1, don't use words too casually, don't use colloquial words;

2. The introduction part and the literature part are integrated. The literature review should not be too long. It is not used to gather words, not to tell others what you know, but to tell others what you have found and what it has to do with this research;

3. The model should be made clearer, and other factors should be comparable when carefully discussed, so as to minimize the influence of factors other than impact;

4. The results report should be from the overall to the heterogeneity;

5. The form can be further shortened, and the display of the form should be detailed and appropriate;

6, the form should be carefully explained and analyzed;

7, the last section directly with "conclusion";

8. References should be listed like journal articles, arranged in alphabetical order, and the author's full name should be given. There is no need to write numbers in the previous quotations, nor should they be written like dissertations;

9. Write a summary.

Look at these nine suggestions, which involve all aspects of the paper. How to modify the paper is better. You can modify it according to the opinions given to you by the thesis defense teacher. Read it several times after revision to avoid some routine mistakes.

After the graduation thesis is completed, the repetition rate of the thesis is also passed. At this time, the next link is the graduation thesis defense. The process of graduation thesis defense is to let students show their research results to the defense teacher, and also let the defense teacher comment on the students' papers.