At the intersection of youth, there used to be a path looming, calling me. My mother stopped me: "You can't go that way." I don't believe it. "That's how I came. What else do you not believe? " "If you can go that way, why can't I?" "I don't want you to take a detour." "But I like it, and I'm not afraid." Mother looked at me affectionately for a long time, then sighed, "well, you stubborn child, that road is difficult to walk." Be careful all the way. " On the road, I found that my mother didn't lie to me. It's really a detour I fell against the wall and sometimes my head was broken, but I kept walking and finally came.

Please write an argumentative essay or narrative of at least 800 words according to the above materials and topics of your choice.

[writing instruction]

1, study materials and grasp ideas.

(1) The nature of materials and writing methods (expression, skills and figures of speech)

(2) the main content of the material. Elements: people, things, words and things.

(3) Key words and sentences of the material.

(4) Material and ideological point of view: youth detours must be taken.

2. Observe the present life around the main idea of the material and determine the topic (argument) of the article.

Usually think positively, sometimes think reversely.

3. Carefully draw up the topic: pay attention to the materials. For example: "grow up in detours", "mature after detours", "young people are not afraid of detours", "grow up in detours is necessary", "don't let detours cover your eyes" and "the detours you have passed are a fortune" For insurance, it is best to write keywords in the title.

4. Avoid three kinds of deviation phenomena in the discussion process: (1) Shallow-just say "what is a detour" and don't talk about "why" and "how to do it", that is, just say that youth will detour, but lack of excavation and analysis of the significance value of detours. (2) Deviation-paying attention to "how to go through detours", such as attitude, courage, persistence, belief and no regrets. (3) Greatness has become a topic of "youth". Talking about youth in an empty way does not focus on the detours that must be taken!

What is a "detour of youth"? It mainly refers to going astray, going the wrong way and taking detours when you are young. Then why should youth take a detour? It can be discussed from the following angles: (1) Young and promising, with dreams, going to the world and seeing the scenery for dreams, even if you take many detours, you have no regrets, because you are young and can't afford to lose; (2) Young and frivolous, don't listen to others' advice, and have to go your own way. Although I don't work, it is also an experience and a harvest. (3) Being young and shallow, I lost my way and went astray, but I also knew myself and learned a lesson; (4) Young people need tempering and detours, and we become strong and mature.

Excellent composition

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Take a detour and run for success

The eagle fights in the sky, showing the magnificence of life; Only when fish swim underwater can the freedom of life be revealed; Horses gallop on the grassland, showing an unruly life; And we grew up on a detour that we had to take, which shows the preciousness of life.

Everyone's feet are not colorful roads. We have to cross thorns and go through bumps to reach the other side of success. Looking back, there will be faint flowers on our curved growth path, which will witness the hardships we have experienced and the detours we have gone through. Only when wrestling hits a wall and goes through necessary detours can we grow better and succeed faster.

Looking back at the long river of history, which celebrity has not gone through the detour that must be taken? After a detour, I saw their extraordinary achievements.

"But since the water is still flowing, although we cut it with a sword, it is even more worrying to raise a glass to dispel our worries." He drank a glass of sake alone, and the intrigue and flattery of officialdom made him ignorant of politics. He wandered around and experienced ups and downs, but this inevitable detour made him the darling of the literary world. The phrase "Laughing at the sky and going out, are we Artemisia people?" stirred his confidence and breadth; "Since god gave talent, let it be hired! , spin a thousand silver, all come back! " Inspired his high morale. On the inevitable detour of life, he created the glory of literature! Without this inevitable detour, can we see confident and free poets in the world of poetry? This inevitable detour made Li Bai more confident and open-minded, leaving an eternal mark on China literature.

"Hua Lin thanked Chunhong and hurried away. I have no choice but to have cold rain and night wind. "Li listened and regretted it in the loss. Once extravagant, once brilliant, suddenly vanished, leaving him a sigh. After suffering, he gradually understood the bitterness of life. He whispered more than once: "The old country can't bear to look back on the bright moon and has a bright future." How pathetic! It was this detour that Li Yu had to take that made him so mature. If he hadn't gone through this inevitable detour, he would still be the king who didn't know the sufferings of the world. How can he know the helplessness and bitterness of life? How can we mature in helplessness and pain? How can you write a good work when you are hesitant? This inevitable detour made Li Yu more mature, made him understand the helplessness of life, and made him a talented poet.

I remember someone saying that only bloody fingers can play the most beautiful swan song. Yes, only by standing the test in the journey of life and going through this inevitable detour can we grow better.

This detour that we have to take makes us mature and strong!

2.

I came back covered in flowers and rain.

Zhou said: "A young heart should not be as still as water." When he was young, he gained experience through detours. When he came back covered with flowers and rain, he gained an experience and peace.

I once saw a picture of several meters. A girl was flying in the field in a white dress, and golden ears of wheat brushed her fluttering skirt, which was fixed in my mind for a long time. This is just a few meters of unruly people. I think if it is an old man at this time, I am afraid he will kindly remind her of the soil and mosquitoes under her feet. Can a girl still run out of such a beautiful picture? The meaning of youth lies in experience, in courage, and in the courage not to admit defeat even if you fall into a corner.

Su Shi, a talented young man, offended many senior officials in the DPRK because of his flamboyant personality, and his career was quite unsatisfactory. Wang Chaoyun said that he was "not fit when he was full". However, this unique publicity did not destroy him, but with the passage of time, it became bold in his bones and allowed him to make immortal poems on the front and back of the red wall.

Looking abroad, Jobs also took detours when he was young, drinking and fighting. Fortunately, after discovering his keen sense of smell for electronic products, he devoted himself to his career and gave up his bad habits, and was called "Pope Apple". I think his creativity and courage to break through must come from his unruly personality and his inner creative courage.

Youth cannot be easily kidnapped, and it should not be shattered by "good advice." The meaning of youth lies in experience, and the courage of youth lies in struggle.

When studying in the United States, Ding Zhaozhong initially chose experimental physics, but his hands-on ability was poor, but he could deeply analyze and understand the conclusions, so he turned to theoretical physics. When he talked about his own experience in his autobiography in his later years, he thought that it was this process that gave him a broader perspective than his peers who also studied theoretical physics!

When you are young, the hardships will become pearls in clam shells when you are old.

Some roads in life are involuntarily entered. Zhang Ailing was born in a wealthy family and grew up in decline. She was beaten and imprisoned when she was a child because she was at odds with her stepmother. She did not forget it mercilessly, but turned it into the spiritual background of her later creation.

On the road of life, everyone is a novelty, and detours are indispensable hammering and experience in life; Wise choices and brave experiences are the true qualities that young people should have. In this way, although life will not be full of twists and turns, it will not be boring, but it will harvest flowers and rain and dew, so that we can live a good life!

[Comment] To sum up, * * * has three advantages: (1) The idea is in line with "the meaning of youth lies in experience, in courage, and in the courage not to admit defeat even if you are in a desperate situation." Topics, arguments, and argumentation processes are closely centered around the center, and there is almost no nonsense that deviates from the center! (2) It is a typical argumentative essay with obvious stylistic features. (3) The language is fluent, and in a few words, it goes straight to the essence of things. For example, Zhang Ailing's example seems to have nothing to do with the detour of youth, but the little author vaguely said, "I was beaten and imprisoned for being incompatible with my stepmother in my childhood", which is a detour of youth. "She didn't forget it mercilessly, but turned it into the spiritual background of her later creation", which is successful and concise.