Keywords: 400 words in the fourth grade of Mom and Dad Poetry Primary School

Words: 400 words composition

This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 400 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The topic is "Mom and Dad and Me (Poetry)". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. (Chrysanthemum San Xiao Lu Lingxin) My father is the sun, my mother is a big tree, and I am a bird on the big tree. It's raining, and I'm hiding in the tree, just like getting into my mother's warm arms. It was sunny, the sun came out, and I sang in the sun. I can't live without the sun. He is the source of my life and the strength of my growth. I can't live without a big tree. She is my home and the place I miss most. You can't live without me. Without me, the world would be colorless and dreary. The world is wonderful because of us, and we are full of hope for life because we have a beautiful world. Teacher's comment: As a first-grade child, I was really moved and surprised to write such a poem. The full text basically meets the format requirements of poetry in genre, with fluent sentences, rich feelings and good writing. "Dad is the sun, mom is the tree, and I am the bird on the tree." This metaphor is very creative, and the whole text also revolves around this point. The article ends well. "The world is wonderful because of us, and we are full of hope for life because we have a beautiful world." Emotional expression is rich. A little advice: "You can't live without me. Without me, the world would be colorless and tasteless. " Because I am "a bird", "without me, the world will be colorless and dull." It doesn't make sense. (Xue Le China: Teacher Lin Yaoji) 2009-6-20 0:37:00