport has often appeared in front of us: the chairman stood in the door of the plane, looked at the crowd off with firm eyes, held the dark gray helmet in his broad palm, slowly lifted it, lifted it, and then waved it in front of him. Countless soldiers marched bravely in the direction he pointed out.
13, accident method
The ending was unexpected. Such as Mo Bosang's "Necklace":
Alas! My poor Mathilde! But my hanging was fake. The maximum value is 500 francs.
14, summary method
Finally, make a summary of the full text, and some also summarize the central idea of the full text. For example, at the end of Ma Shitu's "We have won a great victory-notes on flood control and disaster relief in Sichuan":
The party, government, army and people in Sichuan have forgotten their own selfish interests, their country and their homes, and their personal safety in order to save national materials and people's lives and property. They have given full play to the incomparable power of man to conquer nature and won great victories!
15, Appeal Law
Finally, make an appeal to readers. Such as Lu Xun's diary of a madman:
I haven't eaten anyone's children.
Save the child.
16, reference method
In order to echo before and after the end, the center is clear, the clues are clear and the structure is compact, and it is often necessary to take into account the previous article. Take care of the topic, the beginning, the clue and the protagonist. For example, Nikolai Gogol's Splash of Gold. Finally, take care of the hero:
Now standing in front of base Kukov is such a person!
The end of the chameleon will take care of the beginning:
"I will punish you sooner or later!" Ralph threatened him, wrapped his coat tightly and crossed the market square.
17, close-up mode
At the end, use "close-up" to describe the characters written in the article. For example, at the end of dinner on the grass:
The setting sun reflected the grassland more brilliantly. Commander-in-chief's steady body, like a pine tree, is more majestic under the sunshine.
As long as she turns her head and smiles, there are a hundred ways to end the spell.
1, natural beam acquisition
No matter what style and content are expressed, the full text naturally closes, and there is no need to design profound philosophical sentences or highlight symbolic forms with rich meanings. This way of ending is the "natural ending method". It completely avoids the problems of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, lively and unpretentious, and should be widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination.
Generally speaking, the natural ending method mainly has the following manifestations:
(1) narrative formula. When writing notes is over, it is over.
(2) descriptive. In the works of writing character notes, the full text is collected by describing the movements and language of characters.
(3) Descriptive formula. In the exposition, when things are clear, it is over.
2. There are four main types of echo titles:
First, repeated echoes. Lyrics, discussion, character description, scene setting, explanation points, etc. Is repeated at the beginning and at the end. Comparing the beginning and the end, the sentences are slightly different. Because of the repeated emphasis on the same content at the beginning and end, the theme of the novel is more prominent, and the structure of the novel has a circular beauty.
Second, gradual reaction. On the basis of narration, description, discussion and lyricism at the beginning, the ending echoes from afar and expresses a deeper meaning, so as to drive readers to make a leap in understanding and emotion, leave room for aftertaste and deepen the theme.
Third, the reality echoes. Realistic at the beginning and vague at the end to deepen the center or highlight the artistic conception. This fictional ending is often used in narration and can give readers the beauty of artistic conception.
Fourth, deal with flattering. This is a special echo method, which is mainly used for people who start with "quotation", that is, quoting a material at the beginning and using a material at the end. The two paragraphs are at the beginning and the end, as the center, showing the beauty of the structure.
3. Lyric ending
The lyrical ending can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotional waves and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing.
Step 4 express your opinions
The use of argument can often deepen the theme and characters of the composition, profoundly reflect the social life and express the author's feelings, add the thinking and rational color of the work, and give readers distinct expression effects such as warning, encouragement and strength. Some are magnificent, showing the author's mind and tolerance; Some are delicate and soft, expressing the feelings of the characters; Others are straightforward and lively, and their analysis of things is incisive. They are really colorful and changeable.
The final discussion has the following expression angles.
One is to express emotions. Or deep, or unrestrained; Or happy or sad; Or miss, or miss, fully entrust and express your feelings.
The second is to summarize the full text. This statement is often used in the general structure of the total score. On the one hand, it is a summary of the full text, on the other hand, it emphasizes the theme again, and deepens the main content of the full text with extremely concise language.
With the growth of age, looking at the stacks of papers and questions on the desk, have I really grown up? Or is it only the growth of appearance and body, but the heart has not changed? I hope past lives's advice will help me stop being at a loss.
I still remember when I was in the fourth grade, I accidentally killed my classmate's pet. At that time, I would only blame others blindly and make excuses to cover up my mistakes. Although I was finally forgiven, I still couldn't stand the condemnation of my conscience. Tell the teacher that I killed my pet. The teacher said, "You can't just pass the buck when you do something wrong. You must bravely admit it to gain the trust of others. " For me at that time, this was a profound sentence and a piece of advice to myself. I wrote it down tightly. Now, I understand, but the teacher has left our school. However, I must tell her: I am already a person who dares to take responsibility!
There is a book that says: "Many times, we only see the unfortunate surface, bleeding wounds and broken hearts;" We only complain, complain and pity. I don't know, through the test of suffering, painful experience and the washing of tears, God will make a useless life shine immortal and turn rough gravel into priceless treasures. "This may be just a famous saying to others, but it was very useful when I was in fifth grade. Because, at that time, I was about to take part in a competition. I tried my best to win the championship, but I failed in Sun Shan because I was not fully prepared. At that time, my mother was about to comfort me, but I silently walked into my room and cried, as if I had fallen from the clouds to the bottom. When I was sad, I opened the book casually, and then I saw the article "A Pearl". I feel that the clam's experience is similar to mine, but it didn't give up like me, and finally gave birth to a smooth and round pearl. In the end, despite all the difficulties, I decided to go ahead! This suggestion makes me not afraid of difficulties and setbacks!
Now, when I am in the third grade, my classmates around me don't know that they are too familiar with human accidents, so they all dress up in disguise, always wear different masks in front of others, even don't know their original personality, and even treat each other coldly. However, I won't do that and I don't know how to do it. Therefore, I like to bring warmth, confidence and courage to my classmates and encourage them to stand bravely on the battlefield of life without fear of difficulties and challenges! I hope: whether I am in the past or in the future, I can have a lovely, innocent, optimistic and kind heart that loves to help others, is not afraid of setbacks, and can take responsibility!
One's greatest enemy in life is oneself. We all stood on the same starting line from the beginning. There is no gap between people and there is no so-called congenital defect. On the way to the competition, we need to constantly remind ourselves and constantly motivate ourselves.
Touching music does not come from talent, and the efforts made the day after tomorrow are also of great help to life. Beethoven was deaf in his later years, but in a silent world, he made a masterpiece that shocked the world by mistake. If it is only because of the contempt in the eyes of others, it will only make people feel that they have lost themselves in timidity.
"Old chat young crazy. What kind of boldness is embodied in such a bold poem "Yellow on the left and blue on the right". " Going home, no rain or shine ",how calm and indifferent.
He experienced the intrigue of officialdom, the ups and downs of official career, the bumpy journey and the loss of fame and fortune. Time gave him reason to retreat, but history gave him firm steps.
Without experiencing the ups and downs of life, life will not be complete, because at the same time, it has become a symbol of human spirit and an eternal milestone in history.
Bruno has become synonymous with truth since he experienced the fire in Rome Square two hundred years ago. The road of truth is tortuous, but he firmly believes that one moment, the eagle will cut through the sky; It's gold, shining forever. He proved to the world that truth is supported by life, and progressive science has verified the value of heroes.
In life, we should accept the wind and rain and find the meaning of life in setbacks. Only by returning to the haze will we usher in the light!
There are so many things happening in winter vacation! But only that incident made me unforgettable!
Because of cowardice, I have been afraid to play firecrackers. You can only watch others play firecrackers during the Chinese New Year. But this year I don't know where I got the courage to suddenly want to play firecrackers. ...
Encouraged by my cousin, I picked up a box of cleaning guns and carefully took out a cleaning gun from the box, with a lighter in my left hand and a cleaning gun in my right hand. My heart has been pounding like a rabbit, and I thought to myself: What should I do? So nervous! What if I lit it and didn't throw it out? That's ... the consequences are unimaginable. My cousin has been afraid to order when she sees me. She smiled and said to me, "Never mind, don't be afraid! Just light it and throw it out! " I re-posed and encouraged myself: a year later, I will be one year older. I can't be afraid, it's nothing! My cousin's encouragement and my own encouragement doubled my courage. I lit the lighter, put the gun on the fire and threw it out quickly, but I threw it out before I lit it, so I didn't succeed.
But I decided to try again. I posed again and thought, Nothing, I almost did it last time. Come on! This time, I lit the lighter and carefully put the gun on the fire. This time, I didn't throw it out quickly, but waited until the gun was completely lit before throwing it out quickly. "Crap!" It worked! I laughed my head off, and then I ordered a glass or two ... the more I clicked, the more fun I felt.
From this incident, I understand a truth: we should take the first step bravely in everything! Believe it, I will cherish it in my memory forever, forever. ...
6 Different Motherly Love Composition 50 1 Ban Gai Yanbo blames my mother at Shengli Gudao No.2 Primary School in Dongying City, Shandong Province. In my memory, when my child and I accidentally fell down, my mother always helped the child to get up by myself first, and never came to my side to help me. What I remember vividly is when I was four years old. I helped my father carry the kettle. As a result, I don't know whether it is slippery or other reasons. I fell down, and hot water splashed on my feet, making my tears come out. My father saw that I burned my feet and tried to run over and help me up, but my mother stopped me. My mother gave my father a wink and turned to me lightly and said, "Go to the coffee table and get the medicine and wipe it yourself." Then I dragged my father away. I found the medicine on the coffee table and wiped it roughly. I cried while wiping, thinking, "why is mom so cold?" Am I her own daughter? " Does she love me or not? "When I sleep at night, Xiaohua and I toss and turn. Suddenly, I heard the sound of pushing the door. It was my mother who came in. She gently lifted my floral quilt, saw that my feet were blistered, touched it gently, coated it with medicine, blew it, then covered my floral quilt and gently closed the door and left. Tears came out of my eyes at once, and I thought, "My mother is not cold to me, but she still loves me. I still hate my mother so much. I really shouldn't! "Now, I deeply understand my mother's love. My mother helped other children first, but now she burns her feet and lets me apply the medicine myself. This is not to be cold to me, but to exercise my independence.