Jiangsu Volume (Proposition Composition)
Some people are just curious in childhood, while others can remain curious all their lives. Doubt, wisdom, nobility, surprise, happiness, trouble, mediocrity ... every word in the middle may be like the shadow behind curiosity.
"Curiosity" is not less than 800, and I wrote an article.
(3) Requirements: ① Angle selection; (2) Self-determination, besides poetry, is the choice of style.
Analysis: From the perspective of propositional mode, continue the propositional concept of Jiangsu college entrance examination composition this year: let candidates have something to say and write, and continue to make a big fuss about the inner world of "people-oriented". It cleverly avoids all kinds of expert lectures in the exam, and when it comes to forecasting, such as life, environmental protection, gratitude and other topics, it is undoubtedly deeply artistic. From the stylistic point of view, this topic, whether narrative or argumentative, is well written and everyone is curious, thus avoiding similar or collapsed language choices.
The examinee has a mild tone, points to a clear proposition, and points out the quiet writing clue of "hint": "Curiosity is always accompanied by a wonderful childhood" means that the examinee writes about his own life, "This is the best narrative style", such as success, failure, doubt and mediocrity, so these words are all related to curiosity. This sentence means that from a speculative point of view, candidates conduct feasibility studies and discuss styles in their writing. At the same time, whether writing a narrative or an argumentative essay, the relationship between "curiosity" and "success, failure, doubt and mediocrity" can be very stiff, and it is difficult for experts to reduce their temperance before the exam and not to embarrass candidates.
Of course, this question seems simple, but it also means that it is necessary to select the depth and difficulty of the exam. For example, candidates should focus on the important influence of "curiosity" in writing, rather than talking in general terms, such as the curiosity of a running account narrative at a certain time in his life.
Sichuan volume (topic composition)
Write a composition of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Strong".
The topic of children's happy life within the scope of reform and opening up must increase the written content of autonomy, choice of style and autonomy.
Analysis: A disaster happened to the younger generation near the earthquake-stricken area, which deeply shocked them. In the past, the pain mainly came from study, but now disaster is ahead. A life of extraordinary struggle, these people go to disaster relief and are concerned about the disaster area? The rye rebuilt after the disaster ... condensed into a national war song. However, is there a theme more suitable for awakening a generation than "Strong"? I think this special experience is the best introduction article today.
Of course, the harvest is strong, which does not mean that we can write about earthquakes, only earthquakes. Toughness has always been the traditional virtue of our nation. There are many things we can learn from, but this is not an open idea. The marking teacher is "aesthetic fatigue". Tao seems to be a peaceful composition. Only by grasping the essence, broadening the perspective, choosing the right starting point, small and complete, can we launch new and well-written articles from here, and it will be refreshing and atmospheric.
Fujian roll (material composition)
It is better to write an 800-word article than to read the following text.
Three people walked into the shop. A man bought a bottle of juice and said, "I like sweet people and bought a cup of coffee." He said, "I like the bittersweet taste." I bought another bottle of mineral water and said, "I like light mineral water."
The idea of finding an angle? The style of writing is self-determined, the style is selected, and the title is self-made; Don't go beyond the content and meaning of the material, you may not copy it if you don't intercrop it.
[opinion]
The composition of this year's Fujian volume is a new material composition, which is characterized by writing according to the content and meaning of the material, even if the candidate's writing material is within the scope of the topic. So ask the ideas put forward clearly and choose an angle to write "(three angles of the material), so that candidates can" determine their own ideas ".
Attention should be paid to the following matters in writing:
Moderate and accurate. Do you want to pay attention to the material with cultural significance and clear the juice? Coffee? The corresponding relationship between mineral water and life pursuit, such as the outlook on life of "fruit juice"-"enjoyment", "coffee"-"enjoyment in struggle" or "enjoyment", "mineral water"-"ordinary life", advocates a natural, indifferent and calm attitude towards life.
The display effect is clear. Choose an opinion, which should reveal one's own thoughts, for example, I like sweetness, criticize the attitude of "enjoying life" and "I like light mineral water, and generally celebrate that another exciting example is true", thus promoting this attitude (that is, no matter what the situation is, enjoying a living soul in it, life can be long and interesting). True water without fragrance, plain and true attitude towards life. Idea, with prominent theme, profound, meticulous and unique cultural background and knowledge base, is good at using divergent thinking and actively mobilizing. As the materials show, the three people developed horizontally and vertically. It can be seen that if we change our thinking, from the perspective of people's life, "juice" is like an early middle-aged person who enjoys "coffee" in his later years but falls in love with "mineral water".
The choice must be accurate. The selected materials should be inspirational, thought-provoking and touching. Written in a reasonable narrative material, you should seek an appeal to write a discussion. The selected situation should usually be the representative of 1 to 10, such as Su, who is crazy in my youth, especially Wu.
& gt Fourth, the wording should be clever. Love can be used as an introduction (the first show you choose), and then quickly turn to the question of life, not only for "what" ("what"), but also for your own "why". The structural arrangement should be reasonable, such as incorporating the past, opening up the future to win the favor of the marking teacher, and broadening the horizons with the help of the integration of ancient and modern.