1. First of all, we should pay attention to addressing the teacher politely, such as "Hello, Miss Wang, this is the first draft of my thesis, please have a look", and it is best to use "you" to show respect for the tutor;

2, the content should be concise, because there are many students in the tutor, you should use short words to let the tutor understand your intentions and personal information;

Finally, remember to thank the teacher and confirm the next review plan. When writing a paper, we should send the first draft to the tutor, who will give us some guidance.