It is a common historical phenomenon that following others' expectations can make you famous and strive for the prosperity of the material world. But not everyone pursues it like this. They regard utility as a feather, and their hearts are as clear as water, so that they can enter the territory without hindrance. Sima Qian is a complete waste in the eyes of others. Socrates dragged his fat body and walked alone every day. Beethoven was only deaf in others' eyes, but they all exceeded others' expectations and became great men. We should not only reflect on their self-awareness of life, but all people with great spirit have a self-awareness heart. Strong spiritual consciousness can help them get rid of external interference, and they choose a shortcut to the spiritual hall. No matter what happens in the world, they all struggle on the road of their own choice and never give up. "Difficulties and hardships make you successful", and it is brilliant in the paradox that others expect.
Example 2
Li Bai, an unruly person, regards life as wandering. The boiling blood made him unable to settle down anywhere. He always walks on the track set by himself and is not bound by everything around him, including wealth and fame and fortune-although he once yearned for fame and fortune; The poet Tao Yuanming was indifferent to fame and fortune, resolutely refused the intrigue of the imperial court, stayed away from the noise, retired to the countryside, and lived a leisurely life of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely"; Also, Fan Zhongyan chose the attitude of "worrying about the world first, then enjoying the world", and Xin Qiji chose the life path of being ready to die for his country and go to battle to kill the enemy-although he was still ambitious until his sideburns turned white. No matter whether these great men's choices are noble or not, no matter whether they finally realize their ideals, as long as they make a choice on the road of life, they should go on without hesitation.
Comment and analysis
Example 1 is argumentative. Tell the truth first, then analyze it, and finally sum up the general law of "going to glory in the paradox that others expect". Although the whole article is full of the author's emotions, it has distinct rationality and logic.
Example 2 is the writing of argumentative essays. It presents close-up shots and images to readers, and the author's views and ideas are permeated in these shots and images, and readers should understand the author's views and ideas through these shots and images. Although there is no lack of internal logic in the whole paragraph, the characters are more prominent and the emotions are stronger.
Example 1 emphasizes rationality, which not only gives people a rational understanding, but also gives people aesthetic pleasure. Example 2 focuses on sensibility, and words are obviously more "visual impact" and more attractive to readers.