Common sentence patterns and modifiers 1
1. Bad choice of words
1 Students warmly welcome their teachers.
At the class meeting, the students almost exposed his advantages and disadvantages.
He greeted me warmly and shook my hand.
Two. An incomplete composition (sentence)
1. The theme is incomplete.
(1)X understands the significance of learning under the teacher's education.
(2) After reading this article, I was greatly educated.
Analysis: (2) It is the preposition's intervention in the unowned sentence.
2. The predicate is missing.
(1) What we want is an ambitious revolutionary ideal.
The bus will be on the meeting road in front of my house.
We should make our country more prosperous.
3. Missing object.
(1) The beloved teacher takes good care of X.
(2) The people of China are working hard to build a modern socialist country. (lack of echo)
(3) On May 4th, a large-scale poetry recital of Red Proverbs was held in Beijing National Grand Theatre. Through the superb recitation art of many famous performing artists, the college students present were excited and deeply shocked.
(4) This work report not only comprehensively summarizes the continuous reform and development of medical and health undertakings in our county in the past 30 years of reform and opening up, but also points out the direction for the construction of medical and health security system in our county.
3. Incorrect word order
(1). Beijing in May is a beautiful season.
(2) A bumper wheat harvest is in sight this year, and the growth is gratifying.
(3). These two old and new societies really form a sharp contrast!
Four. Repetition and verbosity
(1), the teacher repeatedly told us to study hard.
(2) There are fruit trees everywhere.
Grandma remembered many past events.
We listened to the teacher without blinking.
The flowers in the park are very beautiful.
It was sunny this afternoon, but I didn't expect it to rain heavily in the afternoon, which really surprised me.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) \ is inconsistent.
It rained heavily all night last night.
(2) I am about to graduate from primary school.
I concluded that he might be Lu Li's brother.
(4) The students lined up neatly and crowded into the cinema.
Note: "The whole class is here, except Wang Gang." "I almost (didn't) fall into the river" and "I finally (didn't) solve this problem easily" are correct sentences. In line with the language habits of China people.
The concept of intransitive verbs is confusing (including relationship and cross relationship)
(1) There are all kinds of snakes and many birds on display in the reptile hall of the zoo.
There are many trees in the park, such as pine, cypress and peach blossom.
I like apples, bananas, cucumbers and other fruits.
(4) There are extracurricular books such as children's literature, youth literature and art, and China Youth Daily in the book corner.
(5) The CPC Central Committee sent planes to send food, medicine, rice and clothes to the people in the disaster areas.
7. Improper collocation
1 is an improper collocation of subject and predicate. For example:
(1) The homework that the teacher asked me to do was implemented on Saturday. (concurrent sentence)
(2) Everyone pays attention to school hygiene, and the health and diseases of the whole school will be guaranteed.
We should safeguard the honor of the school. (Use "maintenance" instead of "maintenance")
2. Improper collocation of verbs and objects.
(1) At the farewell party, the students performed songs and dances.
I listen to radio and TV every night.
(3) Students gradually correct their attitudes and goals.
3. Improper collocation of related words.
Although Mr. Liu is over sixty years old, he is in good health.
(2) In order to improve everyone's literary appreciation ability, this poetry recital was held.
(3) Dad's password is brought home on time.
The path between the two mountains flows slowly.
4. Improper collocation of decorative words and head words
(1) At this meeting, people exchanged views extensively on the issue of wages. (instead of soliciting opinions extensively, it should be widely exchanged, which should be changed to "extensive exchange of opinions". This collocation often overlaps and the word order is improper. )
8. Whether (two sides and one side)
(1) It's hard to imagine whether a person who doesn't care about the pain of others can write touching works.
(2) Diligent knowledge and self-study ability are the keys to students' future success. (3) Whether the content is substantial and the sentences are fluent is the minimum requirement for middle school students' composition.
Nine. Improper denial
(1) Zhang Yong is a good student. No one will deny that he can do such an uncivilized thing.
(2) Who can deny that excellent academic performance is not achieved through hard work?
(3) In the fierce market competition, what we lack is courage and improper strategies.
(4) Whether we can improve the quality of teaching and cultivate students' ideology and morality, our answer is yes.
(5) The language of literary and artistic works is not good or bad because it uses a lot of gorgeous words and terms of a certain industry, but because its words are used in the right place.
Ambiguity
(1) I have a girl who, like many young mothers, is willing to dress up her children beautifully.
(2) Xiaohua was seriously injured. In order to save Xiaohua, He Cuigu shot her from behind.
My family persuaded the teacher to go with you this time, so that you should not be too nervous. Can play better.
(4) Because she couldn't stand the discrimination and insult of her employer, she complained to the editorial department of Human Guide and asked the editorial department to help her uphold justice. The editorial department attaches great importance to this.
Eleven. Sentence patterns are mixed (structural confusion)
Sometimes I want to use this sentence pattern and that sentence pattern, and as a result, the two sentences are mixed together, which confuses the meaning.
I can't express myself clearly. )
1, indecisive (the author sometimes uses this structure, sometimes uses that structure, and as a result, both structures are used. )
People who have been bound by the thought of planned economy for many years are also aware of it. (You should choose one of the two formats of "one-time binding ..." and "constrained by ...". )
Behind this feat of generosity and elegy, there is still a lack of self-confidence. (Should you be behind ... or lack of confidence "and" feat "... or lack of confidence". )
2. Broken line (use the last part of a well-structured sentence as the beginning of another sentence. )
It is the people's responsibility for us to make suggestions to the government.
When we put together "we complain to the government" and "it is the people's responsibility to complain to the government", we should delete "we". )
Do you know how many people have to work hard to publish a translation before they can meet the readers?
(It's a combination of "strive to publish …" and "meet with translators …", either sentence will do. )
Halfway through (in a word, I suddenly started a new stove and started again. )
(1) For example, Du Chongyuan regarded the article "Gossip Emperor" as an affront to the Japanese emperor, and was imprisoned, which is an example.
Because Du Chongyuan wrote an article about ..., he is considered as .... The original sentence makes people who don't know the whole story mistakenly think that Du Chongyuan sent others to prison, which is very inappropriate. )
Since China people accepted Marxism–Leninism, great changes have taken place in China's revolution under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong.
(What about China People? ... "After Marxism-Leninism? The author didn't go on, but added "China Revolution". It should be "from the people of China". )
3. Anti-objectification (components other than the subject of the first half of the sentence are the subject of the second half of the sentence, so they are intertwined. )
So when bandits attacked guerrillas, they were surrounded by guerrillas and wiped out countless bandit troops.
The main body of "being surrounded by guerrillas" is "bandit troops", while the main body of "destroying countless bandit troops" can only be guerrillas, but the author did it overnight without waiting. The last clause should be changed to "destroyed a large part" or "countless"; In this way, the "war of annihilation" was followed by "guerrillas", which was coherent. )
(2) The plot of terrorists should be exposed and can be exposed.
As for the first half of the sentence, whoever "exposes" is of course "we", but the word is hidden, and the official subject should be the "terrorist plot" that has been exposed. But the subject of "can expose it" in the second half sentence can't be "terrorist plot", only "we". This sentence should begin with "we". )
The structure is ambiguous (such a sentence can have two meanings. )
(1) The creative method of real people and stories has been advocated in recent years, resulting in many works describing real people and stories.
The word "Dai" in a sentence can be regarded as a sentence without a subject, and it should also take "creative method" as the subject. The author may refer to the first one, so the first half of the sentence should be changed to "the creative method of advocating real people in recent years." )
(2) In the old society, he exploited the people with cruel usury by opening a pawn shop.
The mistake of this sentence is to confuse the two statements of "exploitation by cruel usury of pawn shops" with "cruel exploitation of people by pawn shops", leaving only one statement. )
Types of Common Sentences and Their Modifications II
1. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. Recently, Zhou Xiaochuan, governor of the People's Bank of China, said that whether to raise interest rates should be decided according to the rapid decline of CPI, and it may not be until the middle of next year.
B. the goal of life should be single-minded, with an ambition and unremitting efforts, and the goal can be achieved; Otherwise, there are too many goals, and nothing will be achieved as a result.
C. A series of abnormal climate events, including the snowstorm in China, remind the world that if people stay in the stage of sitting and talking, they will suffer the consequences of "waste without warning".
D. The court recently tried a family murder case caused by a quarrel. People don't respect the old and the young and are despised by this family.
Analysis: it is wrong to choose item C.A. "Whether to raise interest rates depends on the rapid decline of CPI", which has two sides. Item B, "Otherwise" and "Too many targets" are semantically duplicated. Item d, the subject and predicate are not properly matched, and it is changed to "this family respects the old and does not respect the young."
2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A As South Korea held an unprecedented joint air-land military exercise in Baochuan, Gyeonggi Province, only 25 kilometers away from the north-south military demarcation line, North Korea released "malicious words" and responded that it was preparing for a nuclear jihad.
B The solar panels on the roof of the theme pavilion of Shanghai World Expo cover an area of about 30,000 square meters, which is the largest single solar roof in the world at present.
C. A new generation of pacemakers can automatically increase or decrease the pacing frequency according to the body's requirements for cardiac output, thus meeting the body's physiological needs.
D. Chengdu International Video Art Base has welcomed more than 70 "Miss International", where beauties of different languages and colors participate in a series of activities of Chengdu Video Art Tour with the theme of "Let Beauty Stay in Chengdu and Let Chengdu Bring the World".
Analysis: choose D.A. If the subject is missing, delete "cause" or "cause". B. semantic repetition, deleting "about" or "many". C. "increase" and "frequency" do not match.
3. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. The One Foundation founded by the famous movie star Jet Li will leave the China Red Cross and fly solo. Around the Mid-Autumn Festival on 20 10, the media and charity circles were still discussing whether this farewell was "marrying a daughter" or "divorce".
B Zhang Wuben, the owner of Wubentang Town, calmly "closed for further study" after the lie was exposed. Later, after Li Yichang's "immortal" road failed, he calmly "closed the door indefinitely" and "walked away", which made us feel sad and angry.
C. Hainan "International Tourism Island" project is a super-large island tourism plan independently built, planned, invested, managed and paid by the government. The tortuous realization of this project will be an important stroke in the history of tourism development in China.
Legal experts believe that consumers throw things in public just to humiliate or express their dissatisfaction.
Analysis: choose item a. B, "it is difficult to describe our feeling of being sad and angry", and delete "indescribable" and it is difficult to describe; Item C "Independent construction, independent planning, independent investment, independent operation and independent revenue and expenditure" is out of order; There are two verbs in "humiliating or expressing dissatisfaction" in item D that use "dissatisfaction", but we can't say "humiliating dissatisfaction".
4. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. In recent years, not only some domestic entrepreneurs have started to invest in private education as a new starting point, but also foreign educational institutions have seized the education market in China.
B. Hengli Technology Computer Company, which has always been famous for its leading technology and functional innovation, plans to take the lead in launching a new generation of home computer products with international leading level in the near future.
C. online shopping is convenient and quick, with many benefits. However, because the "benefits" have not been realized, it is difficult to be favored by people at present.
D. Some children's literature focuses on education and rationality, and is too integrated into adult thoughts. Children's natural love for games, knowledge, interests and fantasies is ignored.
Analysis: choose item a. b, the word order is improper, and the positions of "plan" and "near future" are interchanged; Item C repeats the meanings of "realization" and "cash"; Item d, the composition is incomplete, and there is a lack of title after Love Fantasy. You can delete "in nature" and add "in nature" after "love fantasy".
5. One of the following sentences is ()
A. "If there is an afterlife, I will never be a student again." This is a child who is studying in a middle school. He can't finish his homework until afternoon 12 every day.
A survey shows that London, a big city with a population of 6.5438+0.2 million, thousands of factories and many hospitals and restaurants, discharges "three wastes" (waste gas, waste residue and waste water) into rivers as high as 4.65438+0.8 million cubic meters every day.
C loading sand, backpacking and throwing a battle to fight floods and defend levees began.
D. He plans to write three novellas and one novel this year. One novella has been completed, and two more will be completed in autumn; Long, I have to work overtime before the end of the year. Analysis: choose d.a. mixed sentences; B. the combination of "harmony" and "equality" is logically chaotic; C. the composition is redundant.
6. Among the following sentences, the one with poor language is (Hunan Volume).
A "Touching China" focuses on vivid real life, the main force to promote the development and progress of contemporary China, and interprets the greatness in the ordinary.
B Once Weibo was launched, it was sought after by the vast number of netizens with its powerful instant messaging function, and it strongly intervened in our social life.
C. In addition to paying attention to wages, the new generation of migrant workers pay more and more attention to the working environment and social security conditions. Those enterprises with poor environment and insecurity will say "no".
D. Building a well-off society in an all-round way, building a socialist modern country and realizing the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation have provided a broad stage for the vast number of aspiring young people in China to create a wonderful life.
6.c secretly changing the topic leads to incomplete composition, and the preposition "right" is added before "those enterprises with bad environment and insecurity"
7. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
The Chief of Staff of Formation A told the Tribune reporter of the International Herald Tribune at the command site in Lianyungang that this was the first time that the China Navy organized and commanded so many countries to conduct joint maritime search and rescue missions, and the whole search and rescue plan was drawn up by the Chinese side.
B. This wave-crested toothbrush can penetrate into the teeth as much as one-third as ordinary flat toothbrush.
C. Accompanied by thunderous applause, a middle-aged soldier wearing golden ears of wheat and flowers, surrounded by flowers, slowly stepped onto the podium of "Top Ten Health Guards of Harmonious China". He is Chai Jiake, president of the Burn Plastic Surgery Hospital of PLA General Hospital.
D. After the establishment of China Postal Savings Bank, it will be able to fully handle the business of commercial banks. The bank's long-term goal is to establish a first-class modern commercial bank, fully rely on and give play to the advantages of postal network, and improve the urban and rural financial services.
Analysis: in C.A., the verb-object collocation is improper, and the "task" does not match the corresponding verb "organization and command", so the "task" is changed to "exercise"; Item B, the meaning is unclear, and the meaning of "at most one third" is "toothbrush" or "teeth", and the meaning is unclear; Item d, mixed sentence patterns. You can delete the content after "modern commercial bank" or add "make it" before "modern commercial bank".
8. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. In view of the rampant grave robbery, the Lintong District Government of Xi set up a task force to solve the case and arrested nine suspects, all of whom claimed that they did not steal cultural relics because they did not have enough convictions.
B CBRC requires all commercial banks to strictly abide by the rules, effectively manage service charges, and fully demonstrate the feasibility of charging items and the rationality of charging standards.
C. China badminton star Dānlín was elected as the "Most Valuable Athlete" of the Guangzhou Asian Games on 16, and his success was achieved through personal struggle.
D. With the continuous strengthening of scientific and technological means, we can easily present real-world information intuitively and truly to people with three-dimensional technology.
Analysis: choose B.A. stealing; C. mixed sentences; D improper word order, "transfer the real world information to the back of" three-dimensional technology "
9. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad and has a clear meaning is ().
A. On the occasion of the 70th anniversary of the founding of Jiangxi Normal University, good news such as teaching reform, scientific research innovation and serving local economy spread frequently, showing the enterprising spirit of Jiangxi Normal University.
B. The Hawaiian Film Festival held in June 5438+ 10 this year allowed Zhang Yimou and Jia to bring new films in tandem. It seems that no film has done this in the past, which makes us very proud.
C books in our reading room often open the skylight. This phenomenon can reflect two problems, one is the quality of readers, and the other is that management needs to be strengthened.
D Ostrom, a professor at Indiana University who put forward the famous "public pond theory", was the first woman to win the Nobel Prize in Economics. The purpose of her research is to establish an appropriate system and use public resources more rationally.
Analysis: B.A. is missing an "in" at the beginning of the sentence; C illogical, you can change "reflect" to "see" or "discover", or you can delete "we can learn from". D. the sentence "the purpose of research is" is mixed.
10. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. The pottery figurines of the Northern Wei Dynasty dating back more than 1500 years not only truly conveyed the rich information about the social life of the northern nationalities in ancient China, but also provided first-hand intuitive data for our country to study the changes of the aesthetic tastes and customs of ancient ancestors.
B. Taobao shop owner who sells clothes said that the special sale at the end of the year did add a lot of color to the sales performance of the store, but the number of buyers checking goods also increased, mostly because the goods were not delivered on time.
C. Many materials and literary works can prove that Zhang Ailing arrived at Sizhai in February of 1946, the first month just after the Spring Festival.
D. This speech puts forward an important proposition to promote the peaceful development of cross-strait relations, which embodies our determination and sincerity to seek the well-being of compatriots on both sides of the strait, peace in the Taiwan Strait and rejuvenation of the Chinese nation. It has important guiding significance for further doing a good job in the Taiwan Strait.
Analysis: choose a.b. "most of the reasons are because of the failure to deliver the goods on time." C. the information includes literary works, and the concept is unclear. D lack of prepositions, add the word "right" before "further".
1 1. In the following sentences, there is no language barrier ().
A. Obama began to be protected by the Secret Service 18 months before the election, earlier than any previous presidential candidate, partly because many racist remarks were directed at him.
B: Through this Olympic Games, the world knows more about China and China knows more about the world. Olympic Committee athletes from 204 countries and regions competed in dazzling venues and won our admiration with their superb skills.
C. instead of the old bourgeois society with class and class opposition, there will be such a consortium, in which the free development of everyone is the condition for the free development of all.
D. Only by persisting in improving and safeguarding people's livelihood can we inspire people's enthusiasm, initiative and creativity in promoting scientific development and win their trust, support and support.
Analysis: choose C.A., the sentences are mixed, "caused by the reason." In item B, the composition is incomplete, and "pass" or "let" is removed. Item D, the word order is improper, should be changed to "guarantee and improvement".
12. There is no ill-chosen expression in the following sentence, but the meaning is clear ().
A. The reporter asked, "Mr. Liu Yongxing, last year, Forbes magazine listed you as the second richest man in China, saying that the assets of the Liu family were $800 million. Is this assessment accurate? "
B * * * the Political Bureau of the Central Committee, the State Council and Wen Jiabao visited Shanghai and Jiangsu, visited a number of high-tech enterprises and research institutes, and conducted research on accelerating the transformation of economic development mode and industrial structure adjustment and upgrading.
C. Research on Chinese Teaching has won readers' love with its distinctive style of nationalization, modernization, and equal emphasis on theory and practice. The readers of this magazine are mainly Chinese teachers and other Chinese workers in middle schools.
D.20091October 30, 165438, xinhuanet reported that with a number of node projects such as Wuhan Railway Station entering the final sprint, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway passenger dedicated line is expected to be fully completed within this year.
Analysis: choose item b, the contradiction between "second" and "first"; Item C, the sentence pattern of "reading subject, giving priority to" is mixed; Item D, with incomplete components, "enters" and "the final sprint construction stage".
13. Among the following, there is no language barrier ().
A. As the largest developing country and carbon emitter, China's choice not only determines the future of the world, but also determines its own core competitiveness and comprehensive development prospects.
In order to solve the problem that computer users often forget their passwords, scientists have introduced the method of implanting RFID chips under the operator's skin, which is undoubtedly good news for computer enthusiasts.
C. As Shanghai has formulated the methods for identifying students with financial difficulties and the detailed rules for the implementation of scholarships, freshmen with financial difficulties, especially those in earthquake-stricken areas, can study and live with peace of mind.
D. A research report provided by Wu, president of China Academy of Rocket Technology, and Liu, chief designer of China Rocket Launch Research Institute, shows that China's current rocket carrying capacity is sufficient to ensure the launch of the aircraft needed for the lunar orbiting project.
Analysis: the word order of D.A. is improper. We should decide "ourselves" before deciding "the world". "Not only (but also) pay attention to the position of related words (related words with different subjects should be placed in front of the subject, and related words with the same subject should be placed behind the subject), but also pay attention to the progressive relationship, and" light "should be placed before" heavy ". B. If the preposition is incomplete, add "in" before "operator". C. lack of subject, remove "because".
14. There are no grammatical errors in the following sentences, and the sentence with clear meaning is ().
A Recently, Jiang Hanping, director of Shenzhen Municipal Health Bureau, said that the Municipal Health Bureau will introduce eight measures to solve the problem of "difficult and expensive medical treatment" for citizens.
B. National Southwest Associated University has sent outstanding talents to our country. I wrote an article about "excellent people" and "talents": talents enter the market and monetize people's abilities; But people are different. People are immeasurable and cannot be bought.
C. The cartoon rabbit who thinks about suicide all day sees his father and uncle chatting from a distance.
D. An important feature of the collapse of bottom line ethics is that people's deep sense of shame and guilt is diluted or even disappeared.
Analysis: Choosing D.A. "Solution" is to omit the object, and add "Problem" after "Expensive medical treatment". B. replace "about" with "about". C. Ambiguity, the meaning of "he" is unknown, whether it is "cartoon rabbit" or "father".
15. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad and has a clear meaning is ().
A. To celebrate the 30th anniversary of the establishment of diplomatic relations between the United States and China and President Obama's visit to China, the US-China Friendship Association held a flag-raising ceremony of the American and Chinese flags in front of the most famous symbol of Wall Street in New York. This is the first time that the national flag of China has been raised in front of a bronze bull on Wall Street.
B. As a Chinese teacher, we should try our best to use standardized language in teaching, and don't abuse the network language excessively, which will increase the difficulty of standardizing Chinese characters and learning for teenagers.
C. Jiangxi private education has made positive contributions to the development of Jiangxi education in terms of increasing the total amount of educational resources and maintaining social stability. It has solved the problem of insufficient investment in Jiangxi education to a certain extent and injected vitality into Jiangxi education.
D. The Louvre, Buckingham Palace and other world-famous palaces witnessed the rise and fall of the empire and the construction of civilization. They use solid architecture, sculpture, painting and art to tell the flowing history and culture.
Analysis: the reference of items A and B is unknown, and "so" does not know which content it refers to. Item C is incomplete and should be changed to "solved problems". Item D "Architecture, Sculpture, Painting and Art" is not juxtaposed properly, so "Art" should be removed.