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After reading Su Wu Shepherd, I felt a warm current in my heart, which made my heart restless for a long time and left me with endless aftertaste. This story tells that when Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, Su Wu was appointed as the envoy to the Xiongnu. But the Huns broke their promise, detained Su Wu and tried every means to persuade him to surrender. Su Wu would rather die than surrender, so the Xiongnu leader had to send him to Beihai to herd sheep and said to him, "When the ram gives birth to a lamb, I will let you go back to the Han Dynasty!" Su Wu came to Beihai, herded sheep every day and looked at the direction of the Han Dynasty ahead. He stroked the envoys handed over to him by Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty when he set out, thinking of his relatives in his hometown and the imperial court. Even when he slept at night, he held the special envoy tightly to his chest. After a long time, all the hair on the envoy fell off, leaving only a bare pole. Su Wu spent 19 years in Beihai, and was not released until the Xiongnu reconciled with the Han Dynasty. On the day he returned to Chang 'an, Chang 'an people came out to meet him. They were moved to tears when they saw Su Wu's bald envoy with white hair and beard. Yes! Su Wu's indomitable and unswerving spirit has been deeply admired and recited by people in history! In the past, at the forefront of War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, some people abandoned the interests of the people for a little personal benefit. Such a person is spurned by his lover and despised by others. Similarly, the society also needs a word "loyalty", otherwise who wants a person who betrays his company? There is no such thing. Just like dogs, loyal dogs will follow their owners and work hard all their lives. Sun Yat-sen said: "It is more important to die for the country than Mount Tai. If I die, the country will live, and if I live, the country will die. Between life and death, I care about my choice! " One should not go against the truth like this, be loyal to oneself and the country, be just, and pay tribute to those who have sacrificed for the national interests!

During the holiday, the teacher arranged for us to read some extracurricular books at home to increase our knowledge. I often go to the bookstore to read books during holidays. Among them, the story "Su Wu Shepherd" touched me the most.

During the period of Emperor Wu of Han Dynasty, the relationship between Han and Xiongnu was very tense. Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty sent Su Wu to Xiongnu, but Su Wu was not afraid. He resolutely accepted the mission and went happily. When he arrived in Xiongnu, Su Wu was imprisoned by Xiongnu Khan, who persuaded him to surrender with generous rewards and high officials. He forced Su Wu to submit with hunger and cold, but Su Wuning refused to surrender. Khan finally asked him to go to the frozen Lake Baikal in Siberia to herd sheep. Su Wu didn't lose heart in the extremely bad environment, and looked forward to returning to the motherland one day. Many things happen. After more than ten years, Su Wu finally returned to the motherland. Su Wu is not afraid of power, but still maintains a lofty national integrity, and people pay high tribute to this hero with national integrity.

On behalf of the country, Su Wu went abroad, refused to be tempted and confused by wealth in the face of cruel reality, and was able to always put national interests first and bear the burden of humiliation, showing a man's integrity. In fact, there are many patriots in China who care about their lives for the benefit of the country, such as Yue Fei, little heroes Gazi and Yulai, and "China Brothers Company".

Although I am still young, I want Su Wu's patriotism. Students, patriotism is no small matter. Let's start with the little things around us and be patriotic. Extended reading article

The so-called feeling

It can be the truth or subtle thoughts learned from books, the thoughts and associations inspired by the contents of books, the determination and ideals inspired by reading, and the attack and satire of reading on some ugly phenomena in society. The expression of post-reading feeling is flexible and diverse, which basically belongs to the category of discussion, but writing is different from general argumentative writing because it must be based on reading. To write an experienced, insightful, emotional and innovative summary, we must pay attention to the following points:

First, read the original text.

The feeling of "feeling after reading [1]" is caused by "reading". "Reading" is the basis of "feeling". At first glance, you may not even understand what the original said. How can you have a "feeling"? Reading is superficial, of course I don't feel profound. Only by reading carefully can we feel something and feel deeply. If you want to read an argumentative essay, you must find out its arguments (opinions and propositions), or criticize any wrong opinions, think about what you are inspired by, and find out what the arguments and conclusions are. If it is a narrative, it is necessary to find out its main plot, how many characters there are, what is the relationship between them, and the year when the story happened. The social background involved in the work, but also to find out what kind of spiritual quality the work reveals, what kind of social phenomenon it reflects, what thoughts and feelings the author expresses, which chapters of the work are touching, why it is so touching and so on.

Second, be friendly.

As long as you read the original text carefully, an article can be written in many ways. If you have a deep feeling about the center of the original text, you can write it as a post-reading feeling, a post-reading feeling about other contents of the original text, or a post-reading feeling about individual sentences. In short, as long as it is the original content, as long as you have feelings about it, it is possible to write a comment. In order to write a good review, you need to express what you know.

Third, choose the right feeling point.

An article can express many feelings, but a comment can only talk about one center and must not cover everything. Therefore, the next step is to screen and compare these many feelings, find out the one that you feel the deepest, the latest angle, the most realistic pertinence and the fluency when writing, as the center of review, and then demonstrate it in writing.

Fourth, the narrative should be short.

Since the feeling after reading is caused by reading, it is necessary to describe the facts that cause "feeling" in the article, and sometimes describe some examples that I think of. In short, after reading it, "Syria" is indispensable. But it is different from the requirement of "narration" in narration. The narrative in narrative pays attention to concrete, vivid and vivid, while the narrative in reading comprehension pays attention to conciseness and conciseness, and does not require "touching", but only reasonable and well-founded. After reading the original text, a beginner feels that the narrative is not short, but actually becomes a retelling. This is mainly because the author can't grasp the spirit and main points of the part to be quoted, so he can't be concise. Concise, not as few words as possible, but also concise.

Fifth, Lenovo should pay attention to form.

There are many forms of association, such as association (there are similarities between related things), anti-association (there are opposites between related things), association (there are similarities between related things), inheritance association (there are similarities between related things) and similar association (there are similarities between related things). Pay special attention to the use of the same association and similar association when writing the post-reading feeling.

How to write a comment after editing this paragraph?

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I. Format and writing method

There are usually three ways to write after reading: one is to abbreviate the outline, the other is to write after reading, and the third is to extract good sentences and paragraphs. The title can be "after reading"; You can also use your own feelings (one or two sentences) as a topic. The next line is "after reading". The first line is the main title, and the second line is the subtitle.

Second, you should choose what you feel most, which is the key to writing a good summary.

Third, we should closely connect with reality, which is an important content of the feeling after reading.

Fourth, we should properly handle the relationship between "reading" and "feeling" and combine discussion, narration and lyricism.

Fifth, don't describe the original text too much, but reflect the word "Jane".

Sixth, we must carefully examine the questions.

When writing, we should distinguish what is primary and what is secondary, and strive to make "reading" grasp the key points and "feel" to write experiences.

Seven, to choose materials.

Reading is the basis of writing. Only by reading carefully can we deeply understand the content of the article, so as to grasp the key points and grasp the thoughts and feelings of the article, and then we can have some feelings. Only by studying hard can we find the connection point of reading experience. This is the central idea of the article and the sentence that points out the central idea of the article. When writing a work, you can't cover everything. You should write down the changes in your thoughts and actions after reading it.

Eight, to write a post-reading feeling, you should start with a brief introduction of the content of the work you read, and then write your experience.

The original content is often summarized in 3 ~ 4 sentences. In the end, most of them return to the works they have read. Focus on the word "feeling" and remember to connect with your own life.

Nine, be reasonable and write the true feelings.

Matters needing attention in writing after reading

The feeling after reading is by no means a copy or simple retelling of the original text, and you can't play it arbitrarily without the original text. It should be based on writing "experience".

Write with true feelings. It should be a heartfelt feeling, not a "criticism letter" or a "guarantee".

(3) Write unique and fresh feelings, and strive to have new ideas to attract or infect readers.

4 it is forbidden to write a running account!

When editing this paragraph, what should I see about the reading experience of learning?

(1) Cite-Cite materials around sensitive points. Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text.

(2) Summary-summarize the main contents of this article, be concise and write down the key points.

(3) Discussion-analyzing materials to improve the sense of practice. Clarify the basic point of view. After introducing the content of "reading", we should make some comments on "reading". We can analyze the content of "citation" on the basis of facts; It can also be excavated from phenomenon to essence, from individual to general; It is necessary to analyze the meaningful materials and then naturally "light up" your feelings. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be placed at the beginning of the sentence, at the end of the sentence and in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.

(4) Connecting with reality and expanding vertically and horizontally. Put facts and reason around the basic point of view. The most taboo in writing after reading is to talk about things in general. If you can't talk about the matter, you can't go deep, and the article is too superficial. Generally speaking, it often makes reading feel lack of pertinence and can't give people a shock. Contact means close contact with reality, which can not only be related to similar phenomena in real life from one place to another, but also to the opposite problems in real life from ancient times to the present. You can focus on the overall situation, or you can start with small things. Of course, when analyzing and demonstrating with reality, we should also pay attention to counterattack or echo the "quotation" part from time to time, so that "connection", "quotation" and "connection" become the main part of the argumentative paper, which is an exposition of the basic point (that is, the central point), and prove the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, making the argument more prominent and convincing. In this process, we should pay attention to the fact that all facts and reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view.

(5) Conclusion-Summarize the full text and sublimate the sentiment. The content of "reading" is not easy.

The above five points are the basic ideas of writing the post-reading feeling, but this idea is not static, so we should be good at mastering it flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify your point of view", but the order of the two can also be exchanged. Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written.

First, we must pay attention to it.

Read more and read less, and be good at mastering flexibly. For example, "brief the original text" usually comes before "clarify the point of view", but the order of the two can also be interchanged. Furthermore, if the facts in the third step are social phenomena or personal experiences, then the fourth part need not be written.

Second, we should attach importance to "reading"

In the relationship between \ "reading \" and \ "feeling \", \ "reading \" is the premise and foundation of \ "feeling \"; Sense is the extension or result of reading. You must "read" and then "feel". Without "reading", there will be no "feeling". Therefore, to write a post-reading feeling, we must first understand the original text, accurately grasp the basic content of the original text, correctly understand the central idea of the original text and the meaning of key sentences, and deeply understand the author's writing purpose and the thoughts and feelings expressed in the text.

After reading a book or an article

There will be many feelings and experiences; For the same book or article, different people think from different angles, have different views and get different enlightenment. Taking the well-known idiom story of "teasing others" as an example, from the perspective of satirizing Mr. Nan Guo, we can realize that people who have no real skills will "expose themselves" sooner or later and realize the importance of mastering real talents and learning. If we consider the reason why Mr. South Guo Can is doing well in Qi Xuanwang, we can think that leaders should have a pragmatic leadership style, not flashy, or they will be confused. If we think from the perspective of management system, we can further realize that Qi Xuanwang's "pot rice" lacks the necessary evaluation mechanism, which provides objective conditions for people like Mr. Nan Guo to muddle along all day, thus associating with the necessity of breaking the "iron rice bowl" and abolishing the pot rice since the reform and opening up.

Fourth, narrative works cannot repeat the original text in a large number of pages.

After reading an article, you can't write many feelings or experiences, so just choose. As a beginner, you should choose what you feel most and have something to say to write. We should pay attention to grasp the angle of analyzing problems, pay attention to our own actual situation, and choose the most suitable feeling point from many clues as the center of the full text.

In junior high school composition class, in addition to writing "thoughts after reading", teachers will also ask students to write "thoughts after watching a movie, a TV series or attending an exhibition". The writing of post-reading feeling is the same as post-reading feeling. Just give a brief description of what you observed in the first part, and then draw out opinions and discuss them.

Five, how to write the scenery and things after reading?

(1) Briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text. Such as the title of the book, the author, the writing year of the book and article, the abstract of the original book or text, etc. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion. In this part, the word "Jane" must be highlighted, and the specific contents of books and articles must not be described in large paragraphs, but the parts directly related to feelings should be simply described, leaving out things unrelated to feelings.

(2) clarify the basic point of view. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. Such a sentence can be called "viewpoint sentence". This viewpoint sentence expresses the central point of this article. The position of "viewpoint sentence" in the text can be flexible, which can be at the beginning, at the end or in the text. Beginners of writing had better come straight to the point and write their own opinions at the beginning of the article.

(3) Put facts and reason around basic viewpoints. This part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic point (that is, the central point), proves the correctness of the point of view by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the point more prominent and convincing. In this process, it should be noted that facts and reasoning must closely focus on and serve the basic point of view.

(4) Combining basic ideas with practice. A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. This "reality" can be personal thoughts, words and deeds, experiences, or a social phenomenon. When connecting with practice, we should also pay attention to closely focusing on and serving the basic viewpoints, rather than blindly connecting and disconnecting. The above four points are the basic ideas of writing post-reading, but this idea is not static.

(5) Briefly explain the relevant contents of the original text, rewrite your feelings, and don't focus on the introduction and deviate from the theme.