The topic selection of cales thesis conforms to the professional training goal and can achieve the comprehensive training goal. The topic is difficult and the workload is heavy. The topic selection has academic reference value. The student has a strong ability to consult documents and materials, and can comprehensively collect personal financial information of commercial banks. In the process of writing, I can comprehensively apply what I have learned, comprehensively analyze personal financial problems, and have a strong ability to comprehensively apply knowledge. The length of the article fully meets the requirements of the college, the content is relatively complete, the hierarchical structure is scientific, the main points are prominent, and the logical relationship is clear, but it lacks personal opinions. The topic is consistent, the argument is prominent, and the discussion is closely related to the theme. The language expression is fluent, and the format fully meets the requirements of the specification; It refers to a wealth of literature and has strong timeliness.