Writing 600 junior high school with robbery as the topic

There is a writing evaluation guide here, but there is no model essay. I hope it helps you.

This is a meaningful composition, with a limited range of materials (topics) and close to students' lives. Everyone has something to say, and there won't be too many digressions. But obviously, it is not to test whether the candidates can describe and judge the social phenomenon of "robbing people", but to test whether the candidates can have some feelings about this social phenomenon, write the real experience of "I", dig out the deep-seated reasons behind "robbing people", treat "robbing people" dialectically, and prescribe an irrational prescription for "robbing people"

Although the "grabbing" mentioned in the materials is negative, the writing requirement is to write an article around the social phenomenon of "grabbing". Some materials require writing without deviating from the will of the material, so pay attention to the intention of the material. It can be seen that the author did not limit the candidates' ideas to materials, but reserved a variety of ideas for candidates.

The article can be positive, pointing out that "grabbing" is a positive attitude towards life, a spirit of not to be outdone and striving for the first place; This attitude and spirit of "grabbing" is the need of the times and the need to promote social progress. Only "grabbing" can make life shine. We can also criticize our "grabbing" mentality in turn, pointing out that this "grabbing" actually reflects a defect in our (a nation's) literacy, and so on, giving people (a nation) a strong medicine to awaken people (a nation) who blindly "grab". It can also be dialectical, which not only affirms the positive significance of "grabbing", but also points out its shortcomings. It is particularly important to note that if some students talk about their personal feelings about "grabbing", such as being confused in the face of "grabbing" or in the process of "grabbing", it is also in line with the question.

The understanding of the meaning of the question needs to be relatively concentrated, and the content cannot be generalized or dispersed. You can supplement the content of "grabbing", such as "grabbing time", to make the content clearer and more concentrated. If we only grasp the word "grab" to expand the association, the content of the article may be too much and too scattered, so the ideas appear scattered and not concentrated and clear enough.

In the choice of style, narrative (narrative, narrative) and argumentative (argumentative, argumentative) all meet the requirements of the topic.

Thinking guidance

You can cut in from the perspective of keywords

-the keyword "grab".

Judging from the meaning of materials and reference books, it mainly refers to "fighting for things that don't belong to you" and "taking the lead and taking the initiative to fight", such as fighting for time, opportunities and jobs; Rescue, emergency rescue and so on.

From the perspective of the meaning of life, grabbing can be understood as an unhealthy mentality, a personal (national) literacy defect, and an anxiety of the times. "Grab" can also be understood as a positive attitude towards life, a spirit of not being outdone and striving for the first place; And this "grab" attitude and spirit is also the call of the times. Ten thousand years is too long to seize the day.

-A few key sentences

1. Indeed, in China's cultural and realistic situation, many people's action principle is to get practical benefits and benefits first.

Who is "many people"?

"Many people" can be understood as self-serving and not harming others. If you snap up profitable goods, you get benefits; Queue up in advance to get your child's admission degree; Pre-emptively buy multiple sets of commercial housing before the house price rises, and make profits by changing hands; Get information in advance and grab job opportunities; Grab the trademark of "hometown of celebrities" to gain business opportunities ...

2. In a sense, it is some people who "rob" all the time, turning our society into a world that advocates "rob" more and more.

Who is "some people"? What are the ways of robbery?

"Some people" refers to people who are selfish and selfish at the expense of others. For example, bad literati are robbing, academic fraud, and grabbing fame and profit; Many profiteers are robbing others of fake and inferior products (gutter oil, Sudan red, poisoned milk powder, beef sauce, lean meat, etc.). ); Faint officials are robbing, seeking fame and reputation, and forgetting righteousness at the sight of profit; Corrupt officials are plundering, ignoring people's livelihood and seeking profits only. ...

What are the specific manifestations of the "world that advocates looting"?

Grab salt, vinegar, Banlangen, get on the bus and grab a seat; Comment, grab the "sofa". Send a letter, preferably by express mail. Take a picture, it's better to wait. Self-driving, preferably expressway, high-speed rail or magnetic levitation. By plane, it is best to fly directly. Doing things, it is best to have both fame and fortune. Starting a business, it is best to get rich overnight. If you get married, you'd better have an existing house and a car. Line up, you'd better cut in line. Do things to get the first place: hold the first Olympic Games and Asian Games, and build the tallest tower in the world, the tallest building in China and the first bridge in Asia. High school hopes that the college entrance examination will be the first in Shenzhen and the first in Guangdong. ...

Positive and negative angle cut-in

Definitely positive "grab"—

1, work-study program, do good deeds first, and make more contributions to others and society.

Time waits for no one, but it's now or never. Walk in front of others, walk in front of time, and you can see the dawn before others.

3. Snatching is speed, ability and strength.

4. "Ten thousand years is too long, seize the day." Seize the development opportunity and win success.

……

Pathological robbery that denies negative meaning—

1, the world has its own rules, and it can grab a moment, but not a lifetime. Down-to-earth, notebook points are the right way.

2. Modern society is systematic and orderly, and grabbing is not the quality that modern civilization should have.

3, happiness can not be robbed, happiness is mature, happiness is natural.

……

You can cut in from the perspective of why you "grab".

-Humanity

1, the principle of nature. Snatching is the eternal law of nature, the basic law of human social survival and the innate instinct of human beings. At the beginning of life, when hundreds of millions of sperm rushed to the egg, only the sperm who grabbed the first place had a chance to be given life.

2. Survival of the fittest, survival of the fittest, people's life is spent in the alternation of "grabbing" and "letting".

-National character

1, competitive. Care about social comparison, winning the king and defeating the enemy. Better be the head of a chicken than the tail of a phoenix. Be the first, be a person.

2, impatient, busy, anxious. Willing to be the most anxious and impatient person on earth.

3, do not consider the rules of bad habits.

4. Cultural habits of following the trend. Enthusiastic about listening to the wind is rain, lacking rationality.

-Personal psychology

1, self-fulfilling needs. Desire to be the focus of attention and appreciation. (Maslow's hierarchy of needs theory)

2. Blind conformity.

3. Selfish psychology.

4. Start first, then suffer.

5. Broken window effect. You are not ashamed to rob me and everyone. Lose the moral foundation.

-Social environment

1, limited resources and unfair social distribution. "Grab" means getting more resources and privileges. Get benefits from "grabbing".

2. Lack of government functions. People lack confidence in the credibility of the government and lack trust and security in society.

3. People's sense of helplessness in the period of social transformation. Garlic roses, ginger roses, mung bean roses and white vinegar roses have caused panic among the people. Coupled with repetition, monotony, complexity, inflexibility, constraint, procrastination, consumption, out of control and unfairness, China people are impatient and want to change the status quo by "grabbing" time and seizing opportunities.

People are full of fear. ……

-Historical reasons

China has been beaten for a long time, and finally won the development opportunity after the reform and opening up, which is especially cherished. "Recovering lost time" has become the aspiration of the whole nation.

You can look at it from the perspective of how to treat it.

-think forward according to the material (negative, pay attention to the negative side of "grabbing", such as blindly "grabbing", "guns" at the expense of others, and "grabbing" is irregular. )

1, "grabbing" is a misinterpretation of the natural operation mode and an infringement of human freedom. It is better to rob than not to rob. "Don't grab" means not afraid to grab, not unable to grab, but unwilling to grab. "The wind is full of buildings without talking, and silence is the longest."

2. Don't rob, don't let yourself go, and don't go with the flow; It is to see through the indifference of gains and losses, the firmness of fame and fortune, and the shrewdness of the situation. It is conscientious and down-to-earth, and it is even more sloppy.

3. Not grabbing is a kind of tolerance. Not grabbing is a kind of mind. Not robbing is a state. Life is a journey, even if the road is bumpy and tortuous, with the mentality and character of not grabbing, we can fully, steadily and solidly carry on this only trip smoothly.

4. With the realm of life without grabbing, the journey of life is more pleasant. Do not rob, achieve the massiness and enrichment of life, enhance people's taste and realm, calmly walk through the clouds of history, walk through the shackles of fame and fortune, and live calmly!

People are social animals, and no one can exist independently. If you blindly "grab" and blindly expand your own selfish desires, you will eventually go to destruction.

-reverse thinking according to the material (definitely, pay attention to "catch" the positive side, such as taking the lead and grabbing the first hand. )

1, life needs to take the initiative to grab, seize the time and seek development; Seize the opportunity and win the first opportunity; Grab the ranking and fight for the first place.

2. With the consciousness of "grabbing", you have goals, pressure and spirit, and you dare not be complacent and stagnate. Countries, nations, collectives and individuals all need a strong "grab".

3, there is a "grab" behavior, seize the opportunity, one step ahead, in order to surpass themselves and let themselves pass through mediocrity.

4. In a sense, if you don't grab it, you won't have food; If you don't grab it, you are inferior; If you don't grab it, you will be eliminated by history ... In this cruel competitive environment, you should learn to show your elegance, accumulate culture, realize yourself and sublimate your life. Robbery is a way of life in modern society; It is a "kung fu tea" that people must drink.

5. "Grab" means not to rob others to satisfy your own self-interest, but to show your life value through fair competition with others.

-Dialectical thinking

1, "grabbing" is an enterprising spirit, and "not grabbing" is an open mind.

2. "Grab" makes people happy and anxious. It brings pain, misfortune and confusion to mankind, competition, progress and excitement ... It is inevitable, it makes people feel embarrassed and suffocated, and it also encourages people to fight for fear first.

3, grab, not necessarily brave, but also a kind of recklessness; Not robbing doesn't mean cowardice. On the contrary, not grabbing is a strategy, and only truly brave people dare to give up. It is also a kind of wisdom not to rob, and only a true wise man can face the hollow reputation of life calmly. It's a gesture not to rob. Whether in officialdom, shopping malls or love, it is the embodiment of open-minded humanity.

-Comparative analysis (focusing on the concept of "grabbing": letting, indifferent to fame and fortune, etc. )

1, Grab and Rang are two fish connected end to end in Taiji diagram. "Grab" and "Let" go hand in hand. If there is grab, there must be let, and if there is let, there must be grab. In life, there can be no "grabbing". Without "grabbing" individuals, there will be no progress and development, and there will be no progress and development in society. If humans hadn't "robbed", maybe we would still be living in caves on the top of the mountain, eating and drinking blood, and plowing with animal skins. There can be no "concession" in life. Without "concession", there would be no life and harmony. Without the group's life and harmony, the individual's survival will also encounter problems. If human beings had not "let", maybe we would have eaten up the bones and meat of our compatriots, or maybe human beings would have become a species that can only be seen in fossils.

2. "Snatching" and "letting" are still "zero-sum games", and one side's "grabbing" must be based on the other side's "letting". There was a leadership vacancy in the unit, and many people tried to grab it, but in the end only one person took office. As far as this person is concerned, he "robbed" it, and others must "give" it to him, although this "giving" is not voluntary. For another example, in the stock market, people are "robbing", but generally speaking, people always "rob" as much as "give": how many people make money, how many people lose money, how much money they earn and how much money they lose.

3. "grabbing" and "letting" are both promoting and building the world. But "grabbing" and "letting" have different functions. The result of "grabbing" is development and progress. The result of "letting" is order and morality. "Grab" is the engine, "Let" is the steering wheel and brakes. If you don't "catch" the vehicle, you can't run. Without "concession", there will be accidents and even crashes.

You can cut in from the perspective of how to do it.

-What do the others do?

Ancient people: Zhuangzi and other philosophers.

Foreigners: Thoreau and other celebrities, Japanese in the earthquake, etc.

Contemporary people: Qian Zhongshu who is indifferent to fame and fortune. Others rob fame and gain, and quit Ji Xianlin, a master of Chinese studies and a moral model, and so on. Seize the day and fight for a few more seconds to develop two bombs and one satellite.

-What should we do?

1. Create a civilized social atmosphere. What I gave up was a temporary seat, and what I gained was the respect of a car full of people, a little fun all day and the accumulation of a good habit.

2. Be calm and rational.

3. The means of competition must be legal and reasonable. Participants enjoy the process of competition, not be hurt by it.

4. Use legal norms and moral supervision to drive away the bad habit of "grabbing" culture, make vulgarity elegant and barbarism civilized.

5, in the face of interests, in the face of honor, putting others first is a concession; The burden is ahead, the responsibility is at present, and take the initiative to "grab".

6, "grab", rely on strength to speak, rely on self-confidence to protect, rely on perseverance to persist, rely on wisdom to get through, rely on luck to ask for directions.

7. Know what to rob and what not to rob.

8. Grab blindly, haste makes waste. "Most people are out of breath in the pursuit of happiness, so that they pass by happiness." (Kierkegaard)

Of course, there are many angles to broaden our thinking. It is not difficult to write a successful exam composition if candidates can select a few points to dig deeper in writing.

Attachment: the proposed topic and conception angle of some examination room compositions

Negative "grab"

Grace was taken away.

Take the lead in "grabbing"

What's the harm of not robbing?

Just don't grab it.

Spring has nothing to do with it (Zen)

It's no use robbing.

It makes people haggard for "grabbing"

Keep still during the grab.

Less impetuous, more cheerful.

Please slow down your pace.