Advantages: 1 Bai Liusu's despair is well written. She completely regards Fan Liuyuan as a tool to get out of trouble. Just like Fan Liuyuan's words, you are a very traditional woman. Traditional Bai Liusu can only think of trapping Fan Liuyuan with traditional marriage and taking her out of her misery. It can be said that for this purpose, she threw caution to the wind (there are specific ways in the article).

2. The description of the supporting role is in place. At first, it was Bai Liusu's family's dislike of Bai Liusu that made people really understand why Bai Liusu didn't love Fan Liuyuan deeply, but desperately wanted to catch him. This is also a foreshadowing.

Judging from the whole story, the most powerful thing is that the language is implicit and tasteful. Many languages appear repeatedly, such as the moon. You are a traditional woman. Zhang Ailing is good at writing about the moon, but she is not reunited, just like the characters in the text and herself.

Disadvantages: 1 The progress of the article is too fast. Personally, I think I can write a little longer, but the short one is more reverie, and many words need not be made clear. Just like when I first started watching The Golden Lock, I felt this way. I think it's too fast, although it's good. But after reading bad karma Woman, I still agree with The Golden Lock. See what you think.

2. The language is too intense. Most of Zhang's novels have this tendency. For example, the heroine in Fragments of Aquilaria Resinatum directly said "I love him", which shocked me at that time, but I naturally listed it as Zhang's language feature after watching it too much. This may also be the reason why she was almost included in Zhou Shoujuan's side.