Let's look at several groups of examples first:
Strengthening the supervision of online media is a prelude to maintaining culture.
Strengthening the supervision of online media is the cornerstone of promoting youth education.
Strengthening the supervision of online media is the starting point for purifying cyberspace.
Stick to the bottom line and weave the network management safety net
Laws and regulations create a safe haven for network management
Innovative guide to building network management firewall
Accelerating agricultural transformation and consolidating the foundation of policy adjustment
Accelerate agricultural transformation and keep the soul of scientific and technological innovation.
Accelerate agricultural transformation and lay a solid foundation for new farmers.
It can be seen that the key to the optimization of sub-arguments lies in the clever use of "good words and clear words". The following is a detailed introduction to the optimization principles and methods.
(A) the principle of optimization
We can't change the original keywords into "good words and bright words", but change the countermeasure logo word "need" and meaningful logo word "benefit" into "benefit" through optimization.
Example:
Before optimization: to protect personal information, it is necessary to strengthen industry self-discipline
After optimization: protecting personal information and strengthening industry self-discipline are the key/core/guarantee.
Before and after comparison, we can find that the key is to change the marker word "need" into optimization, and emphasize the importance of "strengthening industry self-discipline" through "key/core/guarantee", which not only avoids monotony and generality, but also highlights its importance.
(2) Optimization method
First, the optimization of the argument of game classification: it is very important to emphasize the game through sentence optimization.
Method 1: Countermeasures are the key words. ...
Example:
Before optimization: you need to study hard to be admitted to the civil service.
After optimization: studying hard is the only way to get into the civil service.
Method 2: The first half of the sentence is the countermeasure, and the second half is the meaning of the countermeasure.
Example:
Before optimization: it takes effort to promote the growth of young people.
After optimization: strive to make life more valuable.
Second, the optimization of meaning classification argument: avoid falling into stereotypes through sentence optimization.
Method 1: antithesis
Example:
Before optimization: simple administration and decentralization are conducive to stimulating market vitality.
After optimization: strengthen decentralization and stimulate market vitality.
Method 2: Use the sentence pattern "... yes/can/can/let ..." skillfully.
Example:
Before optimization: simple administration and decentralization are conducive to stimulating market vitality.
After optimization: decentralization is the key to stimulate market vitality.
Simple administration and decentralization make the market more dynamic.
Third, word optimization.
One word:
Establish the foundation of …, cast the soul of …, solidify the foundation of …, open the road of …, use the sword of …, light the lamp of …, and celebrate the rhyme of ….
Two words:
Fundamentality, foundation, key, guarantee, means, purpose, premise, strength, soul, soul, wings, flesh and blood, spine, engine, course, medicine, lighthouse, coordinates, seeds, roots, fruits, tip, sword, spindle, center of gravity. ...
Three words:
Ruzi Niu, Pioneer Niu, Lao Niu, driving force, new engine, focus, fixed satellite, ballast stone, incubator, balancer, protector, umbrella, avoiding long-term war, guerrilla warfare, vanguard, leader, navigation mark, barometer, safe haven, night watchman, golden key, safety net, baton, regulator, focusing on key points and filling shortcomings.
Four words:
Be steady and far-reaching, escort, contribute, concentrate, important direction, important guarantee, important support, the only way, the only way, the only way ...
The advantage of sub-argument optimization is that it can make the article more literary and innovative, but the disadvantages are also obvious. Finding an accurate and appropriate "good word and bright word" still needs accumulation and skill. Therefore, in practical application, you should first master the basic writing methods of sub-arguments, and then consider the form of "optimization" on this basis, think more and practice frequently.