Composition accounts for a considerable proportion in the Chinese subjects of the senior high school entrance examination. Although this year's senior high school entrance examination composition is less 10 than in previous years, it still accounts for as many as 50 points, so it is particularly concerned by candidates. Li, director of the Chinese Teaching and Research Section of Chaoyang District Teaching and Research Center, said that if you want to get high marks in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, candidates should seize the scoring point and see the bright spot at the beginning.
Every candidate has an exam guide in his hand. Some candidates think it is of little use. In fact, it is an important basis for exams and review. Candidates should carefully read the writing requirements on page 6 and prepare for the exam as required. There are four requirements for candidates to write * * * in the "exam instructions". First, write according to the meaning and requirements, express your thoughts clearly, healthily and clearly, and strive for creative expression; Second, we can choose the appropriate expression according to the center of expression, and arrange the order and details of the content reasonably; The third is to write narrative to make the content concrete, simple explanatory articles to make the content clear, simple argumentative articles to make the content clear, and write practical articles for daily life according to the needs of life; The fourth is to use punctuation correctly.
So, how should candidates prepare for the exam? Teacher Li said that there is no need to prepare too many compositions. The content takes "I" as the center, that is, drawing a circle with one's own life as the radius and thoughts and feelings as the brush. The scope of the composition prepared by candidates should be within this circle, enough to cope with the senior high school entrance examination.
Teacher Li said that the composition in the examination room should first catch the eye of the marking teacher, which requires that the composition should have a wonderful beginning, and the opening of the article should show the ability to control the language and be novel and unique. At the beginning of the article, we must cut into the theme as soon as possible, reflecting the candidates' literary talent. If you want to write a helpful character, the examinee can start like this: There are beautiful scenery in life, and he is helpful and conscientious, which constitutes the most harmonious and beautiful scenery in my eyes. Go straight to the point at the beginning, so that the marking teacher can naturally know what the theme of this composition is to express. In addition, the composition should have true feelings, novel ideas, appropriate language and style, a thought-provoking ending, and finally a neat picture.
Quick skill sharing in Chinese composition examination room
The composition for the senior high school entrance examination is a limited time composition. It is common for some candidates to finish their compositions hastily, or even write only half of them. This is obviously caused by insufficient allocation of examination time and insufficient composition time. Therefore, in addition to paying attention to the scientific allocation of examination time, we should also master a certain writing speed.
So how can I write quickly?
Analysis of people who write articles quickly in society has three characteristics:
(1) I usually practice more. There is a Hong Kong writer, that is, the Tang Dynasty writer who wrote Jinling's dream of spring. For more than ten years, he has written more than ten thousand words every day, averaging two or three thousand words per hour. When he is writing, he puts a watch on the table to strengthen the concept of time. If we often practice writing, all kinds of words, sentences, text structures and even some ideas and materials will be written quickly if we often use them. The short time before the exam can't solve the fundamental problem, but it is still beneficial to practice the main aspects.
(2) The heart has prefabricated components. News writing should be fast. When a reporter introduced his writing experience, he said: In terms of writing methods, I often like to make some prefabricated components, that is, during the interview or on the way back from the interview, I conceive some materials into whole paragraphs in my mind and record them in time. When writing a manuscript, you can often move the whole paragraph up. This not only saves time when writing, but more importantly, these words are often vivid and emotional, because they are written when the mind is hot. In fact, many people who write in words or speak in language have similar experiences. They are not filled with loose sand, but prefabricated components with unified viewpoints and materials. To prepare for the exam composition, we should also make some prefabricated components, that is, practice essays around a center first, and then assemble them into compositions. This kind of exercise has been done too much, so you can change the angle and title on the basis of the existing one and form a new article.
(3) get used to it. Why do reporters write news and secretaries write official documents quickly? Why did another writer write this kind of article, and it didn't work well at first? Because journalists and secretaries often write such articles, they are familiar with the ways of such articles. It is urgent to prepare for writing, so you should be familiar with it and don't have to find another way. Someone once told a story about climbing a mountain. Because of the long journey, it was getting dark at the top of the mountain. Because I was anxious to go down the mountain, I decided to open a new road and go down a steep slope, but I was surrounded by a mountainside and couldn't get down. The same is true of composition. Usually writing should pay attention to innovation, especially free proposition writing. You can have enough time to be creative after class, and failure doesn't matter much. However, in order not to delay the work, it is best to familiarize yourself with the exam composition and the emergency writing at ordinary times or after work.
Second, the secret of getting high marks in composition
Have you ever found that as long as you are a descendant of the dragon, you will have black eyes, black hair and yellow skin. Why? This is because we all have the same blood relationship and a genetic factor in China.
In fact, we Chinese people have a cultural genetic factor, which is the unique Chinese characters in China. It is this pictographic character that closely links our brothers and sisters of the Chinese nation and binds us together before and after the 5,000-year civilization, which will never be separated.
The earliest enlightenment of China culture you received from childhood may be Chinese characters. When your father or mother grabs your little hand and asks you to stretch out your index finger, dip a little tea in the teacup and draw an oblique horizontal line from left to right on the table, you will begin to accept the most primitive essence of China culture. Please don't underestimate this move. In this seemingly simple horizontal, vertical and horizontal, you begin to mature, and the genetic factors accumulated in you begin to show their effects. You have gradually become a veritable China person, a China person with China cultural traditions.
You see, writing Chinese characters well will have something to do with our traditions in China. How important it is!
But now many students don't pay attention to the writing of Chinese characters, especially in the composition book, the characters are big and small; Some went to grandma's house; Some kicked the head of the lower line; How about some? Just like crabs, they don't want to stay in the grid and want to climb out and take a bite! Some students find it troublesome to write well. But I want to say that if you write your words well, the teacher won't feel trouble reading your article. It's far from troublesome. If your handwriting is clean, it will leave a good impression on the teacher. As soon as you have a good impression, you will have this thing of emotional division. In other words, he likes you emotionally. Do you think that in this way, your score will be slightly higher than those students who are not favored by teachers?
So, how to write better, and how to make teachers have feelings for your writing? Please try according to the following aspects.
First of all, write as big as possible and use a grid. Many students, especially female students, are used to writing words as big as sesame seeds. A grid can hold at least four or five words smaller than her! As teachers, we should be like Holmes, holding a magnifying glass to correct such composition paper. I think you can write as big as a grid. The bigger the word, the more spacious the space, and the easier it is to arrange the structure of the word.
Second, don't use that extremely thin ballpoint pen, because the words written by that pen look very hard for the teacher. Especially some older teachers, whose eyes are not good, are particularly tired of reading such words. When they are tired, they will feel bad. Do you think so? In addition, writing with a thin pen is also harmful to your eyes. It is best to use a ballpoint pen with a darker color and a thicker tip. As soon as your writing is thick, it will naturally become bigger.
Third, always pay attention to the structure of some Chinese characters. If you master the structure of words, words will look good. For example, the words snow and thunder in the upper and lower structures should be written with a slightly larger prefix. If the lower part is covered, the word will look better; If the radicals of words with left and right structures are on the left, the radicals should be slightly higher; For example, next to the word mountain, the root of the word mouth should be raised a little; And those preferences
For the words next to the right, the radicals should be pulled down. For example, next to the golden character, next to the Yue character and so on. If they were on the right, they should all have fallen down.
Fourth, usually pay more attention to some fonts that often appear around you, such as shop signs, newspaper headlines, or beautiful words written by teachers and classmates. To be a serious person, when you see good words, you will use your hands to draw in the air, so that you can remember that when you write, you can learn to write down these beautiful words, and over time, the words will look good.
Don't forget, as soon as your handwriting looks good, the emotional score given to you by the teacher will go up.
Taboo at the beginning of composition
Taboo, cliche.
Some articles always proceed from the situation and say "under the leadership of ××, with the support and care of ××, with the help of ××". Some articles always start with "the sun", "the moon" and "time flies, the sun flies". These songs are always sung, and these routines become boring cliches.
Two bogey, mystifying
Some articles deliberately play games at the beginning, beating around the bush, deliberately confusing people, entering the "maze" and unwilling to write the meaning directly. It seems that this is where the article is novel and ingenious, and the level and skill can be seen. In fact, this mysterious practice is precisely the disadvantage of writing.
Three bogeys, suddenly started
Some articles lack proper explanations at the beginning, which makes them appear sudden, mindless and unintelligible. For example, some articles have no "feeling" at first. At the beginning of writing a composition, I said, "After reading this material, I have a profound experience ..." It was too sudden to write like this without mentioning the content of the material.
Four taboos and redundant explanations
At the beginning of the article, don't be sudden, don't explain, and don't make unnecessary explanations. For example, you don't need to spend a long time explaining the composition of the women's volleyball team, the time and place when the women's volleyball team won the championship five times and with whom. Of course, according to the need, it is also necessary to give an appropriate explanation to the written questions.
Five taboos, lyrical out of nothing
Some articles, especially the beginning of argumentative essays, have no relationship with the center and theme. Before the discussion has started and the problems have not been clarified, they constantly sigh with emotion. This kind of lyricism out of nothing can only be called moaning without illness.
Six taboos, around the big circle
At the beginning of some articles, whether the center needs it or not, it has nothing to do with the theme, and it is about the pre-Qin and Han dynasties, the former village and the later shop. Irrelevant, empty talk, write a thousand words, digress Wan Li, and go around a big circle before getting to the point.
Seven taboos, piling up famous sayings.
Some articles want to take the lead at the beginning and can't think of a good way, so they all move out at once, thinking that this is a good beginning. In fact, this practice is blind and the effect is often poor.
Eight taboos, repeated at the beginning
An article can only have one beginning, but some articles have two beginnings. For example, some articles originally wanted to start with a quote, but after they were finished, they thought it was better to talk about the topic, so they started again. Some articles introduce the background at the beginning, and then feel that the center of the article should be revealed first after writing, so they start again. So there will be two beginnings. In this case, according to the requirements of the topic or the center, start with one of them.
Nine taboos, blindly writing landscapes
The main purpose of setting writing is either to highlight the theme, to portray the characters or to set off the atmosphere. Generally speaking, such landscape writing is meaningless if it has nothing to do with it. Some articles really don't need to start with "flowers", "birds" and "grass".
Ten Taboos and Blind Quotations
Citation should be based on the needs of the theme and the center, and try to avoid blind quotation. Especially for the composition, if the materials provided are very long, if they are quoted at the beginning or copied completely, the focus will be unclear, the theme will be unclear, the words will be inaccurate and blind, and they will be repeated later, so you should choose to quote.
The following are some high school composition materials, starting with high school.
To quote a famous saying, the starting point is high
Quoting famous aphorisms, ancient poems and lyrics as the beginning of an article can create a cultural atmosphere, arouse readers' interest in reading, enrich the cultural background of the article and make the article shine. For example:
(1) "Wise people enjoy water, benevolent people enjoy Leshan, wise people move, and benevolent people live long". Mr. Feng Youlan once said that the Greek civilization belonging to the marine civilization, that is, the western civilization, is like smart water and smart wise men, pursuing change, while the Chinese civilization belonging to the mainland civilization is a long-lived "benevolent" and a calm mountain, respecting tradition and being cautious about "changing" nature. (Jiangsu examinee "Forever Lush and Forever China")
(2) "Learn from others" is often used to describe being able to listen to others' opinions with an open mind. There is an old saying: "The ancient sage, who follows the water, can resist it?" It can be seen that the ancients admired this. Polish proverb also says: "People who often ask for directions will not get lost." At this point, can we draw a conclusion: listen to suggestions, the more the better, and listen to all suggestions? (Shandong candidates "lock the lock for" pointing ")
Example 1 is quoted from Confucius and Feng Youlan. Example 2 is written in old sayings and proverbs, which is in line with the theme and rich in meaning. It not only shows the examinee's profound cultural accumulation, but also reflects his flexible thinking. It can be seen that putting Miao Yan's wonderful sentences in a conspicuous place will undoubtedly make the opening full of literary talent and charm.
(3) Ask the world how to teach people to live and die together. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face. ("Ask what the world is like")
(4) The aesthetic master Rodin once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Spin this kaleidoscope")
(5) The ancients said: "The benevolent is Leshan, and the scholars are happy with water." Leshan is tall and straight, and the water is bright and smart. It is no wonder that a Qingxi will attract people like Li Bai and Du Fu to stop and stare, which will make many successful or failed literati willing to spend their lives here instead of "straying into the dust net" again. (the association of water. 》)
(6) Heaven benefits without harm; The way of a saint is indisputable. Mencius said: "If what you do seems good rather than good, you would rather not do it;" If what you do looks evil rather than evil, you would rather do it. "A hasty journey of life, a hasty walk, and a hasty choice. What kind of heart lamp should be lit between such haste? ("Heart Star Lamp")