(Hebei) Liu Haibo Laiwen High School

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A master asked his disciples to tidy up the courtyard. The first disciple was careless, mowing grass and cutting trees, not seeing the beauty of the courtyard, adding a sense of desolation; The second disciple was very careful, not only preparing soil and weeding, but also planting flowers and grass according to the terrain, and the yard suddenly became magnificent and distinctive. The master said to the first apprentice, "You have finished." Say to the second apprentice, "You are finished."

In life, some people do things hastily in order to finish their work; Some people work hard to do a good job.

Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Finish and Do Well". What you write must be within the scope of the topic, decide independently, choose your own style, and draw up your own topic, and you must not copy it.

Writing instruction

1. "Completion" is a job, which is the minimum requirement. "Doing well" means doing the best and pursuing perfection. A word difference means a thousand miles. Many people just want to do things, with rough quality and loose structure. This is the case with many processed products, which only seek quantity but not quality, with low value and poor reputation. However, although many works of art are few in quantity and perfect in quality, they have won a lot of attention and praise.

2. "Finish" and "do well" have their own reasons, requirements, efforts and intentions. But no matter interpersonal, no matter workplace, no matter study, no matter work, we should aim at finishing well. It takes patience to "finish" and wisdom to "do well". With patience and wisdom, you can "finish" and "do well".

3. "Finish" and "do well" reflect two attitudes towards things. One is coping, and the other is taking it seriously. Everything needs to be taken seriously, done with heart, and never treated with a perfunctory attitude. Doing things can't just stay at the level of completion, but also have the idea and pursuit of how to do things well, that is to say, doing things well is not enough, but also good. It may be easy to finish a job, but it may take us a lot of effort to do a good job.

Student exercises 1

Finish and do well.

(Hebei) Laiwen Middle School Hou Mingming

After completion, it is a stream flowing in the mountains, plain and comfortable; Doing a good job is the sea where rivers converge, surging and magnificent. Finished, it is a sparrow that can only fly a few meters from the ground; Well done is an eagle soaring between heaven and earth. After finishing, there are a few white clouds under the clear sky, which have no characteristics; What is done is the sunset glow against the sunset in the evening, which is colorful, steaming and poetic.

Finishing is a herd mentality, a business-like attitude; Doing well is an enterprising spirit and a full and positive attitude towards life. Completion is passive, and doing well is active. After finishing one thing, you will feel relaxed and passive; Do one thing well, and you will gain happiness and joy. Doing things well will make you successful.

Doing well comes from taking things seriously.

During the Republic of China, Mr li jinxi ran a newspaper in Hunan. There were three people who helped him copy the manuscript at that time. The first scribe was taciturn, just copied the manuscript honestly and didn't make any mistakes. He just did his job, so he was unknown from now on. The second scribe is very serious. He carefully checked every manuscript before copying and corrected every misspelled sentence. Later, he wrote a lyric, which Nie Er set to music and named March of the Volunteers. He is Tian Han. Because of his earnest attitude, he can do a good job and have a bright future. The third scribe is different. He also reads every manuscript carefully, but only copies the manuscript that conforms to his own opinion. Later, he established the People's Republic of China (PRC) with March of the Volunteers as the national anthem, and he was Mao Zedong. He does his work best because he has a serious and responsible attitude towards his work and himself. It can be seen that the gap between completion and completion stems from the attitude of doing things. Only by taking things seriously can we do things well.

To do well, you need to do your ordinary things extraordinary.

When Tony Hsieh, a famous entrepreneur, left the IT industry and sold shoes online, his career was not smooth. But he tries to do everything well. In order to facilitate customers to choose shoes, he asked to take pictures of each shoe in stock from eight different angles. In terms of shortening delivery time, in order to satisfy customers, he settled his home near the airport and the warehouse operated 24 hours a day. These seemingly ordinary little things have been perfected by him. Therefore, Tony Hsieh succeeded, and his website was named as one of the "25 indispensable websites in your life" by Time magazine. His success tells us that success lies in doing daily things well and doing ordinary things to the extreme.

Pippen did his "supporting role" well, which made Jordan's myth; Coca-Cola Company transformed the small beverage bottle and made every detail well, which won the favor of more consumers. The perfect presentation of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games made the world feel the great charm of perfection.

Finishing is the foundation, doing well is the development and the premise of success. If you do things well, success is just around the corner.

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This paper expounds the relationship between completion and completion, and the following highlights are worth learning:

1. The argument is clear and to the point. The author grasps the relationship between "finishing" and "doing well", and puts forward that doing well is the foundation, passivity, and finishing is the development and initiative, calling on people to do things well.

2. Clear thinking and clear hierarchy. The article adopts the total score structure, and in the part of analyzing problems, it adopts the form of sub-arguments, which not only makes the article more in-depth, but also makes the article coherent and rigorous.

3. The example is typical, fresh and detailed. The author chooses the cases of li jinxi, Tian Han, Mao Zedong and Tony Hsieh as the key points to discuss, and briefly discusses Pippen, Coca-Cola Company and the 2008 Olympic Games, which makes the article focused and informative.

Haibo Liu

Student exercise 2

It's over? Do a good job!

(Hebei) Laiwen Middle School An Kaixuan

Completion is a hard indicator, and doing well is the ultimate goal you should aspire to even if you can't reach it. Doing a good job requires indomitable perseverance, firm patience and correct skills. If the goal is not achieved, Shenyang will always be "the second in Zhao Benshan", and Zhan Tianyou will not be able to stay in the future. China's fighters can only approach the United States and cannot catch up with its advanced level.

Without perseverance, how could He Xiangmei become an all-around warrior with amphibious combat capability in less than five years? I think, from the moment he put on the military uniform, he has decided to do his best. Only after a hundred tests can steel become steel. After several years of hot and cold, he is sweating every day. Without extraordinary perseverance, how can he persist in gnashing his teeth? Without persistent training, how can he become a soldier king who can go to five seas in nine days and win every battle? Only doing the best is the most touching.

Without firm patience, how can Du Canlala become a successful professional elite in just a few years? Many people always try to do a good job when they are looking for a job. After a long time, they gradually perfunctory and just want to finish it as soon as possible. But Du Lala always does his best. After work, she does newspaper clippings for the company, which is exquisite and perfect. Because of this little newspaper clipping, she was appreciated by Liszt. In a key assessment in the future, because of Liszt's sentence "Du Lala, this person is good". Let Rose give up the idea of getting rid of her, let her successfully advance and do the job she likes. A newspaper clipping is simple, but success is no accident. If there is only a newspaper clipping, the opportunity will never come easily. I think this newspaper clipping is just a drop in Wang Yang. Only by doing everything best can Du Canlala stand out from many competitors.

How can young and weak people win in the competition if they don't have the skills to sit in the right place? When the two brothers went up the mountain to cut firewood according to the teacher's instructions, the younger brother had to use his brain. Brother thought he was strong enough to cut four bundles of firewood, but he couldn't carry it halfway up the mountain, so he had to throw two bundles. When he returned to the monastery exhausted, his brother had already returned. The clever brother let the firewood flow down the river and easily brought back eight bundles of firewood. Using water skillfully, eighty bundles of firewood are a piece of cake!

Everything should be done well, and only when it is done well can the value of doing it be fully displayed. Which exquisite jade article you see shows its exquisiteness and beauty only after thousands of carvings? Only by controlling the embryo soil, temperature, color, temperature, etc. Fine blue and white porcelain can be made at most. If you just deal with it with the mentality of finishing, either the color of the tire is not pure enough or the color is not green enough, and it can only become a defective product after all.

Aren't we the same now? As long as you have the perseverance to fulfill your vows, the patience to sit on the bench, and the work and rest skills to combine arts and sciences, you can make good use of the prime time of the college entrance examination sprint. At that time, after the college entrance examination, we will be able to smile at each other and say that we have no regrets in youth.

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This article is an argumentative paper written around the topic, and the highlights are as follows:

1. This paper focuses on this topic, which not only clarifies the relationship between them, but also makes in-depth exploration. How can we do things well? Be patient, persistent and wise. This makes the article reach the development level of composition on the theme-profound.

2. The expression of narration and discussion makes the article convincing by combining facts and arguments. A good composition should not only choose typical and fresh materials, but also use skillful skills to master these materials and serve the theme. This paper has done this.

3. Simple language and changeable sentence patterns make the article seem boring. Although the language is not very gorgeous and there are not many rhetorical devices, this simple and simple language makes the article have substance in speech and no vanity.