There are too many problems in improving the colloquialism of the paper, which need to be started from many aspects, including examining the reader group, language expression, sentence structure, paragraph structure, mood and attitude, etc., so as to make the paper more accurate, concise, standardized, clear, objective and neutral.

Re-examine the target audience of the paper to ensure that the language style conforms to the readers' reading habits and professional background. If the reader is an academic expert, then the paper should be more formal and rigorous; If the reader is an ordinary person, then oral English can be used appropriately.

Re-examine the language expression of the paper, try to use more accurate, concise and standardized language, and avoid using colloquial slang and abbreviations.

Re-examine the sentence structure of the paper, try to use simple and clear sentence structure, avoid too complicated sentence structure, and make it easier for readers to understand.

Re-examine the paragraph structure of the paper, try to use clear paragraph structure, avoid too chaotic paragraph structure, and make it easier for readers to understand.

Re-examine the tone and attitude of the paper, try to use objective and neutral tone and attitude, and avoid using too subjective and emotional tone and attitude.

1, cover: including paper title, author's name, tutor's name, school or institution, submission date, etc.

2. Abstract: Briefly summarize the research purpose, methods, results and conclusions of the paper, usually before the text begins.

3. Keywords: list keywords related to the topic of the paper for easy retrieval and classification.

4. Content: List the chapter titles and page numbers of the paper, which is convenient for readers to find quickly.

5. Introduction: Introduce the research background, research purpose, research method and paper structure.

6. Research methods: Elaborate the methods, technologies and equipment used in the research process.

7. Research results: show the data and results obtained in the research process, usually including charts and pictures.

8. Conclusion: Summarize the main findings of the study and explain the significance and limitations of the study.

Matters needing attention in writing a paper:

1. topic selection: choose a topic that is of research value, conforms to personal interests, and is within your power.

2. Clear structure: Make sure the structure of the paper is reasonable and clear, which is easy for readers to understand.

3, language expression: concise and clear, clear, avoid using vague, repetitive or too complicated sentences.

4. Accuracy of data: Ensure that the data, charts and formulas in the paper are accurate and easy for others to copy.

5. Logical rigor: The discussion of the paper should be logical to avoid jumping or contradiction.

6. Language expression: pay attention to the language expression of the paper and strive to be concise, accurate and vivid.

7. Repeated revision: After completing the first draft, carefully review and revise the paper to ensure the completeness and accuracy of the content.

8. Consult your tutor and peers: In the process of writing the thesis, actively communicate with your tutor and peers and draw valuable opinions.