That is to say, your thesis is confused, without highlighting the key points and the structure of the article is not obvious. You should refine your theme again, then grasp the theme to explain the argument, and then explain the argument. The structure of the article should be clear, that is, you can know what you want to say at a glance, instead of feeling confused after reading it for a long time without knowing what you want to say.

I'm sure I can pass the paper. Just revise it a few times. It's not as serious as you think. Come on!