I don't think the topic "It is impossible to find the right position in your life around the perfection of people" is particularly obvious, but if you want to write according to the requirements of the article, your thinking is not accurate and clear, so I suggest you change it. At the beginning, this poem gave me the feeling that "people only see the bright spots in others, and only those who really know him know the hardships behind them." "No one is perfect, everyone has shortcomings, but some people hide their weaknesses too deeply, and only those who really know him can find them." You can try to think from these two angles. This is just my personal opinion, I hope I can help you!