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Look at the cartoon below and write an article of no less than 800 words as required. (60 points) (composition questions for the first mock exam in Tangshan City, Hebei Province)
Look forward and right.
How to treat the phenomenon reflected in the cartoon Look Right?
Requirements: choose a good angle, define the concept, define the style, and draw up your own topic; Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
Thinking guidance
When writing Iman's composition, we should also pay attention to the examination of questions. Only on the basis of careful examination of drawings can we be aware of it. Review cartoons, including pictures and words. The text part includes the title of the cartoon and the text description on the screen. When reading pictures, we should pay attention to details, which can often help us understand the meaning of the picture accurately. This cartoon draws four people, which are obviously divided into two categories in terms of body shape. The leftmost human body is short, with the word "Germany" written on its chest; The other three people are about the same height, and the words "wisdom", "body" and "beauty" are written on their chests in turn. The height of these three people is obviously higher than that of the person with the word "Germany" written on his chest, and their heads are all to the right. Combining pictures and words, it is not difficult to understand the meaning of comics. Intellectual education, physical education and aesthetic education with high physical strength are comparable to moral education with short stature. On the surface, moral education is put in.
First, we attach great importance to moral education, but the short stature of "virtue" shows the essence of the problem, that is, "virtue" is not taken seriously. It can be seen that the most direct intention of this essay topic is to express opinions on the phenomenon that "moral education" is not taken seriously and talk about the lack of moral education in school education. Of course, you can also explore the concept in depth and write about the phenomenon of moral deficiency and moral decline in society, so that the article will be more practical. In real life, many things reflect the serious moral crisis in our society, such as "Peng Yu case", "Yao Jiaxin case", "Old man's slip" and "Xiaoyueyue incident", which are all shocking and angry and call for moral return. If we can properly connect with social reality and make in-depth analysis, we will certainly be able to write a masterpiece with practical significance. Xueyou college entrance examination network
Appreciation of excellent works
High-rise buildings with human nature should be based on morality
candidates
The main content of the cartoon "Look to the Right" is to line up morally, intellectually, physically and aesthetically. Although Germany ranks first, it is obviously not as normal as intelligence, physique and beauty. It criticizes the phenomenon that only intellectual education, physical education and aesthetic education are valued, while moral education is neglected.
Who doesn't want to build a tall building with humanity? What are bricks and tiles to stand upright? It is wisdom, figure and beauty. What foundation makes it strong and firm? Deye
Looking at today's society, how many foundations does the high-rise building of human nature have? Looking up, there are rows of dangerous houses. In today's developed economy and the supremacy of interests, the phenomenon of moral deficiency appears in front of you and me from time to time: Fan's running behavior is outrageous. Xiao's tragedy is chilling. When will the arrogance of "My dad is Li Gang" be extinguished? When will the media's "hype" of sacrificing morality and profit stop? Nowadays, people have long forgotten the advice of "people's livelihood is happy, and people are good at repairing". On the contrary, they pay more attention to the development of their own intelligence, the expansion of their physical quality and the modification of their image, and use this as a tool to compete for interests, while ignoring moral construction. Xueyou college entrance examination network
Who knows, lack of moral foundation. No matter how magnificent the high-rise building of human nature is, it is also a dangerous building, which may fall down at any time. I still remember the "Panda Burning Incense" virus developed by J Hezi, a high IQ student in Hubei Province, which caused the Internet chaos for a while. I still remember that Phelps, the "eight gold kings" at the Beijing Olympic Games, shocked the world, but later the news that he smoked marijuana almost ruined his great image in the hearts of the world. I still remember that Gillian, who claimed to be a jade girl and was highly sought after by teenagers, became the object of abuse by fans after the indecent photos were exposed. Without moral support, no matter how high IQ, great physique and beautiful figure, it is inevitable to be nailed to the soil of shame. Therefore, the high-rise building of human nature needs a deep moral foundation to support it, and it needs fairness, justice and dedication, otherwise it will only become a pile of huge ruins.
The river is full of springs, and several reefs are normal. Looking around the world, what we see most is that the profound moral foundation supports human architecture to stand in a world full of love. Wu Juping, the "most beautiful mother", gave her life to save her children, which still haunts you and me. Alimu, a Xinjiang native who sells mutton kebabs for a living but insists on subsidizing students, is deeply moved by his great love, and so on. Moral reinforced concrete building of human nature, tall and strong, quiet as a mountain!
For us, we should completely abandon the practice of attaching importance to morality on the surface but actually ignoring it in cartoons, and adhere to the principle of putting moral education first, so that people can improve their self-cultivation and lay a solid foundation for the construction of human nature. And on this basis, receive intellectual, physical and aesthetic education and training. If a person puts virtue at the center, wisdom at the top, body and beauty at both sides, you will find that life is a process of harvesting beauty. A solemn building of human nature keeps rising on this solid foundation and masonry, and finally stands firmly between heaven and earth.
Based on morality, the building of humanity will never collapse! Wisdom, body and beauty are bricks, and the architecture of human nature is picturesque. Please correct the wrong behavior in the cartoon. The construction of human nature should be based on morality.
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This is the benchmark composition for the evaluation of the marking group, which is determined by several characteristics of the edge.
In terms of content, the material is rich, the content is substantial and the center is prominent. Starting with the analysis of the cartoon itself, the author directly grasps the theme, accurately grasps the relationship between intellectual education, physical education, aesthetic education and moral education, and gives positive and negative examples, which are typical and relevant, and clarifies the center everywhere in the article, accurately grasping the core of the cartoon and conforming to the topic. So this one got 26 points. Xueyou college entrance examination network
In terms of expression, the argument is dialectical and comprehensive. In this article, the author first criticizes the phenomenon that today's society attaches importance to intelligence, physique and beauty while ignoring morality, and then points out that we should attach importance to intelligence, physique, beauty and morality. And examples of positive and negative contrast, so that the point of view is more prominent, but also reflects the ideological depth of candidates. So the score is 20.
As far as development level is concerned. The materials selected in this paper show the examinee's extensive reading vision and profound cultural background. What is particularly commendable is that the article is close to social reality and has social significance. In addition, the language of this article is concise and powerful, and it is very car-scrapping. It is a typical argumentative language, which is rare in middle school students' compositions, so the score is 20 points. Xueyou college entrance examination network
Based on the above highlights and scoring rules, the simulation score is as follows: content 20 points+expression 20 points+development 20 points: 60 points.