How to write a good composition in the examination room
In fact, most candidates have no inspiration at this time. When the marking teacher corrects the composition in the examination room, he often feels that most of the compositions are mechanical and manual. At this time, I occasionally have a masterpiece with novel materials, ingenious ideas, profound thoughts and beautiful language, which will immediately make people feel as radiant as the spring breeze. How to make our examination composition stand out from many mediocre works? Today, taking the 20 1 1 year Chinese simulation test paper of Guyuan senior high school entrance examination as an example, this paper discusses the law of composition, especially writing a good composition in the examination room.
Examine the questions and make up your mind. The exam questions are not good and the meaning is inaccurate. Uncertainty is in danger of digressing. How to review the questions?
1, review the key words.
①? Remind yourself? What is this? Remind me here, does it have it? Care? 、? Constraints? 、? Reflection? 、? Alert? 、? Blame? 、? You know? And many other connotations, unlock this keyword, the eyes suddenly enlightened, composition conception and material selection have a full choice. Remind who? If you are not others, you should write around yourself, and don't regard others as the center of your writing. ②? , affect my feelings? There are two key words in this topic: one is? My feelings? The other is what you wrote on the horizontal line. Since it's my feeling, then? Me? Is the center of composition, not anything else. Even if you want to write it to others, it is only a foil to me, not the focus of performance. What is this? Emotion? What do you usually say? Friendship, affection, love, teacher-student relationship? Wait, about:? Feeling of missing, feeling of compassion, feeling of repentance, feeling of admiration, feeling of homesickness, feeling of patriotism and feeling of nostalgia? We must wait. Uncovered? Emotion? We are so fascinated that our composition becomes free.
2. Make full use of the prompt information. Information tips often point out the direction and content of writing more or less, point out the scope of material selection and express examples of ideas.
1 topic 1? It is often easy to remind others, but it is often difficult to remind yourself. This hint indicates the direction and scope of the composition. Suppose we want to write an argumentative essay. According to this information, write the following contents in the composition: Why is it easy to remind others but difficult to remind ourselves? In that case, why should we remind ourselves? How should I remind myself? 2 topic 2? Rich life, unforgettable memories of your feelings? These information tips indicate the direction of writing and give examples. In other words, we can describe our life experiences and express our true feelings, and we can write unforgettable essays.
3. Make it bigger and smaller. The composition in the examination room is generally wide, because we have to face the majority of candidates and let everyone have something to say. This kind of composition topic is relatively empty, and direct writing is often neglected. What if the topic is? Face? In that case, we have to go in? Face? Build one in the world? Point? . Therefore, we should reposition ourselves on the basis of this composition topic and find the starting point of our writing, that is, to be small. To what extent? Small enough to talk about only one thing, discuss only one phenomenon, and focus on only one thing. For example, what is the theme of this well-written composition? The moonlight touched my feelings. That sheepskin coat touched my feelings? When such a topic is specific to one thing, it will be easy to control. Is this the so-called? See the big from the small? . What needs special reminder is that in the process of getting bigger and smaller, the starting point we are looking for must be related to the same or similar compositions we have read and written, which will save time and facilitate writing.
consider
After selecting the materials, you should immediately consider how to arrange them. Those who write narratives and argumentative essays can arrange materials in chronological order, spatial order and logical order, while those who write argumentative essays can arrange materials in logical order (total score, sequence, juxtaposition and contrast). In addition, we should pay attention to what should be written in detail and what should be omitted, so that the order and details are appropriate.
main body
There must be one or two bright spots in the article to make the marking teacher shine at the moment, so as to cover up all ugliness. Highlights can be expressed in various ways: vivid descriptions of details, good sentences with rich connotations, highly personalized words, refined words and even unique punctuation marks. In short, it must have. Brilliant? : no? The sun? , there must be? The moon? ; No? The moon? , there must be? Star? ; No? Star? , there must be? Fireflies? . If it's even? Fireflies? None, then the composition can only be written in? Basic level? Wandering around the room
1. Eye-catching title.
The eye-catching title is a highlight of the whole article. Only in this way can the reviewers pay attention to it and have a good impression on the articles they have never met. Take the lead in setting an example, which is an extremely effective means to improve the grade of composition. What's the topic? A big topic and a small work? It is better to narrow the entrance, turn the broad scope of the original topic into a specific small scope, and turn the big topic into a small topic. Or draw up a topic by famous sayings; Or skillfully use rhetorical devices to draw up questions. The title of the argumentative paper should be clearly seen; The narrative should be vivid. The title is bright and the words are shining.
2. A good start.
At the beginning is the first ray of light shown to the reviewer? Sunshine? Candidates need to be carefully crafted. It not only laid the foundation for writing, but also brought a good mood to the reviewers. Don't say something irrelevant and off-topic at the beginning. Get to the point as soon as possible to attract readers. Therefore, suspense can be cleverly set to make people think, poetry can be quoted, poetry can be full of emotion, stories can be told, fascinating, famous sayings can be quoted, literary talent can be brilliant, philosophy can also be inclusive and thought-provoking. In short, the beginning should play a role in controlling the whole article, pointing out the theme, and affecting the whole body, so as to attract readers.
3. The sentence is full of literary talent.
We know that an article can only be readable and infectious if it is literary. Therefore, it is necessary to temper the text and try to be meticulous when writing. Due to the limited time, it is difficult to really choose words carefully. However, rhetorical methods such as metaphor, personification and exaggeration are appropriately used, and special sentence patterns (rhetorical questions, rhetorical questions, parallelism, antithesis and hypothetical sentences, etc.) are appropriately used. ), properly quoting famous sayings, combining long and short sentences, and combining the whole with scattered sentences will make the article shine.
(1) Living Poetry.
Famous sentences in poetry are the essence of language art, and vivid and literary effects can be obtained by quoting these famous sentences.
In 2005, Yancheng City, Jiangsu Province, the perfect composition "China people walked by me" drew on this point:
Where are China people? In the true feeling of the world. Is it a tutor? Come with a heart, not a grass? Is selfless dedication a loving mother? She mended it carefully and thoroughly, fearing that it would delay his coming home? Are you worried about your close friends? However, despite China's friendship. Heaven is still our neighbor? The warm words are Mr. Yu Guangzhong? I am here. Where is the mainland? I can't wait to see it. Is this Mr. Lien Chan? Are all the robbery brothers here, meet and laugh and forget the enmity? Best wishes from Mr. James Soong? Young people leave home, old people return, and the local accent has not changed. Wealth is not a friend, but language is wealth, which will make you enjoy your life.
Through poetry, I naturally think of the feelings of teachers, the love of loving mothers and the homesickness of wanderers, which makes people feel really excited.
② Make good use of description.
Adding some delicate descriptive fragments to the composition in the examination room can achieve the writing effect of showing the spirit in detail. Or the action is realistic and can be recognized and felt; Or the situation follows the situation, and the situation is born of the situation; Still humorous language, full of fun.
In 2003, a scene description in the composition "I want to sing a song", which got a perfect score in the senior high school entrance examination in Shanghai, is difficult to write in front of us, and it contains endless meanings, so it can be seen? Pearl of the Orient? This magical charm reveals his infinite feelings for Shanghai:
In the early morning, a tiny parabola appeared in the blue clouds, bright red and shining with golden light, breaking through the clouds. Soon, the dazzling light was sprinkled on the Oriental Pearl, which revived the transparent sphere and reappeared its true colors, shining like crystal, attracting people's attention. Gradually, the giant building with perfect integration of red and white occupied my sight. Between me and her, the Huangpu River seems to have paved a broken and shining road, which makes people can't help but run away to appease the beating heart.