What have I learned? Selection of composition evaluation.
1. seize the opportunity to use parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
2. Clever use of personification makes the objects in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, human thoughts and feelings, and makes them reflect the spiritual course of the hero in the text from the side.
3. Make things clear, use verbs correctly, use metaphors appropriately, make suggestions vividly, and get education from them after reading.
4. The simple and natural childlike innocence embodied in the article makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style, this paper expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind.
6. Can this article be written completely according to the requirements of the topic? The process of
7. Structured and centralized
8. The language is concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate.
9. The beginning is concise, the natural structure is clear, and the psychological description truly reflects the author's good language control ability.
10. The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.
1 1. What does the article describe? Fresh, lively, cheerful and clear, the childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
12. The article has rich imagination and colorful language. Present to readers
13. This article is concise and clear.
14. The author's careful observation and rich imagination aroused the reader's interest through anthropomorphic metaphor and other means.
15. It's very distinctive to borrow scenery to express emotion and support objects to chant ambition.
16. On the basis of folklore, the article reasonably imagines, vividly describes and deduces a wonderful fairy tale, which is interesting to read.
17.？ It is required to express a philosophy through fictional stories.
18. Is this article well reflected? Distinctive features, profound themes, novel ideas and complement each other.
19. Clever use of foreshadowing is a major feature of the article. The first paragraph of the article laid an excellent foundation for the development of the whole story. This idea is very clever and can be used for reference.
20. this is a very original article? The article is cleverly conceived and the language is concise and natural.
What have I learned from the recommendation of composition evaluation?
1. The works are ingenious, concise, fluent, imaginative, bold and creative. This article is novel and strange, and it is very attractive to read.
2. imaginative and innovative. First of all, let me introduce myself. The following articles are concise in language and humorous in style.
3. The article is not long, but the process is clearly described, and the activities of the characters are concrete, real, vivid and interesting. The full text is compact and complete, and the writing is smooth.
The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is smooth and vivid.
5. Are you good at grasping the characteristics of things and showing them in detail? Emotion permeates between words and characters.
6. The article is very convincing and thought-provoking. From the point of view of writing, the plot is vivid and the article is ups and downs, which is very enlightening to read.
7. The theme is concise, profound and powerful, and shocking.
8. The use of accurate and rigorous words, plain and natural language, personification and other rhetorical devices makes the article even more icing on the cake.
9. The main feature of this composition is to describe specific details, vividly describe true feelings, and use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification. At the same time, it is very vivid? Right? Love for ...
10. Human nature has many weaknesses. Inspirational motivation can effectively overcome some weaknesses, strengthen beliefs, overcome difficulties and achieve success. But now that we have grown up under the doting of our parents, we lack this spirit.
1 1. Han Yu taught us? Diligence is good at diligence, but poverty is good at playing? ; Lei Feng taught us? We are the masters of the country, so we should think of the country everywhere? ; Gu taught us? Every man is responsible for the rise and fall of the world. ? These celebrities tell us the importance of inspiration.
12. This is a lyric composition. The little author follows? Inspirational? Turn yourself into a snail to express your feelings. The article is fluent in language and sincere in emotion, and can be combined with its own reality by selecting typical cases, which is rich in meaning and content.
13. This is an article about. Inspirational success begins with faith? A speech with complete content, strong logic and distinct levels meets the requirements of the theme and can be in harmony with the audience's mind during the trial. This is a good speech.
14. The author is proficient in literature. The process of argumentation is advanced step by step, from everyone needs to read, to learning to choose books when reading, to reading good books will benefit endlessly, and finally to be a man and combine life and reading organically. It can be described as one go.
15. This argumentative paper has distinct views and unique opinions. It is pointed out that art should be rooted in small people and works of art should have the consciousness of civilian perspective. This paper adopts the way of refutation, refutation? Youth and inspiration? Say, show the ancient culture of China? In the end, the producers and actors of domestic TV series were criticized for being too commercialized and didn't work hard on quality.
16. Did the author of this article tell us in the form of a speech? The power of faith? . What is the author's opinion? It is not surprising that there is an endless danger. ? The beginning of this sentence shows the power of faith. By writing? Lie Bin Zhou Enlai Ma Fei? Examples can better illustrate our argument? Faith? The great success it has brought calls on people to establish a firm belief and a firm heart to serve the country.
17. This article is original and innovative. The article is from point to surface, with profound thoughts. Express gratitude to parents and teachers. This article makes us feel the silence of parents' love. The teacher's teaching should be deeply remembered and always grateful.
18. This is an argumentative paper. The author uses it? Chinese dream inspiration? For the topic, use the methods of comparative argumentation and example argumentation, put facts and reason, and explain your own views in combination with real life. The argumentation level is clear, the structure is clear and philosophical.
19. Inspirational composition evaluation comments This is a complete and wonderful writing article. The opening of the article sets the scene, which naturally leads to the following. It uses appearance description and action description, and the characters are vivid and prominent, depicting an image with perseverance and constant pursuit of the most inspirational.
20. This is a speech that shows your elegant demeanor and makes you youthful. The teacher read your article and knew that you are a child who loves life very much.
What have I learned, composition evaluation?
1. This speech is full of the flavor of the times, focusing on honesty and integrity, and the examples are very typical. The language of the whole article is infectious and full of momentum, and the best decission has infected all the audience present.
2. Notebooks are beautiful and tidy, just like the streets of seaside towns. It is really comfortable to see dirty and straight handwriting. Your handwriting is as beautiful as printed, and I am ashamed that my handwriting is not as beautiful as yours.
3. Whatever. Why doesn't it look like a cat's handwriting? The word is not in the middle of the grid. Of course, they don't like it. Your handwriting is uneven. Is it because of the strong wind today? I don't believe your handwriting is bad. If you always scribble carefully and patiently, you will write better than me.
This rich content is almost the same as that written by the writer. Your exercise is flesh and blood, and reading is really a great enjoyment. Your composition is specific, and I am addicted to it. Before you write so many words, you must like to see it as a document.
The dry content is like boiled water, and it has no taste at all. Just add some beautiful words and you can drink it. Not as many words as Vivienne Liu (or the names of other poor students). Don't you feel a little embarrassed? Your composition is like an old lady's mouth. It's dry and empty, and it's all missing.
6. Smooth and vivid sentences, such as Lushan Waterfall, flow downstream. The metaphor is very apt, which shows that you have been carefully observing how you came up with such a clever rhetorical question of personification. How appropriate is it to use here? This exclamatory sentence expresses your true feelings at that time. The quotation of ancient poems is just right. I will use the poems I have learned in my composition and write the two-part allegorical sayings wonderfully, which makes my stomach laugh.
7. The composition is bumpy and uncomfortable to read, just like walking on a bumpy road in the country, and it is easy to fall down if you are not careful. This sentence seems to have been cut off. The writing is incomplete, and if you look closely, you will find it unreasonable. Don't be afraid of trouble. Good articles are all revised. You should learn to modify every sentence by yourself.
8. Clear paragraph division is applicable to paragraphs with hierarchical meaning and clear paragraphs.
9. The level is chaotic. There are so many contents in one section. I feel breathless when I watch it. There are too few points in this section. Can you give me more? The middle part can be divided into several parts. Don't divide a paragraph or two. Merging this section has nothing to do with the previous section.