Without countermeasures, analysis is not enough, and countermeasures should be feasible. Of course you don't want to write a feasibility report, but at least you think the public agrees.
Give you some of my own views on the application:
Topics are generally aimed at unresolved hot issues in a society.
Mainly around several points, first analyze the causes of problems in materials, then explain the impact (pros and cons), then put forward solutions and countermeasures, and finally demonstrate the proposed countermeasures.
However, all the materials given in the application are not necessarily useful, and some are interference materials. First of all, we should analyze the materials, find useful ones, summarize the problems reflected by the materials, and then analyze them. Remember to only analyze the material, don't expand it, don't associate it! !
Then, according to the above, you can basically guarantee more than 60 points. ...
As for improving your grades, it depends on your writing style. ....
PS: The application should be written with a framework to provide a general framework.
The first paragraph: ask questions and express opinions.
The second paragraph: analyze the problem and explain the necessity of solving it.
Paragraph 3: Measures (from the perspective of legislation, law enforcement and public opinion)
In addition, there is a general eight measures.
1 Leaders attach importance to and raise awareness.
2 Strengthen publicity and create an atmosphere
3 Education and training to improve quality
4. Improve policies and regulations and improve the system.
5 organization and coordination, forming a mechanism
6 Increase investment and rely on technology.
7. Strengthen supervision and fully implement it.
8 sum up reflection and learn from experience.