Horizontal combination is to "add" a plot and a short story to an article to form a complete article. That is what we often call "horizontal structure method". ?
The overall feature of "horizontal structure method" is to use the parallel structure of "plates" to fully express people, describe events, describe scenery and express feelings from multiple angles. ?
The composition of the senior high school entrance examination adopts the "horizontal structure method". The biggest feature is that the text of the composition is clear and the main content of the article is clear at a glance. And because not many people use it, the marking teacher will give enough appreciation. ?
It is very important to master several methods of "combination" by using the conception routine of horizontal combination. The most important thing is to learn how to use subtitles in writing and connect several "blocks" in the text with subtitles.
The main ways to use subheadings are:
1. Diary title, written in the form of diary link; ?
2. Letterhead, written in paragraphs A, B, C and D; ?
3. Word titles, which consist of paragraphs derived from words such as happiness, anger, sadness and joy in spring, summer, autumn and winter; ?
4. Digital title type, in which paragraphs are marked with numbers such as (1), (2), (3) and (4); ?
5. Quote quotations and use sentences in poetry or prose as subtitles for several short stories; ?
6. Summarize the plot and use words such as "prologue", "expansion", "knot *" and "epilogue" at the beginning of the paragraph; ?
7. Summarize the content, such as "She came", "She cried" and "She smiled"; ?
8. Leaving a blank line means that there is naturally a blank line between paragraphs, and several paragraphs are juxtaposed, which is particularly eye-catching. ? Now look at the following model essay:
Looking back on life silhouette?
Sleeping bells?
In the early morning, I vaguely heard the sound of an alarm clock in a misty dream, so I woke up suddenly and sat up with a stumble. Rub your eyes, open the sixth book and recite English. After class, I memorized the vocabulary and the irregular verb list. It was so quiet around, only my gentle endorsement. ?
It's not light yet. I think today's review is really efficient. I will continue to recite it with great interest. Suddenly a clear and loud alarm clock startled me. Turn around, it's just six o'clock, it's time to get up! ?
Whose alarm clock woke me up early, which gave me more time to review. I can't help saying to myself: If Mo Daojun leaves early, there will be more early pedestrians. ?
Snoring in exam class?
The third class in the morning is math. Teacher Zhang came, with a big stack of paper in his hand. We are sensitive to know that it is another exam class, so there is a sigh in the classroom. ?
Three big papers have been published, and the students are working hard. The classroom is very quiet, and the students are constantly turning over the papers and making a slight noise. ? Teacher Zhang is patrolling the classroom, watching while walking. Almost at the same time, he and his classmates heard a very rare sound in class-snoring. Looking inside, I saw Li Ping's head tilted on the math paper and slept soundly and sweetly.
The teacher went over and stared at him for a long time, and finally woke him up. Then the teacher said loudly, "You are sleeping at a higher and higher level. I don't know who made you work so hard! " ?
Applause at night self-study
Monday's evening self-study belongs to the Chinese teacher. Teacher Xiao came in with a smile. He said mysteriously, "Tonight, I ask you to write your graduation speech and give you free time." ?
Applause sounded, and Mr. Xiao booed everywhere. Some people stick out their tongues, some people laugh, and the applause soon stops.
Everyone is very excited. Thank you very much for Mr. Xiao's understanding, which adds a touch of youth to our monotonous review life. ?
However, in the following self-study, it is a bit bad for him to "point the topic": "If the composition of the senior high school entrance examination involves graduation speech, then our class will be very valuable." ?
This is an article with a horizontal structure. The author uses the method of "lens silhouette" to combine three short stories that are juxtaposed and internally related, reflecting the life of book review from different angles. Each "shot" is guided by different subtitles to highlight its central content. The lens looks a little scattered, but it's all "reviewing life"?
Writing such an article can also be conceived by "total silhouette method", that is, first choose lyric, discussion and narrative methods, then make a general statement, then select the highlights of life to reflect life from different angles, and finally make a general statement, or lyric or discussion. This will be more complete.
What is composition? Thousands of troops, two armies against each other; The Chu River and the Han Dynasty were at odds.
Among thousands of troops, you shoulder the same mission and have different stunts; You are fast and slow, making mistakes and fighting on the battlefield in blood shed ... You are a nobody, wandering slowly on the ridge, dreaming of serving your country one day.
Helpless, your slow temper determines that you can't be a general. During the Chu-Han period, you could only listen to the command of the "general", take it one step at a time, and always be on guard against being trampled and bombarded.
What can we do? Because you are slow! However, you have realized that "unity is power" in "slowness". When you step across the Chu River and get together, horses and cannons can only stare blankly.
"Go to the land with poor water, and then sit and watch Yun Qi". Remember, in the life-and-death battlefield, you can walk at such a leisurely pace, laugh at your life and not take the usual road.
What about slow? You have experienced the wonderful life in "slowness", and generate has a spark of wisdom.
You were born with soft blood and a sense of integrity.
Speed is your life, and you appreciate the true meaning of life in "fast".
When the two armies are at war, you always take the lead. You took the lead and rushed into the enemy camp, shouting "General!" Yes, it's convenient to surrender at your feet at once.
However, there are too many temptations in this world. Perhaps the easy victory is the encirclement designed by the enemy generals for you, and you believe too much in your "quickness" and will eventually put you in jail.
Perhaps, you should calmly analyze the situation, wait for the time to be ripe, and then you will wait for an opportunity to surprise and win the final victory.
Your strengths may become your achilles' heel, and when you understand the truth of "haste makes waste", you may be able to have a unique life that combines static and dynamic, bathing in the sunshine of life in the fast and slow rhythm.
Whether you are a pawn or a car, whether you are fast or slow, while shouldering an important mission, you should have the leisure of "watching flowers bloom and fall in front of the court and looking up at clouds and smoke" and adjust your different life in the fast and slow pace.
Country morning runners used to live in the country.
He goes running every morning.
On the country road, farmers, old cows and tractors are moving slowly in the morning light.
Morning runners aim at these and surpass them one by one. Morning runners enjoy scoring goals every day.
City morning runners are exhausted now.
He moved to the city.
Facing a busy elevated road, the car passed by him and left.
Morning runners are running on the road, flustered and sleepwalking.
In the city, morning runners are surpassed every day.
Master Tai Chi, who plays Tai Chi, is dressed in white and standing on the green grass.
At the corner of the viaduct, the morning runner stared at it from a distance.
The old man concentrates on gathering gas, one stroke and one style, and lifts weights as easily as possible.
The car turning on the viaduct is not far from the old man, whistling and circling down.
The green grass where the old man is located is like the center of a whirlpool, calm and unusually peaceful.
At the corner of the viaduct, the morning runner stopped.
The old man told the story of Ruth: "There was a man who was very afraid of his own shadow.
He keeps running every day, but no matter how fast he runs, his shadow is always behind him.
Before long, he was exhausted.
Actually, it's easy to get rid of your own shadow.
"The old man said slowly," grab a green bud and sit down and have a rest.
"The morning runner listened and seemed to understand something.
Symphony of Fast and Slow Fast and Slow are two symphonies with different rhythms. Fast is passionate and exciting. Slow is smooth, soothing and refreshing.
It is these two symphonies with different styles that interweave a magnificent movement in human life.
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Write an argumentative essay with the horizontal structure of "time", cherish time and advise you not to cherish gold clothes and to cherish youth; An inch of time is worth an inch of gold, but an inch of gold can't buy an inch of time ... time is precious to everyone, so we should cherish it.
Life is short, to cherish time is to cherish life. Only in this short life can we do more meaningful things and better reflect the value of life, so cherishing time is of great significance to realize the value of life.
We often say that we should cherish time, but there is only so much time. How should we cherish time? First of all, if we cherish time, we should improve our efficiency. If we improve efficiency, we will save a lot of time.
Take myself as an example. In the past, I always spent an hour or two reciting the text. When reciting the text, I feel that both of them can be used at once, which is beautiful.
But now in the third grade, the study time is getting tighter and tighter, and there are more and more homework. If you spend another hour or two reciting the text, you will have to stay up late to do your homework.
So I shortened the time to recite the text, recited it wholeheartedly, and finished it in less than half an hour. I found that my study efficiency was very low.
How much time I have to waste in the long run! Secondly, cherish time, make rational use of time and make better use of trivial time.
Lu Xun said: "Time is like water in a sponge. If you squeeze it, it will always be there.
""There is no genius. I just spend all other people's coffee time writing. "
Therefore, people who really know how to arrange time and make rational use of trivial time are those who really cherish time! If you want to realize the value of life, then cherish time! We are students of 2 1 century, are we not as good as the ancients? We have ideals and confidence, we should study hard scientific and cultural knowledge, and we should cherish time, because time is the material that constitutes a person's life.
The ancients had a poem: "When people are studying, they don't know whether they are diligent or not, and they regret it later.
Poems such as "Young people don't work hard, but the old ones are sad" are warning people that life is limited, so we must cherish time like gold, never lose precious light and shade, but learn more while young and promising, and save more positive energy for our future.
What are the basic forms of composition structure? 1. vertical type, that is, the article level is mainly expanded vertically.
(1) in chronological order, (2) in the order of the author's emotional development, and (3) in-depth demonstration step by step. (2) Horizontal, that is, the level of the article is mainly developed in horizontal form.
(1) takes space as the order; (2) Grading according to the classification of material properties; (3) Combination, that is, vertical and horizontal, means that the level of the article is developed in the form of vertical and horizontal combination; (4) the huge ultimate force and tension of structural treatment. ...
What are the structural forms of a work? 1. Sequential narration refers to the narration according to the sequence of events.
This is one of the most commonly used and basic narrative methods, which can start and end clearly, and people in the event can also explain clearly, and the cause and effect naturally change.
The context of the event is clear and the reader can see it at a glance.
In chronological order, that is, according to the sequence of events' occurrence, development and ending, in the narration of many events, the first one appears first, and the second one appears later, and everything is in the order of events' occurrence and development.
Second, flashback refers to using the end of an event or a wonderful fragment at the beginning of an article, and then writing it according to the occurrence and development of the event. This is called flashback.
Flashback can cause suspense, make writing ups and downs, affect readers' tracing to the source, and have a strong attraction to reading.
Third, narrative, also known as plain narrative, is a kind of parallel narrative or cross narrative, which refers to the narrative of two or more things at the same time and in different places, that is, the method of "letting a hundred flowers blossom, each showing a branch" often used in popular novels. Narrative can make complex things clear, highlight the atmosphere, and cause the multi-line interleaving of the article, which has a three-dimensional effect.
4. Interpolation refers to interrupting the original narrative due to special requirements, inserting central events or content related to the theme, and continuing the original narrative after the end. There are many interpolation methods, such as "retrospective narration", such as recalling the past; There is a so-called "supplementary narrative", such as making necessary supplements and explanations to relevant people or things; There is a so-called "reverse narrative", such as tracing the relevant content from today to the present, from near to far.
If you want to innovate the topic composition, you must call a variety of narrative methods.
In addition to the above narrative methods, the article can also be divided into chronological order, spatial order, logical order and stream of consciousness order.
However, no matter what narrative method is used, its main purpose is to make the narrative coherent and distinct.
In order to combine the selected materials into an organic and unified composition in the examination room, it is necessary to break the traditional material organization form and attract examiners in a novel and ingenious form, so as to win surprises and impress new people.
Unique forms of expression can make the carefully packaged senior high school entrance examination composition full of aura and charm.
Looking at the perfect composition of the senior high school entrance examination in recent years, it provides many fresh and natural structural forms for our composition: 1, and the story is newly edited and continued.
For example, in the 2006 Henan volume, a candidate took the fairy tale style as the topic, gave full play to the advantages of fairy tale style, transcended time and space restrictions, expanded rich associations, flapped his imagination wings, flew freely in heaven and earth, and expressed the author's own thoughts with the help of answers and comments from human beings and gods.
In 2004, the title of Shanxi Volume was Commitment. One examinee boldly interpreted the story of Journey to the West with the title of "Eight quit and Wukong doing business", which was novel and unique.
There are also candidates in Jiangxi who continue to write stories based on Hu Shi's biography of Mr. Almost, which is intriguing.
2. Various reports.
In 2004, the title of the Guangdong Paper was "Sound", and one examinee took "Experimental Report on Laughter" as the title. The full text shows the author's good conception talent from the aspects of experimental time, experimental instruments, experimental steps, experimental phenomena, experimental conclusions, structural arrangement or genre of drug treatment after the experiment.
The whole composition "Patient Wu's Physical Examination Report" imitates surnames with homophonic puns, and describes various manifestations and characteristics of "insincerity" from four aspects: seeing a doctor, taking pulse, fluoroscopy and blood sample collection. It is completely written in the form of a doctor's physical examination report.
There are also investigation reports, study reports, job search reports and other forms.
3. Geometry problem solving formula.
In 2004, Shaanxi's perfect composition "Commitment is Gold" was inspired by solving math problems. It creatively uses the structural form of "proving geometric problems", writes in the format of "known", "verified", "proved" and "conclusion", and skillfully combines mathematical proof with composition, making the structure novel and refined, which is refreshing.
4. diary style.
Around a theme, show the whole process of the event with a clear concept of time.
Diary is a true reflection of a person's mind, so this style can not only attract readers and enhance the sense of reality, but also avoid simple narrative forms in writing.
In 2006, Henan got full marks in the composition "I formed a good habit". The full text consists of five diaries and is a complete story. It describes the whole process from hating keeping a diary to liking keeping a diary and forming a good habit of keeping a diary.
5. Parts are connected in series.
Just like the film shooting method, the material of the article around the theme will be captured in many directions or even at will, so that the whole event will be isolated, from one-sided to comprehensive, forming a whole.
Each shot is marked with a subtitle or serial number, which can give people a clear and organized feeling and avoid monotonous transition.
In 2006, a candidate in Changsha focused on Tian, and combined their shots with the theme of "Passing Love-Touching China's Memories", from which we can see the young author's innovative ability.
There is also a perfect composition in Shanxi, with the subheadings of "Flowers in Spring", "Green Grass in Summer", "Fruitful Fruits in Autumn" and "Silver in White-Winter". According to the order of the four seasons, it is written that I have learned to compete from it, and I have hope. I only have to pay, not forgetting the history and cherishing the present, and the structure is rigorous.
Similar to this form, there are scattered points, subtitles, lens combinations and other forms.
6. Correspondence.
In 2006, Yiyang volume was titled "Gratitude", and one examinee wrote my feelings in the form of letters with the title of "Thank you letter from the angel of love", which was sincere and sincere.
In 2004, a candidate in Hangzhou wrote a psychological confession to others in the form of letters from two places (a letter from student Xiao Li to teacher Ma and a letter from teacher Ma to student Xiao Li), which was novel in style and ingenious in structure.
This form is easy to express emotions, appears cordial and true, and is easy to impress readers.
7 poetry combination.
The combination of poetry and prose is to add not too many poems before or after the article to form a perfect combination of poetry and prose.
The point of attention in this form is: the number of lines in the poem should not be too many, and it is best to be within ten lines.
In addition, the content of the poem should be consistent with the content of the article, and the form of the article should be made. ...
I asked God to help me design two horizontal and parallel composition outlines, and I decided to make my own decision now. Decades later, I left my hometown. Although I have returned to Zhejiang, that man has moved away because of the times. I am afraid that things will change, so I will never see my hometown again.
I can't help but think of a poem: if you want to send colorful stationery and rulers, you will know where it is.
Think of my heart at this moment, that's all.
How about Hongyan? If it's good, you can pass a book for me, wait for me and say: years are quiet, I wish you good.
In the narrative composition with horizontal structure, the general feature of "horizontal structure method" is to fully express characters, describe events, describe scenery and express feelings from multiple angles by using the parallel structure of "plates".
? The composition of the senior high school entrance examination adopts the "horizontal structure method". The biggest feature is that the text of the composition is clear and the main content of the article is clear at a glance. And because not many people use it, the marking teacher will give enough appreciation.
? It is very important to master several methods of "combination" by using the conception routine of horizontal combination.
The most important thing is to learn how to use subtitles in writing and connect several "blocks" in the text with subtitles.
The main ways of subtitle application are: 1. Diary title, written in the form of diary link; ? 2. Letterhead, written in paragraphs A, B, C and D; ? 3. Word titles, which consist of paragraphs derived from words such as spring, summer, autumn and winter, happiness, anger, sadness and joy; ? 4. Digital title type, in which paragraphs are marked with numbers such as (1), (2), (3) and (4); ? 5. Quote quotations and use sentences in poetry or prose as subtitles for several short stories; ? 6. Summarize the plot and use words such as "prologue", "expansion", "knot *" and "epilogue" at the beginning of the paragraph; ? 7. Summarize the content, such as "She came", "She cried" and "She smiled"; ? 8. Leaving a blank line means that there is naturally a blank line between paragraphs, and several paragraphs are juxtaposed, which is particularly eye-catching.
? Now look at the following model essay: Looking back on life silhouette? Sleeping bells? In the early morning, I vaguely heard the sound of an alarm clock in a misty dream, so I woke up suddenly and sat up with a stumble.
Rub your eyes, open the sixth book and recite English.
After class, I memorized the vocabulary and the irregular verb list.
It was so quiet around, only my gentle endorsement.
? It's not light yet.
I think today's review is really efficient. I will continue to recite it with great interest.
Suddenly a clear and loud alarm clock startled me. Turn around, it's just six o'clock, it's time to get up! ? Whose alarm clock woke me up early, which gave me more time to review.
I can't help saying to myself: If Mo Daojun leaves early, there will be more early pedestrians.
? Snoring in exam class? The third class in the morning is math.
Teacher Zhang came, with a big stack of paper in his hand.
We are sensitive to know that it is another exam class, so there is a sigh in the classroom.
? Three big papers have been published, and the students are working hard. The classroom is very quiet, and the students are constantly turning over the papers and making a slight noise.
? Teacher Zhang is patrolling the classroom, watching while walking.
Almost at the same time, he and his classmates heard a very rare sound in class-snoring.
Looking inside, I saw Li Ping's head tilted on the math paper and slept soundly and sweetly.
The teacher went over and stared at him for a long time, and finally woke him up. Then the teacher said loudly, "You are sleeping at a higher and higher level. I don't know who made you work so hard! " ? Applause at night self-study Monday's evening self-study belongs to the Chinese teacher. Teacher Xiao came in with a smile.
He said mysteriously, "Tonight, I ask you to write your graduation speech and give you free time.
"? Applause sounded, and Mr. Xiao booed everywhere. Some people stick out their tongues, some people laugh, and the applause soon stops.
Everyone is very excited. Thank you very much for your understanding, which adds a touch of youth to our monotonous review life.
? However, it is a bit bad for him to ask questions in the next self-study: "If the composition of the senior high school entrance examination involves graduation speech, then our class is very valuable.
"? This is an article with a horizontal structure. The author uses the method of "lens silhouette" to combine three short stories that are juxtaposed and internally related, reflecting the life of book review from different angles.
Each "shot" is guided by different subtitles to highlight its central content.
The lens seems a little scattered, but it is actually strung together by "reviewing life"
? Writing such an article can also be conceived by "total silhouette method", that is, first choose lyric, discussion and narrative methods, then make a general statement, then select the highlights of life to reflect life from different angles, and finally make a general statement, or lyric or discussion.
This will be more complete.
What are the basic forms of article structure? 1. Vertical, that is, the article level is mainly developed in vertical form.
(1) in chronological order, (2) in the order of the author's emotional development, and (3) in-depth demonstration step by step. (2) Horizontal, that is, the level of the article is mainly developed in horizontal form.
(1) takes space as the order; (2) Grading according to the classification of material properties; (3) Combination, that is, vertical and horizontal, means that the level of the article is developed in the form of vertical and horizontal combination; (4) the huge ultimate force and tension of structural treatment.
What is the structure of the article? What article? The basic form of the article structure is 1. Vertical, that is, the article level is mainly developed in vertical form.
(1) in chronological order, (2) in the order of the author's emotional development, and (3) in-depth demonstration step by step. (2) Horizontal, that is, the level of the article is mainly developed in horizontal form.
(1) takes space as the order; (2) Grading according to the classification of material properties; (3) Combination, that is, vertical and horizontal, means that the level of the article is developed in the form of vertical and horizontal combination; (4) the huge ultimate force and tension of structural treatment.
Article structure: 1. Vertical, that is, the article level is mainly developed in vertical form.
(1) in chronological order, (2) in the order of the author's emotional development, and (3) in-depth demonstration step by step. (2) Horizontal, that is, the level of the article is mainly developed in horizontal form.
① In order of space; ② Grading according to the classification of material properties; 3. Combination, that is, vertical and horizontal, means that the level of the article is developed in the form of vertical and horizontal combination. I hope it will help you.
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