In normal study, work and life, everyone will inevitably come into contact with comments, which can inspire the evaluated object to move forward to a higher goal and achieve a leap on the original basis. Then what kind of comments are good? The following are my comments collected by the undergraduate thesis supervisor for your reference, hoping to help friends in need.
Instructor's comments on undergraduate graduation thesis 1 Instructor's comments should be targeted and convincing. The following are the comments of the supervisor of undergraduate thesis, hoping to help you.
1, xxX students can strictly abide by and implement the company's rules and regulations during their internship in xX factory of xx Group, and can actively cooperate with colleagues in related neighboring stations to coordinate and complete various production tasks. In the post of packaging material preparation, xx students can explore better working methods to improve efficiency and win the first place in the workshop material preparation competition. In the study of other stations, xx students also showed a positive attitude, became a qualified generalist through study, and won unanimous praise from leaders and colleagues in team life.
2. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
3. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
4. The structure of the full text is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the viewpoints are expressed accurately, the language is fluent, the argumentation method is reasonable, the references meet the theme requirements, the theme and content meet the professional requirements, and some of them are closely related to this part, but individual quotations are not marked, and there are not many truly innovative contents, and individual concepts are vague, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
5. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the English writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also sharp, the paper is clear and reasonable, and the viewpoint is unique, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
6. During the internship, the student worked hard, was able to consult modestly, was good at thinking, and drew inferences from others. Love students, pay special attention to children with poor grades and behavioral deviations in the class, patiently make up lessons for them, give affirmation and encouragement, and win the love of students. Good teaching quality, clear teaching objectives, neat writing on the blackboard, clear language, timely adjustment of teaching methods, and certain organizational ability. Pay attention to the compilation and reflection of teaching plans and carefully correct homework. I believe that in the future work, I will pay more attention to the pertinence of lesson preparation (lesson preparation materials and students), the organic regulation of the classroom and the effective breakthrough of difficulties, so that I can grow faster.
7. Pass the exam: the topic of the paper meets the professional training objectives, and can basically achieve the comprehensive training objectives, with less difficulty and less workload. The theme of the paper is general. Students' ability to consult documents is poor, and they can't collect information about the examination system comprehensively. In the process of writing, his ability to comprehensively apply the knowledge of examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of examination system is poor. The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion. The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme. The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.
8. The topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guiding significance). The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, I can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and I have a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
9. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
10, research on xxx. It can provide reference for solving xxx- problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
1 1. This student paper discusses the importance of the role of English teachers by analyzing the nature and characteristics of English teaching. By comparing the traditional teaching mode with the modern teaching mode in China, this paper probes into the roles and qualities that teachers should have under the new teaching mode. The article has clear arguments, distinct levels and rigorous structure.
12, Wang Li's paper "Design of Radio Remote Control System" successfully completed the design tasks specified in the task book. This paper designs a wireless remote control system, including the design of transmitting circuit and receiving circuit, and realizes the remote control function. In addition to reading all the reference materials designated by the tutor, students can also read some self-selected materials, put forward a more reasonable implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation on time as required, with good translation quality. The correct analysis of the research questions shows that the author has a good grasp of relevant basic theories and professional knowledge, and the writing of the thesis is standardized, which meets the requirements of dissertation defense. Allow students to participate in thesis defense.
13, good: the topic of this paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance). The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect information about the examination system. He can comprehensively apply the knowledge of the examination system, comprehensively analyze the problems existing in the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is relatively complete, the hierarchical structure is scientific, the main points are prominent, and the logical relationship is clear, but it lacks personal opinions. The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; No plagiarism was found.
14, Chinese: The topic of the thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is average. The topic selection has academic research (reference) value (practical guiding significance). The student's ability to consult documents is average, and he can collect information about the examination system. In the process of writing, he can basically use the knowledge of the examination system and comprehensively analyze the problems of the examination system, and his ability to comprehensively use knowledge is average. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is basically complete, the hierarchical structure is general, and the main points are focused on certain logic, but there is a lack of personal opinions. The topics are basically the same, and the arguments are more prominent. Discussion can better serve the argument. The language expression is general, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Referring to some documents, its timeliness is general; No obvious plagiarism was found.
On the basis of defining the concept of visual culture, this paper probes into the relationship between educational technology and visual culture. On this basis, this paper discusses the concrete embodiment of visual culture in the development of multimedia courseware teaching software for instructional design from three aspects. The article has reasonable structure, clear thinking, distinct views and novel perspectives. When this article embodies visual culture in educational technology, we can combine multimedia courseware with teaching software development, and then embody visual culture in video production in website construction, and the article will be more full and perfect.
16, Comments: The selected topic in this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is comprehensively used to solve problems. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
17, the paper has clear ideas and fluent sentences. Be able to investigate the existing problems of * * * well. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity with the content of the paper. Clear thinking, clear hierarchy and reasonable logical structure. The viewpoint is expressed accurately. The research principles are appropriate. In the process of demonstration, we can effectively combine professional principles with the topics to be studied. The opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
18, this paper studies the official accountability system, which can provide reference for solving the problems existing in the official accountability system in China. In the structure of the full text, firstly, the basic principle of the official accountability system is analyzed, then the problems existing in the official accountability system in China are deeply analyzed, and finally, effective suggestions are put forward for the previous problems. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
19, the topic selection is more contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
The tutor's comment on the undergraduate thesis is 2 1. The topic selection is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoints are basically accurate and the ideas are basically clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of administrative management major, and there are also many related materials consulted. However, the characteristics of administrative management specialty are not fully reflected, and there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. The topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training goal of administrative management specialty, and can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
3. The research content is realistic and operable. The topic is a hot social issue with a rigorous logical structure. The views are clearly expressed and the discussion is comprehensive. This language is concise and easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, the principle of professional knowledge can also be well combined with practical problems. But arguments are not enough. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
4. The topic is contemporary and realistic. The structure of the full text is reasonable. The expression of views is basically accurate. The full text closely follows the requirements of the administrative management specialty and fully embodies the characteristics of the administrative management specialty. Check out more related information. But the main deficiency is that there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
5. The author discusses the role orientation of teachers in student-centered oral English teaching. The topic selection has strong practical significance, the argument is correct, the argument is conclusive, the discussion is clear, and the paper meets the requirements of the specification. Throughout the design and writing of the thesis, the author's attitude towards academics is extremely rigorous and serious.
6. This student paper discusses the importance of English teachers' role by analyzing the essence and characteristics of English teaching. By comparing the traditional teaching mode with the modern teaching mode in China, this paper probes into the roles and qualities that teachers should have under the new teaching mode. The article has clear arguments, distinct levels and rigorous structure.
7. The topic of the paper is basically the same as the content of the paper, with complete structure and fluent language. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tries to find a connection between characters in the novels of lev tolstoy and Cao Yu. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.
8. This paper discusses the potential obstacles in cross-cultural communication and puts forward a series of suggestions to improve the communication effect. The author can master the basic theory and think about cross-cultural communication. The full text has reasonable structure, clear organization and fluent language expression. But generally speaking, the research is not deep enough, the analysis is abstract, and the demonstration and examples are not sufficient.
9. Wang Rui's thesis "Electronic Password Lock Based on FPGA Technology" has completed the research (design) task specified in the task book. Using EDA technology, the digital password lock is designed by top-down design method. The overall structure, main functions, design flow, module division and VHDL source program of each module of the digital password lock are described, and the simulation results of digital password lock design are given. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, the expected requirements are met, and the requirements for the defense of bachelor's degree thesis are met.
10, Li Sijing's paper "Frequency Modulation Circuit and Its Design" has successfully completed the design tasks specified in the task book. In this paper, a small wireless FM stereo system based on BA 1404 and CXA 1238 is designed by using pilot FM stereo transmitting and receiving technology and high-performance "special transmitting and receiving integrated circuit". In addition to reading all the reference materials and documents designated by the instructor, students can also read more self-selected materials, better understand the tasks of the project, and put forward the implementation plan of the opening report. The translation of foreign language materials can be successfully completed, and the research problems are deeply analyzed, which shows that the author has a good grasp of relevant basic theories and professional knowledge, and the writing of the thesis is standardized, which meets the requirements of dissertation defense.
1 1. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the xxx writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, with unique views, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
12. This article has a novel idea. Based on the clue of X, this paper comprehensively analyzes the problems and reasons of-in combination with local standards. And put forward the countermeasures to solve the existing problems. Content argumentation also teaches scientific rationality. The full text fully embodies the characteristics of administrative management specialty and the format is standardized. But innovation is not enough.
13, the topic is contemporary and realistic, the structure of the full text is reasonable, the viewpoints are basically accurate, and the ideas are basically clear. The content of the full text is basically written according to the training requirements of the administrative management major, and I have consulted a lot of relevant materials, but it does not fully reflect the characteristics of the administrative management major, and there are not many things that belong to my own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
14, the topic of this paper meets the requirements of the training objectives of administrative management specialty, and it can comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the practical problems of enterprise administration. The writing attitude of the paper is serious and responsible, the content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials meet the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main points are clearly expressed, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. However, the depth of argument is not enough and innovation is insufficient.
15, Wang Li's paper "Design of Radio Remote Control System" successfully completed the design tasks specified in the task book. This paper designs a wireless remote control system, including the design of transmitting circuit and receiving circuit, and realizes the remote control function. In addition to reading all the reference materials and documents designated by the tutor, students can also read some self-selected materials, and put forward a more reasonable implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation on time as required, with good translation quality. The correct analysis of the research questions shows that the author has a good grasp of relevant basic theories and professional knowledge, and the writing of the thesis is standardized, which meets the requirements of dissertation defense. Allow students to participate in thesis defense.
16, Zhao Xia's paper "Website Design for Electronic Information Science and Technology" completed the website design for electronic information science and technology, and completed the overall scheme design, structural design and programming of message board module and news management function module. This design was completed by two students. Zhao Xia is responsible for the design of news management function module, and its development mainly includes the establishment and maintenance of background database and the development of front-end application programs. In addition to reading all the reference materials and documents designated by the tutor, students can also read some self-selected materials, and put forward a more reasonable implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation on time as required, with good translation quality. The writing standard of the thesis meets the requirements of the thesis defense.
17, Cai Lingyun's paper "Design of Digital FM Transmitter" successfully completed the research task specified in the task book. This paper mainly uses digital signal processing (DSP) and direct digital frequency synthesis (DDS) technology to realize the design of digital FM transmitter. This design is completed by two students, who are mainly responsible for the design of digital FM modulation module of digital FM transmitter. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, the expected requirements are met, and the requirements for the defense of bachelor's degree thesis are met.
18, studying xxx as the topic, fully embodying the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for solving administrative problems in China. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and obvious in viewpoint. What can be taught well in the process of argumentation is to combine argumentation with case argumentation. The disadvantage is that some arguments are not convincing.
19, research on xxx. It can provide reference for solving xxx problem. In the structure of the full text, we should first adjust the basic concepts to ask questions, then make an in-depth analysis of the problems, and finally make an analysis of-. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, some of which are closely related to responsibilities, and there are not many contents that really belong to their own innovation. Generally speaking, it meets the requirements of graduation thesis.
20. The topic is in line with the training objectives of the administration major, and it can better comprehensively apply social theory and professional knowledge. The writing attitude of the thesis is serious and responsible. The content of the paper is sufficient, the relevant reference materials are sufficient, and the hierarchical structure is reasonable. The main points are prominent, the logical points are clear, and the language expression is fluent. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
2 1. The topic of this paper conforms to the requirements of administrative management specialty and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full text is reasonable in structure, clear in thinking and correct in viewpoint, which can organically combine the professional knowledge of administrative management with the problems to be analyzed and demonstrated. The materials consulted in the writing process of this paper are not only sufficient but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized and the case demonstration is not enough.
22. Zhang Jiafu's thesis "High Frequency Power Amplifier and Its Design" basically completed the research tasks specified in the task book. This paper introduces the development and application of high frequency power amplifier, and designs a basic and reasonable high frequency power amplifier circuit. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, and the expected requirements are basically met, which meets the requirements of the defense of bachelor's degree thesis.
23. This paper has a novel topic and a unique perspective, which embodies a solid theoretical foundation of human resource management. In particular, the article can demonstrate and analyze the topic in combination with relevant cases, which has certain practical value. Through the review of the paper, we can see that the author spent a lot of time in collecting data and cases, and also put forward some profound views, but there are still shortcomings in the depth of theory and the citation of some arguments. Generally speaking, this is a qualified paper.
24. Zou's paper "LED Dot Matrix Display Based on Single Chip Microcomputer STC 89 C 54" has successfully completed the design tasks specified in the task book. The system takes STC89C54 single chip as the main control chip, and uses temperature measurement, real-time clock chip and data storage technology and software to realize the functions of temperature measurement, time and data power failure without loss, and finally completes the specified tasks well. Students can deeply analyze the research problems, which shows that the author has a good grasp of relevant basic theories and professional knowledge, strong practical ability, standardized paper writing and meets the requirements of thesis defense.
25. Yu Yuqing's thesis "Website construction of high-frequency electronic circuit excellent course" basically completed the design of high-frequency electronic circuit excellent course website. This paper introduces the design idea and production process of the website, and designs the basic prototype of the website. Read the reference materials and documents designated by the instructor, have an implementation plan for the opening report, and complete the foreign language translation as required. The design is basically reasonable, and personal opinions on website construction are put forward. The author has basically mastered the basic theory of website construction. The writing standard of the thesis meets the requirements of the thesis defense.
26. Li Bin's paper "Analysis of 3G Three Standards WCDMA, CDMA20xx and TD-CDMA" successfully completed the research tasks specified in the task book. This paper makes a comprehensive analysis and research on the technical characteristics and development of 3G and its three major licenses. Extract the essence from a large number of documents about 3G, and then make a systematic summary, and the analysis is basically reasonable. The translation of foreign language materials is acceptable, the paper format is basically standardized, the discussion is basically accurate, the expected requirements are met, and the requirements for the defense of bachelor's degree thesis are met.
Attachment: Grading Criteria for Graduation Thesis (Design)
Graduation thesis (design) scores are evaluated according to five grades: excellent, good, medium, passing and failing.
Excellent: Excellent completion of the tasks specified in the graduation thesis (design), correct conclusions or results, clear explanation, certain creative or well-founded new ideas, correct answers to questions in defense, and the thesis reaches the level published in open academic journals.
(90- 100 integral)
Good: Complete the tasks specified in the graduation thesis (design) well, get the correct conclusions or results, and express them clearly.
(80-89 points)
Medium: Completed the tasks specified in the graduation thesis (design) and achieved certain results.
(70-79 points)
Pass: basically completed the tasks specified in the graduation thesis (design), with some defects or mistakes in non-major aspects.
(60-69 points)
Failing: the tasks specified in the graduation thesis (design) have not been completed, and the graduation thesis (design) has major defects or errors.
(below 60 points)
Grading should be objective, comprehensive, accurate and scientific, and excellent results should be evaluated according to standards, and the total number of students should not exceed 5%.
Comments by supervisor of undergraduate graduation thesis 3 1. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the learned knowledge is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The obtained data is reasonable, the conclusion is correct and innovative. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.
2. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, can comprehensively collect information about the examination system, can comprehensively use the knowledge of the examination system in the writing process, can comprehensively analyze the graduation thesis of the examination system, and has a strong ability to comprehensively use knowledge. The length of the article fully conforms to the requirements of the college, with complete content, scientific hierarchical structure, prominent points, clear logical relationship and certain personal opinions. The topics are completely consistent, the arguments are prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; Rich references and strong timeliness; There is no plagiarism.
3. During the three-month graduation project, students can successfully complete the whole graduation project and thesis writing under the strict requirements of teachers. The program can run correctly, the interface is arranged reasonably and the paper meets the requirements. In the whole process of graduation design, I have a correct attitude, study hard and arrange my time reasonably. I can get to the lab on time, and there is no reason to leave early or be late. Can basically complete the corresponding tasks at each stage, but also take the initiative to work overtime, so that time is tight before it is loose. Of course, there are also some shortcomings and areas that need improvement. For example, the knowledge is not wide enough, the ability to deal with problems and apply knowledge needs to be improved, and it is impossible to actively communicate with teachers about the work process. I hope this student will pay attention to these problems in his future work or study and strive for greater improvement and progress.
4. This paper studies XXXX, which has strong practical value and provides a new basis for controlling the distortion of accounting information. The author has clear thinking, rigorous discussion process, reasonable analysis and practical results. The writing of the thesis is standardized and the sentences are fluent, which meets the requirements of academic proofreading of dissertations.
5. The topic of the thesis does not meet the professional requirements of financial management; Students are not serious in the process of writing and can't complete the writing task; The paper is not comprehensive, the research content is too shallow, the structure of the paper is unreasonable, and the logic is not rigorous. The conclusion of the paper is wrong, and the format basically does not meet the requirements of paper writing; There is no innovation at work.
6. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to XXXXX's writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, with unique views, which has certain reference value and can be regarded as a good article.
7. The topic of the thesis is meaningful. On the basis of absorbing academic research results, it is reasonable to have your own experience and put forward your own views. The argument is correct, the material is substantial, the narrative is clear and logical. Clear pronunciation and mellow voice are extremely smooth. Writing conforms to academic norms. In the future, we should further sum up experience, compare music education modes and teach music better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis. Comments: The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is comprehensively used to solve problems. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions. In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent. In the future, we should further sum up experience and compare moral education models, so that moral education can be carried out better. The paper can be submitted on time, and after careful revision, it meets the requirements of undergraduate graduation thesis.
8. This document adopts. } Work hard, observe discipline, and finish the writing task on time; The paper is comprehensive and thorough, with rigorous logic, reasonable structure and close connection between paragraphs. The conclusion of the paper is correct and the format meets the requirements of paper writing; Have a sense of innovation at work and have their own unique opinions.
9. This document adopts. The paper is comprehensive, but the research content is not deep enough. The structure of the paper is reasonable and the logic is rigorous, but the cohesion between paragraphs is not close enough. The conclusion of the paper is basically correct, and the format basically meets the requirements of paper writing; The creative significance of the works is weak, and there is no obvious breakthrough in previous studies.
10, the topic of the paper conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has high academic research (reference) value (great practical guiding significance).
1 1. This document adopts. } work hard and basically finish the writing task on time; The paper is comprehensive, but the content needs to be deepened. The logic is rigorous, the structure is reasonable, the conclusion is correct, and the format basically meets the requirements of paper writing. There is some innovation in the work, but there is little breakthrough in the previous work.
12, the structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the writing standard of XXXXX paper. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done some research, especially Steinbeck's original work. It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the content of the original work. The language is also very sharp, and the paper is clear-headed, well-founded, unique and has certain reference value.
13, the title of the paper is basically consistent with the content of the paper, the structure is complete and the language is fluent. Even the first draft, except that the paragraphs are too thin, there are not many serious grammar or spelling mistakes. The author tried to learn from Lev? Looking for the connection between Tolstoy and a character in Cao Yu's novels. From the content, the author has a further understanding of the original work and collected relevant materials. How to draw my own conclusion through the analysis of the data is the purpose of this paper, and it is at this point that the author has made great efforts.