Water seems to have no shape, but it can also be everything in the world. With its easy-going personality, we can trap it in one exquisite or simple container after another, and let the water take the shape we need and like at will. Water has never resisted, just rippling slightly in the container of water. I like watching fish swim away in the water. Water is like a mother who loves her children. It surrounds the fish layer by layer, leaving no gap. It seems to be afraid of getting hurt at all. But water does not limit the whereabouts of fish, but there is water where fish go. What a loving mother, she is so gentle that fish can never leave her arms.
However, there is still a persistent heart hidden under the water temperature and appearance. The tortuous journey did not stop; Unforgettable firmness along the way. Mr. Lu Xun said: "There is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road." Since the road was built step by step, what about the river? The original river course is the road leading to the sea after repeated water shocks, which takes decades or even hundreds of years of efforts. I still remember the slate in front of my grandmother's house. There is a small puddle on the hard and heavy slate. When I was a child, I always thought it was left by a Hercules passing by. Later, I learned that it is actually a masterpiece of small water drops dripping from the eaves every day. When they heard the story for the first time, no one was not moved.
Good as water. The Tao advocated by Laozi is to govern by doing nothing and by doing nothing. Water is just what he wants. But this water is not only carrying him. Confucius said, "The deceased is like this."
Li Bai has a poem: "Didn't you see how the water of the Yellow River moved out of heaven ..." Li Yu has a poem: "How much sorrow can there be, just like a river flowing eastward."
..... Water carries different ideas, flowing endlessly, witnessing Zhong Juding, the hero of the Han Dynasty, the boat paintings of the Northern Song Dynasty and the broken walls of the late Qing Dynasty. ...
I don't know how to describe real water, so I repeat what I said: "Good as water."
2. When I was in the fourth grade, the first class was to watch the tide composition on August 18. This is a sentence that I have often heard from adults since I was sensible. How I want to have a chance to see it. On Saturday, September 25th, which happened to be the 18th day of the eighth lunar month, my wish finally came true. My father promised to take me to cultivate land and watch the tide.
"What is the sea like? What is the tide like? How big is it? How did it come about ... "The car was driving on a bumpy road, and a series of questions churned in my mind. It is said that this year's tide is very strong, which will exceed previous years, so everyone is very excited and full of expectations for watching the tide.
Finally, our car stopped at the intersection and looked ahead. The first vehicles stopped in a long queue. Local people help the old and bring the young, and tourists from all walks of life flock to the embankment. And my father and I also occupied a good position to watch the tide, waiting quietly there, but our hearts were already choppy.
At about 1 in the afternoon, I suddenly found a silver belt between the sea and the sky, shining in the sun. The youth behind us stood on the motorcycle with binoculars and shouted, "The tide is coming, the tide is coming!"! Suddenly, the "long dragon" watching the tide stirred up. The cheers of "the tide is coming, the tide is coming" are one after another.
I looked around, and the tide became longer and thicker, like a white arrow. In the end, it almost occupied the whole river, and its speed became faster and faster, like a group of Ma Benteng people, and it sounded like a landslide, as if the earth shook. I can't help but admire: "It's spectacular!" I quickly pressed the shutter of the camera and took this unforgettable moment. Just when expecting more surprises, the tide gradually returned to calm. Everyone watched the tide recede reluctantly.
On the way home, I couldn't calm down for a long time. I suddenly realized that the development of Xiaoshan in recent years is not like that of Qian Jiangchao. Aren't Xiaoshan people like brave frolicters? Integrating into Hangzhou, building a new Xiaoshan and leading the new development,1.20 thousand Xiaoshan children are carrying forward the Xiaoshan spirit in the new era of "running endlessly and bravely standing on the tide" and writing brilliant poems and compositions on the land of1.40 thousand square kilometers. I also want to bless my hometown with a long history and culture. I believe her economy will further develop and her tomorrow will be better!
3. Experience: revise the composition to sum up your own shortcomings and how to work hard. 200 1, pregnant. On the one hand, (1) is incorrect, which shows the wrong idea in the article. This requires us to strengthen our ideological cultivation in peacetime. We should use Marxist philosophy to analyze our society and our life. We must have the spirit of being proactive, pioneering and innovative, and have the courage to stand on the forefront. Strive to be the leader of the times. Always care about the country's development and social progress. Only in this way can your article have the flavor of the times and stop moaning. For example, if you walk down the street with a heart that cares about the motherland and the world, you will see many unreasonable phenomena and bad habits, and you will also find great progress in our society. There are many meaningful composition ideas here. ) that is, you don't have a clear understanding of the problem, or although you have a clear idea, you don't describe it clearly in the article. In the first case, don't rush to write, think carefully about what you want to express, and then write when your mind is mature. For the second case, you must first make clear your central idea in the article; Secondly, you should look at the place where your ideas are reflected in your article. Concentrate the places that can reflect the central idea well, further render them, and skim or simply delete those places that have nothing to do with the central idea. 2. I'm not sick and have no meaningful thoughts, which means that your article is of little value. The purpose of writing an article does not mean the following situations: praise for a spirit and criticism of it. Teach people some skills and enlighten people's minds. Therefore, before writing, you should first consider why you want to write this article and what lessons others will learn from reading your article. If you think about this clearly, then the article written will have practical significance. 3. The content of the article. The content of the article should be closely coordinated with the central idea, which has been discussed in 1(2) above. I won't go into details here. 4. The structure of the article. The article has several narrative methods, such as sequence, flashback, insertion and supplementary narrative. There are several basic structures, total score, total score and total score. You can choose the appropriate structure according to the needs of the article. In addition, read more articles. Learn from other people's construction methods. 5. Words and expressions. (1) typo. (2) Wrong words. (3) Errors in sentences. A dialect is serious. B common sense is wrong. Errors in sentences. Incomplete composition, improper collocation, semantic repetition, semantic ambiguity, illogical, disordered word order and unclear reference ..
4. Write a composition on the topic of "the size of the heart". Today, I read a little story about the size of the heart by a master and a disciple, which was very enlightening. The story goes like this: Kobayashi asked the master, "Is there a difference in the size of the heart?" Master replied, "No." Kobayashi asked again: "Then why do you say that some people have big hearts and some people have small hearts?" Master said, "You imagine an elephant in your mind." Kobayashi replied, "Yes." "When you imagine an elephant, do you use your whole heart?" "yes." "I want another mung bean in my heart." "yes." "Is there a heart?" "yes." Master said, "This is the only heart. If you think big, your heart will be big; If you think small, your heart will be small. " A person's heart can be big or small, one hair can fit in an hour, and when it is big, it can contain everything in the world. The heart is boundless, only in what you think and read. CCTV has an advertising slogan "The stage is as big as the heart". It can be seen that when people realize, the big realization is big, and the small realization is small, and there is no fixed number. I saw a passage: "If the heart is big, the big things will be small; Look down on the vicissitudes of the world and feel safe inside. Empty your heart and love the beauty of the world; Calm down and talk about things in the world; Settle down and cope with the changes in the world. Great things are difficult to bear, adversity is difficult to have a mind, giving up is difficult to have wisdom, and success or failure is difficult to persist. " Yesterday, I met a man. I pointed to this and that. I despise such people most, that is, selfishness. After all, this is your freedom, but pretending to be smart is really speechless. I really can't put on a smile on my face, so I have to find one. If the hand can't reach, the heart can touch it; What the ear can't hear, the heart can hear. Do things with your heart, distinguish right from wrong, and be insightful. Doing things with your heart can be ingenious; If you work hard, you will be born with wisdom. There are thousands of things in the world. Only by doing things with your heart can you do it well. It is difficult for us to be great men, but we can have the same mind as great men. We can't do earth-shattering things, but we can do ordinary things with a big mind. Don't put your heart on the palm of your hand or under your nose, but on the top of the mountain and the sea. If you put your heart into the sea, you will be "confident that your life will last 200 years and your water hammer will last 3,000 miles". You will bravely stand at the forefront and show your true colors as a hero. The stage is as big as your heart. The world is as big as the heart.
5. Go upstream and get a new life. The Yangtze River flows eastward day and night. You can definitely go down to Wan Li. But I think that going upstream is a hero.
Contrary, it is not smooth, which means that you will encounter more bumps and hardships in the process of progress, which means that success requires more efforts and hardships than ordinary people. To be different is to be different, to have one's own opinions, to be different, to stand out from the crowd, and to have the feeling of "a little red among all greens". Reverse is rebellion, doing unconventional things, doing things that ordinary people can't do, which requires enough courage, confidence and strength, firmness, perseverance and success. It is easy to go downstream, but difficult to go upstream, which is a truth that people with a little common sense understand. This is the profound meaning of "sailing against the current, if you don't advance, you will retreat". It is difficult to go upstream, but it is even more difficult to go upstream, because it requires not only enough energy and physical strength, but also a heavy price, even life. I believe that only by going upstream can we stand tall; Going upstream is what heroes do.
Throughout the history of ancient and modern China and foreign countries, sailing against the current can achieve great things everywhere, and those who drift with the current will be submerged by the long river of history.
Thousands of fish in the rolling Yellow River swim downstream to the sea, but a group of small carp dare to go upstream and come to Longmen Mountain in Luoyang, Henan Province, trying to perform an earth-shattering feat. One of the small carp jumped over the dragon gate and became the envy of everyone. The story of "yue longmen the Carp" has spread for thousands of years, but it has left a far-reaching impact on people.
On the 15th day of the fifth lunar month, seawater flows into the trumpet-shaped Hangzhou Bay, forming the world-famous "qiantang bore", which causes tens of thousands of people to stop and watch on the levee. In the stormy waves, it is often seen that frolicters bravely stand on the tide and hold high the red flag without getting wet. Under the attention of thousands of people, the wave makers standing at the forefront are really "out of the limelight" and admirable.
History is a river, and everyone must cross it. In the historical trend of social development, there are countless people who drift with the tide and do nothing, but few people who really swim against the current and make great achievements. However, in a sense, "truth is often in the hands of a few people" is absolutely correct. At the end of Qin Dynasty, if everyone complied with the "social trend" at that time and succumbed to the brutal rule of Qin Ershi and Hu Hai, then history would stay at the original level forever and never move forward. However, a group of people, led by Bobby Chen and Guangwu, rose up and showed their left arms and held the famous Daze Township Uprising, which pushed the wheel of history forward.
"Sometimes I ride the wind and waves, raise my muddy sails and sail in the deep sea". Looking back, I am filled with emotion. Those who swim against the current are real heroes. Go upstream and you are a hero.
6. Write the most valuable excellent composition about mountain climbing. Selected high school compositions
Mountaineering composition examination
The group came to Taishan to record the Qingming Special Program. Finally, Yu Dan, a special guest and professor of Beijing Normal University, expressed his mountaineering sentiment: I am a mountain peak. This is not only the realm of mountaineering, but also everyone's heroism. Another special guest, Yi Zhongtian, the commentator of "Lecture Room", commented on "Three Kingdoms" and felt that life is like mountaineering. Not everyone can climb to the top of the mountain, but it is good to climb it; Not everyone has to climb to the top, but one step at a time.
You need to have a comprehensive understanding of the material, but you can choose a side and an angle to conceive the composition. Independently determine the concept, style and title, not less than 800 words; Don't deviate from the meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.
[writing instruction]
The writing essentials of the new examination form of "new material composition" are: find out the meaning of the material as much as possible, that is, the meaning point, and choose the best point you think (or the one that has the deepest feelings and the most words) as the main theme of the article to be written through comparison and identification.
In our life journey, almost everyone has had the experience of climbing mountains. Among them, some people can bravely climb to the top of the mountain, some people climb to rest, and finally climb to the top of the mountain to witness the beauty of "once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will know the details, and other mountains will be dwarfed." ; Some people only focus on participating in mountain climbing. In order to enjoy climbing the mountain, it doesn't matter whether they can climb to the top.
Mountain climbing is like this, so is every activity, work and career in life. From this extension, we can have the following thoughts on the review of this material:
Yu Dan's point of view: ① Climb the peak bravely and aim high; (2) have the heroic spirit of striving for the first place; ③ Be competitive and never admit defeat; (4) Be brave to stand on the tide; Be a social reformer; Success belongs to the indomitable.
Yi Zhongtian's point of view: ① participation in everything; 2 Every step of life should be taken well; 3 Do what you can, without regret; 4 do what you can; ⑤ Enjoy the process as much as possible and create a new world.
When choosing the best entry point, candidates should not only consider the best angle, but also the angle that suits them best, that is, the angle that others have no intention of taking care of but they feel the deepest, have something to say and can speak well.
In addition, when writing, in order to be on the safe side, it is best to quote the sentences related to your opinions in the materials for analysis, so that the arguments will be deducted with the requirement of "Don't write without the meaning of the materials", and the opinions have sources, reasons and opinions, which are easy to be recognized by reviewers. Accurately understand the meaning of the material, and make an idea (choose a "meaning point" in the material) according to your own knowledge reserve, life experience and ideological understanding, so that you can conceive the composition.
The flower of success belongs to indomitable people.
Life is like climbing a mountain. Some people can climb to the top of the mountain in one go, others crawl to rest and persevere, and finally climb to the top of the mountain, witnessing the beautiful scenery that "once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will know the details, and other mountains will be dwarfed". And enjoy the scenic spots of "infinite scenery of dangerous peaks". In the former, the spirit of "being the first" is commendable; The latter, the spirit of "walk the line" is equally commendable. The flower of success is also in front of perseverance.
7. Today, the word "Pudong Story Dream", which praises Pudong people for being at the forefront and daring to be the first, is particularly beautiful in Pudong, because Pudong is a place where dreams can come true. Twenty-three years ago, the pioneers of Pudong's development and opening up began the construction of a spade and a soil, and the spirit of Pudong took root and sprouted under the nourishment of the hot land of entrepreneurship. The times are progressing, the cause is developing, and the tide of reform and opening up continues to provide nutrients for Pudong spirit. "Seize the day, be brave, advocate science, be open and inclusive" came into being.
Pudong spirit expression:
1, * * * round dreams and strive to create brilliance.
2. Pudong-Every day is a new height.
3, all rivers run into the sea, the new is endless, the worries are ahead, and you dare to be the first.
4, all rivers run into the sea, the atmosphere is open, there is no end to innovation, and you dare to be the first.
5. Strive for a position; Unity. Sweat flows to one place; Development. Think in one place; Innovation. Love to go to a place; Up.
6, all rivers run into the sea, bravely stand in the forefront, open up and dare to be the first.
7. Open and inclusive, standing at the forefront, striving for excellence.
8. All rivers run into the sea, inclusive and open, daring to be the first, pragmatic and innovative.
9. Fashion, dreams, classics and glory.
10. Develop with sincerity, open with faith, develop with wisdom, and enlighten with wisdom.
1 1, Pujiang frolic in the waves, the East China Sea, connecting with the world and radiating the whole country.
12. Sightseeing in the rivers and seas, taking the magnetic levitation, inviting the moon near Jinmao and listening to the beautiful sound of pearls falling. Shanghai was big and Huangpu River was bright.
13, Rong Zhi's financing is integrated into the world, and entrepreneurship and innovation create the future.
14, all rivers run into the sea, blend harmoniously, innovate and create, be efficient and pragmatic, and respect morality.
15. Dare to be the first, blaze new trails, develop scientifically and pursue Excellence.
16, Chongwen Shangzhi, honest and caring, elegant and harmonious, open atmosphere.
17, open and inclusive, pioneering and innovative, fighting bravely and developing scientifically.
18, all rivers run into the sea, bravely stand on the tide, compete for quality gambling and create brilliance together.
19. Openness is a bow, agitation is an arrow, innovation is the soul, and harmony is the foundation.
20. Dare to think, dare to do, dare to be the first, be good at knowing, be good at doing and be innovative.
2 1, Qi Xin works together, is pragmatic, dares to stand in the forefront, and creates first-class.
22, all rivers run into the sea, bravely stand in the forefront, forge ahead, and dare to be the first.
23. Know how far to go and be confident and self-reliant.
24. "Pu" wrote the miracle of China and reproduced the legend of "the East".
25. Pudong-striding ahead of the times!
26, new words first, dare to be the first!
27. Love big construction, be enlightened and civilized, be fashionable and novel, and create high quality.
28, sincere unity (forward-looking), not arrogant (sober), pragmatic thinking (truth-seeking), eclectic (learn from others), pragmatic innovation (steady development), diligence and wisdom (ambitious), chasing the former with the latter (* * * rich).
29, self-reliance, self-confidence, dare to think, dare to do, dare to fight.
30. Try first, innovate and surpass, lead the first class, and integrate into the international community.
3 1, seeking truth from facts, innovating and opening up.
32. Puna Baichuan, Dong.
33. Open-minded, inclusive, good at breaking the law, and trustworthy.
34, the atmosphere is open, dare to be the first.
35. Scientific Outlook on Development, the consciousness of serving the overall situation, the mind of all rivers run into sea, the courage to break a cocoon into a butterfly, and the virtue of being kind to others.
36. Integrity, Excellence, Atmosphere and Harmony.
37. Piloting China is willing to be a pioneer in the era of reform; Look at the world and aim at global business leaders.
38. Atmosphere, enterprising, wise, striving for the first place.
39, people-oriented, science first, development first, hard work first.
40. Help the tide in the same boat, make bold progress, and be bold first.
The arduous task of the times has given birth to the sense of urgency and responsibility of Pudong people. In order to improve the socialist market economic system, they are eager to catch up, dare to fight for the first place, and dare to break new paths and create the "first place" in system innovation, industrial upgrading and opening up. Pudong was born because of reform and opening up, and prospered because of reform and opening up. The bearing and ambition of standing at the forefront and striving for the first place have become the most distinctive temperament and style of Pudong people.