This year's two language expression writing questions in Jiangxi Province focus on ensuring that every student has something to say and write, which embodies fairness. Secondly, it focuses on guiding students to pay attention to and think about their own life content, which is a writing orientation. Compared with those who are beyond students' life experience, it is much more practical to let students have pure abstract thinking and aesthetic experience. What remains is how to give full play to one's language level and write a composition with substance in words and sense in words.

Positioning the test center This question examines the writing ability.

The examination of questions is based on the phenomenon of middle school students' learning, and there are many angles to cut in. Students should have something to say, and it is not easy to digress. However, if you speak well, whether it is profound or not, whether it is novel or not, you can see students' ability to observe and think about life and their language ability.

Pay attention to the topic requirements. Write a narrative or argumentative essay. If you focus on your own personal experience, you can consider writing a narrative; If the focus is on everyone's common phenomenon, you can consider writing an argumentative paper. However you choose, please consider the following:

(1) the phenomenon of "fear" or "not fear" (or specific examples);

(2) Reasons for being "afraid" or "not afraid";

⑶ Thinking and enlightenment of "fear" or "not afraid".

With examples

20 13 Jiangxi college entrance examination writer's composition

Work is urgent and efficiency is slow.

Zhang Xiaoquan (Jiangxi post-80s writer)

For a long time, "Middle school students have three fears: Olympics, English and Zhou Shuren" has become a buzzword on campus. As soon as the students talk about this sentence, they will shake their heads and smile tacitly: difficult, too difficult! What is the mysterious connection between these messy numbers and lines? What kind of pronunciation and tone should these a, b, c and d be used after they are arranged and combined? God, the author of this text is Lu Xun again. There must be several key paragraphs that the teacher will ask everyone to memorize!

A headache is a headache. You can look at your classmates around you. There are not a few people who take part in various English cram schools for Olympiad Mathematics in their spare time. Students who are cramming for the Olympic Mathematics worship Professor Chen Jingrun and want to prove that 1+ 1 = 2? Or are you fascinated by mathematical logic and want to explore the true meaning of the universe? Do English tutorial students want to strengthen themselves by learning from foreigners and realize the friendly connection between Chinese and western cultures in the future? Or do you really like Shakespeare and want to know the true meaning of the original text? They laughed at me for being bookish and carrying a heavy schoolbag: what you said is too unrealistic. Once you win the Olympic Mathematical Contest, you can enjoy extra points for further study; Fluent in English, it is not a problem to go abroad for gold plating in the future!

I suddenly realized that "three fears" are also fears. The benefits of learning olympiad and English are readily available. Even if I hate my teeth, I am eager to study hard and practice hard. I hope to take shortcuts from now on and rise to the top with the professional knowledge of these two subjects. And Mr. Lu Xun's article is daunting, so why bother to do so? Can I get extra points? Can you go abroad? I can cope with the teacher copying a few times at most and feel innocent. I am very suitable for this uncle with a flat beard!

Nowadays, people are impetuous and everything is good, even if their education is nothing, people can't help but sigh. Many teenagers only look at the immediate interests, hoping that today's seedlings can eat melons tomorrow, otherwise they will never spend a little more effort. Shi Jiepeng, a scholar at Beijing Normal University, said that Lu Xun's words were "striking and touching; Watch and watch, warm. " In the early days of the birth of vernacular Chinese, he has been able to achieve superb writing, open the wisdom of the people, and leave the shadow of today. Lu Xun's fierce struggle, gorgeous writing style and meticulous research, if they can be put into the soul of teenagers, can really become the pillars of the future, which is a rare wealth. Unfortunately, how many people can stand this long and delicate process?

There are still "three fears" circulating on campus, but Olympic mathematics and English are becoming more and more popular. Lu Xun is still lonely, being thrown into the corner by a frivolous "too difficult" and waiting quietly.

"Bound" of Freedom and "Restriction" of Reality

Xu Jinbin (member of Jiangxi Prose Society)

Middle school students have three major fears, namely, Olympics, English and Zhou Shuren. In view of many buzzwords in middle school campuses, the author really thinks that the later generations are very awesome, free of thought, uninhibited in language and pursuing individuality, which is really cute. Some people are really striving to be literary youth, and they are willing to catch up with the irresistible trend of fashion leaders, which also reflects some problems in our current educational behavior. For example, does the education method we set 20 years ago meet the needs of the educated people now? In fact, in the final analysis, this is the contradiction between the "boundary" of freedom in the process of students' growth and the realistic "limit" of education enrollment policy. I have something to say about this.

I remember 1997 that our generation of students who took the college entrance examination began to accept the quantitative and solidified teaching methods of Olympic Mathematics, English and Zhou Shuren. At that time, many kinds of intensive extracurricular training were not popular because of the overall economic development of society, and now it is overwhelming. This model is like a factory production line. Countless free hearts have been put on a fixed "halter" on the road of practical examination, and millions of candidates have had the first real "extreme" experience on this road of life that is about to get out of control.

As a selective examination, it is not easy to achieve personalized selection in our vast country, and it must take time to explore and test. When we grow up a little, we will understand that the "boundary" of freedom and the "limit" of reality are actually a game of ideals and behaviors, and it is definitely a bloody battle. As a person grows older, along the way, he no longer has awe and nostalgia for what he once believed, which in itself will experience a great ideological crisis. In fact, as ordinary individuals, we will basically move from "poetic liberal idealism" to "calm behavioral philosophy", which is actually very painful.

Freedom and reality are a general term, but we have too many fingers in the process of marching. How do we understand the "boundary" and "limit" of the behavior we should follow? A guy said, "life is a journey to find yourself, and you will get lost, because life is like a maze with many temptations and forks." If you find your own nature, you will naturally not get lost. " I always thought his brother was too accommodating, but that's all we can say. Great people often say that people like them can actually do very little. If people struggle for artificial values all their lives, it is like racing against their own shadows, in vain. In the end, you won't know whether this is a personalized road or a model road until you have gone through it. After all, it's just a road that no one can replace and belongs to you. I said, this is actually our "boundary". We can't jump out of the three realms, only in the five elements. (Jiangnan Metropolis Daily reporter Liao)