In our life, there are many moving examples. Sometimes it's a sound, sometimes it's a color, sometimes it's a state, sometimes it's a scene … You must have experienced many things that moved you in your life. Please write a composition on the topic of "moving". Can describe experiences and express feelings; You can comment, comment on the world, and so on Note: 1. Self-determination 2. Style choice. 3. The topic is self-made. 4. Not less than 800 words. [Writing Guidance] People's feelings and emotions are always influenced by the objective environment, only by accidental events. This is the touching place. Knowing this, when we write a composition with the theme of "moving", we must first mobilize the accumulation of life, recall the people or things, feelings or scenes that have touched us, and choose materials with rich connotations that are worth chewing and pondering repeatedly. Writing such a topic composition can of course be lyrical or argumentative, but organizing the above materials as the main framework of the article is the basis of lyricism and argumentative. Otherwise, the feelings expressed and the theories discussed will become passive water and trees without roots, which will not only infect readers, but also make them bored and stay away. This is a place that must be paid attention to when writing a composition on this topic. From the content, we can write great feats, trivial things, miracles of nature and extraordinary craftsmanship. But one thing, this is definitely something that moves you and your readers. When it comes to touching things, you are by no means making them up. Thinking of the topic of 1999 college entrance examination "tenacity-the character I pursue/overcoming fragility", many candidates wrote about their parents' death, their own car accidents and so on. This will show how tough and strong I am. Is the writing touching? Can you earn tears of sympathy from the marking teacher? The answer is self-evident. Therefore, when writing this kind of article, we must pick things that are touching enough in life and express them in simple and frank words. Naturally, how to arrange and use the above materials in an article can vary from article to article. It is a writing method to write the above materials as the main part of the article, and then trigger the necessary lyric or discussion; According to the needs of writing, it is also a writing method to sort out the above materials and intersperse them in various parts of the article to write essays that are "scattered in form and condensed in spirit"; Even if there is only narrative, no lyric, no discussion, it is not bad to integrate feelings into narrative and express their feelings implicitly, so that readers can figure it out and play with it themselves. There is no certain method for writing. As long as the content of the article can focus on the topic, explain the deep connotation of "moving" and show a positive value orientation, it should be said that it meets the requirements of the topic. Reference example 1: When flipping "touch", a ginkgo leaf slipped quietly. I bent down to pick it up. I was shocked to find that this was given to me by my deskmate when I graduated from junior high school. On the back, it says, "Take care, friend!" "I don't remember whether there was an impulse to cry at that time, but now there are tears on the yellow leaves. Come to think of it, there is still a kind of mood in this world called moving. For a long time, I seem to have forgotten the feeling of being moved. Is my heart cold, or is it filled with something irrelevant? A friend once wrote me this sentence: "We passed by, not because we missed each other, but because there were two words missing in our lives-moving. "Indeed, our hearts are no longer sensitive, and we no longer carefully collect the slightest touch around us. Only when I missed it and looked back, did I find that I really lost a lot. There are always people who complain that there are fewer and fewer touching things in this world. However, as long as we calm down and think about it, you will find that touch is everywhere. Tired of reading, my parents peeled an apple for us, which was touching; When you are thirsty, your friend will bring you a glass of water, which is touching; When you are depressed, it is touching to get a comforting word; When you are happy, it is touching to have friends to share your happiness with you; In ordinary days, receiving a small blessing, even if it is just a petal or a leaf, is also touching ... People, how many ordinary things are touched every day! Perhaps, sometimes it is because of their triviality that we turn a blind eye. There is a saying: "People are moved because they live in love. "The world of mortals sentient beings, sentient beings on earth. What reason do we have to let mediocrity blindfold us and not feel touched? What is touching? A thousand people have a thousand answers. However, no matter who you are, you can't tell a person who has no feelings what is touched. Because moving is not spoken with the mouth, but with the heart. Touched, such as refreshing spring. After drinking the spring, our hearts become clear and bright. Touched, like an intoxicating sea breeze. Feel the sea breeze, our hearts become pure and spacious. When the world has no moving footprints, it will become a frozen world. Ruthless. Friend, please pull your heart out of the mud! Please make room to carry this enough to make us remember the touch of our life! [Opinion] This is an article about life. The article starts from a delicate place: a bookmark of Ginkgo biloba leaves given to me by my deskmate when I graduated, which is now yellow. Picking it up moved me. Therefore, the author creates a feeling that we are often entangled in some irrelevant things, but it seems to be left out and moved, becoming indifferent and numb. In fact, "moving is everywhere, everywhere." After enumerating many examples that touched us, the article puts forward the question of "what is touching" in a different style, and answers this question from the front with a set of parallelism sentences at the end of the article. Throughout the text, the context is clear, the cohesion is compact, the language is fluent and the connotation is profound. Reference example 2: On a snowy day, there is such a story. Winter is coming, and snowflakes are flying like goose feathers. Early in the morning, I was walking in the street, doing nothing and feeling very cold. The day before yesterday, the city ordered all kinds of advertisements and leaflets. Posted in any corner should be cleaned up. To this end, all the cleaners in the city have been dispatched and started to clean this beautiful city comprehensively. I watched snowflakes flying all over the sky and a bunch of busy cleaners. Inadvertently, I found some leaflets and other papers stuck on the smooth wall opposite, and an old woman cleaner was tearing them carefully. Those papers seem difficult to tear. The cleaning lady brushes them with a brush dipped in water, and then carefully tears them with her hands. I think her hands must be cold, but she is not afraid of cold, and there is a fire in her heart. She was very serious and cleaned several sheets of paper in succession. Touched, like heartbreaking snow. Appreciating the snow makes our hearts quiet and peaceful. She went to another house. However, I saw that her right hand was raised, but it stopped in the air and seemed to be solidified. I saw her body getting closer to the wall again. Then I saw her shake her head slightly. What happened? What happened? I want to know. I saw that she looked intently for a while, and then slowly left the paper without cleaning it. Why not clear it? Did she forget the city rules? A series of questions came to my mind. Well, then, I think I'll take a look. I was just about to start when I saw another thin cleaning lady coming to the newspaper office. Her behavior is exactly the same as that of the old cleaner: raising her right hand and freezing in the air; Shake your head slightly; Keep your eyes on it for a while and leave slowly. I was more puzzled and decided to have a look. Cross the road and come to the front of that wall. What caught my attention was the search for you. It says: Zhao Jie, female, 14 years old ... Once the doubts were solved, I finally understood everything. Snowflakes are still flying like goose feathers, but I no longer feel cold ... [Comment]: The story in this snowy day is very touching and tells the beauty of human true feelings. The story happened to ordinary people, making people feel the value of true feelings. The article is well organized and the suspense is cleverly set, which shows that the author is good at planning the layout of the article. The language is simple and meaningful, such as "she has a fire in her heart" and "I don't feel cold anymore", which is very tasty and worth studying. Reference example 3: "The girl who longs to get sick" If I told you that some people are so eager to get sick and are seriously ill, would you believe it? This is a story I heard from a friend. Maybe it was fabricated or exaggerated, but I believed the story, and more importantly, I was moved by it. A girl lives in a broken family. Her parents divorced early, and she followed her father. After her father's second wife, she started a new life with her father and stepmother. Stepmother is not that kind of mean woman, nor does she treat her badly, but she is indifferent-completely indifferent. In the words of girls: I really hope she can scold me, even if it is a little fierce. The youngest son brought by his stepmother naturally bears the double care of his mother and gets all the love and laughter of his father. From then on, the girl became silent. Introverted and convergent personality narrowed the range of her friends, and inexplicable inferiority and depression plagued her. A lonely girl is struggling in such a cold environment. All this seems to haunt her like a thick fog, and no matter how she escapes, she can't get rid of it. A sudden illness brought back the warmth she had longed for. That time she was ill, and her father was very distressed about it, so he asked for leave to stay at home with her. Stepmother also changed her past indifference and bought medicine for her to cook; The naughty brother has also become much smarter. In such an illness, the girl realized the attention she longed for all day, and she became the focus, center and spindle. Later, she learned this trick: increasing her chances of getting sick. Serious is not serious, as long as it is not fatal, she is willing! This is a girl's desire! A lonely and helpless girl can only realize her ideal in this masochistic way-longing to be loved. A person who prays for support on his deathbed all day has a clear feeling in his heart. Surprisingly, this girl pushed all this to the extreme. Once, she wanted to break her leg so that she could lie in bed for months and enjoy the warmth of being loved for months. But this time, she didn't grasp the scale of injury and lost her left leg forever. She has been in a wheelchair all her life. She is in a wheelchair, maybe this time she will be watched all the time, and there will be no indifference to attack her. Is she thinking that as long as someone loves her, she will sacrifice her life? What is a leg? Will she sit quietly in a wheelchair and smile? [Comment]: Maybe this story is fabricated or exaggerated, but I was really moved by it as much as the author. However, I am not only moved, but also thinking: Why do girls give themselves more opportunities to get sick? Why did she take a masochistic approach? From this I want to say: the antonym of love is not hate, but indifference! I hope that people who have read this article will think deeply and be alert. Second, "cooperation" topic composition example [topic design] China has joined the WTO. We should not only understand struggle and competition, but also learn to communicate and cooperate. This is a new topic for both individuals and countries. Please write an article on the topic of "cooperation". Requirements: (1) The topic is self-drawn; (2) Style selection; (3) Not less than 800 words. [Writing Guidance] To write this article well, we must first make clear the scope of writing, that is, what is "cooperation". It should be said that this is not a problem, it is easy to understand. Secondly, we should choose a good angle, that is, choose a small angle that we know deeply and have rich material reserves. Only a small angle can dig deep. From a big perspective, human society is more obligated to develop the level of science and technology, develop the economy, safeguard world peace and protect human living space, which requires cooperation between countries; Every country bears the responsibility of prospering its own economy, constantly improving people's living standards and spiritual civilization, inheriting ancient cultural traditions, constantly enriching and developing cultural standards, and maintaining a stable and United political situation, which also requires the cooperation of governments and institutions at all levels. As far as everyone is concerned, generally speaking, people need sincere cooperation in doing anything, and it is difficult or even impossible for a person to do it. Especially in today's society, people are closely related, and it is unrealistic to fight alone. Third, we should think divergently and openly, and extract as many viewpoints or centers as possible. Here are some writing examples. 1. Make up a story to illustrate the importance of cooperation. In order to decipher the genetic code, scientists all over the world decided to cooperate with them. China scientists are assigned to the S project, and American scientists are in charge of the T project. American scientists found problems in their research but couldn't solve them, so they turned to other countries for help. As it happens, the China scientist's project has a similar problem, which has been solved, so I faxed the answer. With the breakthrough, American research has advanced by leaps and bounds. At the final summary meeting, the president of the World Association for Science and Technology said: "Without the cooperation of all countries in the world, this project will take 200 years to complete. "2. Rewrite the story of the four masters and apprentices in Journey to the West, explaining that the cause of * * * needs sincere cooperation from people. On the way to learn the scriptures, Bajie always clamored for an adventurous return to Gaolaozhuang. Bored, Wukong asked the Tang Priest to allow Bajie to go back. Anyway, there are not many people, and there are no others. The Tang Priest agreed. So Wukong has to explore the road, be a vegetarian, and sometimes help Friar Sand look after his luggage, so he is busy all around. Coupled with the seriousness of Tang Priest and the numbness of Friar Sand, Wukong felt bored and couldn't help but miss Bajie's nagging, so he finally had to call him back. Bajie was also depressed because he stayed at home, so he was glad to be back. So, the four of them went west again. 3. Write the importance of cooperation from the perspective of dolls by anthropomorphic methods. I am a doll, and my master praises my eyes from time to time. Eyes are arrogant, and children such as nose and mouth are not taken seriously. The children were very angry and decided to go on strike at the same time. When the young master feeds me, his mouth just won't open; Master asked me to learn to walk, and my hands and feet were fixed. Young master is bored, no matter how his beautiful eyes blink, he throws me aside and ignores me. My eyes quickly apologized to you, so my mouth began to shout "Mom", and the young master came running happily ... Reference example 1: "Cooperation in My Eyes" 14, 15 th century, when European capitalism sprouted, a production mode called package buyer was produced, which distributed the means of production to. This may be the embryonic form of modern business cooperation. Today, with the rapid changes in society, cooperation has been re-valued. It is not only a business operation mode, but also a spirit and an indispensable great force to promote social development. Cooperation is everywhere. Even in nature, it is not difficult for people to find cooperation. In the small ant family, there is a complex but strict division of labor. Worker ants are responsible for exploring the road and finding food, while soldier ants shoulder the safety of the nest. The queen ants give birth to offspring, and some feed them. No more or less members, no contact at all. It is with the cooperative spirit of each member that the ant family can survive. The production of Concorde, a world-famous aircraft, is accomplished through cooperation and division of labor. Every part of it, from the wing to a screw on the landing gear, is made by professional departments in different countries. Finally, assemble different parts, and a Concorde is counted as one day. Cooperation has truly integrated into every corner of the world. Cooperation comes from trust. In fact, many international organizations and groups with cash are based on cooperation, and this cooperation is based on mutual trust between countries. Cooperation needs different individuals to complete together and needs tacit understanding. If individuals lack enough trust, there will be no tacit understanding and cooperation will not succeed. For example, in the rules of the World Trade Organization on regularly reporting the financial situation of signatory countries, if signatory countries falsely report or underreport relevant data in order to maintain their strength, then this distrust will inevitably lead to the failure of cooperation. So it is not difficult to see that cooperation without sincerity and trust is worthless. Cooperation is power. If you eat with only one chopstick, it can hardly hold a piece of meat, but with a pair of chopsticks, the result will be the opposite. It can be seen that only cooperation can exert the power that individuals do not have and have greater power than individuals. Just as Zhuge Liang commanded the Shu army to defeat Cao Bing, most of them were defeated by less. One of the important reasons is that Zhuge Liang clearly knows that only cooperation can have infinite power. Cooperation is indeed a spirit, which originates from trust and is everywhere. More importantly, this spirit is immeasurable. This era calls for many spirits, and the spirit of cooperation will always be an inexhaustible motive force to push forward the times. [Comment]: This argumentative paper is divided into two parts (cooperation is everywhere-cooperation comes from trust-cooperation is power), and then the general discussion (the last paragraph), with clear structure and clear center. It is worth mentioning that the author can appreciate the special significance of the spirit of cooperation to contemporary society from the track of historical development (paragraphs 2 and 5). Of course, this paper also has some places worthy of further improvement. For example, the example of "cooperation is everywhere" should be taken from human society. But on the whole, this article is good. Reference Example 2: "Cooperation" In the Chinese class on Monday, the teacher asked us to take "Zhang Hengchuan" as the topic, and four people cooperated to produce a set of ancient prose, which was handed in three days later. On Tuesday, three days before submission, the teacher said "cooperation" every time, but every successful example was in the examination room. This kind of cooperation is not in the right place at the right time and it is difficult to succeed. As soon as the four of us came up together, Xiao shouted, "Oh, it turned out that Wu Lai was still doing such a difficult job." I'm guiding: "No, no, no, let Ma do it. She has good Chinese and beautiful handwriting. I'll guide Xiao in the back and give you moral support." "I can't do it anymore, so come on." "No, no, you come!" "You came, you came!" "Ah-"My head is about to explode. "Every time we push from pillar to post, how about this? This time, each of us will go out and no one will be lazy. Then, we will choose the best one to hand in. "Everyone nodded by default. There are still two days before the manuscript is due on Wednesday in the early morning, and everyone gets together again to raise their own questions and circulate them to each other for discussion. "Oh, Xiao, I can't see that you wrote these questions. ""Ha, of course, I was looking up the Ancient Chinese Dictionary and tracking the college entrance examination last night. This set of questions can be said to be experts. Come on, let me see Wu's. Well, it's not bad. The last question to understand the meaning of the text is better. "It seems that everyone has worked hard on this set of questions, each with its own merits, and it is difficult to distinguish Zhong Bo." Let's put the questions together. ""that makes sense. The small first question is very good, but item A needs to be changed. " "The last question is Wu." "good. "There is only one day left on Thursday, and the prototype of the test paper has taken shape. The horse volunteered to copy. " Great, just sign your name. ""but ... who will be the team leader? " Everyone was silent. I didn't expect us to have a more difficult moment than the problem. It's good to be the team leader. Not only can you sit there doing nothing, but you can also command people with confidence. When things are done, the teacher praises you. Who doesn't want such a good thing? People who become team leaders are irresponsible, and people who are not team leaders don't want to be responsible. "I didn't. I'd better choose one of you three. ""why? " "This time I think we really worked together once, and the work I did was really insignificant compared with you. I just want to do what I should do, and I don't want to end up unhappy. " "Yes, I forgot about it. Forget it, I won't argue. "The horse also retired." That's right, team leader. There's nothing to argue about. "Xiao and I both laughed." Cooperation means cooperation, and everyone has their own responsibilities. What we want is tacit understanding, not a leader. ""Wow, "a ballpoint pen crossed the paper. Whose name is not important. [Comment] This narrative describes the process of a four-person cooperation proposition in the form of a diary. The dialogue in this article is typical of middle school students' language, which is very real and kind. "What we want is tacit understanding, not group leader" and a sentence at the end of the article sublimate the theme of the full text.

One day, there was a scuffle in the sky. When discussing their respective importance at the meeting, the Eastern Buddha, the Western God and the true God Allah had an argument that lasted for a long time, so they fought. The Buddha shouted in a rich voice: "I am located in the East, with the largest number of believers, and I am the most important." God doesn't agree. First of all, he objected, saying, "Many believers are meaningless. I have the widest range of believers in the world, and my role is greater than yours. " Allah is also very dissatisfied. Yang said, "Worship should be heart-oriented. My admirer is the most devout. I am the most important in people's minds. " As a result, the public said that the public was right, the old woman said that the old woman was right, and all the immortals held their own words, arguing endlessly about darkness, earthquake, lightning and thunder. People couldn't bear it, so they sent a wise old man with a white beard to mediate. The old man said, "You are all great in people's minds. You hold up a sky together in our minds, and the peace and stability of the world are attributed to you, and no one can do it! " The three gods were held in a daze, although they were a little disapproving, but it was inconvenient to attack again, so they held their breath and patted their ass and left. Unexpectedly, not long after, the ground also set off a big wave. Officials, businessmen, workers, farmers ... many people from different occupations also get together to discuss their respective importance. The chubby businessman touched his stomach and spoke first: "In today's world, economic development is the first, and social development is only after economic development. We have made the current market economy run smoothly. When it comes to importance, we businessmen ... "The impatient worker couldn't stand the businessman's long speech. Before he finished, he shouted at the businessman with a black face:" What are you businessmen buying and selling? If we don't produce, what do you circulate? " When entrepreneurs listen, they keep a moustache and are full of energy; : "the role of workers is great! And we are responsible for organizing and managing them, which is more effective! " The scientist's slender body stood up: "knowledge promotes development, and development first promotes technology." We are the leaders of social development. "The entrepreneur was speechless when he suddenly saw the teacher who wanted to talk, smiled and his moustache became warped. He pushed the teacher and said loudly, "knowledge is important!" "But if there were no disseminators of knowledge, I think there would be no scientists." The teacher was pushed, stood up, shyly pushed the black-rimmed glasses on his nose and said, "I think the profession of teacher is the most important." Knowledge needs to be handed down from generation to generation, and it is impossible without teachers. "Writers who also wear glasses are trained by teachers. Although I don't agree with them, I dare not be too presumptuous. They just whispered, "Isn't the spread of knowledge due to us?" At this time, the official stood up, looked around with dignity, and suppressed everyone's voice with a loud voice and a sonorous tone: "Only under the normal social order can all walks of life develop rapidly. It is our duty to maintain orderly social order, and it is also our duty to develop friendly relations with foreign governments. Our task is the most arduous and effective. "Honest farmers are complaining about their love for their careers when they hear so many people praising them:" Food is the most important thing for the people, and everyone has to eat the food we grow to survive. "At first, the defendant businessman held his breath, and now he finally had a chance to get in a word:" If it weren't for us, the food wouldn't reach the market, who would have to eat? "If rice and vegetables rot, farmers will die of poverty." ..... noisy, everything is just drawing a circle around the origin. Everyone quarreled for several days, but there was no conclusion. The sound broke through the clouds and reached the ears of Buddha, God and Allah. They looked down at the ground, understood the reason, and blushed. Send God to reconcile the world, and the world will soon be at peace. God only said one sentence, and this sentence is: "Only by working together can we support a beautiful sky." [Comment]: In the form of fable, this paper fictionalizes the debate between God and mortals about who is the most important, and expresses the truth that only cooperation can jointly support a sky from a unique perspective. The story is vivid, the technique is fresh and the theme is distinct. The author also pays attention to the use of dialogue description to promote the development of the story, which is also worthy of recognition.