There are two changes, which can be changed to:

Summer in Xiaoxing 'anling is a beautiful season.

Xiaoxing 'anling is a beautiful place.

This ill sentence belongs to improper collocation. Summer in Xiaoxing 'anling is a beautiful place. The theme is that summer is a season, but later it is said to be a beautiful place. You can change the place to the season here and unify the front and back. Or simply remove "summer" and let the subject become the place of Xiaoxing 'anling.

Extended data:

Improper collocation type:

1, improper collocation of related words

2. Improper collocation of attributive and head words (subject and object)

3. Improper collocation of verbs and objects

4. Improper collocation of subject and predicate

5. Improper collocation of subject and object

6. Improper collocation of verbs and complements

7. The adverbial and the head word (predicate) are not collocated properly.

8, one side and two sides are not properly matched.

example sentence

1, the students watched and listened to the report of Laoshan hero with admiration. (The "gaze" in the joint predicate cannot match the object "report" and can be deleted)

2. It is legal for farmers to cultivate plots that meet the policy requirements. (Improper collocation of subject and object)

3. Two parallel lines with short rules and regulations are always two unreachable endpoints. The meaning of subject and object in the judgment sentence does not belong to the same category, which leads to improper collocation of subject and object. In this case, "two parallel lines are endpoints" is obviously not properly matched, so "endpoints" can be changed to "straight lines" and so on. )

We firmly believe that one day, China's industry and agriculture will become developed countries. The object of this sentence is a subject-predicate phrase, but the main part of the subject-predicate phrase is "industry and agriculture become a country", and the meaning of the subject and object is obviously inappropriate. You can change "country" to "industry" and so on. )

Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season. This is because the word order is improper, which leads to the improper meaning of the subject and object, so "Autumn in Beijing" should be changed to "Autumn in Beijing".

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Last year, China's oil output was among the highest in the world. We should inherit and carry forward the fine tradition of working hard to realize the four modernizations. In the middle of the night, suddenly thunder rumbled, and then lightning flashed. 4. Rice is an important producing area in Zhejiang and Jiangsu provinces. After a while, we cleaned several dirty places. At present, it is the golden season in Beijing, and tourists from all over the world come in an endless stream. 7. Mr. Wang is very kind to us. His words are always sweet. 8. Swallows, woodpeckers, frogs and other beneficial birds are good friends of mankind. In September and March, there will be more than 70 new films in Beijing cinemas. 10. Our teacher has a good eloquence and tells a lot of truth. 1 1. The Party Central Committee attaches great importance to and supports scientific development. 12. Every student should be a worker in moral education, intellectual education and physical education. 13. Today is my little cousin's fifth birthday. 14. His illegal mistakes were criticized by everyone. 15. Light light blue's spirit of helping others deserves everyone's touch. 16. The students all listened to the teacher's lecture with great enthusiasm. 17. The comrades in the English model student group gave a report to all our students. Interest groups of two schools started their activities yesterday. It was not until the second half of the19th century that they started their activities. 2 1. When Eight-Nation Alliance invaded China, it burned and looted the Yuanmingyuan in the western suburbs of Beijing. Wang Ping and Li Huajian have established a profound friendship. 23. At work, teachers and Datong University do heavy work, while female students do light work. 24. Looking back on your own growth, every step is inseparable from the cultivation of the "gardener". 25. Through hard work, Xiaodong's careless problem in doing problems has improved. 26. Studying various laws is one of the important issues at present. 27. Like other things, air has the property of expanding with heat and contracting with cold. 28

By making a sentence about why you are sick.

Abuse of prepositions leads to incomplete subject.

The main types of sick sentences are: improper word order, improper collocation, incomplete or redundant components, chaotic structure, unclear meaning and illogical.

First, the word order is improper

Multilayer attributive word order; Improper word order of multi-layer adverbial; Improper word order of attribute and head language; The position of attribute and adverbial is chaotic; The word order of the associated coordinate words or phrases is incorrect; The subject and related words are out of order.

Second, improper collocation.

Improper collocation of related words; Improper collocation of attribute and head words (subject and object); Improper collocation of verbs and objects; Improper collocation of subject and predicate; Improper collocation of subject and object; Improper collocation of verbs and complements; One side doesn't match both sides.

Third, it is illogical.

The concept scope is unclear; Contradictions; Repeated denials cause confusion; The subject and object are reversed; The related words are used wrongly.

Fourth, the structure is chaotic.

Two different sentence patterns are mixed together; Change course halfway.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is ambiguous.

Difficult to understand; Ambiguous; Reference unknown

Sixth, the composition is redundant.

Part of the subject and predicate are repeated; Predicate and object are duplicated; The adverbial and the head are repeated.

Incomplete synthesis

The subject is incomplete; Predicate is incomplete; An incomplete object; Incomplete modifier; Incomplete speech.

The methods of distinguishing sick sentences are: 1, language sense reading method 2, contraction method of removing sentence branches and leaves (definite, shape and complement) and logical meaning analysis method 3.

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Methods and skills to modify sick sentences The so-called sick sentences refer to sentences with grammatical or logical defects. How to judge whether a sentence is right or wrong? First of all, start with grammar, find out the trunk of the sentence, and see if the components are incomplete and the collocation is appropriate. Then see whether the modifiers used in the main part of the sentence are reasonable, whether the word order is reasonable, whether the meaning is repeated, and secondly, whether the language expression is harmonious.

Wrong sentences and answers

1, outstanding professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience. Excellent professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience. In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. He jumped out of the pond and came to the edge of the pool, where he swam soon. He jumped into the pond, swam over and soon reached the edge of the pool. We have carefully studied and listened to your opinions. Words can reflect the meanings of inheritance and priority. Word order must meet this objective requirement. In this case, "learning and listening" reverses the order of commitment. Students, leaders and teachers all attended the opening ceremony. (It should be changed to "leaders, teachers and students") 6. Look at vilen blooming everywhere. (It should be changed from "blooming mountain flowers" to "blooming mountain flowers" to match the later "blooming") 7. The Palace Museum recently exhibited cultural relics newly unearthed more than 2,000 years ago. When was this "cultural relic" unearthed? According to the original sentence, it was "more than two thousand years ago", but it was not. This is because the word order is not current, which leads to ideographic errors. We should move the "newly unearthed" to the "exhibition" ) 8. This village has well implemented the Party's policy of enriching the people. Now, we have not only sold 60,000 Jin of agricultural grain to the country, but also stopped eating state relief. (If the progressive relationship is improper, it should be changed to "not only don't eat state relief grain, but also sell 60 thousand Jin of public grain to the state") 9. In your own way. They are exploring, they are judging, they are searching, and they are thinking.

1, people's living standards are constantly improving. If the subject-predicate collocation is improper, the word "improvement" should be changed to "improvement". His revolutionary spirit always comes to my eyes. ("Spirit" and "Emergence" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship. You can change "spirit" into "image". What a beautiful picture the rustling waves and the silver sea make up. Both "wave" and "sea surface" are subjects, in which "wave" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship with the predicate "component", so "rustling wave" should be removed or another subject-predicate relationship should be formed. Due to reasonable close planting and strengthening management, the rice production in this county is generally growing well. ("production" and "good-looking" cannot form a subject-predicate relationship, so "production" should be deleted and "rice" should be the subject) 5. Whenever I recall a period of life with him, his amiable voice and smile reappear in front of my eyes, following the teachings of good embroidery. "Teaching" and "appearance" constitute an improper subject-predicate relationship, so "persuasion teaching" can be removed. "It is best to add' ringing in my ear again' to form a subject-predicate relationship. 6. The novel Song of Youth created the heroic deeds of Lu Jiachuan, Jiang Hua and Lin Hong in party member. ("Shaping" and "deeds" can't constitute an object-object relationship, but "deeds" can be changed to "images") 7. The soldiers braved heavy rain and muddy roads to make rapid progress. ("Crossing the Kanto" and "Small Road" can't form a predicate-object relationship, so "Zheng" and "Shang" can be added before and after "Muddy Road" respectively. The students watched and listened to the report of Laoshan hero with admiration. (The "gaze" in the joint predicate cannot be collocated with the object "report" and can be deleted. ) 9. The private plots cultivated by farmers that meet the policy requirements are a kind of legitimate labor. (Improper collocation of subject and object) 10, two parallel lines with short frames are always two unreachable endpoints. The meaning of subject and object in the judgment sentence does not belong to the same category, which leads to improper collocation of subject and object. In this case, "two parallel lines are endpoints" is obviously not properly matched, so "endpoints" can be changed to "straight lines" and so on. ) 1 1, we firmly believe that one day, China's industry and agriculture will become a developed country. The object of this sentence is acted by a subject-predicate phrase, but the main part of this short-lived subject-predicate is "industry and agriculture become a country", and the meaning of the subject and object is obviously inappropriate. You can change "country" to "industry" and so on. Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season. (This is due to improper word order, which leads to the wrong meaning of the subject and object, so "Autumn in Beijing" should be changed to "Autumn in Beijing") 13. Whether you have lofty aspirations and tenacious will is the key to a person's success. (One side and two sides are not properly matched) 14. Whether the electronic industry can develop rapidly and penetrate into all walks of life depends on accelerating the training of a group of specialized talents. (The use of "whether" in front is two aspects. There is only a positive side behind, which is inconsistent. You can change "to" to ") 15. Young men and women no longer choose their partners on the basis of property and family status, but on the basis of working ability and scientific and cultural knowledge. (In the front, "quantity" and "height" are related to both sides, and in the back, they are only related to one side, which is inconsistent. You can change "neng" to "neng" and "you" to "you") 16. The quality of academic performance is an important condition for three good students. The front is "good or bad", and the back is only positive and inconsistent. You can add "can you become" before "three good students") 17. The car is driving on a wide road. After introducing the heroic deeds, the students applauded warmly. At five or six o'clock in the morning, tens of thousands of people stood on both sides of the street leading to the airport. ("Crowd" is a whole noun, which can be changed to "people" instead of the previous "tens of thousands") 19. We have carefully studied the workers' suggestions and humbly sought the opinions of experts. As an adverbial, "seriousness" cannot modify or restrict "research", but it can be changed to "seriousness" and "caution". The students cleaned the classroom neatly. ("Clean" can supplement the degree of sweeping the floor. However, "neatness" and "cleanliness" cannot be matched. You can add "table stool" in front or delete it. )