1 the final voice of the college entrance examination is approaching day by day, which makes the candidates panic. This is the most important exam in life, just like the moment when the pupa breaks out of the cocoon, the success or failure is only in an instant.
I still remember that night when I was a child, I snuggled in my mother's arms and counted countless stars. The phone suddenly rang. It was my aunt. My mother told me that my cousin did well in the college entrance examination today.
"College entrance examination, college entrance examination." I have been saying this strange word "Mom, what is the college entrance examination?"
"When you finish high school, you should choose the university you want to go to. The college entrance examination is the standard of choice. This is an important exam! So the third year of high school will be very tired and tired. "
I am happy to think that the college entrance examination is so far away from me and I can be happy for a long time! Sleep with a smile ... if you sleep deeply, you will surely wake up.
Last year, my cousin took part in the college entrance examination. He told me that the night before the college entrance examination, my stomach hurt badly, and then I didn't sleep well all night, and I was almost late in the morning. In a hurry, he finished the exam. Of course, the result was expected: two copies.
My cousin heard the news and decided to reread it. I don't understand. In such a deep night, in a hellish life, hasn't he lived enough I used to think so. Now that we've reached this point, rereading is a last resort. "Cousin's mouth hung a faint smile. In fact, as we all know, he is hiding, hiding the endless pain in his heart, and hiding the blood that will be ejected from his chest. I finally woke up slowly from a deep sleep. Before I knew it, I was almost in the third grade.
It is a last resort for students to take the college entrance examination. If you don't take this most important exam, how can you create a happy life and make your future more brilliant? It is also a national necessity to formulate the college entrance examination. If you don't use such cruel means, how can you choose outstanding talents from all the people to build the country? How to change the status quo of the country?
College entrance examination, as a last resort.
I hope everyone will be gorgeous to the extreme at the moment of cocoon breaking.
After all, the college entrance examination always has to be faced. ...
Write the composition of NMET 2, and build a banner for the team.
Peng Moying, Senior 3, Gao 'an Middle School
I have seen such a clip on TV: in the forest, a group of wildebeests were blocked by the river. It was the rainy season, and the rolling river roared downstream with sediment, making a low roar. The wildebeests looked at the river in fear. Once they stepped into the rapids, no one knew what the next second would be like. Every roll of the rapids is a stirring of the soul. Soon, the wildebeest leader slowly walked to the shore, trying to step his front hoof into the water and then quickly jumped back to the shore. He hesitated and lingered, and finally, he jumped into the rapids without hesitation ... other wildebeests followed suit and resolutely jumped into the rapids.
The determination and fearlessness of the wildebeest leader set up a flag flying high for the team. An excellent team needs such a leader, who is the core and soul of the team. Leaders inject vitality into the team and are the vane of the team.
There is an old saying in China: All is fair in war, which shows that the "head sheep" plays an important role in the "flock".
Navy SEALs are undoubtedly the most elite special forces in the world. They can do anything in the sky, on the ground and in the sea. The "sea seal" team members have gone through gold panning in the sand, and they have been selected by thousands. The captain of the "sea seal" has experienced more severe training than purgatory. In the dictionary of "seal", there is no cringe, only obedience, no individual, only team. No matter whether the comrades are alive or dead, they will not leave any one behind. All this stems from the absolute trust and follow-up to the "seal" captain. Therefore, an excellent "head sheep" can lead an excellent team and make the team have strong centripetal force and combat effectiveness.
As the saying goes: "the train runs fast, all by the headband." The locomotive is to the train, just like the leader is to the team, leading, controlling, promoting and pushing each other, thus maintaining stability, promoting unity, ensuring development and moving towards success.
Lenovo Group started from a small company, and after more than 20 years of efforts, it has grown into a large enterprise group with diversified development of the global information industry. This cannot but be attributed to Liu Chuanzhi, the "head sheep" who leads the development of the group. IT is under his leadership that Lenovo has grown, which not only established its leading position in China market, but also promoted the development of a number of national IT enterprises. IT is also under his leadership that Lenovo has become an excellent team in the IT field driven by global competition.
Set up a banner for your team and make the team invincible forever!
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The proposition of "building a banner for the team" attracts people's attention. The author grasps its connotation and skillfully transitions from nature to human society. The argument is full, persuasive, original and profound. This paper has a complete structure, rich materials, fluent language and clever cutting. The scene description at the beginning of the article is original, and the writing in the middle is good at deep thinking and rationality, which can be called a masterpiece in the examination room.
Illusion description: I seem to see a huge net full of bright red forks rolling towards me, making me unable to move and breathe. I seem to see the angry face of the teacher again, as if I heard the sad sigh of my parents and the ridicule of others.
Environment description: It is cloudy with cold wind blowing from time to time. I couldn't help shivering when the wind hit me. The classroom was quiet, only the sound of rustling papers was heard, Hua! A classmate accidentally knocked the book to the ground, and my heart jumped with him. My deskmate's test paper has been handed out, with a score of 72. Looking at the sad face of my deskmate, I can't help playing drums.
Language action: the test paper lies quietly on the table. I lifted the test paper with trembling hands, and a bright red word came into view. When my hand shook, the test paper was closed again. I gritted my teeth, reached under the test paper and turned it hard. Bang, I saw my score ──48, alas, poor 48, and I collapsed on the table.
All the above methods can be comprehensively applied in our actual writing. It should be noted that everyone's experience and personality are different, so everyone's psychology and ways of expressing psychology are different. Only by showing this difference can we show people's rich and complicated inner world and form a wonderful China world. To do this, in addition to the above description methods, we need to spread the wings of imagination, so as to master a wonderful pen and write a vivid and touching article.
In the final stage of writing the composition for the college entrance examination, I think that four words should be emphasized in the composition for the college entrance examination: "write correctly", "write well" and "write well" are mainly the requirements for examining the questions, and "write well" includes true materials, ingenious structure, novel content, novel conception and beautiful language.
The exam is always on the road-accurate and comprehensive.
Candidates should pay special attention to the exam training before the exam to ensure an accurate and comprehensive understanding of the materials.
Accuracy is to accurately grasp the core meaning of materials. For example, the core implication of Jiangsu 20xx college entrance examination composition is the understanding, thinking or emotional experience of cars in life. Leaving the car in life and writing it as a virtual car, such as the car in history and the car in public opinion, is not an accurate understanding of "the car in life" and "the car coming and going", but a digression. Only by grasping the understanding and thinking of "Shuo", "Long" and "Short" in 20xx can we accurately hit the core of the material.
Comprehensiveness means grasping the meaning of the material as a whole, rather than grasping a sentence or a word of the material to determine the meaning of the material. Therefore, it is necessary to ponder every word in the material repeatedly in order to accurately grasp the center of the material. I suggest you read the composition carefully for five times, and then compare it with the raw materials to see if the thinking is correct, so as to avoid the danger of "one careless move will lose the whole game". After the examination of the questions is determined, a writing outline should be drawn up to prevent the phenomenon of writing errors, which is often called "secondary errors"
The examination of questions determines the "life and death" of writing, and it is necessary to ensure that the composition is "written correctly".
Organize your own materials-unique and rich
Candidates have accumulated a lot of writing materials in high school for three years, but in the final stage, candidates should use their own eyes to screen these materials and strive for the uniqueness and richness of the materials.
Narrative material should grasp its own unique experience and rich and profound material of life. The material can be classified into traditional culture, family friendship, ordinary greatness, vulnerable groups, touching scenes and tortuous stories. The material of argumentative paper requires that the arguments should be original, novel and diverse, with cultural thickness and ideological depth. The original argumentative material can be started from these angles, such as "a unique celebrity", "a rich masterpiece", "a city with personality", "a culture with rich background" and "a phenomenon worth thinking about". When quoting these materials, we should make appropriate changes according to the concept of materials, highlight the key points, and make the writing content better consistent with the materials.
In addition to case materials, we should also properly sort out our own thoughts and emotions, do some refining, and form our own systematic ideological understanding and emotional experience. Only when there are things, feelings and reasons can we write a thick article, that is, "realism"
Establish your own framework-standards and intelligence
On the one hand, the college entrance examination composition emphasizes the standardization of style, and narrative should have the "six elements" of narrative, including events, narration and description; Argumentative writing should conform to the structure of asking questions, analyzing problems and solving problems; But don't "model composition" to prevent "one thousand people". This requires a little agility, a little fancy, a little thoughtfulness and wisdom outside the norm.
For example, narrative can consciously set flashbacks, twists and turns, interspersed, and can set one or two core scenes and detailed descriptions. On the other hand, argumentative essays can be set up from scratch, and the argumentation structure from phenomenon to essence, positive and negative contrast, layer by layer depth and dialectical analysis can be constructed during analysis. In this way, we can establish our own writing framework. With the writer's management of the structure and the writer's "brand" and "personality", the composition has the characteristics of "agility" and it is easier for the composition to win the favor of the marking teacher. In the final stage, according to your own writing framework, you should repeatedly write several compositions or write several composition outlines.
In addition, in the choice of writing style, I think ordinary students should stick to the style they are good at and be faithful to one. However, students with similar writing skills in the two styles decide their writing style according to the topics in the examination room and the feelings on the spot. If they can think of a touching story, they will write a narrative, and if they have good knowledge and materials, they will write an argumentative paper, but they should quickly determine their writing style in the examination room.
To construct one's own composition structure is simply to pursue the exquisiteness and agility of the structure, that is, to write skillfully.
Revise your composition repeatedly-upgrade and file.
In the last stage, I suggest to revise many of my compositions to improve my composition by one or two grades. So how to modify it? Mainly reflected in the profound, beautiful and innovative writing.
Deep writing: that is, accurate and profound thinking.
Re-examine the questions and improve the accuracy of examination. On this basis, we should readjust our thinking to make the article full of "self" feelings, such as thinking about the value and pattern of life from the perspective of "life", exercising dignity, good and evil, etc. Thinking about life style, human morality, compassion, etc. from the perspective of "humanity"; Reflections on cultural tradition, civilized accomplishment, social cornerstone and backbone soul. From the perspective of "nation"; From the perspective of "grass roots", we should think about the ordinary and the great, the living state, the quality of life, the spiritual space and the happiness index. Think about what changes have taken place in your knowledge from these angles, sum up these understandings into concise sentences, and integrate these thoughts into your composition, so that your article becomes rational, inspiring, speculative, profound and diverse.
Beauty of writing: that is, the language is beautiful and delicate.
The composition of college entrance examination should not be gorgeous and empty, nor should it be poor in vocabulary, but should be a work rich in language literacy and cultural taste. The examinee's language is permeated with rich cultural background and conveys a beautiful and exquisite aesthetic feeling.
When revising the composition, candidates can change the original declarative sentences into rhetorical questions, change the original long sentences into short sentences, compress and refine the original complex and lengthy words into concise and clear words, change the original simple words into colorful languages, and integrate some cultures, allusions and poems into their own expressions.
Writing new: that is, fresh materials and unique angles.
Whether narrative or argumentative, we should try our best to start with the phenomena in real life and the latest events. This composition is not only full of life, but also gives people a sense of freshness.
Secondly, to conceive the composition from a unique angle will also give people a refreshing feeling. The narrative perspective can be special groups, such as migrant workers, empty nesters, disabled people and so on. And it can be a special perspective, such as the dilemma between traditional culture and modern science and technology, traditional culture and economic development. Argumentative writing can be written from a person, a city, a work and a culture. This writing angle is unique and gives people a sense of freshness.
The novel materials and unique angles can be called "writing new".
Strengthen the awareness of bright spots-attract people's attention
There must be bright spots in the exam composition in order to catch people's eyes and attract people's attention.
Highlights must be highlighted in the best position, such as title, beginning, end, beginning of paragraph, transition and key paragraph.
Highlight sentences are usually rhetorical sentences, philosophical sentences, quoted sentences, transitional sentences, humorous sentences and so on. Detail description, wonderful dialogue and psychological activities in narrative are all highlights; Profound arguments, unique viewpoints, dialectical analysis and typical arguments in argumentative essays are also highlights.
The beginning is concise, and the question enters quickly; The ending should echo the beginning and reveal the theme. When writing in the middle, there are leading sentences, turning sentences and general sentences with some nature at the right time. Even in narration, the topic or meaning should be pointed out by the language of the characters, the psychology of the characters or the evaluation of onlookers.
Take the initiative to avoid the problem that affects the score-avoid the "reef"
First of all, don't copy the composition of the college entrance examination, avoid the perfect composition of the college entrance examination over the years, and conceive according to your own examination questions, so as to achieve "I write my heart by hand"
Don't write sensitive political issues or politicians, don't write about middle school students' love, don't write about magic, castles, ancient tombs and other topics that appear in online novels, and don't make up new stories. Don't be a cynic; Don't disrespect the teacher; Don't be negative, don't be depressed. Don't write such abstruse and irrelevant inscriptions or postscript. The hierarchical structure of the article should not be chaotic, but clear.
The writing language should not be "abstruse", "philosophical" and "aesthetic", and the narration or discussion should not be arbitrary, illusory, vague, vacillating, emotional and mysterious. Don't use online language, don't mix Chinese and English, don't mix foreign languages with Chinese, and don't use foreign names such as "Mike" and "John".
Don't be badly hurt: you can't lose the topic; There must be no typos in the title and the first and last paragraphs; Be sure to write 800 words; Write clearly and the number of words should be appropriate.
In short, we must "write correctly" and "write well", highlight the highlights and avoid the reefs. I think the examinee can definitely write the ideal result.
Writing college entrance examination composition 5 Haier's enlightenment
In the eyes of many people in China, Haier, a successful enterprise, is already very powerful and remarkable. However, what about a Huan? Basket 6? Do you want to carry this burden? Hey? Hey, did you get to school? 6 "sense of hardship" is the strongest. Zhang Ruimin, CEO of Haier Group, often said, "You are walking on thin ice." The average annual growth rate 16 reaches 8 1. 6%, the annual sales revenue has exceeded 40 billion yuan, not only at home, but also abroad, enterprises can have such awareness, which deserves our deep thought. According to Zhang Ruimin, their strategy of marching into China is simple: winner takes all. Their goal is not to leave you any market or territory. Needless to say, many of our enterprises, not to mention small and weak enterprises, are outstanding people like Haier. Compared with the world's top 500 companies, there is still a gap, and we dare not relax and slack off. Realistically face up to the seriousness of the challenge, fully estimate the strength and difficulties of competitors, think about the worst and work hard for the best, and the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Great China boy.
A woman from a certain country came to a primary school in China, found five children and asked them to cooperate in one thing. The lady took out a bottle with five balls in it, and each ball was held by a rope. The lady said to the five children, "Each of you must pull a small ball out of the bottle within 7 seconds, or you will be drowned by the water in the bottle." Remember, there is only room for a small ball here. Whoever throws the ball slowly is in danger of drowning. "The eldest of the five children thought for a moment, then whispered a few words to the other four children, and then gestured to the woman to swear that she had received the following orders. The lady said, "Go! "I saw the youngest child pull the ball out first, then the second, third and fourth balls, and finally the oldest child pulled it out. All five balls were pulled out in 7 seconds. The lady was stunned by China's behavior, and then shed tears of excitement. She said: "I have done this experiment several times in other countries, and all the children are struggling to pull it out." As a result, no one could get out and drowned in it. China's children are amazing! "
Friendship and cooperation
Hilton Group enjoys a high reputation in the hotel industry in the world today, with more than 200 towering and spectacular high-rise buildings around the world. Hilton Group can be invincible in the fierce competition, and the most commendable reason is that Hilton Group is United from top to bottom. Donald Hilton once said, "I may be the luckiest person in Texas. This blessing comes from friendship and like-minded partners. I hope I can stay with my colleagues all my life.
housewife
Chen Chong, a film actress, described her life like this: "Everything in life is trivial. In fact, I am a housewife in my life. I have a husband and two children ... I may have been very concerned about my career when I was young, but I am really calm now. What I care about most now is the people around me. As long as they live well and still love me, I will be happy. "
Zhao Benshan played eight roles.
In his very dramatic life, Zhao Benshan also played many roles, such as chairman, deputy to the National People's Congress, husband, father and friend. In the recording scene of Art Life, Zhao Benshan won eight roles in his life. Film and television actors: 70 points; Essay star: 80 points; Director and producer: 70 points; Deputies to the National People's Congress: 80 points; Chairman: 50 points; Father and husband: 10; Friend: 80 points
Which is more brilliant, flowers or starry sky? How should they transform from the river of life? Which is more brilliant, farming or harvesting? How should they change from the path they have taken? Which is more brilliant, tears or laughter? How should the love they gave me be transformed?
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Every time, I am strong in the loneliness of wandering, and every time I am injured, I don't cry. I know I always have a pair of invisible wings to take me far away.
I am a person who likes looking up at the sky. The clear sky taught me tolerance and openness, and the deep night sky helped me hide my inner anguish and loss. So I always like to look up at the sky when I am alone, and imagine that I have a pair of invisible wings to fly with me to a mysterious distance.
Stop and look back. I always thought that a day had passed, but I didn't know it had slipped away for a year. In the simple to almost cruel years, I came to this long-awaited battlefield-the senior high school entrance examination in the action of raising my head and bowing my head.
I vaguely remember that three years ago, my mother took my hand and walked into a strange junior high school campus. For three years, I have been showing my youth, showing my ability and writing my own sky. Now, I have been sitting on the roof of the teaching building watching the sunset, painful and happy. Recall the capable boy, smile silently, and then let go.
It's too cold up there. Looking back, I don't regret it, although my eyes are crying.
In the past three years, I have experienced the biggest difficulties and challenges in my study, the cynicism of my classmates and the indifference of my friends. But I never gave up, because I believe I have a pair of invisible wings, which take me to the distant place of success and look for more brilliant things in life.
Spread out the palm of your hand, and a year will surge in your hand and eventually return to peace. I also began to wait silently for my next sky. I have never doubted my choice, never underestimated my ability, because I believe I have a pair of invisible wings that take me to the distant place of hope.
Junior high school life, tenacity and failure * * *, dreams and pain together, riding invisible wings, flying to unknown distances, looking for the treasure of victory.
Invisible wings are inserted on everyone's shoulders. People with lofty ideals soar in the sky. Step on the clouds to meet the sunrise and fly to the farther horizon.
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I have a pair of invisible wings, which contain parents' love, teacher-student relationship and friends.
Return the love of parents.
My parents are a mountain standing in my heart, the greatest and most spectacular parent mountain. On this mountain, I can always see flowers in bud. Every flower is my love. I will return these flowers to you in multiples, repay my parents' love in a filial way, and let them feel that love is also rewarding. Faced with all kinds of disasters, parents are the first to rush forward. How many children's life miracles are born in the hands of their parents, and how many "heavy stones" are on their parents' backs? Let's repay our parents' love!
Unforgettable teacher-student relationship
The greatest, hardest and most selfless cause in the world is education.
September comes as scheduled, and September 10 is Teacher's Day. On that day, let's recall the bits and pieces with the teacher together, how unforgettable. Climb the nobility of youth. Teachers make our childhood more beautiful and unforgettable. I am very happy with my teacher. Growing up on a bumpy road, the teacher didn't reach out to help us. He encouraged us in his own way and made us stand up strongly. This is a sincere and touching teacher-student relationship!
Bloom the flower of friendship
The most important thing in life is your bosom friend. Friendship is a twinkling star. It only glows when the weather is good. Everyone can see the shadow in the clean stream, and that is your loyal friend. In the sunshine, you can see what you have been following, and that is friendship. Then please take action and let the flower of friendship bloom!
There is no rehearsal in life, and every day is live broadcast. Ride your invisible wings and you will fly higher and farther!
The moon in the city is still the moon a thousand years ago, and the thoughts are still a thousand years ago, but the moon cakes are more and more expensive, but the Mid-Autumn Festival is more and more lost and becomes a memory.
The decline of traditional festivals is the inevitable result of the development of the times. Some people think so. Perhaps, fireworks are not allowed in the city, and the square buildings in the city can't see the moon. In the city, we still have to work hard on traditional festivals, which are out of place, but the details of the festivals are tailor-made, so let's celebrate foreign festivals.
However, what is the necessity of a nation that chooses to abandon its unique culture? In fact, it can better maintain traditional culture. Japan and South Korea are the leaders of Asian economic development. In Japan, sushi and Lamian Noodles are their eternal favorites. In Korea, they applied for the Mid-Autumn Festival patent and had a nine-day holiday. In contrast, the governments and people of these two countries are shaping and developing their own cultures with great enthusiasm. Why?
Because traditional culture is the essence of a nation for thousands of years, the source and motive force of a nation's development, and the premise and foundation of a country's survival. Draw nutrition from traditional culture, and stand proudly in the forest of world culture with unique personality. If we abandon it, maybe one day we will be no different from the Japanese, or maybe one day we will be Americans with yellow skin and black eyes?
Then, let's close the door! Someone exclaimed anxiously.
We can't make the same mistake twice. The century war that started from 1840 has a great responsibility to close the door to the outside world. The cultural impact and spread under the influence of economic globalization is in line with the historical trend. If it is simply banned, it is only the performance of cowards and fools.
I believe that the application of the traditional golden mean in China is very suitable for dealing with foreign cultures, and we can't go to extremes, nor can we go to extremes with traditional cultures. We should inherit the tradition, take its essence and discard its dross: on the contrary, we should learn from the world, others and them.
There is a foundation for the development of cultural integration. No matter the local culture, it is the sublimation of the most essential emotions of human beings, and the emotions between people are basically the same. So there must be something in common between cultures. Both Shakespeare's sonnets and Su Dongpo's River Yimeng are expressions of love. Both Adam and Eve and Fuxi Nuwa are reverie of human beings' awe of nature. Cultures can be interlinked and blended, and the key is whether children can find a point of convergence.
The students of Shanghai Conservatory of Music adapted the ancient song "Butterfly Lovers" with violins to make it sung at home and abroad, and the folk songs of "Jasmine" were adapted into piano music, which made more foreigners experience the pastoral style. These are all successful examples of cultural integration.
Culture needs to be passed on and must be passed on, culture needs to be blended and must be blended, and culture needs to develop. We must know that "a single flower is not spring, and a hundred flowers bloom in spring."
I like roses, I like the noble and tenacious momentum of roses, and its beautiful and noble figure has been deeply imprinted in my heart. Some people say that roses are beautiful, but they are actually proud. Some people say that roses are beautiful and simple. Some people say that roses are not very beautiful and smell pungent. But I don't think so. Roses are beautiful, neither proud nor simple. Roses are tenacious. I like roses.
On my balcony, there is a noble and tenacious rose. The stem of a rose is covered with thorns, just like not letting others touch his noble "body". The stem of this flower is very unique. Although other flowers also have thorns, the stem of the rose is very stylish, and the rose seems to be protecting itself.
The most beautiful part of a flower is its petals, and every flower is proud of its beautiful petals. Everyone knows that the petals of roses are red, but the petals of roses are very red. There is a color called rose red. Why did the painter call it rose red instead of other names? Because this kind of red is only available in rose petals, but not in other flowers. The rose is surrounded by layers of petals, protecting its noble "body".
Where there are beautiful flowers, there must be green leaves. The leaves of roses bloom with roses. When a rose grows, it will grow a leaf or two. When roses wither, so do those leaves. Those leaves are like roses' bodyguards, and they can't live without roses. The leaves of roses are very small, green and have red edges. Although only a few leaves set off, they all show the momentum of roses.
The tenacity of roses can be seen in the process of their growth. The pot of roses on my balcony takes a long time to bloom. I'm not saying that roses are lazy. That rose pot has spent several spring, summer, autumn and winter, especially winter. Although roses won't last forever, in winter, other plants freeze to death, and only roses persist. Whether it is cold or hot summer, whether it is the whistling wind, the rose has been insisting and has blossomed several flowers. The spirit of roses is worth learning.
Rose, a noble and tenacious flower, I like the "youthful vitality" of rose and its "perseverance" spirit.