Test analysis: (1) This is a semi-open material composition. The theme can be conceived from one angle or side, and can also be considered from the whole material, but it cannot be separated from the material. Therefore, we can start from the perspective of urban management coordinator Cao. As a law enforcer, Cao dared to put down his dignity and kneel down to explain the problem when the law enforcer knelt down to him. This is an improvement of personal dignity and law enforcement image. Law enforcers must first respect others, so that their work will be respected and their personality will be improved. You can see this from the time the law enforcers finally got back to the car. Perhaps we can see that when Cao's personality is respected, it is difficult to face it. In a word, we think this should be a successful law enforcement. This is much better than what some urban management law enforcers said on the Internet. So we can see the effect of changing an attitude and working style from him.
(2) Intention: From Cao's point of view, respecting others means respecting yourself; It is better to change a way and attitude; The rule of law should be humanized; A responsible attitude towards work.
From the perspective of law enforcement: doing things from the perspective of others.
2. Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. "Recently, a" cutest note "with beautiful font, warm words and lovely smile was uploaded by Weibo netizens" gently shaking hands ",which warmed the hearts of countless people in Shenyang in the cold winter of September and won a favorable comment from netizens. (1.7 Xinhuanet)
Mr. Pan from Shenyang drove his daughter to the Children's Hospital with a high fever and pneumonia. However, due to the ground construction of the hospital, the parking space is particularly tight. Looking at the slowly moving traffic queue, I saw my daughter's illness getting worse and worse. In desperation, Mr. Pan had to temporarily park his car on the roadside outside the hospital and send his daughter to see a doctor first. He left a note in the car, "Uncle policeman, the child is in the children's hospital. There is no room in the parking lot of the hospital. This is a no-parking zone. Please don't stick to me. If this car is in the way, I'll move it. Thank you. " After the police saw it, they wanted to leave a message saying, "I wish you a speedy recovery and try to park in the same place in the future."
After this conversation was uploaded to the internet, netizens praised it. Netizen "baked potato" said: "Humanized law enforcement is more popular." Some netizens said that in the cold winter in Shenyang, this note is like a warm current, which makes people feel that the whole world is getting warmer after reading it. The author believes that this "warmest note" left by the dialogue between the parking owner and the law enforcement traffic police not only achieves the purpose of educating the offenders, but also makes the offenders feel the warmth of the law. This is undoubtedly the perfect combination of love and law, which is commendable.
While praising the impartial law enforcer, we should also praise another law enforcer. They can enforce the law with deep feelings for the broad masses of the people. They touched everyone with their positive energy. Their humanized law enforcement better embodies the feelings of legal fairness and justice, makes the masses truly understand the true meaning of legal fairness and care, and spreads the deep feelings of law to all parts of the world. This is rare and valuable, which not only protects the dignity of laws and regulations, but also educates the people and feels the gentle side of the law.
In fact, the highest state of law is not heartless, but the perfect combination of emotion and law. From the legal thought of "knowing morality and being cautious about punishment" in the Western Zhou Dynasty to the legislative principle of "people-oriented" now, the law bears the feelings of legislators and the warmth of human nature; From the inversion of the burden of proof in civil proceedings to the "closed trial of minors" in criminal proceedings, the law embodies humanistic care and the maintenance of personal dignity.
It is hoped that law enforcers can understand from the "warmest note" that "people have feelings and laws". The perfect combination of feelings and laws can make the public feel more positive energy in law enforcers and contribute to the construction of social rule of law and the harmonious development of society.
3. Look at the following materials and write as required: Let go of the shackles in your heart. We are always used to killing and chasing in the long river of time; We are also used to looking back at the past and singing pastoral songs under the pressure of reality; We are also used to carrying a broken hourglass and carrying a heavy load.
I don't know when it started, but our hearts began to be trapped by invisible shackles and trapped in untraceable memories. Those sweet, those bitter, those idle, those worries have become stumbling blocks on the way forward and the heaviest burden. In fact, all we need is to unload the heavy burden, put down the shackles in our hearts and close the door behind us.
When he was demoted to Mizhou, Dongpo's sentence "Let's make new tea with new fire" conveyed his indifference, calmness and calmness. He melted the frost in his heart with new tea and opened the hard ice in his life with new cremation.
There is no depression in his life, because he bid farewell to the frustration of being relegated to another country; He didn't sigh all his life, because he solved the sorrow in different places; His poems are only sudden, only open, only optimistic, because he put down the shackles in his heart. Oh, how can I bow and scrape to those people with high status and important positions? They never want to be seen with a sincere face. Isn't it because Li Taibai let go of Chang 'an's song and dance, the dragon's face in front of the golden palace, the desire for fame and fortune, wandering between the mountains and rivers in the prosperous times, spreading firm but gentle pride, that the brilliant Tang Dynasty of poetry was achieved? After the Athens Olympic Games, Liu Xiang, the son of Feng, kept a rare calm in the face of the surging honor and praise. "The achievements in the Olympic Games are really remarkable. I know I caused quite a shock, but it's all in the past. I think we should think more about how to keep ourselves in shape
As for the world record, I certainly want to break it, and I will work hard for it. "He let go of his past achievements and all the fetters of honor, and finally broke the sleep world record of 12.88 in two years.
Only by bidding farewell to the past can we devote ourselves to creating the present and look forward to future success. Whether it is the ups and downs of the past or the sweet memories of the past, how can you really live if you can't forget it? If you can't let go, how can you go into battle lightly and climb the peak again? Nowadays, many scholars either avoid or deny the mistakes pointed out by the public and make excuses for themselves.
No one is perfect, to err is human. They dare not admit it or correct it, because they have too many auras, titles and certificates! All this prevented them from admitting a simple mistake. If they can't let go of their past achievements and look down on their past glories like Madame Curie, then they will eventually lock themselves in their inner shackles and will eventually be unable to fly to the sky they yearn for! Let go of the shackles in your heart, close the door behind you, let the frustrated past become the past, let the brilliant achievements become the past, bid farewell gently, wholeheartedly create the present life, pursue another realm, climb another height and enjoy another wonderful part.
Let go of the shackles in our hearts, and we will go further and be more chic! Analysis of test questions: The moral of this story is that there may be brilliant achievements and regrets in the past, but these have become the past. With the shadow of yesterday's pain, frustration and failure, you can't be open-minded and calm, but you will only walk heavily, which may eventually hinder your career success and life progress; Keeping yesterday's glory in mind will also become a fetter for progress. There are countless people in the world who have made great achievements when they are young, but they have nothing to do when they are old, just lying on yesterday's credit book and sleeping. Some of them are even stubborn and conservative, which hinders the development of history or science.
Therefore, we should learn to forget the past, close the door behind us and take every day as a new starting point, so that we will be young, full of vitality and usher in new success. In this material, "the door behind" can be understood as "the past life", and closing the door behind means "forgetting the past and starting over".
When writing, you can make up your mind from the following aspects: only by closing the door behind you can you concentrate more on the road ahead; Only by letting go of yesterday's baggage can we move forward lightly; Regret for yesterday will never solve anything. Only by focusing on today or tomorrow can we have a better future. Let every day be a new starting point (or beginning) and treat every day as the beginning of a new life, which will help realize the value of life; Only by forgetting the past, being yourself now and not wasting the present time can we create happiness in the future. When writing, if you write an argumentative essay, you should pay attention to reality and return to yourself or the group. If you write a narrative, you can't just describe the lives of your predecessors or others from the perspective of a bystander. You'd better infiltrate yourself and write your own unique feelings.
4. Writing as required: Former British Prime Minister Lloyd George has the habit of closing the door behind him. "I have been closing the door behind me all my life!" What a classic sentence! Walking from yesterday's wind and rain, it is inevitable to be contaminated with some dust and musty smell, leaving some bitterness and nostalgia in my heart, which cannot be completely erased.
We need to sum up yesterday's mistakes, but we can't always dwell on past mistakes and unhappiness, because neither sadness nor regret can change the past and make you smarter and more perfect, so we must let go of the past. If you always bear a heavy nostalgic burden and feel sad for the lost time, you will only lose the beautiful time in front of you in vain, which is equivalent to giving up the present and the future.
Regret the past, can only lose the present; If you lose the present, how can you talk about the future As the saying goes, "those who are annoyed at missing the first train will definitely miss the next train." If you want to be a happy and successful person, the most important thing is to close the door behind you and learn to forget all the mistakes in the past.
Don't indulge in troubles and regrets, and move on. Time is gone forever. Every day, you should try to finish what you should do that day. Tomorrow will be a new day. Start over and cheer up. Don't let the mistakes of the past become the burden of tomorrow.
In fact, happiness is just around the corner. You should grasp it and work hard. Only by letting go of the past can we have the present and face the future.
Since the past has become illusory, since the past will never come again, why not try to let go of it. If you have the strength to miss the past, why not have the courage to look forward to the future?
You are no worse than others, but you lack confidence than others; You are not more like a coward than others, but you lack the courage to fight. People who like to immerse themselves in memories are often old people, and people who like to look forward to the future are often young people.
Young people should live with vigor, motivation and vitality, and the more they live, the more they want to live. Live in the present and dream about the future.
Pack and seal up the happiness, emotion and kindness of the past, and put aside all the sadness, pain and humiliation of the past. The past is history, and tomorrow will be a new day. We should start over and don't let the past become the burden of tomorrow.
Brave people don't mention the courage of the past, and timid people are afraid of the shame of the past. Success and glory belong to the past, not the future; Failures and setbacks belong to the past and do not foretell tomorrow.
Remember that the future is bright and the future is beautiful.
5. Write an English composition according to the conditions. Are you with your family? It was a summer vacation that will remain in my mind forever. It is about the middle of August this year. I went to Jiuzhaigou with my parents. I lost many firsts in my life for this opportunity. For example, the first time I flew by plane, the first time I took a tour bus, and the first time I saw so many beautiful scenery. But the most important thing in my heart is the special time I spent with my family. I can share my documents with them. At about nine o'clock that morning, our plane landed at the airport. Before getting off the plane, I was shocked by the grand occasion. So many mountains, so many trees, so many rivers. I was so excited that I couldn't help getting off the plane to go with them and telling them loudly that I was here. So I'm here. We are here. Everything here is new to us. Special home cooking, special fruit, special water and so on make us so excited. We lost ourselves here and don't want to leave. I think it would be great if I could live here. Now I want to write it down to keep this memory. In my mind, this is the summer vacation and the witch will stay in my mind forever ...
6. Fourth, the composition (60 points) is original. 24. According to the requirements, composition: (60 points) Material 1 Predict the score of proposition intention on the level of proposition intention and test difficulty value. Level 24 E 46 this topic comprehensively examines the ability to apply basic Chinese knowledge and express ideas accurately and creatively.
Fourth, the composition 1. Review the ideas of the topic and the ideas of inspiration: the three materials given in the topic all talk about the craftsman spirit: first, many people in life are insisting on the craftsman spirit; The second is that the Godzilla brothers' insistence on the craftsman spirit has caused tragedy; The third is about the connotation of craftsman spirit. Taken together, the idea is ok, should the craftsman spirit be adhered to? In today's era, what is the significance of adhering to the craftsman spirit? Why does the craftsman spirit continue? Wait a minute.
Talking about "> can also use the spirit of" elaborate and strive for perfection ". 2. Scoring description 1, basic grade scoring, and the item of "the meaning of the problem" mainly depends on whether the selection angle conforms to the scope of material content and meaning.
If the central angle and the important angle are selected, the intercropping that "conforms to the meaning of the question" and is close to the content and meaning of the material will be scored at level 3 and below ("development level" will not be scored). 2. The score of development level is not comprehensive, which can be calculated by the same score according to some outstanding scores in 16, which is 4 points of "characteristics".
(1). Profound: ① See the essence through the phenomenon; (2) reveal the internal causal relationship of things; ③ The viewpoint is enlightening; (2) Abundance: ④ Abundance of materials; (5) sufficient arguments; ⑤ Full image; 6 far-reaching artistic conception; (3) Literariness: 8 Proper words; Pet-name ruby flexible sentences; Attending is good at using rhetorical devices (1 1) (13) with fresh materials (14) with ingenious ideas (15) with unique reasoning and imagination (16). 3. Deduct 2 points for missing title; If the number of words is not enough, every 50 words will be deducted 1 minute; Deduct 1 minute for every 1 typo, which is not a duplicate; If there are many punctuation errors, points will be deducted as appropriate. 4, interplanting, style is not clear should be deducted.
Plagiarism, "basic level" grade four, "development level" does not give points. Excellent example: also on the essence of pursuing perfection. The poem says, "If you are cutting, you will be ground."
Learn from each other's strengths and pursue perfection; Thinking and pursuing Excellence. Born in the world, many things can't be done, so we should give full play to everything we do.
Unremitting pursuit and Excellence are the only way to success. Excuse me, why can a novel "The Red Chamber" travel through the history of Yunhe, arrive recently and be sung through the ages? The mystery lies in Cao Xueqin's choice of words and sentences, striving for perfection. In Mourning for Hong Xuan, he "read it for ten years, adding and deleting it five times" and "every word is like blood, and ten years of hard work is extraordinary".
Move yourself and shake the world. The process of creation includes the pain of transformation and the pursuit of perfection and happiness.
Cao Xueqin is not the only one who strives for perfection. A "Book of Songs" comes from a drop of countless dewdrops in ancient times and drips into the eternal source; An Analects of Confucius is chicken soup for the soul, which warms generation after generation; There are also Tang poetry and Song poetry, flowers and plants, which are planted in the back garden of a dynasty.
"The person who covers the article is a great cause of the country and an immortal event." China ancient people's reverence for words, lofty sense of literary mission, and scruples about refusing to relax a word can be seen from "reciting a word, breaking a few stems" to "putting in a good word for human nature, never ending with words", from "burning 3,000 paintings" to "destroying 800 poems".
Only in this way can they have a rich life and enduring classics. Imagine, if there is no such spirit of Excellence, how can the works created compete with the sun and the moon, and the world will last forever?
Many songs in today's music scene are very popular, but they are only a flash in the pan and the fireworks are silent. Doesn't this explain this truth? There is no best, only better.
If you are so creative, how can you not do anything else because of your small achievements? Once Apple's mobile phone went on the market, countless citizens rushed to queue up in Daiyue to buy it, and some even rushed to jump the queue. What caused the appearance of Apple mobile phone to trigger a blowout and nuclear explosion in the mobile phone sales industry? Or strive for perfection.
In Jobs' words, "Apple's products must continue to please people." As a result, today's Apple mobile phone has bigger screen, thinner thickness, lighter weight and stronger functions than the previous Apple series.
Zhu said: "those who treat bone angles with words will be beheaded and discussed again;" Those who treat jade both cut and grind it, refine it and seek its essence. "This sentence is used in Apple products, which is more appropriate.
The pursuit of perfection can create one miracle after another. "Confucius learns the piano", and Excellence will eventually become eternal and sacred; "Made in Germany" is world-renowned for its pursuit of perfection; There is also the Statue of Liberty, which is on the top of the bronze statue.
However, the original author Willedduke probably never dreamed that a few years later, people could fly over the head of the bronze statue in an airplane invented by themselves. Keep improving, let a statue carve people's hearts and never overflow.
Lev tolstoy, a great Russian writer, said that the mission of mankind is to pursue perfection. If each of us can adhere to this spirit of pursuing Excellence, I believe our life will be very beautiful.