1. The title of this paper is * * *, which is novel and practical. The full text has scientific and reasonable structure, strong logic and clear thinking, and the references consulted meet the requirements of the paper. The argumentation method is reasonable, the argumentation content is convincing and the problem is thoroughly analyzed.
In the process of demonstration, students can also combine the principles of administrative professional knowledge with social reality, which meets the training objectives of administrative major in topic selection and viewpoint demonstration, but it is not innovative enough.
2. The paper is rigorous in structure, strong in logic, accurate in text expression, detailed in content and irregular in format. In the process of writing the thesis, the student actively contacted the tutor, conducted serious investigation and research, read a lot of literature, and was able to master the basic theoretical knowledge of this major skillfully, with certain scientific research ability.
3. This paper focuses on the analysis of the existing problems and reasons of * * *, and puts forward some operable countermeasures. The full-text topic is novel and research-oriented. The structure of the full text meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the thinking is clear, the viewpoint is clear, and the arguments are convincing.
The demonstration method is reasonable, and a large number of data are used to demonstrate, which increases the reliability of the demonstration. Can comprehensively use the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze * * * *, but the main deficiency is that the language is not very refined.
Graduation thesis writing guidance:
(A) the theme of writing:
Graduation thesis can only have one theme (not a few works pieced together), which should be specific to the grassroots level of the problem (that is, the problem can hardly be subdivided into lower-level sub-problems), not the field to which the problem belongs, let alone the subject where the problem lies, in other words, the research topic should not be too big.
Because of the wide range of issues involved, it is difficult to study the master's degree thesis thoroughly. Usually, the master's degree thesis should focus on a specific problem in a certain subject field and draw valuable research conclusions.
(2) How to write the title:
The topic of graduation thesis should reflect the main content of the thesis work concisely, and should not be general. Because others want to retrieve their own papers through keywords in their own papers, it is very important to use accurate language.
The title of the paper should be an accurate and specific description of the research object, which generally reflects the research conclusion to some extent. Therefore, the title of the paper should not only tell readers what problems this paper has studied, but also tell readers the conclusions drawn from this research.
(3) How to write an abstract:
The abstract of graduation thesis is a high summary of the research content of the thesis, and others will search the master's degree thesis according to the abstract, so the abstract should include: an explanation of the problem and research purpose, a brief introduction of the methods and research process used, a brief summary of the research conclusion and so on. It should be independent and self-evident, and it should be a complete paper.