1, Tip 1: Design suspense to attract readers (let readers not know but want to know)
2. Tip 2: Cut to the chase and make your point clear.
My friend, how do you feel when you see mountains of garbage, streams and rivers stinking and harmful gases poisoning people? At that time, I was so angry that I wanted to shout loudly: "Please pay attention to the living environment of human beings!" (selected from the full text of Guangdong senior high school entrance examination "I pay attention to human living environment")
3. The beginning of memory. "Remember ..."
4. Tip 4: Highlight contradictions and render the atmosphere.
Tips: Narrative writing should be good at creating contradictions and unfolding stories in contradictions in order to attract people. There is a contradiction at the beginning of this article. The purpose is to quickly grasp the reader's heart and arouse the reader's interest in reading.
5. Skill 5: Clever use of rhetoric to show literary talent.
6. Tip 6: Describe the environment and set off the background.
Outside the classroom, the whistling north wind is banging on the wall with dense raindrops, ringing "Chen Wenjing". In the classroom, an all-around competition exam is in a white-hot stage. (selected from the full text of "Building a Wall in My Heart" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao, Hubei Province),
Purple clouds filled the whole sky, including a bloody sunset. Such a warm picture shows the warmth and calmness of "the sunset is the most beautiful", which is intoxicating and fascinating. (Selected from the full text of "Bringing the Beauty of Dawn to Lost Me" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)
The evening breeze blew the last wave of ripples on the river, the sunset put away the last afterglow, and the autumn frost watched the last goose return. We stood quietly, our eyes wandering on the distant door of memory. When many have withered, we can at least say to ourselves, "Don't be sad, I have experienced that feeling, although only once." (Selected from the full text of "Once Owned" in the senior high school entrance examination in Anhui Province)
Tips: All landscape words are sentimental words. In the writing of narrative and prose, environmental description is essential. Environmental description can render the atmosphere, contrast the characters and promote the development of the story. A brief description of the environment at the beginning of the article can not only provide a specific background for the article, but also form a special atmosphere for the article. At the beginning of the above three paragraphs, the first paragraph is about the arrival of a sudden rain, in order to set off the background of the exam in the classroom and create a tense atmosphere. The third paragraph is about the sunset, which mainly lays the foundation for writing your own life feelings below and is an emotional trigger. In the third paragraph, through the descriptions of "evening breeze", "sunset glow" and "autumn frost", the mood of the characters at this time is set off. The three paragraphs are simple but practical, and the effect is good, which can greatly stimulate readers' interest in reading.
7. Tip 7: Quote widely and highlight the theme.
"Please take my song back to your home, please leave your smile ..." Whenever this familiar melody rings in my ear, I feel particularly cordial like meeting an old friend I haven't seen for years. (Selected from the full text of "Singing and Smiling" in the senior high school entrance examination in Gansu Province)
Edison, a famous scientist, said, "Self-confidence is the first secret of success." Yes, with self-confidence and constant efforts, you can succeed. (Selected from the full text of Henan Province Senior High School Entrance Examination "Success with Confidence")
"The moon is hazy, the birds are hazy, and the curtain is red with begonia."
Every time I recite this poem, I feel indescribable intoxication. My heart is hazy, my eyes are hazy, and the whole picture is displayed in front of me. (selected from the full text of "Intoxication" in the senior high school entrance examination in Jilin Province),
Skill counseling: Quoting is a very common way to start an article, which is very rich in content. If it is an argumentative paper, it is often quoted by celebrities to enhance the argumentation effect and highlight the theme, as in the second example above; If it is a narrative or prose, you can quote lyrics and poems to trigger the following, which is convenient for narrative and lyricism, such as the first and third cases above. In addition, you can also quote old sayings, proverbs, couplets and so on.
Second, how to write the ending skills:
When the ancients talked about the ending, they often took the "leopard tail" as the standard, which meant that the brushwork of the ending should be concise, bright and clean, just like the leopard tail sweeping, loud and powerful, giving readers room to chew and remember. Please look at the full-text ending skills of the recent senior high school entrance examination.
Tip 1: echo from beginning to end and highlight the main idea
(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. (Selected from the full text of "Flower Season with Dreams" in Huzhou and Jingzhou senior high school entrance examinations)
Tips: Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in examination room writing. Generally, the author puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning, so as to make the center of the article stand out clearly. You see, in the above example, the little author used the way of echoing from beginning to end, and highlighted the theme of the article with beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness!
(End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! (selected from the full text of "Fire of Guarding Spirit" in Henan senior high school entrance examination)
Tips: This is the beginning and end of an argumentative essay in the examination room. Compared with the previous example, this example is concise and vivid. Put forward an argument at the beginning and get to the point quickly. The ending is repeated, echoing the beginning and strengthening the argument.
Tip 2: Speak from the heart and appeal for the sake of appeal.
Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. (From the full text of "Bringing Love to Others" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)
2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland. We are not our parents, but our enthusiasm is our character. We don't need to abide by those rules and regulations, break the old rules and regulations, let the fire of passion in our hearts burn more fiercely, string our laughter and love together, and let the whole world be shrouded in love. Laugh as much as you want, cry hysterically if you want, don't suppress yourself, don't let that old concept bind you, don't change yourself casually, please remember my famous saying: "I am me, give me a little sunshine, and it will be so brilliant." (Selected from the full text of "Give a little sunshine so brilliant" in the senior high school entrance examination in Fujian Province)
Tips: The composition in the examination room pays attention to sincere feelings, and it is necessary to write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out at the false and ugly. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together. The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future. In the second paragraph, the little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighting the theme and giving readers a strong spiritual shock.
Tip 3: Ask questions skillfully and introduce deep thinking.
Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life.
Tips: A good article, carefully chosen, has endless implications, should be philosophical and enlightening. Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province, "I in the Haha Mirror")
Tips: At the end of this paragraph, I would like to express my views on the teacher's comments. First of all, I use the form of parallelism to explain that every student has his own personality, and teachers don't have to erase students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question to inspire people to think and deepen the connotation of the article.
Tip 4: Quote good sentences and be colorful.
"Wild incense is fragrant, beautiful wood is cloudy, wind and frost are noble and clean, and the water comes out." In the past 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! (Selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Thinking from the sky")
Thinking of this, I remembered a famous saying: "There are many books around me. If you find them, you will certainly learn a lot ... "(selected from the full text of" Reading People Around You "in Shaanxi Senior High School Entrance Examination)
The song of tomorrow says, "Tomorrow follows tomorrow, and tomorrow follows tomorrow. I waited for tomorrow, and everything was in vain ... "I hope everyone can seize today and create a better tomorrow. (From the full text of "Creating a Better Tomorrow" in Neijiang, Sichuan)
Zola said: "Life is only two and a half minutes, one minute to smile, one minute to sigh, one minute to love …" In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with admiring my mother's dress, that minute's smile was not forced. After that one-minute sigh, it is no longer a sigh, but a transmission of love. My mother has integrated her love for life, life and relatives into her daily life.
Tips: There are many famous sayings in ancient and modern China and abroad. At the end of the composition, if you can quote skillfully, it will definitely add a lot of color to the article. Here are a few examples, quoting poems and famous sayings respectively, which not only increases literary talent, but also deepens the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good, and students should learn from it. In addition, the range of quotations can be wider, such as proverbs, proverbs, popular lyrics and so on.
Tip 5: lyrical discussion, extraordinary momentum
In fact, peace is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud wandering in the sky, lightly dotted with the blue sky, fresh and natural.
Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (selected from the perfect composition "In the Mood for Love" in Jilin Province)
Tips: These two paragraphs are from the heart, out of emotion, using parallelism and figurative rhetoric to express their true feelings with beautiful words, coupled with appropriate comments, the end of the article is extraordinary and powerful.
Tip 6: Set off the scenery and combine the scenes.
The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun gradually disappeared in the distance and disappeared in the sunset glow. There is no distance between the two. (selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Reading in the Rain")
Tips: The characteristics at the end of this paragraph are very prominent, and the role of scene contrast is also obvious. Through the description of the scenery after the rain, the author implies the disappearance of the emotional gap between the two generations and the organic combination of emotion and scene. Implicit and meaningful. The aftertaste is endless.
At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Selected from the full text of "Growing in the Sun" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)
Tips: This ending highlights the role of sunshine, combining sunshine with growth, implying that although the road to growth is bumpy, it is full of sunshine and expresses an optimistic mood. It not only takes care of the main idea, but also shows deep feelings.
There are various ways to ask questions in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, which can be roughly divided into three categories according to the different expressions:
(1) Ask questions through lyric.
(2) by describing the topic.
(3) Through discussion.
Of course, in the specific writing process, we can flexibly use a variety of expressions to point out topics in the middle of writing. The ancients said, "The beauty of festivals is one thing." Because of the tight time and heavy tasks, students should seize the opportunity and place to clarify the topic at the intersection of the content of the article, thus greatly deepening the impression of the reviewers on the composition of "clear thinking" and "prominent center".
The writing of the senior high school entrance examination is original and innovative.
In the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, the novel style will add a lot of color to the composition of the examination room.
1 application inscription
Start with the inscription, or explain the reason for writing, or draw the content, or reveal the main idea.
For example, days are like fine sand in your hands. If you are not careful, you will not hesitate to pass through your fingers one by one.
-"Picking Day"
2. Clever use of subheadings
Using subheadings in writing makes it easy to divide the content of the article into several sections, with clear organization and eye-catching external structure. At the same time, it can also outline, reduce the arrangement of transitional words and make the center more prominent. For example, when a student wrote Be Kind to Nature, he skillfully disassembled Ma Zhiyuan's poem Qiu Si and took its four famous sentences as four subheadings, reflecting a heavy topic: Saving the earth is urgent!
3 lens type
That is to say, by using the method of film montage, life is scanned by shaking and pulling, and all the pictures in the theme are captured in the lens, showing rich connotations through combination.
For example, a student wrote a social survey about the truth, and explained the meaning of the truth through four reports about the understanding of the truth according to his own career and life experience, through several characters such as grandma wearing reading glasses, uncle Wang, the eldest brother of a soldier, and uncle Li, who brushed the car.
4. Paving type
In writing, the main body of the article is formed by spreading, and the structure is innovated by parallelism.
For example, a student took "Book" as the topic and determined the main idea of the article: Books brought me joy. Then use four visualized sentences to explain: "In the book, I feel that I am in a sumptuous dinner; In the book, I am a hungry bird; In the book, I am a glittering and translucent snowflake; In the book, I am a rocking boat. "
5. Dialogue or interview
This composition form is more free and flexible, which can narrow the distance between readers and authors and stimulate readers' * * *. For example, when a student writes Classroom Interview, he personifies the classroom and interviews it with an interview situation. The dialogue itself is very penetrating and vividly describes the vivid classroom scene.
There are also epistolary, diary, trial, script and so on. Of course, the novelty of style is only a method of composition innovation, and more importantly, the innovation of intention.