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How to cut into the key points at the beginning and how to end the composition?
Beginning skills of composition

1, quoting famous sayings and sentences

(1) Ask what the world is and teach people life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.

Shi said, "Love is a tool. ..... "("What is love in the world ")

In a medieval church, a saint began his speech: "I became a saint because I saw through money. What belongs to me belongs to everyone." Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine."

(Saints and Thieves)

Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Spin this kaleidoscope")

2. Clever use of letter format

(1) Dear Grandpa Confucius:

Hello! I am your ordinary descendant. Thousands of years later, I still dare to write to bother you, not only to pay tribute to you, but also to have some difficult problems waiting for your advice. (A letter to Confucius)

(2) Damn standard answer:

Seeing you, I am really filled with indignation. Therefore, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to condemn you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear a "standard" hat. You know, because of the word "mark", countless tragedies have happened. Here are your three main accusations: ... (A letter with a standard answer)

3. Borrow Zhang Hui's novel brushwork.

1 "It is said that the general trend of the world will be combined for a long time, and it will be combined for a long time." At the beginning, the era of Wei, Shu and Wu Dingli no longer existed. In The River of No Return, the waves washed away the heroes of the past. And the former Shu heirs have also become "happy without thinking about Shu", and the world has become Sima's world. ("Heroes of the Three Kingdoms")

(2) water margin Juyitang, now is brightly lit, buzzing. One hundred people and eight people are gathered here, and everyone is quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to select heroes who fight tigers recently. It's great to be awarded this honorary title. Whoever is awarded can sit in the second place in the Water Margin. That's why all the heroes gather here and argue endlessly. ("Who is the hero who fights the tiger")

4. Clever use of rhetoric

Starting with rhetoric, it is easy to express the author's feelings and arouse readers' interest in reading. For example, in 2002, the beginning of "Choice of Heart" wrote: "If you choose wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky; If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest. And my choice is a cage. " Starting with a parallelism sentence, the sentence pattern is neat, the language is sonorous, and the contrast is formed before and after, which not only points out the topic but also sets suspense to promote people's appreciation. In addition, the article "Honesty-Forever Green Card" written in 200 1 College Entrance Examination begins: "Honesty is like the first sunshine in spring, which is desirable; Such as a sweet watermelon in summer, contained in the mouth, sweet in the heart; For example, the autumn wind sent a fiery maple leaf from a distance, which attracted infinite attention; Such as snowflakes flying in winter, cover the wheat fields with thick quilts. " At first, metaphor and parallelism were used to describe the value and significance of honesty and express the desire for honesty.

5. Lyric method.

That is to say, pour out your true feelings directly at the beginning of the article to point out the main idea of the article. There are three common lyric ways: hypothetical lyric, comparative lyric and comparative lyric. For example, the 200 1 college entrance examination masterpiece "Carrying a Backpack of Honesty" wrote at the beginning: "If life is a Mercedes-Benz train, then honesty is an indispensable wheel; If life is a long-distance ship, then honesty is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you all your life. " The author uses metaphor and contrast to illustrate the importance of honesty from comparison. Another example is the beginning of the excellent composition "The Steps of Choice" in the 2002 college entrance examination: "What suddenly crossed my mind and left an instant glory? What is it, quietly watering the heart and cultivating sweet memories? What gently taps the soul and brings eternal beauty? What makes your heart, my heart and his heart play that magnificent movement together? One by one is a shocking choice, a difficult and beautiful choice again and again, a song of one's own choice ... "The four parallel questions at the beginning cause people to think deeply, expressing the value and significance of choice to life, thus expressing the author's feelings.

Step 6 cut to the chase.

Because this kind of opening is straightforward, it can go straight to the subject, enter the scene described by the writer at once, or grasp the essence of the discussion at once, so it is suitable for many styles. For example, the excellent composition "Choosing the Chinese Soul" in the 2002 college entrance examination begins with "Looking through the past history and looking for the choice of the soul without regrets", and the subtitle is: 1, the choice of heroes. 2. The king's choice. 3. Choice of scientists. In this way, a few words are directly introduced below. Another example is the excellent composition "Wisdom and Thought-My Choice" written at the beginning of the college entrance examination in 2002: "After finishing middle school and receiving the enrollment brochures of three universities, I must make a sacred choice." The author is straightforward and concise, and introduces the following with a general introduction, giving a general introduction on how to choose between "Fortune University", "Power University" and "Wisdom University".

7. Descriptive method.

Descriptive method is to use some rhetorical devices or some descriptive devices to describe the scenery, render the atmosphere, contrast the atmosphere, and pave the way for the beginning of the people or things behind. This method is particularly effective for narratives, essays and argumentations. For example, the article "The Choice of Zhaojun", an excellent composition in the 2002 college entrance examination, begins with the following words: "Deep walls, bright-eyed ladies-in-waiting, silent butterflies, and lazy dressing, like the wheels of the court, slowly run over Zhaojun's heart." At the beginning of the article, four formal phrases are used to describe the characteristics of the characters, including neat form, elegant words and modifiers. The image accurately reveals the personality characteristics of the characters, and renders and contrasts Zhao Jun's wise spiritual choice below, which makes the initial description and the events in the article form a good contrast. Another example is the ethnic composition of 1997. Someone wrote in the article "White Clouds, Water Drops": "There is a white cloud floating in the blue sky, and there are small water drops in the white cloud. Who let the white clouds float high? It is those small water droplets, you hold me, I hold you, and jointly create that freedom and elegance. " The article begins with a metaphor, personifying each other and asking questions. This passage is very poetic. For the following metaphor, our society is a white cloud, and every member is a molecule in the white cloud, which inspires us to create a beautiful environment together.

8. Take the title method.

That is, the beginning of the article is reasonably imagined and extended along the topic materials and the ideas provided by the topic. This kind of undertaking can continue from the end of the topic background, or it can be intercepted from the raw materials. For example, 200 1' s excellent composition "Honest Interview" wrote at the beginning: "It's so boring. Honesty has always been annoying, so I sigh from time to time. Why did you abandon me? Is it useless for me to follow the times? No, I'm going to find my good friends and let them judge! " Subsequently, the article compiled the story of "sincerity" visiting "money", revealing that there are a lot of money transactions and power and money transactions in real life, and even "literary and money transactions" have appeared in civilized and pure cultural places. The ingenious design at the beginning gives a scientific and detailed introduction to the following story.

9. Character appearance method.

When writing a narrative, in order to attract readers, sometimes close-ups can be used to let the characters appear themselves, so as to get a sneak peek before the characters start work and attract readers' attention. For example, the excellent college entrance examination of 200 1 begins with "Can you abandon me-honest self-report": "My name is sincerity, and I don't cheat. Living with the universe depends on the human heart. It can be traced back to ancient times and can shine today. It can help diplomatic relations and get close to friends and friends. " At the beginning of the article, I introduce myself, explain my surname, background and unique personality, narrow the distance between the author and the reader, express my feelings through white characters, and point out the main idea of the article.

10, clever use of fables

Gong Yu's family has lived here for generations, and Wangwu Mountain and Taihang Mountain at the entrance stand in the way. Life is pathetic! It seems isolated here. What's new in this city has long been old news. This life really needs to change. The foolish old man thought, I have to find a way to move Taihang Mountain and Wu Wang. (The Story of New Gong Yu and Zhizuo)

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1 1, skillfully using inscriptions to reveal the theme

(1) there is no tree, but there can be grass green; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great!

Notes before the text of a book or after the title of an article.

Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl and gentle dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as China's future Duncan ... but it's all over, and fate will keep her in a wheelchair forever. Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times, she dreamed that she put on glass shoes and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the cold autumn wind. ("Star Night Talk")

If you lose money, you only lose a small part; If you lose your health, you only lose a small part; If you lose your integrity, you are almost bankrupt.

Notes before the text of a book or after the title of an article.

What is "honesty"? So is honesty and trustworthiness. Throughout history, the word "sincerity" has soaked many people's blood and tears. Who is praising the emperor's new clothes? )

12, clever use of problem-solving forms

Once, a friend gave me a unique question: which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best?

A. A piece of pure white feather falls leisurely in the shining golden sunshine.

B. A petal falls red and floats in the quiet and deep pool water.

C. a meteor, in the deep blue sky, is fleeting.

D. A drop of crystal dew slipped quietly on the tip of the green grass.

After reading this question, I suddenly froze. The ever-changing nature, the rising sun, the ebb and flow of the tide, how many beautiful scenery is exciting and fascinating. ..... (infinite possibilities, infinite beauty)

13, skillfully using celebrity questions and answers

Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is colorful.

Nietzsche thought: "The happiest person is one who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms and stones together, but not disgusting." The stoics believe that "having unlimited wealth and power and being able to handle things calmly is the real happiness." ("The answers are colorful")

Archimedes said, "Give me a fulcrum and I can pry the earth up!" "

I said, "Give me a fulcrum, and I can support my soul!" " ("Give the soul a fulcrum")

14, skillfully using poetry to express poetry

Writing ending skills

If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.

1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the end fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, which is concise, lively and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law". As long as you have passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary thinking development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.

2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool." Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" "

3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are." At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "

4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."

5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings. The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the examinee's usual solid training, in the examinee's improvisation and in the examinee's "extra-poetic merit".