The length of the article meets the requirements of the college, the content is not complete enough, the hierarchical structure is problematic, the main points are not prominent enough, the logic is poor, and there is no personal opinion.
The title of the article is biased, the argument is not prominent enough, and the discussion can't stick to the theme.
The language expression is poor and the format meets the requirements of the specification; Less possession data and poor timeliness; Some contents are similar to others' achievements.